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专题09 书面表达（真题专练）
1．（2021·广东·新丰县教育局教研室八年级期中）
以My Vacation为题写一篇短文，描述你的假期，介绍一下你去过的地方。
内容提示：1.去哪里玩： 2.游玩经历： 3.谈谈你的感受。
作文要求：
1.    不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。
2.    语句连贯，词数80个左右。
My Vacation
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例文
Last summer vacation. I went to the beach with my parents. The weather was sunny and hot.   
In the morning, my father and I played beach volleyball. My mother read books and rested on the beach. In the afternoon, the sea water was so warm that we could swim in the sea. We felt comfortable when we were in the water. In the evening, it was cool. I went fishing with my father. It was interesting.
I loved the beach. The most unforgettable thing was the sea food. It was so delicious. I want to go there again.
【详解】1. 题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文。要求根据提示，介绍一次旅行。内容包括游玩地点、游玩经历及感受。首先，我们要认真审题，根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达。然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。
2. 写作指导：本文主要采用第一人称来展开写作。时态采用一般现在时和一般过去时相结合。在叙述旅行的活动经历时用一般过去时，描述景点的景色和自己的收获时，用一般现在时。文章要紧扣题目要点，层次要分明，条理要清晰。
2．（2021·安徽·宣城市第六中学八年级期中）
以“My Best Friend David” 为题写一篇短文。
内容要求：语句通顺，在70—80个词左右。
1.他比我高，我比他更外向。他在音乐方面有天赋。
2.他每天喝牛奶，他每周锻炼两次，每晚他睡9个小时。
3.他经常周末去图书馆，他认为图书馆是我们看书的最好地方。
4.他是班上最努力的学生之一，各门功课都学得好，他总是愿意帮助其他同学。
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例文：
My Best Friend David
My best friend is David. He is taller than me but I’m more outgoing than him. He is talented in music. He drinks milk every day. He exercises twice a week. He sleeps nine hours every night. He often goes to the library on weekends. He thinks the library is the best place to read books. He is one of the most hard-working students in class and he is good at all subjects. He is always ready to help other classmates. All of us like him very much.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中有关David的每一项具体信息内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山阐明文章要向大家介绍自己的朋友；
第二步，具体介绍朋友的各项信息内容；
第三步，书写结语，大家都喜欢他。
[亮点词汇]
① be talented in 在某方面有天赋
② be good at擅长于
③ all of us我们所有人
④ be always ready to do sth.总是准备做某事
[高分句型]
①He is one of the most hard-working students in class and he is good at all subjects. (one of+最高级+复数名词，表“最……之一”)
②He thinks the library is the best place to read books. (动词不定式作后置定语)
3．（2021·重庆市璧山中学校八年级期中）
同学们，新的一年即将到来，校刊发起了一次“回首与展望”主题征文活动，假如你是李华，你准备为校刊投稿。请根据下列要点，写一篇短文。
要求：（1）词数80词以上。  （2）可围绕主题适当发挥。（3）文中不得出现真实人名，校名。
Last year
Next year
去海南度假，每周一次使用因特网，
更努力学习，获得更好成绩
每天锻炼1小时
开始新的爱好，学会弹钢琴
经常吃快餐
多吃蔬菜，多喝牛奶，更健康
Hello, everyone. I’m Li Hua. New Year’s Day is coming. I believe that most of you have your own New Year’s resolutions. Me, too.
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例文
Hello, everyone. I’m Li Hua. New Year’s Day is coming. I believe that most of you have your own New Year’s resolutions. Me, too.
First, I want to make a year-end summary. I went to Hainan for a holiday. I made a lot of new friends there. I used the Internet once a week. I exercised for an hour every day. I often ate fast food. So next year, I decide to change myself. I will study harder and get better grades. I will start a new hobby and learn to play the piano. In order to keep healthy, I want to eat more vegetables and drink more milk. Please supervise me.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文。
② 时态：时态为“一般过去时和一般现在时”；
③ 提示：以“回首与展望”写一篇短文，介绍去年的情况以及未来的计划。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头已给出，引出主题。
第二步，介绍去年的情况。
第三步，介绍未来的计划。
[亮点词汇]
① a lot of 许多
② decide to do sth 决定做某事
③ in order to do sth 为了做某事
[高分句型]
① I believe that most of you have your own New Year’s resolutions.（that引导宾语从句）
② I want to make a year-end summaryn（动词不定式作宾语）
4．（2021·河北·石家庄市第二十二中学八年级期中）
上个学期我参加了学校的戏剧演出，我的老师Miss Wang 编写了一个故事，学生、老师和家长都参加了表演，请你写一篇短文来描述一下戏剧演出的情景。80词左右，文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
提示：
1）How many students acted in the play?
