新目标九年级 英语 Unit 14 PPT课件+教案+导学案+单元试卷+素材

写作指导

介绍初中阶段令你难忘的一个人

写作任务(Section B 3a & 3b)

  假如你校的英语校报在毕业季推出了“毕业生回忆录”专题征文，请你用英语写一篇短文参加此次征文活动，向大家介绍初中阶段令你难忘的一个人。

【审清题目】

内容：介绍初中阶段令你难忘的一个人         
文体：记叙文

人称：以第一人称和第三人称为主  

时态：以一般过去时和一般现在时为主

【头脑风暴】

【提供素材】(以老师为例，展示如何搜集所需语言素材)

语块

Describe the teacher

Age: ... years old, in his / her thirties / forties / ...

Appearance:

strong / weak, short / of medium height / tall / about ... meters tall, thin /

of medium build / a little fat / overweight (超重), long / short / straight /

curly hair, have a round / thin / long / square face, have big / small / bright / dark / beautiful eyes, have a big / small nose / mouth, wear glasses

Personalities:

active, outgoing, funny / humorous, talkative (健谈的), silent / quiet, shy, serious / strict, be easy to get on with

Hobbies:

be good at / do well in ..., be interested in ..., like / love / music / sports / ...

Explain how you feel about this teacher

friendly / kind / nice / caring / warm-hearted, helpful / be ready to help others, be patient with ..., responsible, energetic / full of energy, hard-working,

be regarded / considered as, one of the best / greatest / most popular teachers, set a good example, think highly of

Describe how this teacher has changed your life

encourages me to ... in English / ... class / always tells me, “Never give up! You can do it!” → become confident (自信的)

gives really clear instructions during ... class / guides me to do a lot better in English / ...

→ become interested in ...

helps me to work out the answers no matter how difficult they are → be brave to face difficulties

always takes the time to explain it to me clearly whenever I can’t understand anything

→ be determined (决心) to learn

句型

1. A person I will never forget is ...

2. ... is popular among the students because ... 3. I (still) remember doing / that ...

4. ... told me to ... / that ...                        5. With his / her help, I become ...

6. Because of / Thanks to him / her, I ...            

7. ... is not only a(n) ... teacher but also a(n) ... friend.

8. ... is one of the best / greatest / most popular ... teachers I have ever met.

【谋篇布局】

【点评范文】

1. 内容：该短文描述了令作者难忘的一位体育老师，作者首先回忆了与老师的第一次见面并介绍了老师的外貌和对老师的印象，然后讲述了老师对自己的帮助以及影响。开头指出令作者难忘的人，结尾提到对其永不忘怀，首尾呼应，紧扣主题。

2. 语言：本文是写人的记叙文，用到一些有关人物外貌描写的表达，比如：tall, of medium build, short black hair, a round face, big bright eyes等。此外，描述对人物印象的表达，比如：full of energy, patient等，通过这些表达的运用使读者迅速抓住该人物的特点。