译林版2019选修四UNIT 1 表达作文巧升格学案

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这是一份译林版2019选修四UNIT 1 表达作文巧升格学案，共3页。

本单元要求写一篇关于善意谎言的短文，属于议论文的写作范畴。
[基本框架]
开头(the beginning)——陈述观点
主体(the bdy)——列举原因和证据
结尾(the ending)——简要总结
[常用词块]
1．aruse peple's cncerns 引起人们的关注
2．bring a lt f benefits t us 给我们带来很多益处
3．can nt resist the temptatin 不能抵制诱惑
4．arrive at/draw a cnclusin 得出结论
5．cpe with the prblems处理这些问题
6．cherish the wild animals 珍惜野生动物
[常用语句]
★精彩开头
1．There is a widespread cncern ver the issue that．．．but I think．．．
2．We've had a discussin abut whether．．．
★正文佳句
1．Sme peple think that．．．while thers argue that．．．
2．If we can make gd use f time，there is n dubt that．．．
★余味结尾
1．Frm what has been discussed abve，we can cnclude that．．．
2．Therefre，I firmly believe that．．．
假定你是李华，本月是你校的读书月。作为校报的记者，你做了一项调查，发现很多学生忙于作业，没有时间进行课外阅读。请你就此用英文写一篇文章，阐述自己的看法，内容包括：
1．阅读的好处；
2．呼吁大家多读好书。
注意：1．词数80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：课外阅读extracurricular reading
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[学生习作]
Last week，I carried ut a survey n extracurricular reading in ur schl．In my pinin，reading plays an imprtant part in yur study and life．
First，reading can braden yur visin．Yu can gain knwledge frm the bks yu read．Yu can als be inspired and encuraged by bks．The mre yu read，the mre attractive yu may find reading is．
In shrt，reading is very useful．Read sme gd bks every day，and yu'll find reading makes a difference t yur life．
点评：
1．本篇习作符合写作要求，能够提出观点，分析原因，简要总结，结构合理，内容充实。
2．能够使用动名词作主语、the mre．．．the mre．．．句型，以及“祈使句＋and＋陈述句”结构，使得文章表达流畅，语言丰富，更有层次感。
3．第一段两句话之间不衔接，缺少过渡语句。
[升格作文]
Last week，I carried ut a survey n extracurricular reading in ur schl and fund many students didn't d the reading because f their heavy hmewrk．As far as I'm cncerned，we students shuld pay attentin t the reading．
Extracurricular reading can braden ur hrizns．Nt nly can we gain knwledge frm the bks we read，but als we can get inspiratin and encuragement．The mre we read，the mre attractive we may find reading is．
In cnclusin，reading is f great use．Read sme gd bks every day，and yu'll find reading makes a difference t yur life．
在许多校园内，浪费现象普遍，造成很多不良影响。请你根据下列要点用英语写一篇短文，建议同学们从自身做起，减少浪费。
1．很多同学形成浪费的习惯；
2．浪费容易形成坏的饮食习惯，对健康成长不利；
3．浪费会增加父母的经济负担；
4．浪费会使有限的资源得不到充分利用。
注意：1．词数80左右；
2．可适当添加细节；
3．开头已写好。
参考词汇：经济负担 financial burden；资源resurces
Nwadays it's cmmn t see students wasting things in schl．__
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【参考范文】
Nwadays it's cmmn t see students wasting things in schl．Many students have frmed the habit f wasting things．Fr example，sme leave the lights n in the daytime，r let water running after washing their hands．
As we all knw，these bad habits will have a bad influence n ur character and behavir．They nt nly increase ur cst at schl and add financial burden t ur parents，but als waste the limited resurces．
In my pinin，it's high time that we shuld deal with this prblem．And abve all，we shuld start with urselves and take the lead in reducing the waste．