专题04 情感和情绪 中考英语作文话题写作范文大全（通用版）

专题04 情感和情绪类作文 （精选五篇）

1．    作为中学生，我们现在的学习压力很大，经常面对各种考试，因此有时会产生焦虑情绪。请你根据内容提示，简单描述一下我们的考试压力主要体现在哪些方面，并针对此种情况给出合理的建议。

提示：

1、表现：担心考试；考前很难入睡；考试时发挥失常……

2、建议：请从考前学习准备、作息时间和放松方式这三方面，给出至少四条缓解考试压力的具体建议。

要求：

1、观点鲜明，结构合理，内容连贯，要用到所有提示内容，并适当发挥；

2、文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息；

3、词数：80词左右，文章的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。

How to Deal with the Exam Stress

We students are very busy with schoolwork and in the face of many exams every school day. Some of us _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

2．    假如你是李想，小时候，每年夏天你都会去爷爷奶奶家过暑期，有趣的乡村生活让你回味无穷。最近，你校举办了主题为“我的快乐童年（My Happy Childhood）”的英语征文活动，请你写一篇英语文章，介绍你这段美好的童年经历以及感受。

写作要求：条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，语法正确。包括以下内容，适当发挥。字数80词以上（文章的开头不计入总词数）

◆  环境：空气清新，山清水秀。

◆  房子：两层楼；两间卧室，一间客厅和一间厨房；房后有一大片果树。

◆  活动：钓鱼，摘果子，做游戏，干农活……

提示词汇：楼层（floor）；go fishing；pick fruits；do farm work...

My Happy Childhood

My grandparents lived in a small village. When I was young, I went there for my summer holiday every year. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

3．    假如你是李华，你的朋友Mike正在准备一场重要的考试，他感到非常焦虑并向你求助，请你根据以下要点写封电子邮件给他，帮助他缓解考前的焦虑情绪。

要点：

1. 相信自己；

2. 充分复习；

3. 适当休息；

4. ……

注意：

1. 词数80—100；

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；

4. 邮件的开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Mike,

I’m sorry to hear that you are so worried about your coming exam. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

4．    假如你是李磊，你的笔友Anna给你发了电子邮件诉说她的烦恼，请根据邮件内容进行回复。

要求：1.逻辑清晰，内容完整，书写规范。

2.词数100左右。邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数。

Dear Anna,

I understand your feeling. Here is what I think.

__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

I hope what I said is helpful to you.

Li Lei

5．    假如你是某中学学生李华, 最近你班发生了一件令人感动的事情。请根据以下提示, 给你的英国好友 Tom 写一封信, 与他分享你的感动。

（1）两周前同学王红伤了左腿。

（2）王红上下楼很困难, 但想来。

（3）校长知道后, 决定将你班从四楼搬到一楼。

（4）你们帮助王红（如买午饭等）。

（5）你认为……

要求：

（1）词数： 80~100 个。

（2）开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数。

（3）要点齐全, 行文连贯, 可适当发挥。

Dear Tom, 

How are you? I have a moving story to tell you. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Please tell me something interesting about you and your classmates.

Yours,

Li Hua

参考答案

1．例文：

How to Deal with the Exam Stress

We students are very busy with schoolwork and in the face of many exams every school day. Some of us are so worried about exams that it’s hard to fall asleep before them. When we pay much attention to the exam, the test results won’t be good. Parents and teachers will blame them, they will also lose confidence. If we have proper stress, we can work harder, but if we have too much pressure, it may have a bad effect on our study. We should learn to release pressure.

First of all, we should review carefully and make full preparation before the exam. Second, we shouldn’t stay up late to review for the exam. Third, after reviewing for a period of time, we should also relax ourselves appropriately. In addition, if we do well in the exam, we will give ourselves appropriate rewards.

So I hope everyone can deal with the exam stress properly and get good grades.

