24写作-上海市2021年中考英语真题&模拟卷分题型分类汇编（共17题）

24写作-上海市2021年中考英语真题&模拟卷分题型分类汇编

一．提纲作文（共17小题）

1．（2021•上海）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation. （根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）

    你的学校正在为以下活动课招募教学小助手（teaching assistant）：

    球类（Ball Games）    演讲（Speech）              器乐（Instrumental Music）

    戏剧（Drama）          手工（Handicrafts）         摄影（Photography）

    假设你是李华，请给教导处张老师写封信，结合你的兴趣和特长，说明你想担任哪一门活动课的小助手及理由。

    （注意： （1）信中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。（2）照抄阅读语篇不得分。）

2．（2021•嘉定区二模）Write at least 60 words on the given situation（根据以下情境写一篇不少于60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）

石砖和雕像的经历告诉我们，不同的选择会带来不同的结果。生活中，我们也会碰到很多选择。请以"I chose to          "为题，结合自身的经历，说说你是怎么做的？你为什么会做出这样的选择？

The following is for reference only

• choose to be / do

• make up my mind

• encourage me to

（注意：（1）短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。

（2）照抄阅读语篇不得分。）

3．（2021•上海二模）Write at least 60 words on the topic "In three years' time"（以"三年以后"为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）

你是否想象过，三年以后你的生活或周围的世界会发生怎样的变化？你对三年以后的自己或周围的世界有怎样的期待？你能为此做些什么？

4．（2021•宝山区二模）Write at least 60 words about the topic "          made me a better person".（请以"……使我成为更好的自己"为题，写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）

生活中往往有许多人或事帮助我们成为更好的自己。也许是曾经的某一次经历或某个人使我们发现了自己的潜力与天赋；使我们由依赖到独立，敢于选择、敢于承担责任；使我们勇于面对未知，尝试新经验，主动做出改变。请补全标题并结合过去的真实经历，谈一谈什么促使你成为更好的自己，你又在哪些方面做出了改变。

5．（2021•青浦区二模）Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic "A valuable lesson"（请以"宝贵的一课" 为题写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）

提示：在学习与生活中，我们会因为经历一些事情，获得体验，增加阅历，吸取教训。请以"宝贵的一课"为题，结合你的经历，谈谈你的感受。

6．（2021•浦东新区模拟）Write a passage in at least 60 words on the topic"Here's a new start".（请以"这是一个新的开始"为题，写一篇不少于60个词的作文，标点符号不占格。）

提示：岁月的长河中，我们所做的每件事情，都如同随手洒下的种子，在时光的滋润下，那些种子慢慢的生根、发芽、抽枝、开花，最终结出属于自己的果实。人的生命只有一次，但生活可以每天不同。你有了什么新的开始呢？你为此做了什么准备呢？打算怎么努力或改变呢？请结合自身经历，谈谈你的感受。

（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分）

7．（2021•浦东新区二模）Write at least 60 words about the topic "A（n）             with love"

（请以"爱的         "为题，写一篇不少于60字的短文，标点符号不占格）

在上文中，祖母收到的生日礼物包含了祖父对她真挚的爱。我们的生活也充满了爱，我们一定收到过带有满满爱意的物品。请你分享一下关于这个物品的故事，并谈谈你的感受或它对你的影响。

注意：（1）短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。

（2）照抄阅读语篇不得分。

8．（2021•长宁区二模）Write at least 60 words about the topic "Keep patient when facing difficulties"（请以"面对困难保持耐心"为题，写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格）

阅读文章（C）篇告诉我们日常生活中不能缺乏耐心，还提出用 2 种方式来帮助我们克服这样的缺点。在我们的生活和学习中遇到的各种困难也很容易使人失去耐心，请你以一个具体的例子谈谈怎样面对困难保持耐心。

9．（2021•徐汇区二模）Suppose you are interested in dearMars Project，and you send an e﹣mail to dearMarsproject@****.com based on one of the given situations.

Situation 1：You want to be one of the crew members to the Mars.You write to apply for a seat

in the rocket.

Situation 2：You want to know more about the project，hoping to get more detailed information.

假设你对dearMars 的项目感兴趣，你选择所给情境之一完成一封发送给dearMarsproject@****.com的电子邮件（不少于60词） .

