新目标九年级 英语 Unit 2 PPT课件+教案+导学案+单元试卷+素材
展开介绍中国传统节日
写作任务 (Section B 3a & 3b)
假如你是李华,你的加拿大笔友 Simon 发来电子邮件想了解一下你最喜欢的中国传统节日。请你给他回复邮件介绍你最喜欢的中国传统节日。
【审清题目】
内容:对中国某一传统节日的介绍
文体:应用文(邮件);邮件的主体部分为说明文
人称:第一人称和第三人称
时态:一般现在时
【头脑风暴】
【提供素材】
(以下表所列4个中国传统节日为例,展示如何搜集所需语言素材)
语块
中国传统节日 | ||||
中国传统节日 | 节日时间 | 传统食物 | 传统活动 | 节日意义 |
the Spring Festival | on the 1st day of the first lunar month | dumplings, nian gao | clean / decorate (装饰) houses; put up couplets (对联); have a family get-together; eat a big dinner; stay up late to welcome the new year; enjoy the Spring Festival Gala; set off fireworks; put on new clothes; greet families to pass on your good wishes; visit relatives; get lucky money | family reunion; the beginning of a new year |
the Qingming Festival / the Tomb-Sweeping Day | on April 4th, 5th or 6th | cold food | sweep the tomb ( 坟 墓); do a lot of outdoor activities (have picnics, fly kites) | remember and honor the dead; welcome the coming of spring |
the Dragon Boat Festival | on the 5th day of the fifth lunar month | zongzi | drink realgar wine (雄黄酒); hang mugwort (艾叶); wear a spice bag (香囊); hold dragon boat races | in memory of the famous poet Qu Yuan |
the Mid-Autumn Festival | on the 15th day of the eighth lunar month | mooncakes | admire the full moon; eat / share delicious mooncakes; tell the story of Chang’ e flying to the moon | celebrate harvest; a symbol of reunion and good luck |
句型
1. The festival usually falls in / on ...
2. The festival is usually celebrated in / on ...
3. It’ s a day to ...
4. It’ s also a festival for ...
5. It’ s a time for the family to ...
6. What makes ... very happy is ...
7. The tradition dates back to ...
8. ... is one of the most important traditional festivals in China.
9. Chinese people have been celebrating this festival since ...
10. ... is seen as a symbol of ...
【谋篇布局】
【点评范文】
1.内容:作者从庆祝时间、传统食物、传统活动和喜欢的理由四个方面介绍了自己最喜欢的中国传统节日——中秋节,其中介绍传统食物和活动为详写,其他为略写,内容丰富且详略得当。
2.语言:同义表达(like ... best和favorite)的使用,避免了重复;恰当地使用了衔接词In addition来补充介绍中秋节的又一活动;It’ s one of ...最高级句型的使用及It’ s believed that ...句式的使用,使得文章很出彩。该范文仍有可提升的空间,若将第一段中的I like the Mid-Autumn Festival best和It’ s one of the most important traditional festivals in China两个简单句合并为含有定语从句的复合句,即I like the Mid-Autumn Festival best which / that is one of the most important traditional festivals in China,那么文章在语言表述上会提高一个档次。