高考英语二轮复习5.5.3 写作规范增分练含答案

  5-5-3第五周　练(三)——写作规范增分练(限时30分钟)

第一节　短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)

    假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

    增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

    删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

    修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

   注意：

   1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

   2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

(2018·石家庄市高中毕业班教学质量检测)

Dear Mom，

I'm now in the United States, a country so differently from China. Everything is fresh but interesting! I have made some friends there and they are very kind. Still, you know how much I miss you and your cooking. The mere thought of the dishes you prepare makes my mouth to water. My friends had some strange ways of describing their hungry. For instance，“I can eat a horse！”It's a little confused, hmm? I'm also sending you a few record of our daily conversations, from that you can hear real American English. It may be useful to you as English teacher.

【答案】

Dear Mom，

I'm now in the United States, a country so  from China. Everything is fresh  interesting! I have made some friends  and they are very kind. Still, you know how much I miss you and your cooking.The mere thought of the dishes you prepare makes my mouth water.My friends  some strange ways of describing their .For instance, “I can eat a horse！”It's a little ，hmm? I'm also sending you a few  of our daily conversations，from  you can hear real American English. It may be useful to you as English teacher.

第二节　书面表达(满分25分)

(2018·绵阳市高中第一次诊断性考试)假如你是李华，最近在写一篇关于北美原住民(native Americans)文化和习俗的论文，但国内有关的英文参考书籍较少。你想麻烦你的美国笔友Mike帮你买一些这方面的书。请根据以下信息给Mike写一封信。

1．买书的原因；

2．对书的要求(如数量、寄送时间等)；

3．付款方式。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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【参考范文】

Dear Mike，

I am sorry to bother you, but I have to ask a favor of you in the hope that you will be so kind to help me.

Recently I am writing a paper about the culture and customs of native Americans, but I am stuck as not many English reference books are available in China. Therefore, would you please buy some for me in America if it is convenient for you? Two or three books are just enough, and I would appreciate it if you could send them to me before Nov.9.

As to the expense of books and postage, I will transfer them to your account via an online bank. Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours，

Li Hua