（注意：邮件中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。标点符号不占格）

Dear dearMars Project，

_________

Yours sincerely，

xxx

10．（2021•虹口区二模）Write at least 60 words on the topic "I'd like to get close to …"

（以"我想要走近……"为题写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）

人的一生会遇见很多美好的事物，人、物、景等各种美好的存在都会吸引我们走进。请写写你想走近什么？怎么走近？说说你的理由。

11．（2021•黄浦区二模）Write at least 60 words on the given situation. （根据以下情境写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）

在生活中，要取得成就，往往需要勇气。你需要勇气来帮助你战胜困难，承认错误， 拒绝他人，或者克服恐惧。你是如何理解勇气的呢？请以"I have the courage to …"（我有勇气），为题，结合自己的经历谈谈你对勇气的理解和感受。

注意：（1）短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。

（2）照抄阅读语篇不得分。

12．（2021•奉贤区二模）Write at least 60 words on the given situation （根据以下情景写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）

王老师是你们学校的一名退休教师。他非常期待收到学生们的来信。请你写一份信给他。

你可以告诉他学校发生的变化、开展的活动、或者任何关于校园生活的点点滴滴。

（注意：（1）短文中不得出现任何姓名、校名等个人信息.否则不予评分。

（2）照抄阅读语篇不得分。）

13．（2021•杨浦区二模）Write at least 60 words on the given "  has changed me". （以  改变了我为题写一篇不少于60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格。） 世间瞬息万变，凡事都在变化，都在发展，我们也在不断地调整、改变自己。某些人、事、经历改变着 我们的心态、行为、价值观、思维方式、生活方式等。请结合题目和自己的经历，谈一谈自己的改变。

（注意：1.短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。

14．（2021•静安区二模）Write at least 60 words on the given situation （根据所给情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）。

美国拉斯维加斯的不少学生参加了户外花园教室项目，在活动中收获了很多。你在校内外参加过什么有趣有益的项目，并给你留下了深刻的印象。

请以"Making learning fun（乐中学）"为题，分享你的经历或感想。

注意： （1）短文中不得出现考生姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。

（2）照抄阅读语篇不得分。

15．（2021•闵行区二模）Write at least 60 words on the topic"My funniest family memory" （根据提示，以"我最有趣的家庭回忆"为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格.）

提示：回忆有趣的家庭生活总是美好的。请结合你的亲身经历，描述你和家人在一起时最有趣的事儿，并谈谈感想。

注意： （1）短文中不得 出现考生姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。

（2）照抄阅读语篇不得分。

16．（2021•普陀区二模）Write at least 60 words on the topic " has won my respect"（以"……赢得了我的尊敬"为题，写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格）

提示：Aunt Sandy 用行动赢得了外甥女的尊敬。你的身边是否有这样一位值得尊敬的人关心这你的成长？请先补全标题，再结合具体事例谈谈你自己的感受。

17．（2021•金山区二模）Write at least 60 words on the topic"Keep your mind open".（以"敞开心扉/心胸开阔" 为题，写一篇至少 60 个单词的短文，标点符号不占格.）

在生活中，你对你的生活满意吗？不满意的话，是什么原因呢？如果我们能以开阔的胸怀面对不同的事物，从不同的角度去思考问题，可能会得到意想不到的收获。结合自身经历，谈一谈你是如何做到心胸开阔、乐于接受各种顺境或逆境的。

（注意：短文中不得出现考生姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。）

参考答案与试题解析

一．提纲作文（共17小题）

1．（2021•上海）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation. （根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）

    你的学校正在为以下活动课招募教学小助手（teaching assistant）：

    球类（Ball Games）    演讲（Speech）              器乐（Instrumental Music）

    戏剧（Drama）          手工（Handicrafts）         摄影（Photography）

    假设你是李华，请给教导处张老师写封信，结合你的兴趣和特长，说明你想担任哪一门活动课的小助手及理由。

    （注意： （1）信中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。（2）照抄阅读语篇不得分。）

【解答】Dear Mr Zhang，

I want to work in Instrumental Music as an assistant.（写信目的）

As for me，I prefer Instrumental Music.You know I have learnt piano for many years.And I want to learn more about music from others.【高分句型一】What's more，I can make more friends sharing the same interest with me.Life in senior high school is quite different.We are so busy every day.Therefore，that will be a good chance for us to relax ourselves.（介绍自己）

