广东高考英语作文专项突破

高考英语作文

一．假定你是李华，上个月你参加了学校举办的郊游活动。请给你的英国朋友Jim写一封电子邮件，介绍有关情况。内容包括：

1.活动组织(参加人员、时间、地点)；

2.活动过程；

3.你的感受。

注意：

1.写作词数应为80左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Dear Jim,

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Yours,

Li Hua

范文：

Dear Jim,

How are you doing? I’m writing with delight to share with you my experience in an activity organized by my school.

On a sunny Sunday last month, I joined some of my schoolmates and took a trip to a lakeside village in the suburbs, where we had a great time. We were amazed by the beautiful scenery. We went boating on the lake and hiking in the woods. We also talked to farmers about their life. It’s really refreshing to get close to nature and learn about the local customs.

Don’t you think this is wonderful?

Yours,

Li Hug

1.词汇积累

高兴：delight→ pleasure

参加：join→ take part in/participate in

惊讶的：amazed→ surprised

接近：get close to→ approach to

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：I’m writing with delight to share with you my experience in an activity organized by my school.

拓展句：I’m writing with delight to share with you my experience in an activity which was organized by my school.

二．假设你是李华，请你写信给英国笔友Jessica 祝福新年并描述你在春节期间与同学举办的新年聚会。内容包括：

1.时间、地点及参加人员；

2.食物、饮料及活动内容。

注意：

1. 写作词数应为80左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Dear Jessica,

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Yours,

Li Hua

范文：

Dear Jessica,

How have you been? I am very glad to write to introduce myself to you during the Spring Festival.

As we all know, the Spring Festival is the most important traditional festival for Chinese people. It is a wonderful festival for the whole country to celebrate. One afternoon during the Spring Festival holiday this year, a New Year's party was held by three of my classmates and me in the city park. We brought a lot of food and drink from home, some brought a lot of candy and some brought nice juice and yogurt .Then we ate together and talked. Later, we also played basketball with the students from other schools in groups. Although we lost the game, we were all very happy.

Finally, I hope I can share your interesting holiday stories and look forward to your reply.

                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                    Yours,

Li Hua

解析：

1.词汇积累

高兴的：glad→ pleased

有趣的：interesting→ funny

精彩的：wonderful→ splendid

答复：reply→response

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Then we ate together and talked. Later, we also played basketball with the students from other schools in groups.

拓展句：we played basketball with the students from other schools in groups after we ate together and talked.

三．假定你是学校英文报纸的记者。你校在国庆假期组织学生到顺德顺峰山公园开展青年志愿服务活动。请写一则活动报道，内容包括：

1. 活动时间和地点；

2. 活动内容；

3. 活动反响。

注意：

1. 词数 80 左右；

2. 请按格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

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范文：

On October 2nd, a voluntary service was held by our school in Shunde Shunfeng Mountain Park, with the aim of building a better community. The volunteer students offered various services to tourists. Some set up booths in the park, introducing and promoting intangible cultural relics in Shunde. Others offered timely response for tourists who got lost. Still others picked up the garbage and replaced the shared bikes on the pathway.

This voluntary service was thought highly of by visitors and the community. While tourists had a better day, students gained social experience and practiced their communication skills.

1.词汇积累

目标/目的：purpose/goal→aim

宣传/推广：advertise→promote

被赞扬：be praised→be thought highly of

获得：get→gain

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：On October 2nd, a voluntary service was held by our school in Shunde Shunfeng Mountain Park, with the aim of building a better community.

拓展句：On October 2nd, a voluntary service was held by our school in Shunde Shunfeng Mountain Park, which aims to build a better community.

四．为鼓励学生积极参加学校开展的课外活动，你校英语报举办题为“Enjoy After-school Activities”的征文活动。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括:

1. 开展情况；

2. 你的参与和收获；

3. 呼吁大家。

注意:

1. 写作词数应为80左右；

2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Enjoy After-school Activities

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范文：

1.                              Enjoy After-school Activities

As we know, after-school activities are becoming more and more popular among us students. And our school has offered varieties of activities to us such as playing ball games, singing and dancing, playing chess and so forth.

