Module 6 模块主题写作详解与训练--2022--2023学年外研版九年级英语上册
展开外研版英语九（上）Module 6模块主题写作详解与训练
模块主题写作
整体感知
话题分析
本模块以“Problems”为话题，讲述了青少年在成长过程中遇到的一些问题，并提出了解决问题的方法。通过本模块的学习，要求学生能正视问题，并乐于帮助他人排忧解难，学生应该树立正确的人生观和价值观，并能学会运用if条件句，同时熟练运用提建议的句型来描写某种假设情况。该话题是常考点，在考查角度上，多以某个问题或烦恼为切入点，让学生提出合理建议。
常用表达
1. I would like to suggest that... 我想建议……
2. If I were you, I would... 如果我是你，我会……
3. It seems to me that you could... 我认为你可以……
4. I think it would be better if you... 我想如果你……可能会更好。
5. I hope you will find these suggestions useful/helpful. 我希望这些建议对你来说有用/有帮助。
实例分析
典型例题
假如你是刘斌, 昨天你在放学回家的路上看到一只受伤的小鸟, 于是你把它带回家养伤, 可是却遭到妈妈的反对, 因为她担心养鸟会影响你的学习。你很苦恼, 想从知心姐姐Angel那里得到帮助。请你用英语给她写一封70个词左右的信。信的开头和结尾已给出, 但不计入总词数。
思路点拨
1. 体裁：应用文；2. 人称：第一人称；3. 时态：一般过去时为主。
写作模板
描述问题 | Yesterday I saw a little bird on my way home. |
心理活动 | I worried about the bird... I feel very sad and helpless now. |
征求建议 | What should I do? |
连句成篇
Dear Sister Angel,
Yesterday I saw a little bird on my way home. The bird was hurt. I worried about the bird. It was so poor that I decided to take it home to look after it. When I got home and told my mother all about it, my mother said I couldn’t leave it home. She said the bird would make noise and be bad for my study. I feel very sad and helpless now. I don’t want the bird to die and I don’t want to make my mother unhappy. What should I do? I look forward to your reply.
Yours,
Liu Bin
范文欣赏
（一）张燕是九年级学生。她父亲在一家公司工作，家里几乎天天来客人。他们在客厅高声谈笑，有时还一起打牌，弄出许多噪音。这种吵闹的环境使张燕无法集中精力学习。她不知道如何解决这个问题。请你帮她给青少年辅导员王老师写一封信，谈谈她的烦恼并请王老师提出宝贵意见。
Dear Mr Wang,
My name is Zhan Yan. I’m a Grade 9 student. I have some problems and I need your help.
My father works in a company. There are always many people coming to my home.They talk to each other loudly and sometimes they even play cards together. They make a lot of noise and this is really terrible. I can’t focus on my study. I don’t know how to deal with this problem. Can you offer me some suggestions? They would be most valuable. Thanks a lot.
Best wishes！
Yours sincerely,
Zhang Yan
（二）初中学生苏梅遇到了难题：好朋友Peter总想抄他的作业。苏梅想制止他，但又怕Peter会不理解自己。假如你是苏梅，请给Peter写封70词左右的信，说明你对抄作业的态度，并告诉她，你和他永远是好朋友。
Dear Peter,
I know that you didn’t have enough time to finish your homework yesterday. So you wanted to copy my homework this morning. I’m sorry I can’t give my homework to you. Because I think copying other’s homework is a bad habit. If you copy other’s homework, you’ll never know how to solve problems and may become lazy. I think it would be better if you do your homework by yourself. It’s good for your study and finally you’ll get good grades in the tests. I hope you’ll do well in your test.
yours,
Su Mei
（三）下面是某报刊登的一封读者来信，请你以编者Serina 的身份给这位同学回信，并针对她的问题给出合理的建议。80词左右，信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Serina, Lisa and I are in the same class and she sits next to me. She is an excellent student and I can learn a lot from her. However, she talks so much that sometimes I can’t pay attention to my studies. I want to change seats with another girl, but I’m afraid it will hurt Lisa’s feelings. What should I do? Yours, Winnie |
Dear Winnie,
I’m sorry to learn that Lisa is making it difficult for you to pay attention to your studies. However, I think Lisa talks to you because she likes you. What’s more, she can help you with your studies.
In my opinion, you should get to know her better. Once you become close friends, it will be easier for you to talk to her and tell her how you feel about the problem. I’m sure she will understand you.
I hope you like my suggestion.
Yours,
Serina
（四）假设你是某文杂志的“知心姐姐”（Agony Sister），Helen，请阅读下面的这封求助信，并根据信的内容写一封回信。
要求：1. 70词左右，信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；2. 文中不要出现作者本人的真实信息。
Dear Helen, Last Sunday, my classmates and I went to the park. I wanted to take some photos. My father was out at that time, so I took his camera without telling him. Unfortunately, the camera was out of my bag and dropped on the ground when I was climbing the hill. It didn’t work at all. I put it back quietly after I returned home. And I haven’t told him till now. when I face to my father, I feel terrible. What should I do? Yours, David |
Dear David,
First, I think you’d better tell your father immediately. It you tell him the truth, he’ll be angry with you. But at least you’ll prove how honest you are. Then I think you should offer to pay. But you shouldn’t use your pocket money. Yes, a camera is expensive, maybe you can’t afford it. If you offer to do some jobs around the house, he’ll realize that you’re truly sorry. Oh, remember to be careful next tune.
Yours,
Helen
自我展示
假如你是心理医生Dr. Clark，你收到学生Lucy的来信。她在信中说，自己很喜欢看电视，但是父母担心影响她的学习，不让她看，她有时和父母争吵，很烦恼，却不知道怎么办。请你给Lucy回封信，给出解决办法。80词左右，信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。文中不要出现作者本人的真实信息。
提示词：argue with sb. 和某人争吵
Dear Lucy,
Yours,
Dr. Clark
外研版英语九（上）Module 6模块主题写作自我展示答案
Yours,
Dr. Clark
Dear Lucy,
Thanks for telling me about your problems. First, stop arguing with your parents. Arguing with them can’t solve any problems and makes you angry. Remember: your parents love you deeply. Second, you should understand your parents. Watching TV too much is really bad for your study. Third, you can tell your parents what you think. You could tell them that watching TV can help you with your study. And you won’t watch too long.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Dr. Clark
