高考英语《沙滩幽灵》读后续写课件

这是一份高考英语《沙滩幽灵》读后续写课件，共18页。PPT课件主要包含了Par1，Para2，scenery ，activity 等内容，欢迎下载使用。

What aspects shuld we cnsider when we give scres?
Lgical plts Cherence(衔接) Crrect tense & vice Language5. Clear handwriting
prper wrds & expressins
sentence patterns
Lgical plts:
What happened?The 6 elements f narrative writings?What wuld happen?
Get the main plt
Infer the develpment
Underlined wrds & 2 given sentences
Get the main plt
On the beach
In the huse
a perfect hliday
a run-dwn huse
a lng way ff
Tip 1: clarify the plt with an utline.
Paragraph 1: “Let’s get ut f here, Paula.” screamed Krin.
Paragraph 2:Out they ran, all the way back t thse wnderful umbrellas, beach chairs and crwds.
Wuld they tell their parents the experience?What were their parents reactin?Hw did they feel?What did they learn frm this experience?
Where culd they run ut f the huse?Hw did they manage t run ut?Hw did they feel?
in the huse
n the beach
Tip 2: Predict the plt frm questins.
1.哥哥鼓起勇气带妹妹逃出；妹妹讲述经过，感激哥哥2.兄妹撞开门逃出；妹妹讲述经过，父母解释房屋恐怖原因3.兄妹跳窗逃出；未告知父母经过，认为这次经历很有趣/恐怖4.陌生人出现，吓得兄妹逃出；告知父母，得知是流浪汉5.陌生人出现，好好招待兄妹；告知父母，决定要帮助他/她6.兄妹努力逃出；拥抱父母；忽然醒来，原来是一个梦
Main plts frm yu:
Language --- sentence patterns --- wrds and expressins
He grasped her hand, nly t find freezing fingers, sweating and trembling.She grasped Krin’s hands and burst int tears.Frtunately, the dr was pened and they dashed ut.
Express clearly and vividly
Develpment
Plish the language
frightened:1.Mac’s panic rse // felt shivery at…2.A huge fear flwed thrugh his felt s scared that she felt her thrat tightened.
4.Their heart beat wildly, with their legs trembling.
relieved：Once Mac saw his friends, he felt relieved with spark in his eyessigh in reliefMac breathed a sigh f reliefThey let ut a lng relief.
Q1: What did they see and what did they d n the beach?
white cludsthe blue sky sandy/sft beachglistering water mrning sunlightscattered seashells
leisurely walked …
made sme sandcastles
mther: sat under a big umbrella... read a bk…drank lemnade…
was busy greeting…
Krin and Paula
cllected shells
What a ___________ scene!