中考英语书面表达——topic writing my holiday experience 课件

这是一份中考英语书面表达——topic writing my holiday experience 课件，共25页。PPT课件主要包含了写作五步法，necessary，审search，加add，连connect，美beauty，写作指导，Homework等内容，欢迎下载使用。
Can yu tell me the names f these festivals?
New Year’s Day
May Day (Labur Day)
Natinal Day
Christmas Day
Thanksgiving Day
Independence Day
Can yu tell the dates f these festivals?
January 1st
May 1st
December 25th
On the 4th Thursday in Nvember
The furth f July
Thanksgiving is an American festival.We have celebrated the festival _______the first pineers frm England arrived in America by ship in the 17th century. ______ they were crssing Atlantic, many peple_____, and after they landed, their first winter was wrse than any English winter.The lcal peple, the Native Americans ,taught them hw t ______crn. The ________year they celebrated tgether by _______a dinner f the new fd.We still celebrate Thanksgiving tday with a traditinal dinner. On that day, we all help prepare the fd. We_____ the table, and then befre we begin dinner, my father gives _________fr the fd. We usually eat t much. We ften talk a lt and tell stries after dinner as well. When it is all _______, everyne helps wash the_______
Fill in the blanks with the crrect frms.
划出含有时间状语从句的句子
while, ver, grw, fllwing, lay, dish，since, thanks, eat, die
用所给提示词翻译下列状语从句：(请用过去时）1. 假期一开始，我们一家人就去爷爷奶奶家。(as sn as)2. 在我们到达之前，奶奶就已经摆好了桌子.（befre, lay the table)3. 当一切都结束了之后，我们大家都帮奶奶洗碗.(when)4.我们一边吃月饼，一边赏月。(while)5.自从我出生以来，我们家每年都在一起庆祝中秋节（since）
we went t my grandparents' hme as sn as the hliday began.
Befre we arrived, Grandma had laid the table fr us.
When it was all ver,everyne helped Grandma wash the dishes.
We were enjying the mn while eating the delicius mncakes.
We have celebrated Mid-autumn Festival tgether since I was brn.
Vacatin experience
Hw did yu spend yur Natinal Day hliday
Luckily,this year, Mid-autumn Day and Natinal Day are n the same day. S we have an 8- day hliday.
今年的国庆节和中秋节是同一天，假设你是大明，你的笔友Mike想知道你是如何度过这次假期的。请写一封e-mail给他。内容包括:注意：1.词数：60-100词 2. 用since ,befre,while, when,after, as sn as等引导的状语从句
Dear Mike , Luckily, this year , Natinal Day and Mid-autumn Day are n the same day in China .S we have 8 days ff.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Welcme t China._________________________________________ Best wishes yurs,Daming
Tpic主题：Type体裁：Persn人称：Tense时态：Structure结构：
Befre writing
Natinal Day Hliday
记述文
第一人称
一般过去时
Beginning开头
Main bdy正文
Ending结尾
重点注意：1.词数：60-80词； 2. 用since ,befre,while, when,after, as sn as 等词引导的状语从句
写出假期的活动和感想（main bdy)
请用befre, after, as sn as, when, while, until 等引导的状语从句来谈谈大明在中秋节的活动。
After we had the dinner, my cusins and I went t the cinema.
As sn as I came back hme, I played cmputer games with my brther.
加首尾，使结构完整。可以采取总分总结构，开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁、漂亮。可以在段首加上总起句. （tpic sentence)
常用连接词或短语并列 转折先后顺序总结归纳
but, hwever
in a wrd, in shrt, all in all
first/ secnd/ then/what’s mre/ finally.
请把下列句子加上你认为有必要的连词或短语
1.After we had the dinner, my cusins and I went t the cinema. The film was very bring, I culdn't wait t leave.
2.During the fllwing days, I nly stayed at hme , we culdn't g t ther cities.3.I wanted t imprve my English, I listened t English sngs every day.
因果/目的
nt---until\ befre\after\as sn aswhile \when\since
because, s, in rder t …
Make yur cmpsitins perfect
宾语从句
that\ if …
All wrk and n play make Jack a dull by.
Reading makes a full man.
只工作不玩耍聪明的孩子也变傻。
It is better t travel ten thusand miles than t read ten thusand bks.
读万卷书不如行万里路。
恰当的谚语格言会让你的文章更完美
East r west,hme is the best.
金窝银窝不如我的狗窝。
人称:________________ 时态:__________ 体裁：______
and, t，as well, first,third then/what’s mre/besides finally.
高级词汇： enjyable , clrful, meaningful高级句型及引用语 as a saying ges that… We all knw that… 状语从句 、宾语从句
内容、加首尾 beginning & ending
要点（key pints）
1.和爷爷奶奶一起过中秋2.到雁荡山旅游
Pst-writing
朗读自己的文章，按照习作评价标准表的项目进行自我修正，并按下表要求完成自评任务.
Self-check 自我修正
习作作者：___________ , 同伴评价者:___________
好词好句摘录：______________________________________
Finish yur writing level A ：Plish yur writing(给你的文章润色） level B: Write a cmpsitin abut yur vcatin experience accrding t the mind-map.
完成作文自评和他评表格
Thanks fr yur listening!~
用所给提示词翻译下列状语从句：（请用过去时）1. 假期一开始，我们一家人就去爷爷奶奶家。(as sn as)2. 在我们到达之前，奶奶就已经摆好了桌子.（befre, lay the table)3. 当一切都结束了之后，我们大家都帮奶奶洗碗.(when)4.我们一边吃月饼，一边赏月。(while)5.自从我出生以来，我们家每年都在一起庆祝中秋节（since）