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What kind f persn is a healthy persn?
take exercise regularly keep a balanced dietbalance wrk and relaxatinkeep free frm unhealthy habits
hld a psitive attitude t lifehave a strng mindshare everything with friendsseek help when in truble
be healthy in bth bdy and mind keep free frm unhealthy habits
a truly healthy persn
physically healthy
mentally healthy
Task 1 Have a free talk abut a healthy persn.
Brainstrming
1. Why are peple addicted t smking?2. What harm des smking lead t?
Task 2 Brainstrm abut the causes and effects f smking.
A cigarette cntains nictine.
A language bank f causes f smking
becme physically addicted t nictinebecme accustmed t having nictine in the bdyfeel bad-tempered and painful withut nictinereach fr a cigarette autmaticallyhave a packet f cigarettes at hand
feel happier and mre relaxedlk grwn-up have a sense f fashinbe curius abut smkingbe encuraged by ther smkershave a friend wh is addicted t cigarettes
A language bank f effects f smking
Smking des terrible damage t yur heart and lung.Smkers becme unfit and unable t enjy sprts.Being addicted t smking has a bad effect n health.Smking can cause sme fires.Secnd-hand smke affects the health f nn-smkers.
Once ne is addicted t smking, it is tugh t quit.When the smker can’t get a cigarette, he feels terrible.Smking may have a harmful effect n their minds.Nictine can nt nly affect their memry but als weaken their learning ability.
Imagine yu are ging t a party where there are a few smkers arund yu. In grups, list suggestins that yu can make t persuade them nt t smke.
Wuld yu mind if yu dn’t smke?I wnder if yu can stp smking.
It wuld be a gd idea t smke in a special rm.Be careful t thrw yur cigarette end.Watch ut fr the lighted cigarette. Mind yur cigarette!
Dn’t frget t put ut the cigarette end.Why nt enjy the party rather than smke arund us?
Yu are nt allwed t smke here.Yu aren’t suppsed t smke any mre.
Ask fr permissin:Express warnings:Shw prhibitin:
Task 3 Grup grup.
Dear ...,Can yu help me please? My best friend has just started smking. I d nt like it and I tld her what I thught. She laughed at me and said that I was nt grwn-up enugh.Then she ffered me a cigarette and I felt s embarrassed and awkward. I did nt knw hw t refuse it. Please help me. I d nt want t start smking, but I d nt want t lse my best friend, either. Yurs sincerely,Li Xialei
Xialei’s prblems
Read this letter and imagine that yu are the adviser wh deal with students’ prblems. Write a letter t give Xialei sme helpful advice.
hld a different attitude t smking
Tip 1 Figure ut the prblems listed in the letter in a lgic way.
feel embarrassed
She laughed at me and said that I was nt grwn-up enugh
I d nt want t start smking
embarrassed and awkward
I d nt like it
Prblem 1 Xialei hlds a different attitude t smking s she feels embarrassed.
Task 4 List Xialei’s prblems mentined in her letter.
Dear ..., Can yu help me please? My best friend has just started smking. I d nt like it and I tld her what I thught. She laughed at me and said that I was nt grwn-up enugh.Then she ffered me a cigarette and I felt s embarrassed and awkward. I did nt knw hw t refuse it. Please help me. I d nt want t start smking, but I d nt want t lse my best friend, either. Yurs sincerely,Li Xialei
in a dilemma
lk frward t a lasting friendship
Prblem 2 Xialei lks frward t a lasting friendship s she was in a dilemma.
started smking.
Then she ffered me a cigarette and I felt s embarrassed and awkward. I did nt knw hw t refuse it.
I d nt want t lse my best friend
be hard t deal with
My best friend has just
Structure f a letter f advice
Respnd t her questins plitely.
Give suggestins t her questins respectively.
Express the hpes eagerly.
Dear Xialei,
Yurs sincerely,Ms. Wang
Yu wrte that yu are cncerned abut yur friend wh starts smking.Knwing yu are in a dilemma, I’m willing t ffer yu sme advice n hw t get alng well with yur friend.I understand yur terrible feeling caused by different attitudes t smking.
I will be very delighted if yu find my suggestins useful.I’m sure she will fllw yu, since yu are best friends.
Yur attitude t adlescent’s smkingYur advice n quitting smkingYur anticipatin f the friendship
Tip 2 Organize the ideas accrding t its structure in a clear way.
Task 5 Organize yur ideas clearly.
Practice and share varius suggestins
Tip 3 List yur suggestins with a variety f patterns.