I am looking forward to hearing from you.【高分句型二】

                                                                                                                                  Yours，

                                                                                                                                   Li Hua

2．（2021•嘉定区二模）Write at least 60 words on the given situation（根据以下情境写一篇不少于60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）

石砖和雕像的经历告诉我们，不同的选择会带来不同的结果。生活中，我们也会碰到很多选择。请以"I chose to          "为题，结合自身的经历，说说你是怎么做的？你为什么会做出这样的选择？

The following is for reference only

• choose to be / do

• make up my mind

• encourage me to

（注意：（1）短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。

（2）照抄阅读语篇不得分。）

【解答】

I chose to be a  reporter

Everyone has a dream and my dream is to be a reporter. Because I would like to see different people and I can make friends with more people. 【高分句型一】What's more， I can tell people the truth about something popular.（我的梦想及原因） What can I do to become a reporter？ I want to write articles for magazines or newspapers. 【高分句型二】（打算）When I finish high school I want to go to college in Beijing. Because I think I can learn more there.（毕业后的打算）

3．（2021•上海二模）Write at least 60 words on the topic "In three years' time"（以"三年以后"为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）

你是否想象过，三年以后你的生活或周围的世界会发生怎样的变化？你对三年以后的自己或周围的世界有怎样的期待？你能为此做些什么？

【解答】

In three years' time

The world is changing fast. I  believe that my life will be different in three years' time. 【高分句型一】（点题）On one hand， it will be more convenient， we can study at home. Whether we go to school or stay at home depends on our choices. On the other hand， the environment may become worse especially white pollution. Sadly， the number of people who like to throw rubbish everywhere is still rising. 【高分句型二】I hope the world will be more beautiful.（怎样的变化） To achieve this， I need to learn more knowledge about how to protect the environment. Call on more people to take part in fighting against pollution. Only by working together will our future be better in 3 years.（做些什么）

4．（2021•宝山区二模）Write at least 60 words about the topic "          made me a better person".（请以"……使我成为更好的自己"为题，写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）

生活中往往有许多人或事帮助我们成为更好的自己。也许是曾经的某一次经历或某个人使我们发现了自己的潜力与天赋；使我们由依赖到独立，敢于选择、敢于承担责任；使我们勇于面对未知，尝试新经验，主动做出改变。请补全标题并结合过去的真实经历，谈一谈什么促使你成为更好的自己，你又在哪些方面做出了改变。

【解答】

Understanding other people makes me a better person

As is known to all，everyone is a special unity that has his own mind and story.When facing the similar circumstances，they may make different choices.Every decision we make and every action we do make us be a different person from others.So it is very important to understand others especially when we get along with other people.【高分句型一】（点题，生活中应理解他人）

There are several reasons.First，understanding can avoid quarrels among people.If we put ourselves in other people's shoes，we can understand others better，which can avoid misunderstandings that may break other people's heart.Second，understanding is also a self﹣cultivation.Everyone has their own difficulties，which means that we can't impose our minds on other people.（为什么要理解他人）

I always remind myself of understanding others and from what we have discussed above.I think that understanding other people makes me a better person.【高分句型二】（我的观点）

5．（2021•青浦区二模）Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic "A valuable lesson"（请以"宝贵的一课" 为题写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）

提示：在学习与生活中，我们会因为经历一些事情，获得体验，增加阅历，吸取教训。请以"宝贵的一课"为题，结合你的经历，谈谈你的感受。

【解答】

A valuable lesson

Two years ago，our English teacher gave us a valuable lesson which is truly unforgettable. （谁给的一课） In order to let us learn the text well，our English teacher asked some students to put on a short play that day.In class，we laughed a lot for their funny performances.They acted so well that the characters seemed to come to life.【高分句型一】After that，we played a game called Apple Tree.（上课的过程） It made me memorize the words well while having fun.I think that was the most interesting lesson I have ever had.【高分句型二】（为什么认为是珍贵的一课）

After learning this lesson，I began to develop a strong interest in English.I made a decision to learn English well.（上完课后做了什么）

