2021年1月头插南瓜浙江英语高考读后续写讲评课件

这是一份2021年1月头插南瓜浙江英语高考读后续写讲评课件，共17页。PPT课件主要包含了Halloween，A dilemma，A delight等内容，欢迎下载使用。

Guessing game
It is a Western hliday
It falls n Octber 31;
It is a day when the spirits f dead peple return
Children can play trick r treat n their neighbrs.
What are traditinal Hallween activities?
Peple wear cstume.
Peple carve pumpkins.
t scare away the evil spirits...
Pumpkin(南瓜) carving at Hallween is a family traditin. We visit a lcal farm every Octber. In the pumpkin field, I cmpete with my three brthers and sister t seek ut the biggest pumpkin. My dad has a rule that we have t carry ur pumpkins back hme, and as the eldest child I have an advantage - I carried an 85 -punder back last year.This year, it was hard t tell whether my prize r the ne chsen by my 14-year. Old brther, Jasn, was the winner. Unfrtunately we frgt t weigh them befre taking ut their insides, but I was determined t prve my pint. All f us were hard at wrk at the kitchen table, with my mm filming the annual event. I'm unsure nw why I thught frcing my head inside the pumpkin wuld settle the matter,but it seemed t make perfect sense at the time.With the pumpkin resting n the table,hle uppermst,I bent ver and pressed my head against the pening.At first I gt jammed just abve my eyes and then,asI went n with my task,unwilling t quit,my nse briefly prevented entry. Finally I managed t put my whle head int it，like a crk（软木塞）frced int a bttle.I was able t straighten up with the huge pumpkin resting n my shulders.My excitement was shrt-lived.The pumpkin was heavy. "I'm ging t set it dwn, nw,"I said,and with Jasn helping t supprt its weight,I bent back ver the table t give it smewhere t rest. It was nly when I tried t remve my head that I realized getting ut was ging t be less straightfrward than getting in.When I pulled hard,my nse gt in the way.I gt int a panic as I pressed firmly against the table and mved my head arund trying t find the right angle,but it was n use."I can't get it ut!"I shuted,my vice sunding unnaturally lud in the enclsed space.Para.1 I was stuck fr five r six minutes thugh it felt much lnger. Para.2 That vide was psted nline the Mnday befre Hallween.
Pumpkin(南瓜) carving at Hallween is a family traditin. We visit a lcal farm every Octber. In the pumpkin field, I cmpete with my three brthers and sister t seek ut the biggest pumpkin. My dad has a rule that we have t carry ur pumpkins back hme, and as the eldest child I have an advantage - I carried an 85 -punder back last year.This year, it was hard t tell whether my prize r the ne chsen by my 14-year-ld brther, Jasn, was the winner. Unfrtunately we frgt t weigh them befre taking ut their insides, but I was determined t prve my pint. All f us were hard at wrk at the kitchen table, with my mm filming the annual event. I'm unsure nw why I thught frcing my head inside the pumpkin wuld settle the matter,but it seemed t make perfect sense at the time. With the pumpkin resting n the table,hle uppermst,I bent ver and pressed my head against the pening.At first I gt jammed just abve my eyes and then,as I went n with my task,unwilling t quit,my nse briefly prevented entry. Finally I managed t put my whle head int it，like a crk（软木塞）frced int a bttle.I was able t straighten up with the huge pumpkin resting n my shulders.My excitement was shrt-lived.The pumpkin was heavy. "I'm ging t set it dwn, nw,"I said,and with Jasn helping t supprt its weight,I bent back ver the table t give it smewhere t rest. It was nly when I tried t remve my head that I realized getting ut was ging t be less straightfrward than getting in.When I pulled hard,my nse gt in the way.I gt int a panic as I pressed firmly against the table and mved my head arund trying t find the right angle,but it was n use."I can't get it ut!"I shuted,my vice sunding unnaturally lud in the enclsed space.Para.1 I was stuck fr five r six minutes thugh it felt much lnger. Para.2 That vide was psted nline the Mnday befre Hallween.
Read the stry
Get the main idea (把握故事梗概)
at Hallween
in the kitchen
I gt my head stuck in a pumpkin
t prve my pint as a winner f the biggest pumpkin
Read the characters
makes it a rule t bring hme the biggest pumpkin at Hallween.
Knw the main characters (明确主要人物)
the eldest childhave an advantage--I carried an 85-punder back last yearunwilling t quit
my 14-year-ld brther
filming the annual event
Slutin?Emtins?
Read the plt
Clarify the main events (理清主要事件)
Read the given sentences
Para.1 It was five r six minutes thugh it felt much lnger._________________________________________________________________Para.2 The vide was psted nline the Mnday befre Hallween. _________________________________________________________________
Predict the ending (预测故事结尾)
1. Hw did I feel? 2. What further effrts did I make?3. What did my family d t help? 4. What was the result?
Underlined wrds: pumpkin  dad  Jasn  mm  head nse  managed  supprt  rest  pulled
Underlined wrds:Object:  pumpkin Characters：  dad  Jasn  mm Bdy:  head  nse Actin:  managed  supprt  rest  pulled
1. What respnse did I get nline ? 2. Hw did I feel?3. What did I learn?
list the writing pints
List the utline (罗列写作要点)
my attempt t pull my head utmy family ffered helpmy head was releasedmy mum captured the whle event
reactins frm netizensmy reflectins n the event
Para.1 It was five r six minutes thugh it felt much lnger._____________
I tugged(猛拉)/ banged(敲)/punched the pumpkin furiusly /frantically
I exclaimed (由于痛苦呼喊)/yelled/screamed/cried /shrieked(尖叫)/bellwed (大喊) /bawled(大喊) fr help.