I recmmend that yu shuld talk t yur friend abut her behaviur. 2. There is n need fr yu t feel either embarrassed r awkward.3. It is unwise fr adlescents f yur age t be attracted t cigarettes. 4. Smking cigrattes is physically and mentally addictive, which affects the life greatly. 5. She may even find it tugh t quit smking nce she becmes addicted t it. 6. Yu are suppsed t tell her that yu are respnsible t her as well as t yurself. 7. Why nt discuss yur prblems with her rather than wrry abut them by yurself?
(I recmmend/ suggest/ advise that…)
(There is n need fr yu t …)
(It is wrng/ unwise/ unusual fr yu t…)
(cause, which result in/ lead t/ affect…)
(even/ als…)
(Yu are suppsed t …)
(Why nt… rather than…)
Task 6 Pay attentin t the diversity f the patterns f the fllwing sentences.
Cmpleteness
Adpt a plite tne.
Cver all the required pints.
Apply varius grammatical structures and expressins.
Diversity
Make few mistakes in grammar r vcabulary.
Use the cnjunctins between sentences.
Cntain a clear framewrk as a letter f advice.
Accmplish it within the limited wrds.
Evaluate yur writing
Tip 4 Revise yur writing based n the principles f a gd writing.
Task 8 Evaluate yur writing.
Dear Xialei, Yu wrte that yu are very wrried abut yur friend. I understand quite well yur terrible feelings. Yu think it unwise fr yur friend t start smking. I suggest that yu shuld talk t yur friend abut her behaviur. Adlescents f yur age are likely t be attracted t cigarettes. But smking is physically and mentally addictive, which affects her life greatly. She may even find it tugh t quit smking nce she becmes addicted t it. Persnally, yu needn’t feel embarrassed r awkward. Instead, yu are suppsed t encurage yur friend t give up smking. Why nt discuss the prblems tgether rather than upset yurself? I am sure she will understand yu and accept yur advice, since yu are best friends. Dn’t be discuraged. Gd luck and best wishes. Yurs sincerely, Ms. Wang
One pssible versin
1.Revise yur writing neatly again.2. Finish anther writing task. 假如你叫李华，你的好朋友Jane最近发现自己学习紧张，晚上难入睡。她写信问你如何改善这情况。请你给她写封回信，要点如下：1.要劳逸结合，适当锻炼； 2.健康饮食； 3.求助于老师。 字数100左右。
Write dwn what yu have learned abut “A letter f advice”.________________________________________________________________________________________________Write dwn yur prblems:________________________________________________________________________________________________
What kind f persn is a healthy persn?
take exercise regularly keep a balanced dietbalance wrk and relaxatinkeep free frm unhealthy habits
hld a psitive attitude t lifehave a strng mindshare everything with friendsseek help when in truble
be healthy in bth bdy and mind keep free frm unhealthy habits
a truly healthy persn
physically healthy
mentally healthy
Task 1 Have a free talk abut a healthy persn.
Brainstrming
1. Why are peple addicted t smking?2. What harm des smking lead t?
Task 2 Brainstrm abut the causes and effects f smking.
A cigarette cntains nictine.
A language bank f causes f smking
becme physically addicted t nictinebecme accustmed t having nictine in the bdyfeel bad-tempered and painful withut nictinereach fr a cigarette autmaticallyhave a packet f cigarettes at hand
feel happier and mre relaxedlk grwn-up have a sense f fashinbe curius abut smkingbe encuraged by ther smkershave a friend wh is addicted t cigarettes
A language bank f effects f smking
Smking des terrible damage t yur heart and lung.Smkers becme unfit and unable t enjy sprts.Being addicted t smking has a bad effect n health.Smking can cause sme fires.Secnd-hand smke affects the health f nn-smkers.
Once ne is addicted t smking, it is tugh t quit.When the smker can’t get a cigarette, he feels terrible.Smking may have a harmful effect n their minds.Nictine can nt nly affect their memry but als weaken their learning ability.
Imagine yu are ging t a party where there are a few smkers arund yu. In grups, list suggestins that yu can make t persuade them nt t smke.
Wuld yu mind if yu dn’t smke?I wnder if yu can stp smking.
It wuld be a gd idea t smke in a special rm.Be careful t thrw yur cigarette end.Watch ut fr the lighted cigarette. Mind yur cigarette!
Dn’t frget t put ut the cigarette end.Why nt enjy the party rather than smke arund us?
Yu are nt allwed t smke here.Yu aren’t suppsed t smke any mre.
Ask fr permissin:Express warnings:Shw prhibitin:
Task 3 Grup grup.
