上海高考英语作文分类训练：推荐信

这是一份上海高考英语作文分类训练：推荐信，共19页。试卷主要包含了Directins，Guided Writing等内容，欢迎下载使用。
假定你是明启中学的学生李华，你校交换生 Allen 打算在圣诞节为他的父母各送一件具有典型中国文化特色的礼物。他初步选出了四件礼物：旗袍(chengsam)、紫砂茶具(purple clay tea set)、丝绸围巾(silk scarf)、书画折扇(calligraphy and painting flding fan)，现在发邮件向你咨询。请你给他写封邮件，谈谈你的意见。内容包括：
1. 为他父母分别推荐的一件礼物；
2. 推荐这两件礼物的理由；
3. 对 Allen 父母的问候。
注意：作文中不得出现你本人的姓名、班级和学校等真实信息。
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2．Directins: Write an English cmpsitin in 120-150 wrds accrding t the instructins given belw in Chinese.
假设你是明启中学高三学生李明，最近收到英国笔友Carl的邮件。在邮件中，她提到在学习三年中文后，她想通过阅读中文小说进一步提高自己的中文水平，希望你可以推荐一部适合她阅读的小说。回复一封邮件，内容须包括：
1)你推荐的小说名字及该小说的主要内容；
2)你推荐该小说的理由。
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3．Directins: Write an English cmpsitin in 120-150 wrds accrding t the instructins given belw in Chinese.
为了激发同学们读书的热情，你校将在2017年4月23日“世界读书日”（the Wrld Bk and Cpyright Day）当天举行一个读书节活动，近日学校正向全体学生征询活动方案。假定你是该校学生李华，请你给校长写一封信，推荐你的方案。你的信须包括以下内容：
1. 描述你想推荐的活动方案，如：活动主题、时间……；
2. 简单阐述你提出此方案的理由。
4．Guided Writing
Directins: Write an English cmpsitin in 120-150 wrds accrding t the instructins belw in Chinese.
假设你在某英文报上看到一则征稿通知，要求写一篇短文，具体涵盖以下要点：
1.简要介绍你最近读过的一篇文章内容；
2.这篇文章优点与不足是什么？
3.你会推荐给谁？理由是什么？__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
5．Directins: Write an English cmpsitin in 120-150 wrds accrding t the instructins given belw in Chinese.
假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Peter想了解中医常识以提高自我护理习惯。请给他写一封信，推荐学习资源。你的信件内容需包括：
1. 学习资源类别：图书、网站、手机应用程序（APP）等；
2. 推荐某类资源理由；
3. 表达祝愿。
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6．Directins: Write an English cmpsitin in 120-150 wrds accrding t the instructins given belw in Chinese.
手机给现代人的生活带来了很多便利，甚至改变了人们的日常生活方式。人们常常会在手机上下载一些常用的应用程序(app)。你平时使用较多的是哪一类应用程序呢？请你向同学们推荐一款应用程序，并阐述理由。
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7．Directins: Write an English cmpsitin in 120-150 wrds accrding t the instructins given belw in Chinese.
最近一本在线杂志发表了一篇文章，文中询问，在公众眼中，什么样的人是适合做年轻人的榜样（rle mdel）。请你写封信给该杂志，推荐一位你认为适合做榜样的名人（celebrity）。你的文章须包括：
简单介绍这位名人；
为何这位名人适合做年轻人的榜样。
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8．Directins: Write an English cmpsitin in 120-150 wrds accrding t the instructins given belw in Chinese.