6．（2021•浦东新区模拟）Write a passage in at least 60 words on the topic"Here's a new start".（请以"这是一个新的开始"为题，写一篇不少于60个词的作文，标点符号不占格。）

提示：岁月的长河中，我们所做的每件事情，都如同随手洒下的种子，在时光的滋润下，那些种子慢慢的生根、发芽、抽枝、开花，最终结出属于自己的果实。人的生命只有一次，但生活可以每天不同。你有了什么新的开始呢？你为此做了什么准备呢？打算怎么努力或改变呢？请结合自身经历，谈谈你的感受。

（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分）

【解答】

Here's a new start

 As a Grade 9 student， a plan for the following months is very important because I would like to enter my dream high school.【高分句型一】（引出话题）

      First， I should improve English. It is my weak subject. I have to read English every morning and increase my reading speed.

Next， I should be a good learner. It is important to try some learning methods. 【高分句型二】Don't be afraid of making mistakes because we can learn from them. And I should remember "Practice makes perfect".Then， never waste time! I need to use time well. Don't forget to do sports every day. It's so important to stay healthy. At last， I will pay more attention to news， so that I will read more newspapers and watch news programs. I don't want to be a student who just study only.（具体介绍计划和行动）

     In a word， I will try my best to make my dream come true. I look forward to seeing my great change in the following months.（结束语）

7．（2021•浦东新区二模）Write at least 60 words about the topic "A（n）             with love"

（请以"爱的         "为题，写一篇不少于60字的短文，标点符号不占格）

在上文中，祖母收到的生日礼物包含了祖父对她真挚的爱。我们的生活也充满了爱，我们一定收到过带有满满爱意的物品。请你分享一下关于这个物品的故事，并谈谈你的感受或它对你的影响。

注意：（1）短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。

（2）照抄阅读语篇不得分。

【解答】

A gift with love

My favorite gift is a watch， which was a gift full of love from my parents.【高分句型一】（点题，我最喜欢的礼物是什么）It can be used to tell the time.It reminds me of the importance of making right use of my time. With the watch，I may be economical of my time. And then I will have the best achievements on the day.（它的用处）I will never forget how excited I was when I got it. My mother just told me to cherish it because she spent quite a lot of money on it.Though I have changed several watches since then，I still believe that it is the watch I like best.（它对我的意义）

8．（2021•长宁区二模）Write at least 60 words about the topic "Keep patient when facing difficulties"（请以"面对困难保持耐心"为题，写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格）

阅读文章（C）篇告诉我们日常生活中不能缺乏耐心，还提出用 2 种方式来帮助我们克服这样的缺点。在我们的生活和学习中遇到的各种困难也很容易使人失去耐心，请你以一个具体的例子谈谈怎样面对困难保持耐心。

【解答】

Keep patient when facing difficulties

I used to be impatient. I was so impatient that I couldn't deal with difficulties. 【高分句型一】I never asked the teachers any questions. I just sat behind the book and never said anything in class. Of course， I often got bad grades on examinations. （描述自己的问题）

One day， my English teacher found my problem. She had a long talk with me. And she told me many useful ways to learn English well. Since then，I has tried hard to learn English well.（通过努力解决问题）Little by little，I've become patient in English and I'm good at it.【高分句型二】 I began to answer questions in class. Now I am not impatient anymore! I know that as long as I try hard， I can make it.（总结全文）

9．（2021•徐汇区二模）Suppose you are interested in dearMars Project，and you send an e﹣mail to dearMarsproject@****.com based on one of the given situations.

Situation 1：You want to be one of the crew members to the Mars.You write to apply for a seat

in the rocket.

Situation 2：You want to know more about the project，hoping to get more detailed information.

假设你对dearMars 的项目感兴趣，你选择所给情境之一完成一封发送给dearMarsproject@****.com的电子邮件（不少于60词） .

