北京中考英语作文提升：话题作文模拟练习

话题作文

一、耐心是一个重要的品质。有耐心， 才能在快速发展的社会中，保持初心，不随波逐流； 有耐心，才能在面对困难和挑战时，坚定信念，勇攀高峰。

某英文网站正在开展以“耐心”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，分享你在生活中是如何做到保持有耐心的，以及你的收获。

提示词语：keep trying, stay calm, necessary, success

提示问题：

What do you do to be patient in your daily life?

What have you gained?

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范文：

Patience is a necessary quality. In daily life, I always keep patient by drawing. I think only by listening patiently and memorizing what we have learned over and over again can we get better grades. Whenever I am worried, I keep trying to stay calm myself down by drawing. By studying patiently, I have made a great success in my grades.

解析：

1.题干解读：本文要求以“李华”的名义写一篇短文，介绍自己在生活中是如何做到保持有耐心的，以及自己的收获。

2.写作指导：本文以第一人称行文；时态以一般现在时和现在完成时为主；文章可分为一段式，详细地介绍自己是如何做保持耐心以及收获。在写作时要做到无标点符号和语法错误，力求语句通顺，条理清晰。

二、诚实守信是中华民族的传统价值观。你们学校正在开展“我诚实，我守信”为话题的英语征文活动。请谈谈生活中你是怎么做的，以及这样做的意义。

提示词语：honest, keep one's promise, never cheat in the exams, virtue (美德)

提示问题：

● What do you do in your daily life?

● Why do you do so?

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范文：

It’s one of our traditional virtues to be honest. In my opinion, we should always choose to be honest with the people in our lives.

We need to be honest with our family, because they care about us the most. We can tell them anything and they will help us. Therefore, they deserve our honesty. We must be honest with our friends and keep our promise, because friendship is based on honesty. True friends avoid telling white lies and tell the truth instead. Of course, we must be honest with our teachers, too. They are there to help us learn and to guide us. We should never cheat in the exams. Most importantly, we have to be honest with ourselves. That means we must recognize our shortcomings. Only then can we work to improve them.

In short, honesty is indeed the best policy. There are many benefits of being an honest child such as the friendship and respect of others.

解析：

1.题干解读：该题目属于说明文写作。在写作时应根据内容提示讲述在现实中如何做到诚实守信，以及这样做的意义。

2.例文点评：例文主要用第一人称进行写作，主要采用一般现在时态来写作。在现实中如何做到诚实守信分成四点来写，叙述完整且条理清晰。

三、但求耕耘，不问收获。在我们的学习和生活中，能够全身心地投入到一件事情中去，享受做事情的过程，何尝不是一种幸福！某英文网站正在开展以“全身心投入 (Devotion)”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈自己全身心投入做某事的经历，以及自己的感受。

提示词语：

effort, improve, form a good habit, proud

提示问题:   

● What did you devote yourself to?

● How did you do it?

● What have you learnt from the experience?

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范文：

Five years ago, I started to devote myself to painting, which turned out to be one of the most important experiences in my life.

One day, after school, I saw some of my schoolmates painting in the art room. The colorful dots and lines caught my attention immediately. I was so drawn to the beauty in front of me, that I joined the Painting Club without hesitation. After that, no matter how bad the weather was, or how much homework I still had, I was on time to each art lesson and finished each painting attentively.

By doing this, I developed incredible focus and decided that I wanted to completely devote myself to painting. Not only did I win countless awards, but my painting journey helped me grow into a better person.

解析：

1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文。以“全身心投入”为题，写一篇短文。

2.写作指导：本文用第一人称，时态以一般过去时为主。描述自己全身心投入做某事的经历，并谈谈自己的感受。写作时保持主谓一致性，逻辑性要强，无语法和标点错误。

四、每个人的学习和生活都需要动力。有动力才会前进，有动力才能成功。

某英文报社以“动力”(motivation) 为话题展开征文活动，请你用英文写篇短文给报社投稿，谈谈你学习的动力是什么，你的学习动力驱使你做了什么。

提示词语： realize, dream, study, exercise

提示问题： ● What is your motivation for study?

