专题07 求助信-备战2023年新高考英语写作全攻略

新高考英语写作全攻略

专题07 求助信

求助信顾名思义，你遇到了某种问题写信向别人寻求帮助，主要分成两大类：(1)学习方面遇到的一些问题，比如压力太大，或者学习方法不对；(2)生活方面的一些问题，比如人际交往，或者你丢失了什么东西希望别人帮你寻找。下面分两个方面进行呈现。

Sample Model 01

假设你是李华，你在英语学习中遇到了一些问题，你给英语报社的编辑(Robert)写信咨询，希望得到帮助。你的问题如下：

1.对英语学习没有兴趣；

2.记忆单词有困难；

3.害怕出错误，不敢参加小组讨论。

注意：

1.词数100左右；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.结束语已为你写好。

思维过程

第一段：自我介绍＋背景呈现(写信的目的)

[1]我是李华，一名高中生。

I’m Li Hua, a senior high school student.

[2]得知您在英语教学方面很厉害，我写信向您咨询一些我遇到的困难，希望得到您的帮助。

 Knowing that you are an expert in English learning, I’m writing to consult you about some problems I come across, hoping to get help from you.

[*在表示“擅长..”的时候，用be an expert in..来替换be good at；consult这个词，表示“请教”的时候后面直接+sb.，注意consult with sb.是“与某人商量”。]

第二段：描述自己的问题＋希望得到什么帮助

[3]我有很多头疼的问题。

I have many problems.

There are quite a few headaches flooding to my mind.

Sentence IV. There + be +n., consisting of A, B as well as C.

    There + be +n., including A, B as well as C.

[2014全国I]关于这个课程，我有很多疑惑，比如课堂的规模，开始和结束的时间以及确切的价格。

There are quite a few questions confusing me, consisting of the size of the classes, the start and end times as well as the exact price.

  [2011全国]当我学习英语的时候，我遇到了很多问题，比如发音，词汇和阅读等。

There is a variety of questions flooding to my mind when I learn English, including spoken English, words, and reading.

[4]我记不住单词，我很苦恼。

I have much difficulty memorizing words. I am annoyed.

What annoys me most is that I have much difficulty memorizing words.

Sentence II. What + v. me +be+ n.    What + v. me +be+ that SVO.

[如：令我感到困惑的是..，怎么写？困惑是confuses，就是动词，把它放在v.的位置，前面是what，后面是me，然后加be动词(单数形式)，后面加n.或者that从句。]

[2014全国I]令我担心的是这个学校的学费。

What concerns me is the fee(学费) of the school.

[2013全国]令我感到沮丧的是我不仅英语不好，而且缺乏自信。

What upsets / disappoints me is that my English level is not very good and I am lacking in self-confidence.

[5]我想知道你是否可以推荐一些在记单词方面有效的方法。

I wonder if you could recommend some effective methods of memorizing words to me.

[6]因为我英语很差，所以我缺乏自信并且害怕出错误。

Due to my poor English, I am lacking in confidence and afraid of making mistakes.

Sentence XII. since+句子  due to sth. / doing sth.; owing to doing sth.

[2012全国I]因为读了很多书，我在语言学习上基础很扎实。

Owing to reading a great variety of books, I have laid(建立) a solid foundation in language learning.

[7]这就是为何我总是小组讨论中最不活跃的那一个人。

 That’s why I am always the least active one in group discussions.  

[8]我非常渴望能恢复我在英语上的信心。

 I am desperate(绝望的；渴望的) to restore my faith in English.

第三段：表达感谢＋盼望回复

[9]我将会非常感激如果您能给我一些建议的话。

I would be grateful if you can give me some suggestions.

[10]期待您的早日答复。  

I am expecting your early reply.

完整设计              

Dear Robert,

I’m Li Hua, a senior high school student. Knowing that you are an expert in English learning, I’m writing to consult you about some problems I come across, hoping to get help from you.

There are quite a few headaches flooding to my mind. What annoys me most is that I have much difficulty memorizing words. I wonder if you could recommend some effective methods of memorizing words to me. Due to my poor English, I am lacking in confidence and afraid of making mistakes. That’s why I am always the least active one in group discussions. I am desperate to restore my faith in English.

I would be grateful if you can give me some suggestions. I am expecting your early reply.     

Yours,

Li Hua

Sample Model 02

 假如你是李华，于2017年5月1日搭乘国外某航空公司航班(flight number BA793)回国后，发现遗失了一个行李箱(suitcase)。现请用英文给该航空公司写一封信，请他们帮忙寻找。要点包括：

1.陈述写信原因；

2.简要描述该行李；

3.说明其重要性；

4.期待回复并表示感谢。

注意：

1.词数100左右；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.结束语已为你写好。

思维过程

第一段：自我介绍＋背景呈现(写信的目的)

[1]我是李华，2017年5月1日搭乘BA793航班的乘客之一。

I’m Li Hua, one of your customers who took the flight BA793 on May 1, 2017.

[2]我写信向你们寻求帮助去寻找我的一个遗失的手提箱。这箱子是我不小心落在机场的。

I am writing to request your assistance in finding a missing suitcase of mine, which was accidently(意外地) left out(遗漏) in the airport.