最近一本在线杂志发表了一篇文章，文中询问，在公众眼中，什么样的人是适合做年轻人的榜样（rle mdel）。请你写封信给该杂志，推荐一位你认为适合做榜样的名人（celebrity）。你的文章须包括：
简单介绍这位名人；
为何这位名人适合做年轻人的榜样。
(注意：如果作文使用本试卷中的素材，将视为不合格)
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9．假设你校即将召开艺术节，作为学校电影社团的团长，你将在艺术节开幕式上介绍一部电影，写一份发言稿，内容包括：
1.你介绍的电影名称及内容简介；
2.你为什么要选择介绍这部电影。
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10．假定你是李华，打算今年暑假去美国旅游。请你给Travel America国际旅行社写一封电子邮件进行咨询，内容如下:
1.请其推荐合适的旅游路线；
2.请其告知相关的旅游费用；
注意；
1.词数80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir/Madam,
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Yurs,
Li Hua
参考答案
1．Dear Allen,
Glad t receive yur letter, in which yu asked me abut the fur gifts with typical Chinese cultural characteristics, including chengsam, purple clay tea set, silk scarf and calligraphy and painting flding fan. I am writing t recmmend a gift fr yur parents.
Fr yur mther, I recmmend the chengsam. The chengsam is a female dress with distinctive Chinese features and enjys a grwing ppularity in the internatinal wrld. The beauty f the chengsam is that, made f different materials and t varying lengths, it can be wrn either n casual r frmal ccasins. In either case, it creates an impressin f simple and quiet charm, elegance and neatness. N wnder it is s much liked by wmen nt nly f China but thse f freign cuntries as well. S I think yur mther will like it.
Fr yur father, I recmmend the calligraphy and painting flding fan. Several thusand years ag, the ancient Chinese invented the fan. Peple use it t bring cl wind in the summer. Mrever, because the fan als lks like a circle, s it als represents happiness and reunin. Usually, there are Chinese calligraphy and painting n the fan, which represent Chinese culture. I think it is suitable fr yur father.
Best regards t yur parents.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给交换生Allen写封信，为他父母分别推荐的一件礼物，说明推荐这两件礼物的理由，表达对Allen 父母的问候。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
高兴的：glad→delighted
独特的：distinctive→unique
不同的：disparate→different
另外：mrever→besides
2. 句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：Fr yur father, I recmmend the calligraphy and painting flding fan. Several thusand years ag, the ancient Chinese invented the fan.
拓展句：Fr yur father, I recmmend the calligraphy and painting flding fan, which was invented by the ancient Chinese several thusand years ag.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]Glad t receive yur letter, in which yu asked me abut the fur gifts with typical Chinese cultural characteristics, including chengsam, purple clay tea set, silk scarf and calligraphy and painting flding fan. （运用了“介词+which ”引导的非限制性定语从句）
[高分句型2]The beauty f the chengsam is that, made f different materials and t varying lengths, it can be wrn either n casual r frmal ccasins. （运用了that引导的表语从句）
2．ne pssible versin:
Dear Carl,
I’m very glad t knw yu are interested in Chinese nvels. I wuld like t recmmend ne frm s many famus Chinese bks—Jurney t the West, which is very ppular amng Chinese peple.
The nvel, written by Wu Cheng’en, is an utstanding rmantic wrk full f fantastic tales. It is generally recgnized as a masterpiece abut gd and spirits. Basically, the nvel is abut Tang Sanzang’s jurney t fetch back sme Buddist scriptures and the difficulties he and his fllwers face in between. Alng the way, Sun Wukng, Zhu Bajie and Sha Wujing have t battle lts f demns,wh all want their master because his flesh will give immrtality t anyne wh eats it. By reading it, nt nly d yu lift yur spirit but als yu can gain curage when faced with bstacles.
I wish yu wuld have fun reading it.
Yurs,
Li Ming
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国笔友Carl回复一封邮件，推荐一部适合她阅读的中文小说。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
拿回： carry back→ fetch back
斗争：fight→ battle
困难：truble→ bstacles
享受做某事：enjy ding sth. → have fun ding sth.
2.拓展句式
简单句变复合句
原句：The nvel, written by Wu Cheng’en, is an utstanding rmantic wrk full f fantastic tales.
拓展句：The nvel, which is written by Wu Cheng’en, is an utstanding rmantic wrk full f fantastic tales.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] I wuld like t recmmend ne frm s many famus Chinese bks—Jurney t the West, which is very ppular amng Chinese peple.（运用了由which引导的非限制性定语从句）
[高分句型2] Alng the way, Sun Wukng, Zhu Bajie and Sha Wujing have t battle lts f demns,wh all want their master because his flesh will give immrtality t anyne wh eats it.（运用了由wh引导非限制性定语从句，由because引导原因状语从句和由wh引导限制性定语从句）
3．Dear headmaster,
I am writing t invite yu t participate in ur campus bk fair, which will be held n 23rd April, 2017-the Wrld Bk and Cpyright Day.
