高考英语二轮复习5.6.3 写作规范增分练含答案

  5-6-3第六周　练(三)——写作规范增分练(限时30分钟)

第一节　短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)

    假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

    增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

    删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

    修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

   注意：

   1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

   2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    (2018·河南、河北七所名校联考)Smart phones had become part of our daily life.No matter who we are，we can see people busy play with their smart phones.Smart phones benefit them.They help us escape the pressures of life and get informations. However，if we spend too much time on them, we won't have time to contact face to face our friends and family. And our life, study and work will hurt. In my view, we should limit to our using smart phones except for a purpose of learning. Meanwhile it's absolute necessary for us to take part in more outdoors activities.

【答案】

Smart phones   become part of our daily life.No matter   we are，we can see people busy   with their smart phones. Smart phones benefit  .They help us escape the pressures of life and get  .However，if we spend too much time on them, we won't have time to contact face to face our friends and family.And our life, study and work will hurt. In my view，we should limit our using smart phones except for   purpose of learning.Meanwhile it's   necessary for us to take part in more  activities.

第二节　书面表达(满分25分)

    (2018·安徽师大附中高三阶段性测试)在成长的过程中，我们总是对未来从事的职业充满憧憬，你班将以“My dream career”为题举办演讲比赛。请你根据以下要求写一篇英语演讲稿，要点如下：

  1.你的理想职业；

  2.选择的理由；

  3.实现的途径。

  注意：1.词数100左右；

  2.开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数；

  3.可根据内容要点适当发挥，以使行文连贯。

  My dream career

    Good morning, everyone! 

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   Thank you for listening.

【参考范文】

 My dream career

Good morning，everyone! Today，please allow me to give you a speech on the career I will take up in the future.There is no doubt that I have great expectation for the future job as everyone present. And my dream career is to be a tourist guide.From my early age，I have been admiring a guide who travels everywhere, sharing the knowledge of the local culture and customs and enjoying the brilliant landscapes at the same time. What's more, it is a well?paid job.

To be a good guide is no easy job. Only by hard work can I achieve the qualification and serve the people properly.

Thank you for listening.