【详解】

1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示内容，写出考试压力的表现，提出自己的建议等，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。

2. 写作指导：写作时要与已给出的开头融合起来，用第一人称和其他人称相结合来写作，时态以一般现在时为主，多用情态动词should提出建议，要做到要点齐全，无单词拼写和语法错误。

2．例文：

My Happy Childhood

My grandparents lived in a small village. When I was young, I went there for my summer holiday every year.

The air is fresh, the mountains are clear and the water is clean there. There are two floors in my grandparents’ house. There are two bedrooms, a living room and a kitchen. There are a lot of fruit trees behind the house.

I always went fishing and picked fruits with my friends. They were interesting and exciting. I also did farm work to help my grandparents and played games happily there.

I really had a great time on the farm.

【详解】

1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以My Happy Childhood为题，结合提示内容进行写作，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。

2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来介绍，时态以一般过去时为主。作文要分别从环境、房子和活动几方面入手。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。

3．例文

Dear Mike,

I’m sorry to hear that you are so worried about your coming exam.

I would like to give you some suggestions to help you. First of all, you must keep a good state of mind. That is to say, you need to be confident and look at everything positively. Secondly, you should review what you have learned well. Go through your notes carefully. In this way, you can learn better. Besides, you should have a good rest. You can do the following things to help you relax yourself, such as listening to music, taking exercise, keeping a balanced diet and communicating with your family members or friends. So please cheer up!

I wish you the best of luck.

Yours,

Li Hua

【详解】

1.题干解读：该题目属于应用文写作,写作时要按邮件格式写。在写作时应承接短文开头；第二段叙述缓解考前的焦虑情绪的三点建议；第三段表达祝福。

2.写作指导：本文应该用第二人称来叙述建议的内容；时态采用一般现在时为主；使用恰当的情态动词使建议的语气更委婉；运用连词使文章内容更加连贯流畅，建议的内容更加饱满清晰，文章更具有条理性和层次感。

4．例文：

Dear Anna,

I understand your feeling. Here is what I think. Maybe your parents won’t know how you feel if you don’t talk to them about it. Why not honestly and kindly let them know music and you are never a good match, but sports and you are made for each other? Meanwhile, you’d better tell them you have had a clear life goal and are old enough to make your own decisions. Further-more, try to get a proper chance to prove that you are talented in sports. Only then will they know you better and let you choose what you love to do. I’m sure your parents will be up for helping you explore different options.

I hope what I said is helpful to you.

Li Lei

【详解】

1.题干解读：本文是一篇对电子邮件的回复。根据Anna信中所提到的烦恼，进行回复。

2.写作指导：本文主要采用一般现在时。在回信中针对Anna提到的烦恼，给出自己合理性的建议，让父母知道自己并不擅长音乐，明确告知父母自己的目标是什么，这样有效地沟通会让父母理解和支持的。写作时保持主谓一致性，逻辑性要强，无语法和标点错误。

5．范文：

Dear Tom,

How are you? I have a moving story to tell you.

Wang Hong is my classmate. She hurt her left leg in an accident two weeks ago. It was difficult for Wang Hong to go up and down the stairs, but she wanted to come to school. The headmaster decided to move my classroom from the fourth floor to the first floor after he knew it. Wang Hong is very grateful to the headmaster. As her classmates, we should also help her. Some helped her buy lunch, others helped him to clean up. She is happy. I think students should help each other and make progress together.

Please tell me something interesting about you and your classmates.

Yours,

Li Hua

【详解】

1.题干解读：该题目属于应用文写作，要求根据所给的汉语提示，以李华的名义想Tom写一封信谈谈最近你班发生的令人感动的事情，注意要点齐全，写作时要按信的格式来写。

2.写作指导：本文应该用第三和第一人称来叙述内容；时态采用一般现在时和一般过去时；在写作时应承接短文开头，根据汉语提示的内容，叙述王红同学受伤后，校长和同学对她的帮助，并写作自己的感受。在叙述内容时，力求语言正确，内容完整，保证行文连贯。