Aimed t aruse the enthusiasm fr reading, this activity is designed t prvide a platfrm where the students can buy r exchange bks and share their reading experience. On that day, the fair will exhibit bks f hundreds f types n diverse tpics, mtivating us t further develp ur reading habits and help t braden ur hrizns. In additin, mst bks will be sld at a lwer price than what the bk stres ffer. Hpefully, yu can give us the chance t hld the activity.
Please let me knw if yu can permit us t d this and we lk frward t yur cming.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给给校长写一封信，推荐你的读书节活动方案。
【详解】
第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1.描述你想推荐的活动方案，如：活动主题、时间……；
2. 简单阐述你提出此方案的理由。
第二步：列提纲（重点词组）
aruse the enthusiasm fr reading; prvide a platfrm; exhibit bks f hundreds f types; develp ur reading habits; braden ur hrizns; a lwer price
第三步：连词成句
1.I am writing t invite yu t participate in ur campus bk fair, which will be held n 23rd April, 2017-the Wrld Bk and Cpyright Day.
2.Aimed t aruse the enthusiasm fr reading, this activity is designed t prvide a platfrm where the students can buy r exchange bks and share their reading experience.
3.On that day, the fair will exhibit bks f hundreds f types n diverse tpics, mtivating us t further develp ur reading habits and help t braden ur hrizns.
4.In additin, mst bks will be sld at a lwer price than what the bk stres ffer.
5.Hpefully, yu can give us the chance t hld the activity.
6.Please let me knw if yu can permit us t d this and we lk frward t yur cming.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First f all, Firstly/First, Secndly/Secnd… And then, Finally, In the end, At last（供参考）
2.表并列补充关系：In additin
3.表转折对比关系：Hwever, On the cntrary, but, Althugh+clause(从句), In spite f+n/ding,On the ne hand…,On the ther hand… Sme…,while thers…,as fr, s…that…（供参考）
4.表因果关系：Because, As, S, Thus, Therefre, As a result（供参考）
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】
[高分句型1]Aimed t aruse the enthusiasm fr reading, this activity is designed t prvide a platfrm where the students can buy r exchange bks and share their reading experience.（过去分词作状语）
[高分句型2]On that day, the fair will exhibit bks f hundreds f types n diverse tpics, mtivating us t further develp ur reading habits and help t braden ur hrizns. （现在分词作状语）
[高分句型3]In additin, mst bks will be sld at a lwer price than what the bk stres ffer. （what引导的宾语从句）
4．Ugly Stne
Recently I read Jia Pingwa’s “Ugly Stne”. The authr described a piece f ugly stne in frnt f the huse, because it was useless, s it was spurned by everyne. Until ne day, astrnmers fund that this very ugly stne is actually a stne frm utside the sky, and the ugly stne shne!
The shrtcming lies in the plain language. There is n flwery rhetric and a few rhetrical devices. But it is such a simple and unsphisticated way f writing that makes it easy t accept and aruse resnance in readers’ heart. This is als the greatness f this article.
I’d like t recmmend this thught-prvking philsphical essay t yu. On the ne hand, we have als dne the act f spitting n ugly stnes, judging peple by their appearance. On the ther hand, we have been treated as ugly stnes and experienced pain that we cannt frget. Hwever, we still stubbrnly struggle in the wrld, because we knw that we are als a shining star, a shining star different frm everyne else!