Dear ...,Can yu help me please? My best friend has just started smking. I d nt like it and I tld her what I thught. She laughed at me and said that I was nt grwn-up enugh.Then she ffered me a cigarette and I felt s embarrassed and awkward. I did nt knw hw t refuse it. Please help me. I d nt want t start smking, but I d nt want t lse my best friend, either. Yurs sincerely,Li Xialei
Xialei’s prblems
Read this letter and imagine that yu are the adviser wh deal with students’ prblems. Write a letter t give Xialei sme helpful advice.
hld a different attitude t smking
Tip 1 Figure ut the prblems listed in the letter in a lgic way.
feel embarrassed
She laughed at me and said that I was nt grwn-up enugh
I d nt want t start smking
embarrassed and awkward
I d nt like it
Prblem 1 Xialei hlds a different attitude t smking s she feels embarrassed.
Task 4 List Xialei’s prblems mentined in her letter.
Dear ..., Can yu help me please? My best friend has just started smking. I d nt like it and I tld her what I thught. She laughed at me and said that I was nt grwn-up enugh.Then she ffered me a cigarette and I felt s embarrassed and awkward. I did nt knw hw t refuse it. Please help me. I d nt want t start smking, but I d nt want t lse my best friend, either. Yurs sincerely,Li Xialei
in a dilemma
lk frward t a lasting friendship
Prblem 2 Xialei lks frward t a lasting friendship s she was in a dilemma.
started smking.
Then she ffered me a cigarette and I felt s embarrassed and awkward. I did nt knw hw t refuse it.
I d nt want t lse my best friend
be hard t deal with
My best friend has just
Structure f a letter f advice
Respnd t her questins plitely.
Give suggestins t her questins respectively.
Express the hpes eagerly.
Dear Xialei,
Yurs sincerely,Ms. Wang
Yu wrte that yu are cncerned abut yur friend wh starts smking.Knwing yu are in a dilemma, I’m willing t ffer yu sme advice n hw t get alng well with yur friend.I understand yur terrible feeling caused by different attitudes t smking.
I will be very delighted if yu find my suggestins useful.I’m sure she will fllw yu, since yu are best friends.
Yur attitude t adlescent’s smkingYur advice n quitting smkingYur anticipatin f the friendship
Tip 2 Organize the ideas accrding t its structure in a clear way.
Task 5 Organize yur ideas clearly.
Practice and share varius suggestins
Tip 3 List yur suggestins with a variety f patterns.
I recmmend that yu shuld talk t yur friend abut her behaviur. 2. There is n need fr yu t feel either embarrassed r awkward.3. It is unwise fr adlescents f yur age t be attracted t cigarettes. 4. Smking cigrattes is physically and mentally addictive, which affects the life greatly. 5. She may even find it tugh t quit smking nce she becmes addicted t it. 6. Yu are suppsed t tell her that yu are respnsible t her as well as t yurself. 7. Why nt discuss yur prblems with her rather than wrry abut them by yurself?
(I recmmend/ suggest/ advise that…)
(There is n need fr yu t …)
(It is wrng/ unwise/ unusual fr yu t…)
(cause, which result in/ lead t/ affect…)
(even/ als…)
(Yu are suppsed t …)
(Why nt… rather than…)
Task 6 Pay attentin t the diversity f the patterns f the fllwing sentences.
Cmpleteness
Adpt a plite tne.
Cver all the required pints.
Apply varius grammatical structures and expressins.
Diversity
Make few mistakes in grammar r vcabulary.
Use the cnjunctins between sentences.
Cntain a clear framewrk as a letter f advice.
Accmplish it within the limited wrds.
Evaluate yur writing
Tip 4 Revise yur writing based n the principles f a gd writing.
Task 8 Evaluate yur writing.
Dear Xialei, Yu wrte that yu are very wrried abut yur friend. I understand quite well yur terrible feelings. Yu think it unwise fr yur friend t start smking. I suggest that yu shuld talk t yur friend abut her behaviur. Adlescents f yur age are likely t be attracted t cigarettes. But smking is physically and mentally addictive, which affects her life greatly. She may even find it tugh t quit smking nce she becmes addicted t it. Persnally, yu needn’t feel embarrassed r awkward. Instead, yu are suppsed t encurage yur friend t give up smking. Why nt discuss the prblems tgether rather than upset yurself? I am sure she will understand yu and accept yur advice, since yu are best friends. Dn’t be discuraged. Gd luck and best wishes. Yurs sincerely, Ms. Wang
One pssible versin
1.Revise yur writing neatly again.2. Finish anther writing task. 假如你叫李华，你的好朋友Jane最近发现自己学习紧张，晚上难入睡。她写信问你如何改善这情况。请你给她写封回信，要点如下：1.要劳逸结合，适当锻炼； 2.健康饮食； 3.求助于老师。 字数100左右。
Write dwn what yu have learned abut “A letter f advice”.________________________________________________________________________________________________Write dwn yur prblems:________________________________________________________________________________________________
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