湖南省常德市三年（2020-2022）中考英语真题分题型分层汇编--04作文

这是一份湖南省常德市三年（2020-2022）中考英语真题分题型分层汇编--04作文，共4页。试卷主要包含了Lingling等内容，欢迎下载使用。
材料作文
1．（2022·湖南常德）Lingling: Where are yu ging n hliday, Tny?
Tny: T Ls Angeles.
Betty: Oh, really? Yu’ll lve it. I went there tw years ag and enjyed it a lt.
Tny: Hw lng did it take t get there? Did yu fly?
Betty: Yes, we did, and that tk abut nine hurs. Then ur friends met us and drve us t their hme.
Lingling: Wh was with yu?
Betty: My parents.
Tny: S what did yu d?
Betty: Well, first we went t Disneyland, and guess what? I met Snw White and Mickey Muse! I was s excited!
Tny: Ww! Hw lng did yu stay there?
Betty: We stayed there fr tw days. And then we went t Hllywd.
Lingling: Did yu see any mvie stars?
Betty: N, but we swam in the Pacific Ocean at Santa Mnica. It was great!
Lingling: Where are yu ging n hliday this year, Betty?
Betty: Hng Kng.
假设你是材料中的Betty，请写一篇80词以上的英文短文，介绍自己两年前的度假经历，以便在英语课上分享。
注意: 1.要点包括度假的时间、地点、人物、经历和感受等；2.不得出现自己的姓名和校名等真实信息；3.请按照以下格式在答题卡相应位置作答。
Hell, everyne!
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That’s all. Thank yu!
书信作文
2．（2020·湖南常德）假设你是Angelica的朋友Alan，请根据第二节（回答问题）材料并按照提示给Angelica回信：1. 恭喜乔迁并简单评述其新居。2. 回复能否参加聚会。3. 若能参加聚会，你会准备什么节目，对整个活动有什么建议等；若不能参会，说明原因，表达自己的心情等。注意：1. 80词以上，开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数；2. 不得出现人名和校名等真实信息。
Dear Angelica,
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Alan
日记
3．（2021·湖南常德）假设你是第二节（回答问题）材料中的Alan, 请写一篇80词以上的英文日记，描述对话中所发生的事情。
注意：
1. 要点包括时间、地点、人物、事情的经过和启示等；
2. 不得出现自己的姓名和校名等真实信息；
3. 请按以下格式在答题卡相应位置作答。
June 20th, 2021
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1．例文
Hell, everyne!
I went t Ls Angeles tw years ag. I’d like t share the experience with yu. I went t Ls Angeles with my parents by plane. It tk us abut 9 hurs t get there. When we gt t the airprt, ur friends met us and drve us t their hme. We went t Disneyland and we met Snw White and Mickey Muse! I was s excited! We stayed there fr tw days. And then we went t Hllywd. I didn’t see any mvie stars, but I swam in the Pacific Ocean at Santa Mnica. It was great!
That’s all. Thank yu!
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据对话内容，介绍自己两年前的度假经历，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来介绍，时态用一般过去时。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段详细介绍去洛杉矶旅游的经历；第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
2．例文：
Dear Angelica,
I’m glad t receive yur letter last time. First f all, cngratulatins n yur settlement t the new huse，which is s warm and cmfrtable that I’d like t have a lk at nce. The small independent garden is the best design in the huse, and als a gd place t relax. Secndly, I really appreciate yur invitatin f the husewarming party. I’d lve t, but I can’t. As yu knw, the Natinal Pian Grading Test is cming, my curse schedule n these days is already full. I have t devte myself t the preparatin until the end f the test. At last, it’s a great pity that I can’t cme t yur party. But I’ve prepared a gift fr yu and I hpe yu will like it.
May yur party be a great success and enjy yurself that day!
Yurs,
Alan
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：这是一篇书信作文。本文要求按照提示要点写一封回信，写作中注意要包含所有的提示要点，可适当发挥。时态以一般现在时为主，人称是第一人称。
2.例文点评：本文采用两段式，第一段：（1）恭喜对方乔迁之喜；（2）告诉对方因为要准备钢琴等级考试无法参加聚会；（3）表示很遗憾并准备了礼物；第二段以祝福结尾。文章紧扣题目要点，内容完整，结构清晰，语言表达到位。
3.高分亮点：
短语：be glad t；s…that…；wuld like (lve) t；have a lk；at nce；have t；devte myself t；prepare fr；the end f；enjy yurself。
句型：First f all…Secndly…At last…；which引导的非限制性定语从句；s…that…引导的结果状语从句；and并列句；but并列复合句；As yu knw…；it’s +名词+ that从句。
3．例文：
June 20th, 2021
On my way t schl this mrning, I saw a traffic accident. A by was riding a bicycle, listening t music. At a crssing rad, the traffic lights were abut t turn red when a car appeared. Because the driver was n the phne, he didn’t ntice the traffic lights and didn’t stp n time. The by wh was riding a bike fell ff his bike and hurt his knee. What a terrible accident!
I think we must be careful n ur way t schl, dn’t catch up, dn’t listen t music, especially when crssing the rad.
【解析】
【分析】
【详解】
1. 题干解读：题目要求根据第二节材料中的Alan的叙述，描写目睹的事情情况，包括时间、地点、人物、事情的经过和启示等，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导：写作时要紧扣材料内容，用第一人称和第三人称相结合来写作，时态以过去时为主，要做到要点齐全，无单词拼写和语法错误。