【解析】
【详解】
第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般过去时和一般现在时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1.简要介绍你最近读过的一篇文章内容；
2.这篇文章优点与不足是什么？
3.你会推荐给谁？理由是什么？
第二步：列提纲（重点词组）
read; authr; describe; shrtcming; the greatness f this article; recmmend sth. t sb.; thught-prvking philsphical essay
第三步：连词成句
1. Recently I read Jia Pingwa’s “Ugly Stne”.
2. The authr described a piece f ugly stne in frnt f the huse, because it was useless, s it was spurned by everyne.
3. Until ne day, astrnmers fund that this very ugly stne is actually a stne frm utside the sky, and the ugly stne shne!
4. The shrtcming lies in the plain language.
5. But it is such a simple and unsphisticated way f writing that makes it easy t accept and aruse resnance in readers’ heart.
6. This is als the greatness f this article.
7. I’d like t recmmend this thught-prvking philsphical essay t yu.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First f all, Firstly/First, Secndly/Secnd… And then, Finally, In the end, At last（供参考）
2.表并列补充关系：What is mre, Besides, Mrever, Furthermre, In additin As well as, nt nly…but (als), including（供参考）
3.表转折对比关系：Hwever, But, On the ne hand…, On the ther hand
4.表因果关系：Because, S
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】
[高分句型1] The authr described a piece f ugly stne in frnt f the huse, because it was useless, s it was spurned by everyne.(运用because引导原因状语从句，s连接并列句)
[高分句型2] But it is such a simple and unsphisticated way f writing that makes it easy t accept and aruse resnance in readers’ heart.(运用强调句型)
[高分句型3] On the ne hand, we have als dne the act f spitting n ugly stnes, judging peple by their appearance.(现在分词做状语)
5．Dear Peter,
As yu wish t learn abut traditinal Chinese medicine t raise the awareness f self-care, I am writing t yu t prpse sme f my recmmendatins abut the learning resurces, aiming at helping yu better understand traditinal Chinese medicine.
I’d like t recmmend nline access t traditinal Chinese medicine n the website, which is called “Chinese Medicine Netwrk”. The principle reasn why I recmmend the website is that it classifies different symptms int srts f grups. The Basic Knwledge f Traditinal Chinese Medicine, which is n the premise f essential knwledge abut traditinal Chinese medicine, the bk mainly illustrates a great many applicable evidences t carry ut individual practice in aspect f self-care. Mre imprtantly, it is nt bscure fr general grup t catch n.
Based n the recmmendatin abve, I believe yu’ll be capable f frming general image f traditinal Chinese medicine. I’m lking frward t hearing frm yu.
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇提纲类写作。
【详解】
第1步：根据提示可知，假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Peter想了解中医常识以提高自我护理习惯。请给他写一封信，推荐学习资源。你的信件内容需包括：1.学习资源类别:图书、网站、手机应用程序（APP）等；2.推荐某类资源理由；3.表达祝愿。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：learn abut (了解)；traditinal Chinese medicine (中医)；aim at (目的在于)；n the premise f (在……的前提下)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】
范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如As yu wish t learn abut traditinal Chinese medicine t raise the awareness f self-care, I am writing t yu t prpse sme f my recmmendatins abut the learning resurces, aiming at helping yu better understand traditinal Chinese medicine.运用原因状语从句；The principle reasn why I recmmend the website is that it classifies different symptms int srts f grups.运用了表语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
6．As we all knw, mbile phnes have brught a lt f cnvenience t mdern peple's life, even changed peple's daily lifestyle. Peple ften dwnlad sme cmmn apps n mbile phnes, such as sme extremely game and small vide apps.
But I think, apps shuld nt be used merely fr the sake f entertainment, fr ur students, they shuld be a kind f learning tl, As fr me, I regularly use an app called sinlgy hall, where I can nt nly enjy the appreciatin f classic petry, but als learn a lt frm ancient sages’ mving deeds. I think it is an app which nt nly bradens my hrizns, but als cultivates my patritism.
In view f the reasns abve, I strngly recmmend this app t all f yu.
