高考英语读后续写典例分析课件

这是一份高考英语读后续写典例分析课件，共32页。PPT课件主要包含了房东仅仅的盯着他们，家庭的生活窘困，非谓语的巧妙使用，sob，熟悉和使用倒装句等内容，欢迎下载使用。
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ne’s knitted brws
a sea f negativity
pverty-stricken
as if exerted a curse
wind(--wund--wund) the windw dwn
6.笑容满面 7.嘴唇弯曲成微笑状 8.留下雷鸣般的咆哮9.我激情之火又重新燃烧起来. 10.用一种充满爱的方式盯着对方
grin frm ear t ear
lips curved int a faint smile
leaving thunderus rars
My fire f passin was refueled.
stare at each ther in a lve-filled way
11.他给了我一个坚定的眼神12.湛蓝的天空13.令我心迷神往14.我非常清楚记得他高兴得跳了起来。
He gave me a determined lk
a deep blue sky
keep me spellbund
I can well remember that...
He jumped fr fun.
16.众口难调。17.心满意足的微笑18.他皱了皱眉。19.我努力忍住眼泪。20.她怒火中烧。
It is difficult t please everybdy.
a smile f cntentment
A frwn（皱眉）nw std n his face.
I tried t fight back tears.
She was burning with anger.
The Third Prize Ali and his yunger sister, Zahra, lived with their parents in a pr neighbrhd. Their mther was very sick and their father was struggling t find a jb, and they had nly a little mney with which t buy fd. As they had nt paid the rent fr several mnths, the landlrd was breathing dwn their necks.
One day, Ali tk Zahra’s shes t a she repairman t be fixed, but he lst them n the way hme. It wasn’t until he gt hme that he realized he had lst the shes. He was afraid that his parents wuld be angry and disappinted, s he begged his sister t keep it secret. Zahra agreed and the tw decided t share Ali’s running shes. Zahra’s schl hurs were in the mrning, s she wuld wear them first. After schl, she wuld rush back and give them t Ali. He culd then run t his schl, which began in the afternn. Althugh he ran as fast as he culd, Ali ften arrived late and was warned by the schl.
Ali鞋子弄丢了，和妹妹共同解决问题。
句式积累：nt until 的强调句型。
Ali heard abut a lng distance race that was held fr the bys in the city. When he learned that the third prize was a new pair f shes, he decided t take part. He ran hme excitedly and prmised his sister that he wuld win her the new shes.
故事的转折：Ali有机会得到一双新的鞋子，他承诺，得到它。
The day f race arrived. Ali had a strng start, but halfway thrugh the race he began t get tired and his legs began t ache. Getting mre and mre exhausted he thught nly f Zahra and his prmise t her. Dreaming f the new shes he wuld win fr his sister gave him strength, and he stayed right behind the tw fastest runners, determined t finish third. Suddenly, as the finish line drew near, anther runner cllided (碰撞) with Ali frm behind and he crashed t the grund.
分词短语做主语的句型积累。
故事的高潮：Ali快到终点时被撞摔倒了。
Paragraph 1 ： Ali lked up and saw the ther bys rushing ahead._______________________________________________________________________Paragraph 2 ： Filled with delight, Ali walked hme quickly. _______________________________________________________________________
根据下一段的结果， 本段应该是讲述Ali如何得到第三名赢得那双鞋子的。
Ali很高兴， 说明他得到了那双鞋子。后面应该是带鞋子给妹妹之后，妹妹高兴的样子。
Paragraph 1 ： Ali lked up and saw the ther bys rushing ahead.
The runner cllided (碰撞) with Ali run the third…
Ali felt wrnged(受委屈）…
The ther by was punished …
Paragraph 2 ： Filled with delight, Ali walked hme quickly.
His sister waited fr him and expected the shes …
They delighted when saw the shes…
Ali felt relief…
他拒绝就此放弃，他跳起来，尽可能快地跑。
He refuse t give up at this pint, s he jumped t his feet and ran as fast as he culd.