[*注意“寻求你的帮助”的高级的表达是“request your assistance in doing sth.”。]

第二段：失物外观的详细描述＋失物的重要性

[3]这是一个24英寸的蓝色帆布手提箱。还有一条粉色的带子，上面有我的名字，系在手提箱的左把手上。(箱子的外观介绍，大小＋颜色＋材质)

It’s a 24-inch blue suitcase, made of canvas(帆布). And there is a pink strap(带子) with my name on tied(系，绑) to the left handle of the suitcase.

[4]我非常着急，因为我把我的笔记本电脑和重要证件都放在了里面，包括我的身份证，护照和几张信用卡。(说明重要性一，箱内物品)

I am extremely anxious since I had put my laptop and important certificates in it, including my ID card, passport as well as my credit cards.

[5]此外，这还是在我十八岁生日时，父亲送给我的一件珍贵的礼物。(说明重要性二，箱子意义)

Besides, it is a precious gift that my father gave to me on my 18th birthday.

第三段：表达愿望＋盼望答复

[6]我将会非常感激如果你们能给我一些积极的回应。

I would be grateful if you can give me some positive response.

[7]期待您的早日答复。  

I am expecting your early reply.

完整设计            

Dear Sir / Madam,

I’m Li Hua, one of your customers who took the flight BA793 on May 1, 2017. I am writing to request your assistance in finding a missing suitcase of mine, which was accidently left out in the airport.

It’s a 24-inch blue suitcase, made of canvas. And there is a pink strap with my name on tied to the left handle of the suitcase. I am extremely anxious since I had put my laptop and important certificates in it, including my ID card, passport as well as my credit cards. Besides, it is a precious gift that my father gave to me on my 18th birthday.

I would be grateful if you can give me some positive response. I am expecting your early reply.                                                                                                                                     Yours,

 Li Hua

Sample Model 03

[2011全国]假定你是李华，在一所英国学校学习暑假课程，遇到一些困难，希望得到学校辅导中心(learning Center)的帮助。根据学校规定，你需书面预约，请按下列要点写一封信：

1.本人简介；

2.求助内容；

3.约定时间；

4.你的联系方式(Email: lihua@1236.com; Phone:12345678)。

 注意：1.词数100左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.结束语已为你写好。

思维过程

第一段：自我介绍＋背景呈现(写信的目的)

[1]我是李华，一名高中生。

I’m Li Hua, a senior high school student.

[2]我写信向您咨询一些我遇到的困难。

I’m writing to consult you about some problems I come across.

[1]我是李华，一名高中生，我写信向您咨询一些我遇到的困难。

I’m Li Hua, a senior high school student, writing to consult you about some problems I come across.

Sentence XVII. I am Li Hua, 同位语，定语从句/非谓语.

[2010全国]我是李华，是红星中学的学生会主席。我们学校离你们大学很近。

I’m Li Hua, chairman of the Student Union at Hongxing Middle School, which is close to your university.

[2010天津]我是李华，现在就读于晨光高中，高二一班。

I am Li Hua, a student in Class One, Senior Two, attending Chenguang High School presently.

[*a student in Class One, Senior Two前面有a，而chairman of the Student Union at Hongxing Middle School前面没有a。因为chairman是职务，student是身份，当该名词是表示职务的时候前面一般不加冠词。]

[2]我在一所英国学校学习暑假课程，并且希望在英语学习方面取得快速进步。

I am attending the summer holiday courses and hopefully will make rapid progress in English learning.

第二段：描述自己的问题＋希望得到什么帮助

[3]我有很多头疼的问题。

There are quite a few headaches flooding to my mind.

[4]我记不住单词，我很苦恼。

What annoys me most is that I have much difficulty memorizing words.

[5]我想知道你是否可以推荐一些在记单词方面有效的方法。

I wonder if you could recommend some effective methods of memorizing words to me.

[6]因为我英语很差，所以我缺乏自信并且害怕出错误。

Due to my poor English, I am lacking in confidence and afraid of making mistakes.

[7]这就是为何我总是小组讨论中最不活跃的那一个人。

  That’s why I am always the least active one in group discussions.

[8]我非常渴望能恢复我在英语上的信心。

 I am desperate(绝望的；渴望的) to restore my faith in English.

第三段：约定时间＋联系方式

[9]周五我没课。如果你方便的话，请联系我邮箱：lihua@1236.com or telephone.。我的电话号码是12345678。

On Fridays I have no class. If it would be convenient to you, please reach me by email: lihua@1236.com or telephone. My telephone number is 12345678.

[完整设计]                

Dear Sir / Madam,

I’m Li Hua, a senior high school student, writing to consult you about some problems I come across. I am attending the summer holiday courses and hopefully will make rapid progress in English learning.

There are quite a few headaches flooding to my mind. What annoys me most is that I have much difficulty memorizing words. I wonder if you could recommend some effective methods of memorizing words to me. Due to my poor English, I am lacking in confidence and afraid of making mistakes. That’s why I am always the least active one in group discussions. That’s why I am always the least active one in group discussions. I am desperate to restore my faith in English.

On Fridays I have no class. If it would be convenient to you, please reach me by email: lihua@1236.com or telephone. My telephone number is 12345678.

Yours,

Li Hua