2）How many main characters were there in the play?
3）How often did they practice the play?
提示词语：fourteen, four, criminal
I was in the school play last term.
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例文
I was in the school play last term. My teacher Miss Wang made up the story. Fourteen students acted in the play. There were four main characters. I played one of the main characters. We all had to dress up to make us look older and funnier. I dressed up as a police artist. Mike dressed up as a policeman. Jason dressed up as a criminal. Mary dressed up as a rich lady. We practiced three times a week. We were hard - working because we wanted to play the roles well.
We gave three performances, the first one for students, the next one for teachers and the last one for parents. The performance for parents was the most successful. The parents really enjoyed the play, and so did we.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为一篇叙述过去的英语短文；
② 时态：时态为“一般过去时” ；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中演出主要人物的介绍要点，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“我参加了学校的戏剧演出”来引出重点描述戏剧演出的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“剧本的编写、参加演出人数、剧中主要角色、我们的排练及演出”几个方面介绍这次演出的相关情况；
第三步，书写结语。父母及我们自己都喜欢这次演出，演出成功。
[亮点词汇]
① make up编写
② dress up打扮
③ make sb do sth让某人做某事
④ hard - working勤劳的
[高分句型]
① I played one of the main characters.（“one of  the + 形容词最高级 + 可数名词复数”句型）
② We were hard - working because we wanted to play the roles well. （because引导原因状语从句）
③ The parents really enjoyed the play, and so did we. （“so + be/助动词/情态动词 + 主语”句型）
5．（2021·河南·许昌市第一中学八年级期中）
假如Mike是你最好的朋友，请你把他的外貌、性格以及你对他的看法评价介绍一下。
要求：
1、描述时适当运用比较级
2、80词左右。
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【答案】
       Mike is my best friend. He is thirteen years old. He is as old as me. But he is taller than me and a bit heavier. He’s more outgoing than me. He likes art and he is more creative than me. He is the leader of our class volleyball team. He’s good at his schoolwork and often helps other students with their studies. He is very popular in our class. I think I can learn a lot from him. I like to have such a friend like him.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据提示，介绍你最好的朋友Mike，可以从外貌、性格以及你对他的看法上描述。可以适当使用比较级。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍Mike的外貌，性格，爱好等；
第二步，介绍你对他的看法
[亮点词汇]

①be good at擅长
②help sb with sth帮助某人做某事
[高分句型]
①He’s good at his schoolwork and often helps other students with their studies.（and连接连接两个并列句）
②I think I can learn a lot from him. （省略that的宾语从句）
6．（2021·河南许昌·八年级期中）
班会课上大家介绍自己的朋友。假如你最近交了一位朋友 Lucy，请根据下面的提示向你的同学介绍她的情况。
生活方式
每星期锻炼三次；不吃垃圾食品
爱好与特长
爱看游戏节目(有教育意义)；唱歌好，有音乐天赋
与你比较
共同点：擅长网球
差异：她更用功
你喜欢她的原因
她关心你，帮助你
注意：
1. 词数80词左右。首句已给出, 不计入总词数。     
2. 内容必须包括表格中的信息, 语言准确得当, 条理清楚, 可适当发挥。Hi, everyone! I am going to say something about my new friend Lucy ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
例文：
Hi, everyone! I am going to say something about my new friend Lucy. She has a healthy lifestyle. She exercises three times a week and she never eats junk food. She loves watching game shows because she thinks it is educational. She is good at singing and she has a talent for music. We are both outgoing and we are good at playing tennis, but she is more hard-working. I love Lucy because she often helps me and she cares about me.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，为记叙文。
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中我的朋友Lucy的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“简单介绍你的朋友Lucy”来引出中重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“生活方式、爱好、特长等”几个方面重点介绍你的朋友Lucy的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语，介绍喜欢她的原因。
[亮点词汇]
①three times a week一周三次；
②love doing sth喜欢做某事；
③be good at擅长……；
④care about关心。
[高分句型]
①She is good at singing and she has a gift for music. (动名词作宾语)
②I love Lucy because she often helps me and she cares about me. (because引导原因状语从句)
7．（2021·湖北·房县教学研究中心八年级期中）
根据表格提供的信息，写一篇短文介绍你和你的好朋友Lisa的相同之处和不同之处。60词左右。

不同点
相同点
Lisa
①更高，更开朗
②每天锻炼
③喜欢看电影
①喜欢音乐和运动
②喜欢阅读，周末一起去图书馆
③擅长学习

我
①喜欢电视
②每周锻炼三次
写作要求：1．内容必须包括所提示信息，可适当发挥。
2．书写认真，句子通顺。
3．词数：60字左右。
Lisa is my best friend.