● What does your motivation make you do?

Motivation plays an important role in our study.

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范文：

  Motivation

Motivation plays an important role in our study. Everyone needs the motivation to move on, so no matter what kind of difficulties they meet, they can see the hope and stick to the targets.

I realize that happiness is my biggest motivation for learning. Whenever I am overwhelmed by the pressure of learning, I will go out of the classroom and into the nature. It can not only cultivate sentiment, but also broaden my horizons. When you enjoy the beauty and happiness of life, you will feel happy in your study.

Let’s talk about my English! Because I usually pay more attention to listening, speaking,reading and writing, so I often get 100 marks. This time the 100 points brought me happiness, but also became my motivation to learn.

Happiness is the motivation of learning, it can let me enjoy the process of learning, the joy of success.

This will make my dream come true!

解析：

1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，内容是结合自身的经历，介绍一下动力对于学习的重要性。

2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述作文内容；时态采用一般现在时为主；首先要提及动力对于学习来说是重要的；其次是谈谈自己学习的动力是什么；这些学习动力驱使你做了什么；最后是总结。

五、科学技术是第一生产力，创新是引领发展的第一动力。

中国人民勤劳睿智，创新产品层出不穷，日新月异。假如你是李华，你们学校英语社团正在开展“创新生活”主题征文活动，请结合自身经历介绍你日常学习或生活中经常使用的新发明，说说你对它的评价及它带给你的改变。

提示词语：technology, High-speed Train, shared bikes, convenient, develop

提示问题：

·What new invention do you use in your daily life?

·What do you think of it?

·How does it affect your life?

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范文：

Technology plays an important role in our daily life. We benefit from them a lot and they are changing our lives greatly. Of hundreds of technological inventions, I like the high-speed train best.

In the past, it took me about 20 hours from Shenzhen to Shanghai . But now it only takes me about 4 hours to get to Shanghai. This saves me a lot of time. Moreover, it’s comfortable to take the high-speed train because it moves smoothly, and I can do some reading and watch movies without any problem. I can not only enjoy the view out of the windows but also have a relaxing time on the train. Many people choose to take the high-speed train because of the lower price than the plane. And it is very convenient. What a great creative invention!

解析：

1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。围绕“新发明”写一篇短文。

2.写作指导：本文主要采用一般现在时。结合自身经历介绍经常使用的新发明，并说说对它的评价及它带来的改变。写作时保持主谓一致性，逻辑性要强，无语法和标点错误。

六、生命在于运动。“一身动，则一身强；一家动，则一家强。”经常锻炼的人，才会有健康的体魄和充沛的精力。某英文网站正在开展以“我和家长一起锻炼”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你和家长经常一起做什么锻炼，以及这种锻炼给你们带来的好处。

提示词语：exercise，together，strong，relationship

提示问题：

●What sports do you and your parent(s) often do together?

●What benefits have you got from doing so?

范文：

A person who takes exercise regularly will have a healthy body and be full of energy. So my parents and I often exercise together. We run together every morning. I go to play basketball with my father on the weekend. In the evening, sometimes our parents go swimming together in the swimming pool. We exercise together, which is our better relationship and mutual understanding. Our family is more and more happy. Exercise makes us healthier.

解析：

1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，生命在于运动。经常锻炼的人，才会有健康的体魄和充沛的精力。根据要点提示，谈谈你和家长经常一起做什么锻炼，以及这种锻炼给你们带来的好处。要求要点覆盖全面，可适当扩充；注意写作时要点齐全，同时也要紧扣主题。

2. 写作指导：本文用到的一般现在时态，人称用第一人称。文章开头已给出，写作时，注意承接上文，写作中注意表达观点时的常用句式，内容上应注意描述的全面性；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。