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达是提纲类作文，要求推荐一款应用程序。
【详解】
第1步：根据提示可知，本文要求推荐一款应用程序：手机给现代人的生活带来了很多便利，甚至改变了人们的日常生活方式。人们常常会在手机上下载一些常用的应用程序(app)。你平时使用较多的是哪一类应用程序呢？请你向同学们推荐一款应用程序，并阐述理由，时态应为一般现在时。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如； entertainment（娱乐），cnvenience（便利）， classic petry（古诗词），appreciatin（鉴赏）， sinlgy（国学），recmmend (推荐)，dwnlad（下载）及patritism（家国情怀）等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。
【点睛】
范文语言地道，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和句式，高级词汇有fr the sake f（为了），learn frm（从……身上学习），braden ne’s hrizns (开阔视野)，as fr（至于）以及recmmend sth t sb（向某人推荐某物），而且还使用了非限定性定语从句“As we all knw, mbile phnes have brught a lt f cnvenience t mdern peple's life, even changed peple's daily lifestyle.”及“As fr me, I regularly use an app called sinlgy hall, where I can nt nly enjy the appreciatin f classic petry, but als learn a lt frm ancient sages’ mving deeds.”，定语从句“I think it is an app which nt nly bradens my hrizns, but als cultivates my patritism.”，宾语从句“But I think, apps shuld nt be used merely fr the sake f entertainment, fr ur students, they shuld be a kind f learning tl,”，全文没有语法错误，上下句转换自然流畅。
7．Dear Sir/Madam.
I have read yur magazine's article asking what kind f persn is suitable t be a rle mdel fr yung peple. In my pinin, the rle mdel fr yung peple shuld be a persn f ur wn age, wh is nt nly psitive and sunny, but als has made utstanding achievements.
In my mind, Wang Yuan, the leader f TFbys is such a persn. Since his debut, he has brught us a lt f wnderful sngs. His greatest achievement is that as a representative f Chinese yuth, he was invited t attend the ECOSOC Yuth Frum 2017 held at the UN headquarters in New Yrk and delivered a speech in English. He is nt nly the first Chinese artist invited t participate in the UN yuth frum, but als the first Chinese yuth idl n the UN stage.
In view f the reasns abve, I think Wang Yuan is a gd rle mdel fr us.
yurs truly,
Lihua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达是应用文，要求写一封书信。
【详解】
第1步：根据提示可知，本文要求写一封书信：最近一本在线杂志发表了一篇文章，文中询问，在公众眼中，什么样的人是适合做年轻人的榜样，请你写封信给该杂志，推荐一位你认为适合做榜样的名人。你的文章须包括：简单介绍这位名人；为何这位名人适合做年轻人的榜样。时态应为一般现在时。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如； rle mdel（榜样），celebrity（名人），sunny（阳光的），psitive（积极的）， utstanding（杰出的），achievement（成就），debut（出道）及yuth idl（青年偶像）等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。
【点睛】
范文语言地道，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和句式，高级词汇有be suitable t d（适合做……），in ne’s pinin（依某人的观点），get int shape (使身体好起来)，be invited t d（受邀……）以及participate in（参加），而且还使用了非限定性定语从句“In my pinin, the rle mdel fr yung peple shuld be a persn f ur wn age, wh is nt nly psitive and sunny, but als has made utstanding achievements.”，表语从句“His greatest achievement is that as a representative f Chinese yuth, he was invited t attend the ECOSOC Yuth Frum 2017 held at the UN headquarters in New Yrk and delivered a speech in English.”，宾语从句和非谓语动词“I have read yur magazine's article asking what kind f persn is suitable t be a rle mdel fr yung peple.”，全文没有语法错误，上下句转换自然流畅。
8．Dear sir r madam,
I am writing t recmmend a persn wh is suitable t be a rle mdel fr yung peple. In my mind, the Sichuan Airline’s pilt Liu Chuanjian is such a persn. He is called “her pilt”.
On May 14, 2018, while he was pilting Flight 3U8633 frm Chngqing t Lhasa, the right frnt windshield f the cckpit suddenly cracked. In spite f an extremely lw temperature, lack f xygen, strng wind and deafening nise, Liu and his crew manually perated the aircraft and made an emergency landing in Chengdu, ensuring the safety f all 119 passengers n bard and creating a miracle in the histry f civil aviatin.
