重庆中考英语材料作文专项训练（附范文解析）

材料作文

一．中国文化博大精深，各种艺术形式精彩纷呈。舞蹈、音乐、绘画、茶艺、剪纸、泥塑、孔明灯、京剧等，数不胜数。艺术陶冶情操，涵养生命，丰富充实人生。请写一篇短文介绍你最喜欢的艺术形式，并结合你的经历，谈谈喜欢它的缘由以及它对你的影响。

参考要点：

1.介绍你喜欢的艺术形式（art form）；

2.喜欢的缘由；

3.这种艺术形式对你的影响；

要求：       

1.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息。

2. 80-120词（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）。

Art plays an important role in my life. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

范文：

Art plays an important role in my life. Both my parents and I have a gift for singing. However, once I didn’t like singing because I was afraid of singing in front of many people.

When I was five, I sang Happy Birthday To You in a low voice at my birthday party. After singing, all the people clapped hands. I won high praise from them. I felt happy. My mother encouraged me to keep trying and sing more beautiful songs. At that time I found that singing was interesting.

I get a lot of fun from singing and I also become more confident.

解析：

1.题干解读：题目要求根据参考要点结合自己的经历介绍自己最喜欢的艺术形式，谈谈喜欢它的缘由及这种形式对你的影响。要做到要点齐全，可适当发挥。

2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称为主，时态结合一般现在时和一般过去时。可分为三段式写作：第一段介绍自己最喜欢的艺术形式是什么；第二段介绍喜欢这种艺术形式的缘由；第三段介绍其对自己的影响。要做到无单词拼写和语法错误。

二．上面的文章告诉我们一年四季，各有特点，四季神秘而美丽，那么你最喜欢的季节又是什么呢？请以“My Favorite Season”为题，写一篇文章，详细描述一个你最喜欢的季节。

要求：

1.80—120词，标题已给出，不计入总词数。

2.文章结构清晰且合理，逻辑清晰，要点完整。

3.不得抄袭原文或引用上文的原句。文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。

参考信息：

4.至少给出2点以上你最喜欢这个季节的原因如气候特点，自然生物，特别活动等。

5.该季节或者与该季节相关的事物对于你的特殊意义或者启发。

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范文：

My Favorite Season

Among the four seasons, I like spring best.

In spring, the weather is getting warmer and warmer. The trees turn green and the flowers start to come out. We can hear the birds singing happily in the trees. It usually rains lightly and the air is fresh. During this season, there are many outdoor activities, such as going hiking, flying kites and planting trees. I usually go cycling or have a picnic with my parents on weekends. I think these activities are colorful and meaningful.

Spring stands for a new beginning and it is full of hope. Let’s enjoy this wonderful season together.

解析：

1.题干解读：该题目是材料类书面表达，以“My Favorite Season”为题，根据参考信息提示，详细描述一个你最喜欢的季节，可适当发挥。

2.写作指导：本文是描述自己最喜欢的季节，所以时态以一般现在时为主，描述自己的看法时，以第一人称为主，描述喜欢的季节的特点时，以第三人称为主；描述季节特点和自己喜欢的理由时，要结合实际情况，描写细致，合情合理，短文应叙述完整，条理清晰。

三．每个人的成长历程中都收到过来自家人、老师、同学和朋友们的建议，有的建议帮你解决生活中的烦恼，有的建议帮助你度过了学习上的难关。好的建议，会让我们受益匪浅。新世纪英语报社以“The Best Advice”为题举办征文比赛，请你根据自己的亲身经历写一篇短文参赛。

参考要点：

1．你遇到了什么问题？

2．你收到的最好的建议是什么？

3．这个建议让你……

要求：

1．词数80-120词左右；

2．文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。

The Best Advice

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范文：

The Best Advice

When I was a child, I always lacked confidence in myself, but one thing changed me completely.

On day, my father led me to the foot of a mountain. Seeing the steep peak and winding paths, said fearfully, “I’m afraid I can’t make it.” Then my father encouraged me gently. “Never will you see the scenery until you reach the top. Never will you know what you can do until you try.” With his encouragement, I decided to make an attempt to climb. Step by step, I followed my father and reached the top successfully.

You can’t imagine how excited I was when I did what I had thought was impossible. Eve since then, I have realized that I can achieve my goals as long as I believe in myself and make a resolution.

解析：

1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。以“最好的建议”为题写一篇短文。

2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时和一般过去时。分为三段式；第一段引出主题；第二段结合自己的经历讲述遇到了什么问题，得到的建议是什么；最后一段表达这个建议让自己收获到了什么。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。

四．到了期末，很多学生都疲于学习，有的学生甚至打起了疲劳战应付各种考试。尽管如此，成绩却不理想。请你根据所给信息结合自身实际，以How to Improve Our Study Effectively为题，写一篇英文短文。

学习方法：

1.listen to the teacher；

2.take notes and review in time；

3.correct mistakes；

4. ……

体育锻炼：do some exercise

其他方面：1.make good use of time；2.ask sb. for help

注意：1.文章必须包括所给内容要点，语句通顺，内容连贯；2.词数100左右。

How to Improve Our Study Effectively

Many students are busy working hard at the end of term, but they can’t get good results. Then how can we solve the problem? Here’s some advice. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

范文：

How to Improve Our Study Effectively

Many students are busy working hard at the end of term, but they can’t get good results. Then how can we solve the problem? Here’s some advice.

First, we are supposed to have good study methods, such as previewing the lessons before class, listening to the teacher carefully in class, taking notes in time, reviewing in time, doing homework on time, correcting mistakes at any time.

