北京中考英语材料作文模拟练习

材料作文

1．天下无难事，唯有坚持才能使你赢得一切。

某英文网站正在开展以“成功源于坚持”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你在学习或生活中曾经遇到过什么困难，坚持做了什么去克服困难，以及有什么收获。

提示词语：weak, keep, make progress, realize

提示问题：• What difficulty did you have?

• What did you keep doing to overcome it?

• What have you learned by doing so?

We can achieve everything if we never give up. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

范文：

We can achieve everything if we never give up. I still remember that unforgettable experience.

When I was in middle school, my English was weak. I didn’t even understand what the teacher said. With the help of my teacher, I kept practicing speaking English and writing articles in English. Communicated with students in English. So I made great progress.

I realized that no matter what difficulties, as long as you keep on, you will succeed.

【详解】

1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作。本文为一篇征文，主题是“成功源于坚持”。在写作时应承接短文开头，内容是根据所给的提示，用英语写一篇短文，介绍一下你在学习或生活中曾经遇到过的困难，坚持做了什么来克服困难，以及有什么收获。

 2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述作文内容；时态采用一般过去时为主；首先要引出话题；其次介绍自己所遇到的困难及如何克服的和收获；最后是自己的感受。注意文中要包含所有的要点，语句要通顺，逻辑要合理。

2．生命在于运动。“一身动，则一身强；一家动，则一家强。”经常锻炼的人，才会有健康的体魄和充沛的精力。某英文网站正在开展以“我和家长一起锻炼”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你和家长经常一起做什么锻炼，以及这种锻炼给你们带来的好处。

提示词语：exercise，together，strong，relationship

提示问题：

●What sports do you and your parent(s) often do together?

●What benefits have you got from doing so?

范文

A person who takes exercise regularly will have a healthy body and be full of energy. So my parents and I often exercise together. We run together every morning. I go to play basketball with my father on the weekend. In the evening, sometimes our parents go swimming together in the swimming pool. We exercise together, which is our better relationship and mutual understanding. Our family is more and more happy. Exercise makes us healthier.

【详解】

1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，生命在于运动。经常锻炼的人，才会有健康的体魄和充沛的精力。根据要点提示，谈谈你和家长经常一起做什么锻炼，以及这种锻炼给你们带来的好处。要求要点覆盖全面，可适当扩充；注意写作时要点齐全，同时也要紧扣主题。

2. 写作指导：本文用到的一般现在时态，人称用第一人称。文章开头已给出，写作时，注意承接上文，写作中注意表达观点时的常用句式，内容上应注意描述的全面性；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。

3．“谁知盘中餐，粒粒皆辛苦。”节约粮食是中华民族的传统美德，我们大家都应厉行节俭，避免浪费。

某英文网站在开展以“拒绝食物浪费”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈为什么要节约食物，你平时是怎么做的，你从中学到了什么？

提示词语：food waste, cut down, leftover(剩饭), cherish(珍惜)

提示问题：

●Why should we avoid wasting food?

●What do you usually do in order to save food?

●What have you learned from doing so?

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范文：

We all know that saving food is a traditional virtue of the Chinese nation. We all should develop the good habit

Now there are still some places in the world where people have no food to eat, so we should cherish food. We can give the saved food to the children who have no food through some special organizations. We should take part in “Empty Plate” and try not to leave any food. If we cook at home, we can cook one less dish per meal. If we eat out, we can order one or two less dishes and try not to leave any leftovers. If there is any food left, we can pack and take it home. This will not only reduce food waste, but also cut down our expenses.

Saving food is not only good for those people that have no food, but also good for our environment. Let’s act together!

【详解】

1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示词语和问题，写出拒绝食物浪费的原因以及平常的做法和从中学到的道理，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。

2. 写作指导：写作时要与提出的问题融合起来，用第一人称和其他人称相结合来写作，时态以一般现在时为主，要做到要点齐全，无单词拼写和语法错误。

4．“劳动是创造幸福的源泉。”劳动，有助于我们增长技能，创造美好生活。

某英文网正在开展以“劳动最光荣”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你在平时都参与哪些劳动，有哪些收获。

提示词语：labor(劳动)；glorious(光荣的)；chores；help；life skills

提示问题：

●What kind of labor do you often do?

●What have you learned from doing so?

范文：

Labor is a very important part in our lives. I think it is very glorious for everyone to take part in labor. At home I often do some chores, such as cleaning the floor, washing the dishes, making the bed, cooking meals and so on. At school, I often help teachers or other classmates do some cleaning. Besides these, I still take an active part in some garbage sorting activities in the community. By doing so, I can not only keep my body strong but also get a lot of new knowledge. The most important thing is that I improve my life skills for my future. Labor makes me feel very happy.

