满分作文10篇+移动支付-备战2023年高考英语作文热点话题押题预测（全国通用）

假如你是李华，你的美国笔友 Jenny 正在做一份关于中国移动支付（mobile payment ）的问卷调查 （survey） ，你是她的重点采访对象． 内容包括：

1. 你或你身边的人在日常生活中使用移动支付的情况；

2. 移动支付带来的好处；

3. 你的看法。

参考词汇：微信：Wechat   支付宝：Alipay   二维码：QR code

 注意：1. 词数 100 左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Jenny，

How is your survey on mobile payment going？

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Yours faithfully，

Li Hua

【优秀满分范文】

Dear Jenny,

How is your survey on mobile payment going? I’m glad I can help with it.

It is generally believed that China is the largest mobile payment market. Nowhere else is the cashless trend more obvious than in China. Most of us are  used to  paying by scanning QR codes whatever we buy — books, clothes, and electronic devices, to name a few, which is a glimpse into the life of most Chinese like me and my family.

With the widespread use of mobile payment, Wechat or Alipay is the most convenient and safest way to pay. We rarely need to carry a wallet or cash at all. Besides, never will we worry about getting fake notes or having to count change. In short, mobile payment has greatly changed people’s life in China.

Personally, I think mobile payment should be encouraged. First, it has won over consumers with its convenience. Another advantage is that there are often discounts if you make mobile payment, as major online payment platforms are competing to have more consumers use their service.

I hope my explanation can be of some help to you. Wish you good luck.

Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

假定你是李津，你在某英文网上论坛看到大家在讨论人们使用非现金支付越来越普遍的现象，你打算在论坛里跟帖讨论，内容包括：

（1）非现金支付的好处；

（2）非现金支付的弊端；

（3）你的观点。

注意：

（1）字数100左右；

（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

（3）开头与结尾已给出，不计入字数。

With fewer and fewer people using cash, Non-cash payments are becoming increasingly popular, especially in China.

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Posted by Li Jin

【答案】With fewer and fewer people using cash, Non-cash payments are becoming increasingly popular, especially in China.

Non-cash payment has many advantages. First of all, we can pay for whatever we buy with only a smart phone. Second, it reduces the risk of losing money, and it can prevent receiving counterfeit money. And the best part is that we don’t need to worry about not having change anymore when taking a bus.

However, non-cash payment also has many disadvantages. The money can’t arrive in time. It is not convenient for some elderly people who do not use mobile phones to use it. In addition, it cannot protect people’s privacy.

As for me, I prefer non-cash payment. I think it is an indispensable part of modern life.

Posted by Li Jin

【解析】

【分析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生在网上论坛里跟帖讨论非现金支付好处和弊端并表达自己的看法。

【详解】

1.词汇积累

现金：cash→ready money

减少、降低：reduce→lower

不可或缺的：indispensable→essential

保护：defend→protect

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：The money can’t arrive in time.

拓展句：The money can’t arrive in time, which makes some people uneasy.

【点睛】

【高分句型1】First of all, we can pay for whatever we buy with only a smart phone. (运用了whatever引导的宾语从句)

【高分句型2】It is not convenient for some elderly people who do not use mobile phones to use it.(运用了who引导限制性定语从句)

Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.

目前中国的移动支付(mobile payment)非常盛行，越来越多的年轻人选择使用移动支付，有的人认为移动支付给人们带来了便利，而有些人认为这种方式存在安全隐患。请你谈谈对这一现象的看法。内容包括:

1. 简要描述你或你身边的人在日常生活中使用移动支付的现象。

2. 通过与传统方式的比较，谈谈移动支付给人们带来的利与弊。

(参考词汇:微信Wechat;支付宝: Alipay; 二维码QR code)

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【答案】With the development of China’s economy, Wechat and Aipay are very popular with everyone in the street. More and more people are choosing to pay the bill by using mobile payment, which is taking the place of paper currency. Some thinks that it actually makes life convenient, others believe that it's a security risk.

Compared with traditional payment, mobile payment has its advantages and disadvantages, I think the advantages are as follows. Firstly, it is convenient for everyone to buy what you want. Secondly, using mobile payment can avoid receiving fake money and being received fake money. Thirdly, If using the mobile payment, everyone can go shopping without any paper currency to prevent the money being stolen.

There is no denying that mobile payment has its disadvantages. It will take more risks protecting your private possessions. For example, you might be monitored while paying for what you have bought so that your account could be stolen.

The mobile payment is under construction now, people should treat it in an objective attitude.