【答案】My name isAndy. Lisa is my best friend. In some ways we are the same. Both of us like sports and music. And we are good at our subjects. We both like reading and we usually go to the library on weekends. But in some ways we are different. Lisa is taller and more outgoing than me. She likes goingto the movies, but I like playing computer games at home. I only exercise three times a week.She exercises every day.
【详解】首先确定作文的时态：一般现在式为主；人称：第一人称和第三人称；特别句型:比较级句型“主语+谓语动词+adj./adv.（比）+ than+ 对比成分”。
这是一篇根据图表信息介绍型作文，介绍自己与朋友，所以我们要仔细读图表信息。首先我们列举重要短语与词汇，不同点：①更高，更开朗more taller；more outgoing，②每天锻炼exercise every day；③喜欢看电影like going to the movies；和①喜欢电视like watching TV;②每周锻炼三次exercise three times a week; 相同点：①喜欢音乐和运动like sports and music；②喜欢阅读，周末一起去图书馆like reading；go to the library on weekends③擅长学习be good at subjects.
最后组织语句，检查第三人单数形式。
8．（2020·湖北·老河口市教学研究室八年级期中）
假如你是来自于英国的Anna,现在在北京学习，请你给在英国的妈妈写一封信，介绍一下你在中国新结交的好朋友Zhang Mei。
1．需包含以下要点：
（1）Zhang Mei比我文静，头发比我长，她对我很友善，常常帮助我学汉语。
（2）我们俩都喜欢打篮球，她比我打得好，我们至少一周打两次。
（3）上周末，天气晴朗，上午我们购物，午餐吃了一些特别的东西。下午我们爬山。尽管我们很累，但是很开心。
2．内容可以适当补充和发挥。
3．词数：80词左右。（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）
Dear mother,
How is everything going? Now I am studying in China. I have a good friend.
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Yours,
Anna
例文：
Dear mother,  
How is everything going? Now I am studying in China. I have a good friend. Her name is Zhang Mei. She is quieter than me. Her hair is longer than me. She is very friendly to me and often helps me with my Chinese. We both like to play basketball. She plays basketball better than me. We play basketball at least twice a week. It was sunny last week and we did some shopping in the morning and had something special for lunch. In the afternoon we climbed the mountain. Although we were tired, we were happy.
Yours,
Anna
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。根据要点提示，给在英国的妈妈写一封信，介绍一下你在中国新结交的好朋友Zhang Mei。
2.写作指导：本文在叙述个人信息和爱好时应用一般现在时；叙述上周末的事情应用一般过去时。人称以第三人称为主。针对细节部分可适当发挥，写作时确保语句通顺，无单词语法错误。
9．（2021·吉林·长春外国语学校八年级期中）
转眼2021年的大半年过去了，还有两个月就要步入2022年了，谈谈你的新年计划，写一篇短文。
要点: 1. 谈两到三个新年计划；
2. 叙述制定的原因以及将如何为此努力。
要求：1. 文中不得出现真实的姓名；
2. 不少于80词。
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例文
In 2021, everyone realized that health is important for us. The New Year is coming, I am going to have a healthy lifestyle.
In the past, I never played sports. I often ate junk food and played computer games. I felt tired and sleepy.
I plan to get lots of exercise. I will eat healthier food. I won’t play computer games. I will get up and go to bed early. I will walk to school instead of taking the bus. I will take up a hobby like playing basketball or swimming. I think I can keep the resolutions as long as I try my best.