Then, it’s helpful for study to have good health. So we should spend at least an hour doing some exercise every day.

Besides, we’d better make good use of time. Don’t put off what we can do today till tomorrow. We should ask the teacher or classmates for help if we have some questions.

If you follow the advice that I have mentioned above, you will be successful.

解析：

1.题干解读：题干要求根据所给要点，以“如何有效提高学习水平”为题，写一篇英文短文，从学习方法、体育锻炼和其他方面给同学们提出合理建议。

2.写作指导：本文时态主要采用一般现在时，以第一人称为主；可分为五段，第一段引出文章主题；第二、三、四段分别从学习方法、体育锻炼和其他方面陈述建议的内容；最后一段进行总结和收尾。写作时力求语言连贯，逻辑严谨，无语法和标点错误。

五．金秋九月，同学们即将开启全新的高中学习生活。我校高中开设了一些特色课程，同学们可根据自己的兴趣进行选择。请根据以下内容提示为学校英文网站写一篇短文；介绍这些课程、提出你建议增设的课程并说明理由。

要求：

1.80-120词，开头已给出，不计入词数；

2.短文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。

3.参考词汇：model making模型制作；drama戏剧；perform表演

参考信息：

1.介绍课程：模型制作（了解科学、提高兴趣）

英语戏剧（学习表演、……）

足球（……）；

2.你建议增设的课程及理由（….…）

Students in our school are free to choose some special courses according to their own interest.

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范文：

Students in our school are free to choose some special courses according to their own interest. These courses will help students relax themselves after school.

There are many courses for them to choose, such as English drama, football, or model making. Here is more information. If you want to improve your oral English, English drama may be the first choice. It is a good chance to practice not only oral English but also performing skills. If you are interested in football, take the football course. It is good for your physical health. Besides, you can learn more about teamwork. What about model making? You’ll be amazed by the science world and become interested in it.

For my part, a painting course can be added, because students like drawing so much. I hope these courses would be helpful and each student would enjoy a bright and colorful school life here.

解析：

1.题干解读：本题属于材料作文写作，介绍课程以及需要增设的课程和理由。本篇作文采用三段式。第一段讲述学校设立这些课程的目的，即帮助学生放松他们自己；第二段介绍学校目前所有的课程；第三段介绍你希望添加的课程。

2.写作指导：本文主体时态使用一般现在时，个别句子也可以使用一般将来时。切记不要遗漏要点，可以适当增加情节使行文连贯。写作中可以使用较高级的单词、短语以及句型来增加得分点，如such as，there be，here be，a good chance to，not only...but also...等。

六．“与人为善”是中华民族的传统美德。与人为善就是以善意的态度对待他人，帮助他人。善待他人，乐于助人也能让自己的心情保持愉悦。

某英文网站正在开展以“与人为善”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英文写一篇短文投稿谈谈你对与人为善的看法，曾经与人为善的经历以及你的感受。

提示词语：virtue（美德）

提示问题：

What do you think of being kind to others?

What did you do?

How did you feel?

要求：

1.80—120词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；

2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。

Being kind to others is a traditional virtue of Chinese people. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

范文：

Being kind to others is a traditional virtue of Chinese people. I think we should be kind to others and it is very important for us. When I started middle school, my friend Peter failed in the math exam. He was so sad that he wanted to give up. When I knew this, I encouraged him and gave him some advice. Every day we did homework together and I helped him when he was in trouble. With my help, he improved a lot. I was very happy and proud.

解析：

1.题干解读：该题目属于说明文写作，在写作时应承接短文开头。根据英语提示的内容，谈谈对与人为善的看法，曾经与人为善的经历以及自己的感受。

2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称为主来介绍内容；时态采用一般现在时和一般过去时；在介绍内容时，力求语句通顺，内容完整，保证条理清晰，行文连贯。

七．目前，每个城市每天产生大量的垃圾，垃圾分类刻不容缓，成为当前的热门话题，请根据下面提示，写一篇80词左右的英语短文：

垃圾对环境的危害；   垃圾分类的意义；   作为学生，该做什么？

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范文：

At present, society produces a large amount of rubbish, such as leftover food, waste paper, used plastic bottles and batteries every day. Rubbish has become a big headache in every city and is becoming a major environmental problem. It makes our living environment and air worse and worse, and also makes our living space smaller and smaller. So how to solve this problem? I think rubbish classification is a good way to deal with it.   

Waste sorting is becoming increasingly common around our country. I hope all of us can get involved in this meaningful activity. It is important because it can not only reduce the land pollution but also raise our awareness to protect the environment.

As students, we can do a lot for waste sorting. First of all, we should know about garbage classification and learn how we should sort the waste. Secondly, we can sort the waste by preparing some bins in different colors at home. Last but not least, it’s also a good choice to hand out leaflets in order that we could call on more people to join the activity.

解析：

1. 题干解读：文章是一篇材料作文。主要是以“垃圾”为中心，主要从垃圾对环境的危害，垃圾分类的意义以及作为学生应该如何做这几个方面来描写，结合生活中的实际情况描写，要注意语言的准确性和词语的恰当。

2. 例文点评：文章分三段描写。第一段主要写每天生产大量的垃圾，垃圾对我们的生活的影响；第二段主要写垃圾分类的重要性；第三段主要写作为学生应该如何做。整个文章结构完整，思路清晰，语言表达准确，用词合理，意思明确易懂。

3. 高分亮点：

短语：a large amount of；such as；deal with；not only … but also；first of all；last but not least；hand out。

句型：because引导的原因状语从句；how引导的宾语从句；in order that引导的目的状语从句；and引导的并列句。