（注意：邮件中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。标点符号不占格）

Dear dearMars Project，

_________

Yours sincerely，

xxx

【解答】Dear dearMars Project，

I'm a middle school student.I am interested in dearMars Project.I want to be one of the crew members in the rocket to the Mars.So I write to you to apply for a seat.（写信目的）

I like science very much.I often read science fiction stories，especially about Mars.So I know a lot about Mars.I think I'll be helpful to this project and I can be a good helper.【高分句型一】（自己的优势）

I hope you will let me be one of you.I am looking forward to your reply.【高分句型二】（希望）

Yours sincerely，

Li Lei

10．（2021•虹口区二模）Write at least 60 words on the topic "I'd like to get close to …"

（以"我想要走近……"为题写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）

人的一生会遇见很多美好的事物，人、物、景等各种美好的存在都会吸引我们走进。请写写你想走近什么？怎么走近？说说你的理由。

【解答】

I'd like to get close to  Pingyi

  I'd like to introduce you to a nice place.I live in a  wonderful place  in Pingyi.（引出主旨）It is a wonderful  housing estate  with a lot of flowers and trees.【高分句型一】East of the community is a wide road along the river.The river is clear and transparent.There are many people walking and playing along the river every day.You can see six blocks in the middle.There is a swimming pool in front of Block 2．In summer children love to swim in it.A big playground lies on the right of Block 4．You can often see many men，women，boys and girls take exercise there.There is a small kindergarten behind Block 3． （介绍理由）It is convenient and comfortable for me to live there.【高分句型二】What a wonderful place it is!I love my housing estate very much.

11．（2021•黄浦区二模）Write at least 60 words on the given situation. （根据以下情境写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）

在生活中，要取得成就，往往需要勇气。你需要勇气来帮助你战胜困难，承认错误， 拒绝他人，或者克服恐惧。你是如何理解勇气的呢？请以"I have the courage to …"（我有勇气），为题，结合自己的经历谈谈你对勇气的理解和感受。

注意：（1）短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。

（2）照抄阅读语篇不得分。

【解答】

I have the courage to overcome nervousness

In our daily life， we have various fears preventing us from moving forward. And overcoming the fears helps us become more confident.（对勇敢的理解）

I used to be afraid of speaking in public.【高分句型一】 I never dared to step up and speak in front of a crowd. Then，in Grade 9， a speech contest was held in my school. With my teacher's encouragement，I entered for it and made full preparations for it. Luckily， I finished it smoothly. To my surprise， I won the second prize. This time I was brave. Now I have become more and more confident in expressing myself in public.【高分句型二】（自己的经历）

Don't let the fear take you. Just step forward and you will find you can do it!（总结全文）

12．（2021•奉贤区二模）Write at least 60 words on the given situation （根据以下情景写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）

王老师是你们学校的一名退休教师。他非常期待收到学生们的来信。请你写一份信给他。

你可以告诉他学校发生的变化、开展的活动、或者任何关于校园生活的点点滴滴。

（注意：（1）短文中不得出现任何姓名、校名等个人信息.否则不予评分。

（2）照抄阅读语篇不得分。）

【解答】Mr Wang，

    Time flies so quickly.The teaching building of the school has been rebuilt.It was surrounded by trees and flowers.My home is far from my school.I usually go to school by bus.I start school at eight in the morning and finish school at four in the afternoon. （到校及作息介绍）I have six classes every day.In the morning，I have four classes from eight to twelve.In the afternoon，we have two classes from two thirty to four.I can learn Chinese，maths，English，P．E．and so on.I like English best because it is interesting.【高分句型一】（简单课程介绍） I have lunch at school because my home is far from my school.【高分句型一】I am crazy about DIY．For example，I like to make fruit salad.First，peel two bananas and cut them up.Then，put them in the blender ，and then pour the milk into the blender.Turn on the blender.Finally，You can enjoy the fruit salad.（学校活动）

    My school life is so wonderful that we all feel very happy at school.【高分句型二】（对学校生活的感受）

Yours

XXX

13．（2021•杨浦区二模）Write at least 60 words on the given "  has changed me". （以  改变了我为题写一篇不少于60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格。） 世间瞬息万变，凡事都在变化，都在发展，我们也在不断地调整、改变自己。某些人、事、经历改变着 我们的心态、行为、价值观、思维方式、生活方式等。请结合题目和自己的经历，谈一谈自己的改变。

（注意：1.短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。

【解答】

Music has changed me

    Everyone has his own hobby，it may give him lots of happiness.（点题） My hobby is listening to music.When I was a child I enjoyed listening to music，especially the cartoon music，though I wasn't  good at it，【高分句型一】I often lost myself in it.When I am in trouble，music can make me calm down.When I am very tired ，it can make me comfortable.When I am angry with something ，it also can make me happy again.Listening to music keeps me in a good mood and it's good for my health. 【高分句型二】（分享自己的经历和看法）