【详解】1. 题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，要求你在新的一年即将到来之际谈谈自己的新年计划，要点要包括谈及两到三个新年计划、叙述原因和做法。
2. 写作指导：本文应该主要以第一人称展开叙述，提及过去状况时应该用一般过去时，表示接下来的计划与决心时应该用一般将来时。文章内容围绕要点叙述，也可适当进行展开。注意文章要层次分明，条理清晰。
10．（2021·吉林·乾安县教师进修学校八年级期中）
关于朋友，你是否介意他们和你一样还是跟你不同？请根据表格中的信息，写一篇你和你的好朋友吉姆的相同和不同之处不少于80词的短文。

I
Jim
Difference
tall, like reading
short, like running
shy, serious
more outgoing
funnier
like math and Chinese
like sports,
especially(特别)
basketball
The same
like music
friendly
work hard
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范文：
I don’t care if my friends are the same as me or different.
My best friend is Jim. We both like listening to music. And we are both friendly to others. He works as hard as me.
Although we have something in common, we are different from each other. Jim is shorter, but he runs faster than me. He is funnier and more outgoing than me. Jim likes sports very much, especially basketball. I’m shyer and more serious than Jim. And I like to stay at home and just read books. I’m better at math and Chinese than him.
I feel happy to have such a good friend.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据所给表格的要点提示，写一篇短文谈谈你和你的好朋友吉姆的相同和不同之处。
2.写作指导：本文主要采用第一人称和第三人称相结合来行文，时态采用一般现在时；谈到两人的相同和不同之处时，可以采用比较级句型，写作时注意保持主谓一致性，在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。做到无语法和标点错误。
11．（2021·江西抚州·八年级期中）
友谊是我们生活中必不可少的一部分。每个人或多或少都有自己的好朋友，请写一篇短文介绍你身边的某位好友。(文中不得出现自己真实的姓名及所在班级。)
提示：
1. 你和他/她的相似之处和差异；
2. 你们一起经历的某次有意义的事情及感受；
要求： 内容要包含提示，可适当发挥，字数70—90，开头已写好，不计入总词数。
Friendship is a kind of human relations and it is important in our life.     
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例文：
Friendship is a kind of human relations and it is important in our life. My best friend is Jack, who is the monitor of my class. We are both outgoing and enjoy sports. But he’s taller and stronger than me.
We always help each other. He is not good at English. I often help him with his English. Every time he made a mistake in pronunciation, I helped him to correct it. With my help, he did well in the English exam. We are very happy and relaxed when we are together.
【详解】[ 总体分析]
题材：本文是一篇给材料作文，为记叙文；
时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
提示： 写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”。适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[ 写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，直接点出“友情的重要性及自己最好的朋友”，并对朋友介绍。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。介绍和朋友之间的互相帮助。
第三步，写出结语。表示“很高兴有这样的朋友”。
[亮点词汇 ]
my best friend我最好的朋友
help each other彼此帮助
With my help在我的帮助下
[ 高分句型]
We are both outgoing and enjoy sports.（both…and…）
We are very happy and relaxed when we are together.（when引导的时间状语从句）
12．（2021·江西·吉安县文博国际学校八年级期中）
假设你是李小明，英文名是Bob，原本要和好友Jim参加今年寒假的国际学生冬令营活动，但是由于新冠肺炎的原因（because of the COVID-19），活动取消，改为与国外学生线上交友，请根据下列提示，用英文写一篇自我介绍。要点：
1. 来自中国，性格有点儿内向；
2. 你认为健康是最重要的，所以每天吃水果、蔬菜，几乎不吃垃圾食品，每周锻炼两次，例如踢足球、游泳等；
3. 好友Jim比你高，比你外向，喜欢看动作片；
4. 特殊的寒假，在家上网课（online lessons）；
5. 计划这个学期(this term)取得好的成绩。
注意：1．短文应包括已给的全部信息，条理清楚，行文连贯；
2．短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名，可以适当发挥；
3．词数不少于60。
I am very glad to introduce myself to all of you. I am Li Xiaoming. My English name is Bob.
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I am very glad to introduce myself to all of you. I am Li Xiaoming. My English name is Bob.
I come from China. I’m kind of quiet. I think it is important to keep healthy. So I eat fruit and vegetables every day and hardly ever eat junk food. And I also exercise twice a week, such as playing soccer, riding bikes and so on. My good friend Jim is taller and more outgoing than me. And he likes action movies.
Because of the COVID-19, this winter holiday was quite different. I had to stay at home and take online classes. I plan to get good grades this term. So I must study harder.