【详解】

1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示词语和问题，写出自己做家务的情况以及从中学到了什么，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。

2. 写作指导：写作时要与已给出的开头融合起来，用第一人称来写作，时态以一般现在时为主，要做到要点齐全，无单词拼写和语法错误。

5．“锲而不舍，金石可镂。”只要坚持不懈的努力，再难的事情也可以做到。

某英文网站正在开展以“毅力”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，在你的学习和生活中，一定有过一些因坚持不懈地努力而成功的事例，请你选择一个事例，用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你的做法和收获。

提示词语：perseverance (毅力), learn, work harder, make progress

提示问题：·What did you do?

·What have you learned from doing so?

Perseverance leads to success

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范文：

Perseverance leads to success

Without perseverance, we can hardly succeed in doing anything. I used to be poor at English, and I thought it was difficult, so I didn’t want to spend much time on it. Finally, my English teacher asked me to study English harder, and gave me some suggestions. I took her advice and kept studying English. Little by little, I’ve made great progress in English, and now I often get good grades in English.

I’ve learned that it takes time and perseverance to do things, and someday you will succeed.

【详解】

1.题干解读：该题目是写一篇材料作文。要求围绕“毅力”并根据提示问题，写一篇英语短文，谈谈你因坚持不懈地努力而成功的事例，谈谈你的做法和收获，可适当发挥。

2.写作指导：本文主要用第一人称来叙述故事内容；描述之前的做法时，时态采用一般过去时为主；描述经历时，应描写细致、贴合实际、合情合理；并且事情发生的背景、起因和过程等需要叙述完整，保证条理清晰。

6．“艰难方显勇毅，磨砺始得玉成。”“每个人都了不起！”

某英文网站正在开展以“我为自己骄傲”为题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英文写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你做过的一件引以为傲的事情。

提示词语： face challenges, decision, successful

提示问题：● What did you do to make you feel proud of yourself?

● What have you learned from this experience?

Everyone has done something that he is proud of. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

范文：

Everyone has done something that he is proud of.

I used to be so poor at running. However, instead of giving up, I faced the challenge bravely. I kept practicing no matter what happened. Day by day, I became faster and faster. All my efforts paid off and I finally got an A in the final running test.

“Nothing is impossible to a willing heart”. I decide to work on any coming difficulty until I’m successful.

【详解】

1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示词语和问题，写出自己引以为傲的事情，要写一件具体的事情，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。

2. 写作指导：写作时要与已给出的开头融合起来，用第一人称来写作，时态以一般过去时为主，要做到要点齐全，无单词拼写和语法错误。

7．垃圾分类我先行，保护环境靠大家。垃圾分类，人人有责，从我做起，从小事做起，从身边做起，从现在做起。

某英文网站正在开展以“垃圾分类从我做起”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈生活中你是怎么做的，以及你的感受。

提示词语: put, help, different bins, necessary

提示问题:

● What do you do in your daily life?

● How do you feel?

Waste sorting (垃圾分类) plays an important role in protecting the environment.

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范文：

Waste sorting plays an important role in protecting the environment. I start with small things every day to sort waste. Whenever I see litter on the ground, I pick it up and throw it into the right bin. At home I help my parents sort the waste and put it into different bins. What’s more, I often remind people around me of doing waste sorting.

I think all such small things are beneficial to our environment. Waste sorting is not only meaningful but also necessary. Let’s take action to make our environment better and better.

【详解】

1.题干解读：这是一篇材料作文。写作时，以“垃圾分类从我做起”为主题，谈谈生活中你是怎么做的，以及你的感受。文章开头已给出，根据题干，时态以一般现在时为主。写作过程中注意要把所给的提示词都用上。

2.例文点评：例文采用两段式，第一段讲垃圾分类从小事做起，分享了自己在日常生活中是怎么做的；第二段讲垃圾分类的好处并呼吁大家保护环境。整篇例文语句通顺，要点齐全，条理清晰，题干中所给的词汇都全部用上了。

3.高分亮点：

短语：play an important role in；protect the environment；start with；pick…up；throw…into； be beneficial to；take action to do sth.；better and better。

句型：Waste sorting plays an important role in protecting the environment；whenever引导的时间状语从句；What’s more…；Waste sorting is not only meaningful but also necessary；Let祈使句。