高考英语二轮复习5.2.3 写作规范增分练含答案

这是一份高考英语二轮复习5.2.3 写作规范增分练含答案，共2页。试卷主要包含了每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；，只允许修改10处，多者不计分等内容，欢迎下载使用。

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
(2018·福州四校高三联考)When I was yung, I lived in the cuntryside. At that time, the trees there were very green, that left a deep impressin n me and the water there was s much clear that I even culd see the fish swimming. When it gets dark，the air was cler than it in the daytime. Peple liked t walk ut their huses t chat tgether. I liked t play games with my friends but ran alng the village happily.As the mn rse highly in the sky, the village was lighting.When I lked up，I culd see the mn and a few star. They were s clse t me.It seemed that I culd tuch them.The life in the cuntryside were s wnderful.
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When I was yung，I lived in the cuntryside. At that time, the trees there were very green，eq \f(that,which) left a deep impressin n me and the water there was s clear that I even culd see the fish swimming.When it eq \f(gets,gt) dark，the air was cler than eq \f(it,that) in the daytime. Peple liked t walk ut their huses t chat tgether. I liked t play games with my friends eq \f(but,and) ran alng the village happily. As the mn rse eq \f(highly,high) in the sky, the village was eq \f(lighting,lighted/lit/light).When I lked up，I culd see the mn and a few eq \f(star,stars). They were s clse t me. It seemed that I culd tuch them. The life in the cuntryside eq \f(were,was) s wnderful.
第二节 书面表达(满分25分)
(2018·湖北七市联考)假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Tm听说在中国通过扫描二维码(scan QR cdes)就可以轻松实现移动支付(mbile payment)，感到不可思议。请你写封邮件告知移动支付在中国的相关情况。内容包括：
1．在中国最流行，提供了便利；
2．快捷且强大的功能：如买早餐，买地铁票；
3．改变我们的生活，引领世界。
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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Dear Tm，
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By mbile payment, we can pay easily wherever we g. We can buy breakfast n the street and pay by scanning with ur smart phne. In the subway statin, we can scan with ur smart phne t purchase ur ticket. This is a glimpse f mst Chinese's life—allwing us t bid farewell t the wallets and bank cards.
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Yurs，
Li Hua