I feel lucky to join all of you. I hope we can be good friends.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于材料类作文。第二段叙述个人情况；第三段叙述在家学习的情况；第四段总结并结尾。
2.写作指导：本文主要用第一人称来进行自我介绍；时态采用一般现在时，用一般现在时介绍自己的基本信息，包括来自哪里，自己的性格以及喜好等；描述时，自身情况应描写细致；并且描述个人信息以及在家上网课等需叙述完整，保证条理清晰。
13．（2021·辽宁·锦州市太和区教师进修学校八年级期中）
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为40-50词。
2. 必须使用2个或以上短文中划线的关键词。
3. 续写部分最少写一段，第一段的开头语已经为您写好。
4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出所选用的关键词语。
Last National Day(国庆节), I didn’t go to other cities because of the novel coronavirus (新冠肺炎疫情). I was very busy. On the first Day, I went to Beiputuoshan(北普陀山) with my friends. There are a lot of trees. I climbed the mountain. We sang and laughed happily. On the second and third day, I visited my grandparents in the countryside. They were happy to see us. We helped them pick apples, pears and grapes. We ate some fruits and they were delicious.
Paragraph 1:
On the fourth day, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
例文：
On the fourth day, I went to see a film with my friends. The film was so interesting that we were all very happy. On our way home, we met an old woman carrying a lot of things. We helped her and sent her home. She praised us as good children. On the fifth day, I didn’t go out and stayed at home. Because I was busy with my homework. I had a rich holiday.
【详解】1. 题干解读：题目要求根据给出的段落续写，描写自己的假期情况，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导：写作时要与已给出的部分巧妙地融合起来，本文应该用第一人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般过去时；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。
14．（2021·江西·龙南实验中学八年级期中）
现如今，手机在人们的生活中越来越普及，许多学生也拥有了自己的手机。谈谈你对学生使用手机的看法。
提示：1. 可以用手机和朋友、家人聊天、发短信（message）等；
2. 手机还可以用来购物、看电影、获取信息和听音乐等；
3. 有些学生用手机玩游戏，时间太长对眼睛有害，同时也影响学习；
4. 学生应该合理使用手机。
要求：1.文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名；
2.词数100左右。
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【答案】范文：
As we know, mobile phones are playing an important part in our daily life now. More and more students are having mobile phones.
Firstly, we can use mobile phones to send messages and chat with our friends and family. Secondly, we can get all kinds of information on the mobile phones. Thirdly, we can also use them to shop online, watch movies and listen to music. But using mobile phones also causes some problems. Some students spend too much time playing games on the mobile phones. Playing games on the mobile phones for too long is bad for their eyes. At the same time, it is bad for their study, too.
In a word, students should use mobile phones properly.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于议论文写作，在写作时应根据汉语提示的内容，阐明自己对学生使用手机的看法，包括对学生有益的方面和有害的方面。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第三和第一人称来阐述观点，时态采用一般现在时。在阐述内容时，力求观点明确，论据充分，保证条理清晰，内容完整。
15．（2021·安徽合肥·八年级期中）
假如你是Daming，国庆假期期间，你和同学们参加了学校组织的“徽”色之旅，请写一封邮件告诉你父母“徽”色之旅的基本情况，包括以下要点：
1.第一天：乘火车去黄山游玩，黄山风景优美，位于安徽省南部，黄山市人口约133万，每年都会有很多游客到此游玩。
2.第二天：乘飞机回合肥，参观安徽名人馆 (Anhui’s Celebrities Museum)，知晓很多名人均生于安徽，如陈独秀，邓稼先，杨振宁等。
3.第三天：乘公交车去合肥黄梅戏剧院 (Hefei Huangmei Opera Theatre)，欣赏黄梅戏。
注意:
1.词数不少于80-100；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称；
4.文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear mom and dad,
I am so excited to tell you some interesting things I have experienced in Anhui.
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Yours
Daming
例文
Dear mom and dad,
I am so excited to tell you some interesting things I have experienced in Anhui. On the first day, we took the train to the Yellow Mountain. It lies in the south of Anhui and it has a population of 1.33 million. It was a rally beautiful place so millions of tourists from all over the world come here every year. It was really famous in the word. On the second day, we went back to Hefei by plane. It was faster and more comfortable than by train. We went to Anhui’s Celebrities Museum and had learnt many famous people were born in Anhui such as Chen Duxiu, Deng Jiaxian and Yang Zhening. They really played important roles in Chinese history. On the third day, we took the bus to Hefei Huangmei Opera Theatre to enjoy traditional Huangmei Opera. Sometimes it was hard to understand the words, but the actors were really excellent. We also enjoyed the magic shows and ate lots of local snacks. What a special trip we had!