“Help me!”I pleaded(乞求)
I struggled t squeeze/pull my head ut f it.
I bbbed my head (上下摆动) like crazy.
Dad rushed t lift it t reduce its weight n my head.
Jumping t their feet, they huddled(聚/挤) arund me.
After a careful study, they began t wrk n it.
Jasn stepped frward, patted me n the shulder t ease me.
Sensing my munting anxiety, Jasn put ne's arms arund ne's neck t ffer cmfrt.
“Let's tug(拉)it dwn tgether,”they chirped.
They dragged/pulled /yanked at the pumpkin with all their strength.
Jasn prpsed calling the fire department.
Para.2 The vide was psted nline the Mnday befre Hallween. _________
The vide__________ .
prvked abundant attentincaused quite a stirraised wide attentin
They____________.
shwed their sympathy.gave lads f likes(点赞).shared their wn mments f
They mentined that n seeing the vide they______________cried ut in delight.They chuckled(咯咯笑)/giggled/ sniggered(窃笑).rared with laughter.(放声大笑)
Getting s many respnses frm strangers, I ______________was dumbfunded (目瞪口呆的)culdn't dampen my excitement ...
It was stuck fr five r six minutes thugh it felt much lnger.Hw I wished I had nt acted s flishly, making myself a laughing stck f my family! I culd well imagine hw they wuld lk when my head came ut. Seeing my repeated effrts but in vain, Jasn darted ut f the rm and turned t Dad fr help. Seeing me caught in such a situatin, Dad was unexpectedly surprised,but sn surprise transfrmed int laughter. He tried many appraches, and eventually managed t get my head ut by carefully cutting the pumpkin pen with a knife. Just when I felt relieved t be freed frm the pumpkin, I suddenly fund that mm was shting all that happened t me and planned t uplad it nline. That vide was psted nline the Mnday befre Hallween. It went viral immediately. Just within hurs, hundreds f likes and funny cmments appeared, shwing the viewers’ enthusiasm. Cnstants streams f curius peple even came by t take phts with us and my prized pumpkin. Jasn was really excited and Mm was glad that her vide shuld becme such a hit and thus grew even crazier abut shting vides. But fr me, thugh a little embarrassed,I sn ttally frgt the “unfrgettable” incident and set ut fr the trick-r-treating. I wuld like t take it as a treat t add jy and fun t this festive Hallween fr everyne.
It was five r six minutes thugh it felt much lnger. Trapped in the pumpkin, I gulped fr air, my thrat dry and face burning up. It was a trment（折磨） fr me. I wrestled with the prblem, attempting t squeeze my head ut f it, but in vain. S frightened was I that I pulled, and banged the pumpkin frantically. Nticing my munting fear, Jasn prpsed calling the fire department, while thers rared with laughter which made my bld bil. In great agny（痛苦、苦恼）, I let ut a lud cry which awakened my dad upstairs. Dwn dashed my dad wh gt me t push my head farther int the pumpkin s that mm's hand culd reach in and lsen my pnytail. My head was finally released and it was then that I realized my mm had been filming the whle time. The vide was psted nline the Mnday befre Hallween. When I lgged in my Facebk I fund myself dumbfunded （目瞪口呆的）by the abundant likes I received frm thse wh had seen my vide. Brwsing their messages, I felt a wave f warmth. The nasty dilemma where I gt the pulp-plugged nse, the sre chin by the stubbrn pumpkin was melted in the psitive respnses, the heartfelt cmfrt as well as the cuntless similar stries shared by thse strangers.Thanks t mm, the vide turned ut t be a reminder, a captured memrable mment, a recllectin （回忆）f festival happiness, clred by hearty human interactins.
It was five r six minutes thugh it felt much lnger. All effrts t divrce my head frm the pumpkin were tried, but in vain. As time ticked by, I felt dizzy due t a lack f xygen and heaped（瘫坐）nt the flr. Jasn, still trembling with laughter in the seat, finally had a pang f cnscience（感到良心的苛责）and called dad fr help. Upn seeing the pumpkin-headed “mnster”, dad participated in the chrus f jeers（嘲弄）but sn snatched a knife, gently pked it thrugh the tp f the vegetable and then tre it pen. The sudden influx（涌入）f fresh air left me panting（喘息）, a nrmal shade f clr gradually returning t my pale face. I lifted my pumpkin-pulp-cvered eyelids, scanned the rm and saw three faces cntrted（扭曲）by guffaw（狂笑）and mum still hlding the camera, which, unfrtunately, had recrded everything. That vide was psted the Mnday befre Hallween. Nt lng after it was upladed, it sared t the tp f “mst-watched” shrt vides. Thusands left cmments, sharing their wn stries f their bdy parts being caught in small undesired places. The next day, when I was walking arund the campus, I was sn recgnized and asked t take selfies. With my famus pumpkin head tweeted and retweeted, I tk a bite f nt nly the pies made frm that dissected（切开的） pumpkin, but als what it felt like t bring jy t thers. Frm that year n, after the five f us children sught ut the biggest pumpkins in the field and hauled（拖，拉） them back hme, the first thing we did was t meticulusly（一丝不苟地）and accurately weigh each f them s as t avid anther head-in-pumpkin accident.