(新高考)高考英语二轮复习讲义第3部分 书面表达 层级2+第1讲　使用亮点词汇 (含答案)

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第1讲　使用亮点词汇

请用亮点词汇替换下列句子中的黑体部分。

1．As high school students, we should be neatly dressed when at school.

 are supposed to

2．The teacher directed the gifted students towards the more difficult courses.challenging

3．I sincerely hope that you will consider my suggestions.

take my suggestions into account

4．Our class thought of the idea of how to take advantage of used materials.came up with

5．We should try to improve ourselves through learning and prepare for the future.              take pains; get prepared

6．I want to tell you something about my plan for the summer vacation and I'd like you to help me.              do me a favor/lend me a hand

7．Cinemas have gradually given way to the rise of the Internet and cell phones, and the ticket price is increasing.              on the increase/rise

8．When you are bored with the people around, you'd better find a quiet place, listening to some classical music.              fed up with

一篇高考作文在阅卷时往往在1分钟内就被判定优劣；大众化的词汇、平庸的表达已使长时间工作的阅卷老师产生了视觉疲劳。如果一篇作文中突然出现几个与众不同、让人眼前一亮的词汇，老师的给分也绝不会吝啬！

一、使用亮点词汇的4种方法

1．“语”众不同，避免人云亦云

写作时恰当得体地使用别人可能想不到的词汇或表达，会给阅卷人耳目一新的感觉。

①I am Li Hua，a student studying in London, who is very glad to be informed of the message that there will be a Chinese painting exhibition in your local art gallery.

→I am Li Hua，a student studying in London, who is more than thrilled to be informed of the message that there will be a Chinese painting exhibition in your local art gallery.

②In order to provide the students with a wonderful match, we need to have enough training.

→In order to provide the students with a fantastic match, we need to have enough training.

③Obviously，blindly following others' advice will affect our own judgment.

→Apparently，blindly following others' advice will affect our own judgment.

2．多种表达，避免重复

写作时应尽量避免重复使用相同的词语，要用贴切多样的词语来展示自己的水平。用词不同、表达方式迥异，也是高级用法。

①Summer in these cities is hot and rainy, so take summer clothes with an umbrella with you.

→Summer in these cities is hot and rainy, so take summer clothes plus an umbrella with you.

②First of all, you should arrive on time because it is good manners to be on time in China.

→First of all, you should arrive on time because it is good manners to be punctual in China.

3．单词短语巧妙使用

一般情况下短语优先，应多使用词组、习语来代替单词，以增加文采。但有时单词比短语更生动，可以“一词传神”。

①This is a friendly game, so we should remember the principle of friendship first.

→This is a friendly game, so we should keep in mind the principle of friendship first.

②We can look at this problem in many ways.

→We can view this problem in many ways.(view比look at更有内涵)

4．用高年级学到的词汇替代低年级学到的词汇

①Firstly, this is exactly what the British visitors are expecting.

→Firstly, this is precisely what the British visitors are expecting.

②Second, I am trying my best to get the important knowledge and skills concerning my position.

→Second, I am sparing no effort to acquire the essential knowledge and skills concerning my position.

二、高分必备的24个亮点词汇

①We will try our best to develop the traditional friendship between us.

→We will try our best to promote the traditional friendship between us.

②Finally your child will leave home to lead her own life as a fully independent adult.

→Eventually your child will leave home to lead her own life as a fully independent adult.

请用亮点词汇替换下面作文中的加黑部分并背诵。

Dear Jason，

I'm very happy to hear from you and know about your beautiful home city London.Now I'd like to tell you something about my hometown Quanzhou.

Quanzhou is a beautiful place for people to live in.Its economy has been developing fast during the past ten years.New bridges and roads have been built, high­rise buildings standing in many parts of the city.More and more schools and hospitals are useful for the native people.It is developing into a modern and beautiful city.But there are still some problems, such as heavy traffic in rush hours and serious air pollution, which have a bad effect on people's daily life.I think Quanzhou should develop healthily and scientifically so that we could have a better hometown in the future.

Yours，

Li Ming

[答案]　

1．very→more than　2．fast→rapidly　3．built→set up　4．More and more→An increasing number of　5．useful→available　6．Beautiful →charming　7．But→However  8．serious→severe　9．effect→ influence/impact　10．I think→In my opinion/As far as I am concerned