Take myself for example, I have found great pleasure in playing table tennis. Every Tuesday and Friday, I will play the game with my schoolmates after school. Not only does it build up my body and relieve stress from study, but also promotes friendship with others.

In a word, taking part in such activities can make our school life more enjoyable and meaningful, so I hope all of us can get actively involved in it.

2:

Enjoy After-school Activities

As we know, after-school activities are becoming increasingly popular in high schools. And our school is no exception. After school many students will have a marvelous time participating in diverse activities, ranging from sports like ball games to literature and art like reading and opera performances.

Take myself for example, I have found great pleasure in playing basketball with my classmates, as it not only can build up my strength but also fires me up, which in turn has enabled me to study more efficiently. Additionally, I take delight in various activities in the reading club every Friday, where I get immersed in the sea of literature, greatly improving my literary competence.

All in all, getting involved in various activities adds colors to our campus life, so I hope all of us can actively get involved in it.

1.词汇积累（以第二篇范文为参考）

越来越受欢迎：more and more popular→increasingly popular

精彩的：wonderful→marvelous

参与：take part in→participate in

各种各样的：varied→various

2.句型拓展

同义句

原句：As we know, after-school activities are becoming increasingly popular in high schools.

拓展句：What we all know is that after-school activities are becoming increasingly popular in high schools.

五．假设你是李华，得知你的英国笔友Jacky想到中国读大学，学习并体验中国文化，想征询你的意见。请你根据以下内容，给他写一封电子邮件。内容包括:

1.表示欢迎；

2.推荐大学；

3.你的期待。

注意:

1.词数80词左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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范文：

Dear Jacky,

I am so delighted to have received your letter. I’m writing to express my warmest welcome to you and I’m sure you will have the most unforgettable college experience.

Given your keen interest in Chinese culture, I recommend you apply for Zhejiang University. You can immerse yourself in our profound history and splendid culture in its Chinese Literature major. Moreover, Zhejiang University is located in Hangzhou , which will attract you with its beautiful scenery and harmonious cultural environment.

I sincerely hope your dream will come true. If you have further questions, please let me know.

Yours,

Li Hua

解析：

第1步：根据提示可知, 本篇为一封电子邮件；假设你是李华，得知你的英国笔友Jacky想到中国读大学，学习并体验中国文化，想征询你的意见。请你根据以下内容，给他写一封电子邮件。内容包括:1.表示欢迎；2.推荐大学；3.你的期待。

第2步：根据写作要求, 确定关键词（组）, 如：be delighted（高兴的）；warmest welcome（热烈欢迎）；unforgettable（难忘的）；keen interest（强烈的兴趣）；recommend（推荐）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句, 注意主谓一致和时态问题。文章主要介绍目前就读的学校，故应用一般现在时。

第4步：连句成文, 注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡, 书写一定要规范清晰, 保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

六．假定你是李华，你的英国网友Peter上周在邮件中提到想阅读中国著名的小说，就此请你用英语给他写封回信。内容包括：

1. 推荐一本小说；

2. 此书内容简介；

3. 给出阅读建议。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Peter,

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Yours,

Li Hua

范文：

Dear Peter,

I’m very glad to know that you have interest in Chinese novels. There are so many famous novels written in Chinese, including classical novels and modern novels, among which I like A   Dream of Red Mansions most. It is an interesting novel and is excellent beyond comparison. Based on Jia and Lin’s love story, it describes a tragedy about love and the decline about a big family, which exposes the social crisis.

The book is written in old Chinese, which is difficult to understand. So when you read it, you’d better get a Chinese dictionary ready for reference. In addition, I suggest that you should know some background knowledge about the Qing Dynasty.

I wish you would have fun and learn something through reading it.

Yours,

Li Hua

解析：

1.词汇积累

高兴：pleased→glad

非常：more than→very

著名的：excellent/outstanding/well-known→famous

此外：furthermore/what's more→In addition

2.句式拓展

合并简单句

原句：It is an interesting novel and is excellent beyond comparison.

拓展句：It is such an interesting novel that it is excellent beyond comparison.