Refusing t give up at this pint, he jumped t his feet and ran as fast as he culd.
give up at this pint
jump t ne’s feet
他冲过终点线，得了四等奖。
He dashed acrss the finish line and wn the furth prize.
dash acrss the finish line
Dashing acrss the finish line, he wn the furth prize.
想到他会让她妹妹失望，阿里忍不住抽泣起来。
Thinking he wuld let her sister dwn, Ali culdn’t help sbbing.
let her sister dwn
Ali culdn’t help sbbing when he thught f letting her sister dwn.
就在这时，他突然听到广播里宣布他获得了三等奖，因为与阿里相撞的赛跑者因违反规定被取消资格。
Just then he suddenly heard the annuncement frm the bradcast that he wn the third prize because the runner wh cllided with Ali was disqualified fr breaking the rule.
Just then he suddenly heard the annuncement frm the bradcast that he wn the third prize as the runner wh cllided with Ali was disqualified fr breaking the rule.
annuncement frm the bradcast
be disqualified
在颁奖典礼上把鞋放在胸前，阿里感到欣喜若狂，如释重负因为他最终为妹妹赢得了这双鞋。
Ali held the shes clse t his chest during the award ceremny, and he felt verjyed and relieved as he eventually wn the shes fr his sister.
feel verjyed and relieved
Hlding the shes clse t his chest during the award ceremny, Ali felt verjyed and relieved as he eventually wn the shes fr his sister.
他迫不及待地想见到他的妹妹并分享这个令人激动的消息。
culd nt wait t
He culd nt wait t see his sister and share the thrilling news.
the thrilling news
到达时，阿里发现萨拉在外面等着。
On his arrival
On his arrival, Ali fund Zahra was waiting utside.
她真的很紧张她哥哥是否给她带来了她想要的东西。
She was really nervus whether her brther had brught her what she was expecting.
what she was expecting
“萨拉，看看我给你带来了什么。”他用颤抖的双手从包里拿出奖品。
with his trembling hands
“Zahra, see what I have gt fr yu.” he tk the prize ut f his bag with his trembling hands.
萨拉一看到鞋子，脸上就喜形于色。
The mment Zahra saw the shes, her face lit up.
her face lit up
The instant/mment/minute/secnd …
Immediately/instantly/directly…
At the sight/sund/thught f…
Hardly…when/befre; n sner…than
她激动得向阿里扑了过去。 “谢谢你！”当兄妹紧紧拥抱在一起时，他们的眼睛里涌出喜悦的泪水。
She was s thrilled that she threw herself at Ali. “Thank yu! Ali.” Tears f jy welled up their eyes as the brther and sister hugged tightly tgether.
threw herself at Ali
S thrilled was she that she threw herself at Ali. “Thank yu! Ali.” Tears f jy welled up their eyes as the brther and sister hugged tightly tgether.
hugged tightly tgether
Tears f jy welled up their eyes
句式替换：s 提到句首后面要半倒装（be/助/情放到主语前面）。
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Ali lked up and saw the ther bys rushing ahead. Refusing t give up at this pint, he jumped t his feet and ran as fast as he culd. He dashed acrss the finish line and wn the furth prize. Thinking he wuld let her sister dwn, Ali culdn’t help sbbing. Just then he suddenly heard the annuncement frm the bradcast that he wn the third prize as the runner wh cllided with Ali was disqualified fr breaking the rule. Hlding the shes clse t his chest during the award ceremny, Ali felt verjyed and relieved as he eventually wn the shes fr his sister.
学习非谓语动词短语的使用。
Filled with delight, Ali walked hme quickly. He culd nt wait t see his sister and share the thrilling news. On his arrival, Ali fund Zahra was waiting utside. She was really nervus whether her brther had brught her what she was expecting. “Zahra, see what I have gt fr yu.” he tk the prize ut f his bag with his trembling hands. The instant Zahra saw the shes, her face lit up. S thrilled was she that she threw herself at Ali. “Thank yu! Ali.” Tears f jy welled up their eyes as the brther and sister hugged tightly tgether.
1. 积累细节描写的词汇和短语。2. 摘抄默写本节课所有高级句型。