高考英语书面表达——Summary Writing 读后续写课件

这是一份高考英语书面表达——Summary Writing 读后续写课件，共18页。
Indr Air Pllutin is as bad as Outdr Air Pllutin
urbanizatin
Indr Air Pllutin
Read fr Tpic Sentence
Generally speaking, a schl has far mre ccupants per square meter than an ffice building. The fact is that with increasing urbanizatin, the student ppulatin in many schls is still grwing. Therefre, an awareness f pssible indr air quality prblems is imprtant fr teachers and students alike. Mst indr air pllutin in schls cmes frm bjects inside the schl building. Fr example, phtcpiers, wd prducts like desks and chairs, and carpeting cleaning prducts may all send ut harmful elements int the air. Other pllutants may als stay in specific areas such as labs and tilets. Meanwhile, utdr air that enters a schl building thrugh windws and ther penings can als bring vehicle exhausts int the classrms, increasing the risks f indr air quality prblems. Pr indr air quality can cause serius respiratry prblems. Yunger students in particular are affected. Children’s respiratry systems are still develping. They are mre sensitive t the air pllutants. Children als have higher respiratry rates than adults.  As a result, they are likely t breathe in mre f the pllutants than adults d. There is a lt that we can d and shuld d. Fr instance, banning smking, string paints in clsed cntainers, and using thse pllutant surces in perids f lw r n ccupancy are all easy and effective means t prevent the prblems. Of curse, f all the measures t take, educatin is n tp f the list. When everyne in the schl fully understands the matter, a safer and healthier learning envirnment with cleaner air can be created.
Tip1: The tpic sentence is nt necessarily the first r the last sentence, but it must cnvey the main idea.
① = para.1 ② = para.2 ③ =para.3 ④ =para.4
Read fr Structure
Read fr Writing Style
Read fr Key Pints
Generally speaking, a schl has far mre ccupants per square meter than an ffice building. The fact is that with increasing urbanizatin, the student ppulatin in many schls is still grwing. Therefre, an awareness f pssible indr air quality prblems is imprtant fr teachers and students alike.
causal relatin 因果关系
awareness f indr air quality prblem is imprtant fr teachers and students
student ppulatin is grwing
increasing urbanizatin
Tip3: ntice signal wrds 信号词 t figure ut the inter-sentential relatin
Tip2: ntinal wrds 实词(nuns, verbs, adjectives…) usually cnvey the main infrmatin in a sentence
Mst indr air pllutin in schls cmes frm bjects inside the schl building. Fr example, phtcpiers, wd prducts like desks and chairs, and carpeting cleaning prducts may all send ut harmful elements int the air. Other pllutants may als stay in specific areas such as labs and tilets. Meanwhile, utdr air that enters a schl building thrugh windws and ther penings can als bring vehicle exhausts int the classrms, increasing the risks f indr air quality prblems.
crdinating relatin 并列关系
indr air pllutants:
utdr air pllutants:
Tip4: sentences with similar structures have the same level f imprtance (“and, r, sme… thers…,…”).
example relatin 例证关系
Tip5: mit details 省略细节 r list ne r tw if needed
bjects inside the schl buildingpllutants in specific areas
vehicle exhausts thrugh penings
Pr indr air quality can cause serius respiratry prblems. Yunger students in particular are affected. Children’s respiratry systems are still develping. They are mre sensitive t the air pllutants. Children als have higher respiratry rates than adults.  As a result, they are likely t breathe in mre f the pllutants than adults d.
pr indr air quality causes serius respiratry prblems t yunger students in particular
respiratry systems are still develping
have higher respiratry rates than adults
Tip6: pay attentin t repeated wrds r phrases
There is a lt that we can d and shuld d. Fr instance, banning smking, string paints in clsed cntainers, and using thse pllutant surces in perids f lw r n ccupancy are all easy and effective means t prevent the prblems. Of curse, f all the measures t take, educatin is n tp f the list. When everyne in the schl fully understands the matter, a safer and healthier learning envirnment with cleaner air can be created.
banning smkingstring paints in clsed cntainersusing thse pllutant surces in perids f lw r n ccupancy…
cmes first/ the mst imprtantrank the first pririty…
Hw t Write?
“A summary is a brief and bjective statement that gives nly the main pints f smething, nt the details, with yur wn wrds.”
第五档（21-25分）★理解准确,涵盖全部要点。★能准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇。★有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所完成的概要结构紧凑。★完全使用自己的言语。
Write a summary in yur wn wrds
Tip1: use a synnym(同义词) r change the part f speech(词性)
Tip2: find the lgic （逻辑） between sentences and jin them with a prper cnjunctin (连词)
significant, vital,…
rising, saring, bming
be aware f, be aware that…
due t…wing t…thanks t…because f…
Teachers and students shall _______the _______ f indr air quality _____the saring number f students with cntinuus urbanizatin.
Tip2: find the lgic between sentences and jin them with a prper cnjunctin (连词)
Indr air pllutin is caused by…Indr air pllutin arises frm…
Indr air pllutin arises frm indr pllutants like ______________________, and utdr __________________________.
Tip3: mit details r list ne r tw if needed
pr indr air quality causes serius respiratry prblems t yunger students
Tip4: use cmplex sentences （复合句）if necessary
lead t, result in
…wh/ whse …
Pr indr air quality can ______ severe respiratry prblems, _______ fr kids _____ have immature respiratry system and higher respiratry rates.
especially/ particularly
Of all the measures t take, educatin is n tp f the list.
Tip4: use cmplex sentences if necessary
Tip5: use passive vice(被动语态) if necessary
Many measures can be taken t apprach the prblem, such as banning smking, but educatin shuld always rank the first pririty.
Plish the summary in yur wn wrds
Tip6: use prper linking wrds if necessary
Teachers and students shall be aware f the imprtance f indr air quality due t the saring number f students with cntinuus urbanizatin.
Indr air pllutin arises frm indr pllutants like schl bjects r pllutants frm special areas, and utdr exhausts thrugh varius penings.
Pr indr air quality can lead t severe respiratry prblems, especially fr kids wh have immature respiratry system and higher respiratry rates.
adversative relatin 转折关系
Hwever，Luckily
Teachers and students shuld realize the imprtance f indr air quality due t the saring number f students with cntinuus urbanizatin. Indr air pllutin arising frm indr pllutants like schl bjects r pllutants frm special areas and utdr exhausts thrugh varius penings, can lead t severe respiratry prblems, especially fr kids wh have immature respiratry system and higher respiratry rates. Luckily, many measures can be taken t apprach the prblem, but educatin shuld always rank the first pririty. （78 wrds）
Summary Writing
Hw t Read?
Rewrite-Check- PlishTip1: use a synnym(同义词) r change the part f speech(词性)Tip2: find the lgic between sentences and jin them with a prper cnjunctin (连词)Tip3: mit details r list ne r tw if neededTip4: use cmplex sentences if necessaryTip5: use passive vice if necessaryTip6: use prper linking wrds if necessary
Read fr Writing Style – Structure –Tpic Sentence – Key PintsTip1: the tpic sentence is nt necessarily the first r the last sentence, but it must cnvey the main idea.Tip2: ntinal wrds (nuns, verbs, adjectives…) usually cnvey the main infrmatinTip3: ntice signal wrds t figure ut the inter-sentential relatinshipTip4: sentences with similar structures have the same level f imprtanceTip5: mit details r list ne r tw if neededTip6: pay attentin t repeated wrds r phrases