In view f the reasns abve I think Liu Chuanjian is a gd rle mdel fr us.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封信, 推荐一位你认为适合做榜样的名人。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
破裂的：fracted →cracked
在我看来：in my pinin →in my mind
操控：cntrl →perate
确保：guarantee →ensure
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：In my mind, the Sichuan Airline’s pilt Liu Chuanjian is such a persn.
拓展句：In my mind, Liu Chuanjian wh is a Sichuan Airline’s pilt is such a persn.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] I am writing t recmmend a persn wh is suitable t be a rle mdel fr yung peple. (运用了定语从句)
[高分句型2] In spite f an extremely lw temperature, lack f xygen, strng wind and deafening nise, Liu and his crew manually perated the aircraft and made an emergency landing in Chengdu, ensuring the safety f all 119 passengers n bard and creating a miracle in the histry f civil aviatin (运用了非谓语动词作状语)
9．Tday, I'd like t intrduce a mvie that left a deep impressin n me—The climbers, starring Wu Jing and Zhang Ziyi. As a film dedicated t the 70th birthday f ur mtherland, it's excellent bth in the plt and in the shting effect.
The film tells the stry f a grup f Chinese muntaineers wh vercame lts f difficulties t climb munt Everest three times fr the hnr f ur cuntry. I was amazed at the enrmity f munt Everest, but I was even mre impressed by the climbers' curage and determinatin t cnquer nature. Of curse, what mved me mst was their patritism.
In view f the pints abve, I recmmend this film t yu, and I think it is wrth watching mre than nce
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达是提纲类作文，要求介绍一部电影。
【详解】
第1步：根据提示可知，本文要求介绍一部电影：假设你校即将召开艺术节，作为学校电影社团的团长，你将在艺术节开幕式上介绍一部电影，写一份发言稿，内容包括：1.你介绍的电影名称及内容简介；2.你为什么要选择介绍这部电影。时态应为一般现在时。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如； star（由……主演），plt（剧情），shting effect（拍摄效果），enrmity（巍峨），determinatin（决心）， patritism（爱国精神）及recmmend（推荐）等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。
【点睛】
范文语言地道，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和句式，高级词汇有be dedicated t（专为），fr the hnr f（为了……的荣誉），be amazed at (惊叹于)，in view f（鉴于）以及be wrth ding（值得做），而且还使用了定语从句“The film tells the stry f a grup f Chinese muntaineers wh vercame lts f difficulties t climb munt Everest three times fr the hnr f ur cuntry”及“Tday, I'd like t intrduce a mvie that left a deep impressin n me—The climbers, starring Wu Jing and Zhang Ziyi.”，主语从句“Of curse, what mved me mst was their patritism.”，宾语从句“In view f the pints abve, I recmmend this film t yu, and I think it is wrth watching mre than nce”，全文没有语法错误，上下句转换自然流畅。
10．Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m planning t travel t the USA in the cming July. Therefre, I’m writing t inquire abut travel rutes f yur agency.
I intend t stay in America fr abut 10 days, during which I hpe t have a lk at sme unique natural scenery and have a taste f lcal custms. S, culd yu please recmmend sme suitable travel rutes? In additin, I’d like t knw the prices f the rutes, cvering all the traveling expenses.
A reply at yur earliest cnvenience is highly appreciated.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封电子邮件。
【详解】
第1步：根据提示可知，本文为一封电子邮件：假定你是李华，打算今年暑假去美国旅游。请你给Travel America国际旅行社写一封电子邮件进行咨询，内容如下:1.请其推荐合适的旅游路线；2.请其告知相关的旅游费用。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：in the cming July（在即将到来的七月）；inquire abut travel rutes f yur agency（询问你的旅游路线）；have a lk at sme unique natural scenery and have a taste f lcal custms（看看一些独特的自然风光，领略一下当地的风土人情）；recmmend sme suitable travel rutes（推荐一些合适的旅游路线）；等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】
本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。同时文中使用高级句子。I intend t stay in America fr abut 10 days, during which I hpe t have a lk at sme unique natural scenery and have a taste f lcal custms.句中使用非限制性定语从句；I’d like t knw the prices f the rutes, cvering all the traveling expenses.现在分词做伴随状语。