Yours
Daming
【详解】[ 总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应该注意不要遗漏要点提示中任何的一项，可以适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤 ]
第一步，表明写作意图，引出重点介绍去安徽旅行的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，介绍自己在安徽旅行的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语，感叹此次旅行的特别。
[亮点词汇 ]
①in the south of在……的南部
②millions of成千上万的
③all over the world全世界
④be famous in在……很著名
⑤play roles in发挥……作用
[高分句型 ]
①They really played important roles in Chinese history.他们在中国历史上确实发挥了重要作用。（play important roles in“发挥了重要作用”。）
②What a special trip we had!我们有一次多么特别的旅行啊！（What引导的感叹句。）
16．（2021·安徽蚌埠·八年级期中）
假如你是李华, 你的英国笔友Tony春节期间要来合肥一个家庭做客。请你根据以下要点给他写一封邮件。
1.合肥春节期间天气及建议；
2.中国春节的一些习俗（至少写两点）；
3.就他来中国家庭做客的礼仪给予建议。
注意:
1.词数80—100；
2.可适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯；
3.信中不能出现与本人相关的信息；
4.开头和结尾已为你写好, 不计入总词数。
Dear Tony,
I’m glad to hear that you are coming to Hefei during the winter vacation!
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I hope this helps and enjoy your stay in Hefei.
Yours,
LiHua
例文：
Dear Tony,
I’m glad to hear that you are coming to Hefei during the winter vacation! It is the most beautiful place in my eyes. Now it is cold. Sometimes it snows. You can bring some warm clothes.
The Spring Festival is the most important festival in China. There are some special traditions for you to follow. Try not to break anything. And don’t clean your room on the first day. When you visit a Chinese family it’s a good idea to bring a small gift. Usually Chinese people will give you a present in return. You’d better accept it with both hands. Remember to open it later.
I hope this helps and enjoy your stay in Hefei.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】1.题干解读：这是一封电子邮件，属于应用文写作；在写作时应承接邮件的开头和结尾；第一段开篇对收信人表示问候，多用礼貌用语，并简单说明春节期间的天气情况等，自然引入文章主题；第二段主要介绍春节的习俗，以及去别人家做客需要注意的事项，并提出一些建议；最后一段表示祝愿。
2.写作指导：本文时态为一般现在时；用第一人称和第二人称来进行书写；要注意文中主谓一致等问题；写作中按照要点提示进行书写，要注意语句的衔接，适当运用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
17．（2021·重庆·八年级期中）
以“Keep Healthy”为题，写一篇80词左右的短文。
现如今，很多中学生因为生活习惯不健康而经常生病。因此学校特开展以保持健康为主题的演讲比赛。假如你是李明，请写一篇简短的演讲稿，给同学们提出一些建议和忠告，例如：有良好的饮食习惯很重要，多喝水，多吃蔬菜水果，多运动，增强体质，不熬夜，远离烟酒等等。
Keep Healthy
Hello, everyone!
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例文
Keep Healthy
Hello, everyone! Today I want to say something about keeping healthy. For students, it’s true that health is the first step to success in study. Here are some things you can do to keep yourself healthy.
First, having good eating habits is very important. That means eating lots of kinds of food and a wide variety of fresh fruits and vegetables. Don’t forget to drink enough water, too. Stay away from alcohol and cigarettes. Second, doing exercise makes us strong. There are many exercises for us to choose, such as swimming, running and playing football. Last but not least, we should go to bed early and wake up early. It’s bad for you to stay up late.
These things sound easy to do, but not many people can manage them. It is necessary for us to have a strong will to keep healthy. Let’s do it!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文为一篇演讲稿，话题围绕“保持健康”展开；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点和提示已给出，考生要注意，在符合写作要求的前提下不要遗漏写作要点，围绕呼吁大家保持健康展开。可以适当增加细节，使得文章结构、内容完整。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明演讲主题。开门见山，说明保持健康的重要性；
第二步，具体阐述内容。从“饮食、运动和生活习惯”几个方面重点介绍保持健康的具体做法。
第三步，书写结语。再次呼吁大家为了自己的健康行动起来。
[亮点词汇]
①a wide variety of多种多样的
②stay away from远离……
③last but not least最后但同样重要的一点
④stay up late熬夜
[高分句型]
①First, having good eating habits is very important.（动名词作主语）
②It is necessary for us to have a strong will to keep healthy.（固定句型It is +adj.+ for sb. to do sth.“对某人来说做某事是……的”）