    Do you like listening to music？If not，I hope you can have a try，you will find it beneficial.（总结全文）

14．（2021•静安区二模）Write at least 60 words on the given situation （根据所给情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）。

美国拉斯维加斯的不少学生参加了户外花园教室项目，在活动中收获了很多。你在校内外参加过什么有趣有益的项目，并给你留下了深刻的印象。

请以"Making learning fun（乐中学）"为题，分享你的经历或感想。

注意： （1）短文中不得出现考生姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。

（2）照抄阅读语篇不得分。

【解答】

 Making learning fun

Let me tell you my school activity﹣ Learning Lei Feng.【高分句型一】（引出话题）We ，the volunteers ，went to the Nursing Home  and did many things for the old people there.When the old people saw us ，they were very happy.We gave them lots of flowers and fruits.We did cleaning for them.After that we chatted with them.We talked very happily.Some of us sang great songs for them.And others danced.The old people told us stories.We wished them good luck.All of us had a wonderful time there.（具体的活动）

I felt happy that I cared for the old people and showed our respect to them.If I have another chance to go there ，I will take it.【高分句型二】（感想）

15．（2021•闵行区二模）Write at least 60 words on the topic"My funniest family memory" （根据提示，以"我最有趣的家庭回忆"为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格.）

提示：回忆有趣的家庭生活总是美好的。请结合你的亲身经历，描述你和家人在一起时最有趣的事儿，并谈谈感想。

注意： （1）短文中不得 出现考生姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。

（2）照抄阅读语篇不得分。

【解答】

My funniest family memory

When I was in grade six， I was very shy and timid. My mother encouraged me to make a speech in front of the class．【高分句型一】 I tried my best to prepare for it and practiced it many times. My father and mother played the audience. But I'm still a little nervous. Just then， my pet cat ran up to me and sat there. Seeing the attention， I suddenly relaxed and began my speech. Finally，I succeeded in making it.  （分享故事）My cat was so lovely that it changed my life.【高分句型二】 It made me become more confident.（感受）

16．（2021•普陀区二模）Write at least 60 words on the topic " has won my respect"（以"……赢得了我的尊敬"为题，写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格）

提示：Aunt Sandy 用行动赢得了外甥女的尊敬。你的身边是否有这样一位值得尊敬的人关心这你的成长？请先补全标题，再结合具体事例谈谈你自己的感受。

【解答】

My father has won my respect

  The one I respect most is my father.（点明我最尊敬的人）First，he is very strong，he makes me feel very safe.Secondly，he is good at many things such as basketball and ping﹣pong.【高分句型一】I think he plays ping﹣pong as well as Wang Hao.Thirdly，he is very popular in our big family，everyone in my family loves my father very much.The most important of all，he is a great father，he loves me and my mother a lot，he also helps me a lot.（尊敬的原因以及对我的影响）I do think he is as great as a superman.【高分句型二】I respect him!（感想）

17．（2021•金山区二模）Write at least 60 words on the topic"Keep your mind open".（以"敞开心扉/心胸开阔" 为题，写一篇至少 60 个单词的短文，标点符号不占格.）

在生活中，你对你的生活满意吗？不满意的话，是什么原因呢？如果我们能以开阔的胸怀面对不同的事物，从不同的角度去思考问题，可能会得到意想不到的收获。结合自身经历，谈一谈你是如何做到心胸开阔、乐于接受各种顺境或逆境的。

（注意：短文中不得出现考生姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。）

【解答】If we can keep our minds open to different people or things，we may get unexpected harvest.【高分句型一】（点题）

Last week，my good friend Lucy got a good grade in her English exam.But mine was very poor.I felt very sad.However，she always talks about the English test.It makes me annoyed.But I didn't tell her how I felt.Later，I told my mother about it.My mother encouraged me to talk to Lucy and tell her how I felt. 【高分句型二】My mother said that friends should keep their minds open to each other.The next day，I shared my feelings with Lucy.She suddenly realized that she had not thought about my feelings and apologized for it.She thanked me for keeping my mind open to her.（分享自己的故事）