专题08 申请信-备战2023年新高考英语写作全攻略

新高考英语写作全攻略 专题08 申请信申请信主要是工作或入学申请，你想要得到一个工作的职位或是想要得到一个学习的机会，你写信去申请，这种写作的实质是对自己的推荐，即自荐信。Sample Model 01[2012全国]假如你是李华，从互联网(the Internet)上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡(Singapore)举办夏令营，欢迎各国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。内容主要包括：1.自我介绍(包括英语能力)；2.参加意图(介绍中国、了解其他国家)；3.希望获准。 注意：1.词数100左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头语和结束语已为你写好。思维过程第一段：背景呈现(自我介绍＋说明写信的目的)[1]我是李华，我是来自中国的一个中学生。I am Li Hua, and I am a middle school student from China.[2]我从互联网的得知一个消息，消息的内容是一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡举办夏令营。I learn a message from the Internet, and the message is that you’ll have a summer camp in Singapore. [3]我对此很感兴趣。I am interested in it. [1]从互联网上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡举办夏令营，我是李华，一个来自中国的中学生，我很感兴趣。*Learning from the Internet that you’ll have a summer camp in Singapore, I, Li Hua, a middle school student from China, am interested in it.[*开头设计Learning from+获得消息处that+消息内容，I，姓名，身份，VO.]第二段：个人介绍＋参加意图[2]我爱英语，并学习很多年了。我希望能和不同国家的学生交流。I love English, and I have learned English for 10 years. I desire that I can communicate with students from different countries. [2]我爱英语，并学习很多年了。我希望能和不同国家的学生交流。I am so keen on English and I have been learning it for 10 years. I desire that I can communicate with students from different countries.[*love可以用be (so)keen on替换。很多完成时have done可以根据句意替换成现在完成进行时have been doing。][3]夏令营欢迎各国学生参加，我想参加。Students from different countries are welcome, so I’m eager to join in it.[*want to do可以用 intend to do或be eager to do替换。][4]如果我被接受成为其中一员，我就可以给其他学生介绍中国，并了解其他国家的不同文化和风俗。     If I am accepted as a member of your summer camp, I can tell them the lives of China and learn about different cultures and customs of their countries. [4]只有我成为其中一员，我才能给其他学生介绍中国，并了解其他国家的不同文化和风俗。Only when I am accepted as a member of your summer camp can I tell them the lives of China and learn about different cultures and customs of their countries.Sentence VII. Only+状语/状语从句＋一般疑问句  (参见邀请信设计模块)                 Only when+ SVO can you/we/they +VO*第三段：希望获准[5]如果我很快收到您的回复，我将不胜感激。*I would appreciate it if I receive your reply soon. *[*I would appreciate it if +SVO. 如果+SVO，我将不胜感激。]完整设计                 Dear Sir or Madam,Learning from the Internet that you’ll have a summer camp in Singapore, I, Li Hua, a middle school student from China, am interested in it. I am so keen on English and I have been learning it for 10 years. I desire that I can communicate with students from different countries. Students from different countries are welcome, so I’m eager to join in it. Only when I am accepted as a member of your summer camp can I tell them the lives of China and learn about different cultures and customs of their countries. I would appreciate it if I receive your reply soon. Regards, Li Hua Sample Model 02第30届夏季奥运会将于2012年7月27日在英国伦敦举行。伦敦奥组委现在面向世界招募志愿者。假设你是李华，一名高三学生，你有意参加此项活动。请你给奥组委写封信，根据以下要点简要陈述你应聘的理由：     1.你的爱好：喜欢体育活动；2.你的特长：擅长英语；3.你的有利条件：高考结束后，你有足够的时间；4.其他理由。     提示词：伦敦奥组委the London Olympic Organizing Committee            高考the College Entrance Examination 思维过程第一段：背景呈现(自我介绍＋说明写信的目的)[1]从伦敦奥组委得知他们面向全世界招募志愿者，我是李华，一名高三学生，我想参加此项活动。Learning from the London Olympic Organizing Committee that they need volunteers from all over the world, I, Li Hua, a student in grade three in senior high school from China, am interested in becoming one of them.第二段：个人介绍＋参加意图[2]首先，我特别喜欢体育活动，特别是台球。First and foremost, I am so keen on sports, especially table tennis.[3]其次，我爱英语，并学习很多年了。