高中英语Unit 5 Into the wild一课一练

同步练习

Part IV  Writing

妙笔生花

　　阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

Steve was the most amazing person in all of Minneapolis，and he was my cousin. By the age of 19，Steve was a star baseball player at the University of Minnesota. I wanted to be exactly like him. So when Steve asked me to go with him on a spring fishing trip in northern Minnesota，I was excited!

　　After planning the trip，we gathered clothes and supplies，and began our great adventure. We reached the Superior National Forest in northern Minnesota by early evening. On our way to the campsite，Steve pointed to a small house faraway in one of the mountains，saying that it was the ranger station（护林站） where the forester worked.

　　Finally，after a long walk，we reached the campsite and set up camp as the sun was setting. Steve knew all the tricks of an experienced wilderness camper. After we gathered enough wood from the forest，he started the campfire using only stone and steel—no matches. For supper we feasted on freeze-dried beef，wild rice and pea soup. I ate greedily after all that work.

　　Tired enough，we climbed into our sleeping bags early and talked about our plans for fishing the next day. We were still talking quietly when a sudden north wind picked up；the temperature dropped and it began to snow. Steve found a way to increase the temperature inside the tent. He dragged a log （原木） from the forest to the opposite side of the campfire. Then he wrapped aluminum foil（铝箔） around the log. The heat from the fire reflected off the foil and into the tent. Soon images of lake fish were filling my dreams.

　　The snow had stopped，but sometime later a powerful wind must have kicked up the flames of our dying fire. I was abruptly awakened by Steve. Our tent was on fire. Frightened，I ran out of the tent immediately. The tent collapsed（倒塌） with Steve inside. Without any thought of endangering myself，I reached into the burning tent and pulled him to the icy lake. Fortunately，we were not seriously hurt.

注意：续写词数应为150左右。

Later，as we stood by the burning tent to keep warm，we considered our difficult situation.        

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步骤一：品读语篇——抓住要点很关键

　　前文概要

　　第一段：我的堂兄史蒂夫是我的偶像。他让我和他一起去钓鱼旅行时，我很兴奋！

　　第二段：傍晚，我们到达了一个国家森林。在去营地的路上，我们看到了护林员工作的护林站。

　　第三段：我们在日落时搭起帐篷，生火吃饭。

　　第四段：晚上气温下降，开始下雪。史蒂夫把铝箔包在原木上使帐篷更加暖和。

　　第五段：大风把我们快要熄灭的火吹旺了，点燃了我们的帐篷。幸运的是，我们没有受重伤。

步骤二：戴着镣铐跳舞——研读首句，高度融合原文，合理想象情节

　　①续写第一段所给首句为“Later，as we stood by the burning tent to keep warm，we considered our difficult situation.”。本段紧密衔接原文内容，因为帐篷在大火中化为灰烬，包括衣服、手机以及其他所需物品，加之营地远离公路，面对这样的困境，即使史蒂夫也不知道该怎么办。

　　②续写第二段所给首句为“Suddenly，we heard a noise in the forest.”。本句提示有个关键词Suddenly，由此可推知在极大的困境中，事情有了新的转变……

步骤三：斟酌打磨——丰富续写词汇，生动描述情节

　　话题激活词汇

　　情感：unsure　anxiously　were able to　a friend and equal

　　动作：get out of　heard　listened　appeared　had spotted   drove us to　continues

　　环境：in the deep of the forest　far away from the highway　in the middle of nowhere　in the cold air

the darkness

　　句式翻译

　　1.我们的营地位于森林深处，远离公路。（主系表）

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　　2. 我们身处茫茫荒野中。（主系表）

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　　3.我们只穿着内衣，我们的日用品和手机都化为了灰烬。（并列句和被动结构）

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　　4.我们唯一能做的就是坐在寒冷的野外。（定语从句和不定式作表语）

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　　5. 我们想知道怎么才能走出森林。（主谓宾）

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　　6. 我们焦急地听着，凝视着黑暗处。（并列谓语）

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　　7. 一位护林员发现了火光，前来检查。（并列句）

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　　8. 护林员开车送我们到护林站。（主谓宾）

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　　9. 我们有了衣服，也可以给父母打电话了。（被动语态）

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　　10. 正是在这次旅行中，史蒂夫开始把我当作一个平等的朋友，而不是堂弟。（强调句）

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步骤四：创造性表达——润色注重细节，句式再造升级

1. 把句2和句3合并为一个简单句

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2. 把句4和句5合并

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3. 把句7变为含有非谓语动词的简单句

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4. 把句8和句9变为含有非限制性定语从句的复合句

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步骤五：高分在即——连句成篇，结构紧凑，逻辑衔接

Later，as we stood by the burning tent to keep warm，we considered our difficult situation.        

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Suddenly，we heard a noise in the forest.     _____________________________________________

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Part IV  Writing

参考答案

步骤三

1.Our campsite was in the deep of the forest，really far away from the highway.

2.We were in the middle of nowhere.

3.We wore only underwear，and our supplies and cellphones had been burnt into ashes.

4.The only thing we could do was（to） sit in the cold air.

5.We wondered how to get out of the forest.

6. Anxiously we listened and stared into the darkness.

7.A forester had spotted the light from the fire and he came to have a check.

8.The forester drove us to the ranger station.

9.We were given clothes and were able to call our parents.

10.It was on this trip that Steve began to treat me more like a friend and equal，rather than a younger cousin.

步骤四

1.We were in the middle of nowhere，wearing only underwear，with our supplies burnt into ashes and our cellphones included.

2.The only thing was just for us to sit in the cold air and wonder how to get out of the forest.

3.A forester had spotted the light from the fire，coming to have a check.

4.The forester drove us to the ranger station，where we were given clothes and were able to call our parents.

步骤五

　　Later，as we stood by the burning tent to keep warm，we considered our difficult situation. Our campsite was in the deep of the forest，really far away from the highway. We were in the middle of nowhere，wearing only underwear，with our supplies burnt into ashes and our cellphones included. Even Steve was unsure what to do next. The only thing was just for us to sit in the cold air and wonder how to get out of the forest.

　　Suddenly，we heard a noise in the forest. Anxiously we listened and stared into the darkness. A jeep appeared. A forester had spotted the light from the fire，coming to have a check. We jumped into the warm vehicle and the forester drove us to the ranger station，where we were given clothes and were able to call our parents. Steve and I had many more camping adventures from then on，but it was on this trip that Steve began to treat me more like a friend and equal，rather than a younger cousin. Our friendship continues to this day.