高考英语二轮复习5.3.3 写作规范增分练含答案

  5-3-3第三周　练(三)——写作规范增分练(限时30分钟)

第一节　短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)

    假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

    增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

    删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

    修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

   注意：

   1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

   2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

(2018·日照市高三联合检测)

Dear Jack，

How is it going recently? I'm delight to tell you that our school photograph club is going to hold a International Photograph Show. Here is some informations about it. Protect the environment is the theme of the show. It will start from June 15 in next month and last three weeks. Any student who is interested in it is welcome participate. I know you take good pictures but you've always wanted to do something what interests you. This is certain a good chance for more people to see it. You can send your photos to intphotoshow@gm. school. com.

Looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours，

Li Hua

【答案】

Dear Jack，

How is it going recently? I'm  to tell you that our school photograph club is going to hold  International Photograph Show. Here is some  about it. the environment is the theme of the show. It will start from June 15   next month and last three weeks. Any student who is interested in it is welcome participate. I know you take good pictures  you've always wanted to do something  interests you. This is  a good chance for more people to see .You can send your photos to intphotoshow@gm. school. com.

Looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours，

Li Hua

第二节　书面表达(满分25分)

(2018·太原市高三阶段性测评)为增进中美学生友谊并加深对彼此文化的理解，你校将与美国高中举办中美学生交流活动，现面向全校学生招募活动志愿者。假如你是李华，对此活动很感兴趣，请根据下列要点写一封自荐信。

要点：1.活动的主题；

2．自我介绍。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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【参考范文】

Dear Sir or Madam，

I'm Li Hua, a middle school student from China. I read the announcement that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it, so I'd like to take part in it.

The activity aims to strengthen the friendship between Chinese and American students as well as enhancing the understanding of mutual culture，which is unquestionably not only entertaining but also instructive.I'm confident that I'm qualified for this position.On the one hand，I have a good command of English and have won several prizes in English contests.On the other hand，being an enthusiastic and outgoing person, I firmly believe that I can promote a better communication between us.

Should this application meet with your favorable consideration, I will do my utmost to justify the confidence you have in me.

Yours，

Li Hua