【解析】

【分析】

这是一篇议论类的作文写作。

【详解】

第一步：审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一,1，简要描述你或你身边的人在日常生活中使用移动支付的现象有的人认为移动支付给人们带来了便利，而有些人认为这种方式存在安全隐患。2，通过与传统方式的比较，谈谈移动支付给人们带来的利与弊。3，总结自己的观点。第二，人称以第三人称为主，兼用为第一人称和第二人称。第三，时态为一般现在时。

第二步：布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为三段。第一段，简要描述身边的人在日常生活中使用移动支付的现象有的人认为移动支付给人们带来了便利，而有些人认为这种方式存在安全隐患。第二段，移动支付给人们带来的利。第三段，移动支付给人们带来的弊。第四段，总结自己的观点。

第三步：确定关键词汇和短语: be popular with ,choose to do sth, by doing sth, taking the place of, paper currency, convenient, security risk, avoid doing sth, prevent sth from being done ,risk doing sth , private possessions, monitor, account, under construction. Compared with traditional payment, mobile payment has its advantages and disadvantages. it is convenient for everyone to buy what you want.

第四步：确定较为高级的句子：which引导的非限制性定语从句 More and more people are choosing to pay the bill by using mobile payment, which is taking the place of paper currency. If引导的条件状语从句If using the mobile payment, everyone can go shopping without any paper currency to prevent the money being stolen. that为连接词的同位语从句There is no denying that mobile payment has its disadvantages. while引导的时间状语从句，what引导的宾语从句和so that引导的结果状语从句you might be monitored while paying for what you have bought so that your account could be stolen.

第五步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接：Firstly, Secondly, Thirdly, for example.

第六步：注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。

【点睛】

文章思路清晰，语言规范，段落整齐，语篇连贯，层次清晰。使用了较为高级的句式：如which引导的非限制性定语从句 More and more people are choosing to pay the bill by using mobile payment, which is taking the place of paper currency. If引导的条件状语从句If using the mobile payment, everyone can go shopping without any paper currency to prevent the money being stolen. that为连接词的同位语从句There is no denying that mobile payment has its disadvantages. while引导的时间状语从句，what引导的宾语从句和so that引导的结果状语从句you might be monitored while paying for what you have bought so that your account could be stolen.

高级句式的应用提升了写作的档次，整个短文示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力。

随着科技的发展，移动支付成为潮流。有人认为移动支付方便快捷，有人认为它存在不足，比如手机没电等问题。请说说你的观点，并举例说明。

要求：1. 不要在文中透露真实信息；

2. 可以适当增加细节以使行文连贯；

3. 字数100字左右，首句已提供，不计入总字数。

参考词汇：二维码 QR code

In recent years, mobile payment has made its way into people’s life. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【答案】         

    In recent years, mobile payment has made its way into people’s life. It is supported by two major companies Wechat and Alipay. Thanks to their services, we can buy products without wallets. All we need are a cellphone and QR codes .

In my opinion, most users prefer mobile payment, for it saves us the time of dealing with change, especially the coins. Besides, it also keeps a record of our financial report automatically, allowing us to know where our money is going. The popularity of mobile payment, however, comes with a price. So much do we depend on cellphones that sometimes we find ourselves trapped in occasions when they fail to work, running out of battery or out of service.

As the saying goes, "there is no rose without a thorn." Mobile payment, with advantages outweighing disadvantages, is making a difference in a revolutionary way.

【解析】

【分析】

本篇书面表达是开放性作文，要求对一个现象发表自己的观点。

【详解】

第1步：根据提示可知，本文要求对一个现象发表自己的观点：随着科技的发展，移动支付成为潮流。有人认为移动支付方便快捷，有人认为它存在不足，比如手机没电等问题。请说说你的观点，并举例说明，时态应为一般现在时。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如； mobile payment（移动支付），QR code（二维码），popularity（流行），convenience（便利）， outweigh（超过）及revolutionary（革命性的）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。

【点睛】

范文语言地道，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和句式，高级词汇有make one's way into（进入），thanks to（幸亏、由于），in one’s opinion (依某人的观点)，deal with（处理），keep a record of(记录)，depend on（依赖）以及be trapped in（被困在），而且还使用了非限定性定语从句“As the saying goes, "there is no rose without a thorn."”，宾语从句和非谓语动词“Besides, it also keeps a record of our financial report automatically, allowing us to know where our money is going.”，状语从句和倒装句“So much do we depend on cellphones that sometimes we find ourselves trapped in occasions when they fail to work, running out of battery or out of service.”，with的复合结构“Mobile payment, with advantages outweighing disadvantages, is making a difference in a revolutionary way.”，全文没有语法错误，上下句转换自然流畅。