Module 11 模块主题写作详解与训练--2022--2023学年外研版九年级英语上册

外研版英语九（上）Module 11模块主题写作详解与训练

模块主题写作

整体感知

话题分析

本模块以“photos”为话题，通过介绍摄影比赛的作品，让学生学会如何对某一张照片进行描述。摄影是我们日常生活中常谈论的话题。本模块常见的命题形式：描述某张照片，如它的来源、照片上的人物、关于这张照片的故事等。当然，也可和“看图作文”结合起来考查。通过本模块的学习，学生应能就某一张照片用简单的who，which或that引导的定语从句进行描述，包括照片上的人物、该照片背后的故事等。

常用表达

1. It’s subject is... 它的主题是……

2. How nice the photo is! 多么精彩的照片啊！

3. Compared with other photos, this one is more interesting. 和其他照片相比，这张更有趣。

4. The photo shows the different colours on the hill. 这张照片展示了山的不同颜色。

5. The photo shows a person who is... 这张照片展示了一个……的人。

6. The photo was taken by... 这张照片是由……所拍。

7. The photo was taken in 2016. 这张照片拍摄于2016年。

8. I like the photo because... 我喜欢这张照片是因为……

9. Though..., I like it very much. 尽管……，我仍然非常喜欢它。

实例分析

典型例题

假设你去年到长白山旅游时，拍到了许多照片，其中就有一张是你最喜欢的相片。请以“My favourite photo”为题，写一篇90词左右的英语短文。

参考词汇：天池Heavenly Lake；展览exhibition。

思路点拨

1. 体裁：记述文；2. 人称：第一人称；3. 时态：一般现在时+一般过去时。

写作模板

连句成篇

My favourite photo

Last summer I went to Changbai Mountain which is famous in the whole world. I went there with my parents. I took many photos there. The photo I like best shows the water of Heavenly Lake. I like it because the water in it looks very clean. You can even see some stones clearly in the water. I had never seen such clean water before. The scenery in the photo is very beautiful.

The photo makes me remember the trip forever. From the photo, I know how great our country is. I’m proud of my country. What a nice photograph it is!

范文欣赏

（一）艾米•金（Amy Kim）是当今世界上最出名的中国摄影师之一，她的一些作品将于近日在丽都画廊（Lido Gallery）展出。假如你是《学英语》的小记者，请你根据下面的提示就这次摄影展写一段评论报道。词数：80左右。

提示：1. 这次将展出她的部分最受欢迎的摄影作品；2. 有许多优秀的人物照和乡村照；3. 每个人都能从中找到自己喜欢的摄影作品；4. 艾米•金的少数城市题材摄影作品，人们不是非常感兴趣；5. 这是世界级别的摄影大师的一次展出。

There will be an exhibition at the Lido Gallery. Be sure to see it. Amy Kim is one of the best known Chinese photographers in the world today, and some of her most famous photographs are on display in this exhibition. She really has something for everyone. There are many great photos of people and of the countryside. The few city photographs are less successful and they don’t interest visitors as much. But this is a great show from a world-class photographer. Whatever you do, don’t miss this exhibition.

（二）假设你们学校将在12月21日举行一次学生摄影比赛，你是此次比赛的策划人。请根据以下要点提示写一份通知，告知学生们比赛的具体情况。80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

要点提示：1. 作品主题：我们的美丽校园(campus)；2. 作品要求：每位学生最多(at most)提交两张尺寸为9cm×13cm的原创照片；3. 作品投稿截止日期：12月1日；4. 奖项设置：一等奖2名，二等奖3名，三等奖5名，所有获奖作品(prize－winning works)将会在12 月25日展示出来。

Dear boys and girls,

Our school has decided to hold a students' photo competition on 21st December. Here is some information about the competition. First, the photos should show our beautiful campus. Second, every one of you can hand in at most two photos that should be taken by yourselves, and the size of the photos should be 9cm×13cm. Third, the last date that you should send your photos on is 1st December. Finally, we will choose two photos as first prize, three as second prize and five as third prize. All the prize winning works will be on show on 25th December.

We’re looking forward to your great works！

（三）假设你在学校举办的摄影比赛中获得了最佳摄影奖，并将在颁奖典礼上发言。请根据下列提示写一篇80词左右的英文发言稿，内容可以适当发挥。开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。

提示：1. 你对这次获奖感到非常幸运；2. 你想感谢你的老师们，他们鼓励你参赛并教给你许多拍照技巧；3. 你想感谢你的叔叔，他在你13岁生日时送给你一台照相机。

Ladies and gentlemen,

Good afternoon! I am lucky to have won the photo competition in our school. First, I’d like to thank my teachers. They encouraged me to enter the competition and also taught me many skills in taking photos. Then, I’d like to thank my uncle. At the age of 12, I became interested in taking photos. When I was 13, he gave me a camera as my birthday present. Since then, I have become more and more interested in taking photos.

Thanks!

自我展示

现在的学生大部分都喜欢旅游拍照。假设你去年暑假去了杭州西湖旅游，拍了许多美丽的风景照，请以“My Favourite Photo”为题，详细描述其中最喜欢的一张照片。词数80左右。

内容包括：1. 照片拍摄的日期、地点、人物；2. 详细描述照片内容；3. 表明自己是否喜欢摄影，并说明理由。

外研版英语九（上）Module 11模块主题写作自我展示答案

Last summer holiday, I paid a visit to the West Lake which is very famous in China. I stayed there for four days and took a lot of beautiful photos.

The subject of the photo that I like best is about nature. It shows the water is very clean and the sky is quite blue and nice. There is a lovely girl who is sitting on the stone bench and smiling happily.

The photo is so beautiful that it makes me think of the travel there. The West Lake in Hangzhou, Zhejiang Province, is one of the most beautiful sights in China, and Hangzhou is a clean and comfortable city for living and traveling.

I love taking photos because it can make me remember the wonderful trip forever. According to the photos, I know how great our country is and how happy my life is!