Besides, I am an expert in English, and I have been learning it for 8 years.[4]最后，在高考结束后，我会有足够的时间来当一名志愿者。Last but not least, I will have enough time to serve as a volunteer after taking the College Entrance Examination in June.[5]来自不同国家的人都很受欢迎，所以我也很想参加这个活动。People from different countries are welcome, so I’m eager to join in the activity.[6]只有当我被接受成为一名志愿者，我才能给其他人介绍中国，并了解其他国家的不同文化和风俗。Only when I am accepted as a volunteer can I tell them the lives of China and learn about different cultures and customs of their countries.第三段：希望获准[7]如果我很快收到您的回复，我将不胜感激。I would appreciate it if I receive your reply soon. 完整设计                   Dear Sir or Madam,    Learning from the London Olympic Organizing Committee that they need volunteers from all over the world, I, Li Hua, a student in grade three in senior high school from China, am interested in becoming one of them.     First and foremost, I am so keen on sports, especially table tennis. Besides, I am an expert in English, and I have been learning it for 8 years. Last but not least, I will have enough time to serve as a volunteer after taking the College Entrance Examination in June. People from different countries are welcome, so I’m eager to join in the activity. Only when I am accepted as a volunteer can I tell them the lives of China and learn about different cultures and customs of their countries.     I would appreciate it if I receive your reply soon.  Yours truly,Li Hua Sample Model 03假设你是李华，是ABC大学的一名新生。你打算申请助学贷款，请你根据下列提示，写一篇介绍自己情况的文章。内容要至少包含以下几点：1.你的基本情况；2.你申请贷款的原因、数额及用途；3.你的还贷计划。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头语和结束语已为你写好。思维过程第一段：自我介绍＋说明写信的目的＋表达愿望[1]我是李华，是ABC大学的一名新生。My name is Li Hua, a freshman at ABC University. [2]我写信申请一份学生助学贷款，希望我的情况能够满足贷款的要求。I am writing to submit an application for a student loan, expecting that my situation can meet the requirements of applying for the loan.第二段：申请原因＋个人条件介绍＋后期计划[3]我很自豪地成为我们村的第一个大学生。I am proud enough to be the first university student in my village. [4]但是学费给我的家庭带来了很大的压力。But the tuition has exerted great pressure on my family. [5]我的父母都是下岗工人。My parents are both laid-off workers.[6]这将超出他们的能力去支持我读完大学。It will be beyond their ability to support me through my college years.[7]我渴望通过助学贷款来减轻他们的负担，我将通过自己的努力来偿还。I am eager to reduce their burden by getting a student loan, which I will repay through my own efforts.[8]我会努力去获得奖学金，并且在业余时间找兼职工作。I will endeavor to win a scholarship and look for part-time jobs in my spare time.[9]我保证五年内还清贷款。I guarantee that I will pay off the loan within five years.第三段：表达愿望＋盼望回复[10]如果我的申请被考虑的话，我将不胜感激。请尽早给我一个反馈。*I would appreciate it if my application is taken into account. Please give me a feedback at your earliest convenience.   完整设计                Dear Sir or Madam,My name is Li Hua, a freshman at ABC University. I am writing to submit an application for a student loan, expecting that my situation can meet the requirements of applying for the loan.I am proud enough to be the first university student in my village. But the tuition has exerted great pressure on my family. My parents are both laid-off workers. It will be beyond their ability to support me through my college years. I am eager to reduce their burden by getting a student loan, which I will repay through my own efforts. I will endeavor to win a scholarship and look for part-time jobs in my spare time. I guarantee that I will pay off the loan within five years.    I would appreciate it if my application is taken into account. Please give me a feedback at your earliest convenience.Sincerely yours,Li Hua