2020-2022年全国中考英语3年真题汇编 专题50 咨询建议类 +答案解析

这是一份2020-2022年全国中考英语3年真题汇编 专题50 咨询建议类 +答案解析，共102页。

专题50 书面表达—咨询建议类

【2022年】

（一）（2022·浙江金华·中考真题）
假如你是Li Hua，你的外国好友Frank来信告知他将成为你校七年级新生。请根据下列表格中的内容，结合自己初中阶段学习、生活等方面的经历，回一封邮件，供他参考。
注意：1. 文中必须包含所给的内容要点，可适当发挥；参考词汇供选择使用；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；
3. 词数：80~100；
4. 邮件的格式及正文首句已给出，不计入总词数；正文首句仅供选择使用。
正文首句： I’m glad to know you’re coming to study in our school.
内容要点
参考词汇
Things needed
notebook, dictionary,…
Attitude（态度）to take
hard-working, active, happy,…
Relationship to develop
respect, get along with,…
Others
…

Dear Frank,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Frank,
I’m glad to know you’re coming to study in our school. Here is something I’d like to share.
To begin with, you need to prepare some notebooks and dictionaries, especially a Chinese one, because you will often need them in your study. As a student, you have to work hard. But whatever happens, stay active, even when you fail.
And respect the teachers as it’s a Chinese tradition. Besides, you will be happier if you get on well with your classmates. Lastly, it is a good idea to develop some hobbies to make your life better and more colourful.
I hope my advice will work. Looking forward to seeing you!
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文要求根据题干表格中的内容给Frank写封邮件，告知他在中国学习的一些注意事项，可适当增加细节。
2.写作指导：本文以一般现在时为主，人称以第二人称为主。第一段引入话题；第二段和第三段根据表格中的提示详细告知他在中国学习时需要注意的事项；第四段表达自己的希望。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。




（二）（2022·四川南充·中考真题）
假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Tracy的学校即将开设特色选修课程，她正在考虑是否选修汉语，来信询问你的建议。请你根据所给提示给她写封回信。
要点：
（1）给出你的建议；
（2）谈谈学习汉语的重要性；
（3）结合自身经历，介绍至少2种学习汉语的方法。
要求：
1.必须包含所给要点，可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；
3.文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名；
4.词数100左右(开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数)。
Dear Tracy,
I’m so glad to hear from you. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope my advice can help you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Tracy,
I’m so glad to hear from you. Knowing you have an interest in Chinese, I suggest you choose the Chinese course. With the development of China, Chinese is becoming more and more popular. Learning Chinese is not only a way to communicate, but also a chance to admire Chinese culture.
As a Chinese, I have been learning Chinese for many years. I have much experience to share with you. In my opinion, there are many ways to learn Chinese. It’s useful to read Chinese books and listen to Chinese songs. What’s more, you are supposed to join a Chinese club to practice your spoken Chinese. Learning is a lifelong journey. Keep practicing every day, then it will bring something new.
I hope my advice can help you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。针对Tracy是否选修汉语给出建议，谈谈学习汉语的重要性并给出学习汉语的方法。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一和第二人称来行文，时态以一般现在时为主。作文可分为三段，第一段给出建议，是否应该选修汉语以及学习汉语的重要性；第二段结合自身经历，介绍学习汉语的方法；第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。



（三）（2022·浙江绍兴·中考真题）
假设你是刘军，在上周末的乡村旅游中，你发现了一些游客的不文明行为。请根据下表信息给某英文报VOICE栏目的编辑写一封邮件，反映这些问题并提出建议。
Uncivilized behaviors
Suggestions
● threw rubbish everywhere
● picked flowers
● climbed trees
● put rubbish into bins
● …

注意：
（1）邮件内容必须包括上表所有信息，可适当增加细节；
（2）你的建议至少两条；
（3）词数：80—100；
（4）邮件开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：不文明行为uncivilized behavior；编辑editor
Dear editor,I was shocked to see some uncivilized behaviors when I took a trip to a village last weekend. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Liu Jun
【答案】例文

Dear editor,
I was shocked to see some uncivilized behaviors when I took a trip to a village last weekend. Some visitors threw rubbish everywhere and left plastic bags flying around. Some picked flowers without permission to take photos so that they could show off online. And some climbed trees for fun, which might result in serious accidents.
I think it wrong to enjoy oneself at the cost of others. Visitors are supposed to protect the environment, like putting rubbish into proper bins. And they should be careful not to cause trouble to the locals and keep away from danger. In this way, a greener, cleaner and more civilized new village will be there for us all to enjoy.
Yours sincerely
Liu Jun
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文主要以题干表格中的内容讲述一些游客的不文明行为并提出相关的建议，可适当增加细节。
2.写作指导：本文以一般过去时和一般现在时为主，人称以第三人称为主。第一段主要描述自己发现的游客的一些不文明行为；第二段提出自己的建议。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。


（四）（2022·浙江温州·中考真题）
假如你是陈华，你的英国朋友Tracy在她学校成立了中国音乐社，她在为社团成员安排下学期的活动，写邮件征求你的意见。请根据她设计的活动（见下表）回复邮件，提出你对这些活动的看法和理由，并为她补充至少一项活动。
Activities for the Chinese music club•Listen to traditional and modern Chinese music.
•Share stories of Chinese singers.

注意：(1)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；
(2)词数：110词左右；开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Tracy,Glad to hear from you. It’s great to know you’ve got a Chinese music club in your school.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Hope you’ll enjoy Chinese music and have fun.
Yours,
Chen Hua
【答案】例文：
Dear Tracy,
Glad to hear from you. It’s great to know you’ve got a Chinese music club in your school.
Listening to traditional and modern Chinese music is a good way for the club members to know more about Chinese music, because they can experience the beauty of Chinese music personally. Sharing stories of Chinese singers can help them better understand the background of the songs, so it’s surely a meaningful activity.
Besides, you can introduce various Chinese instruments to the club members in different ways. There are many traditional musical instruments in China different from those in western countries. They can learn about Chinese culture through these instruments.
Hope you’ll enjoy Chinese music and have fun.
Yours,
Chen Hua
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：题目要求根据Tracy为中国音乐社所设计的活动来回复邮件，要提出你对这些活动的看法及理由，并补充一项适合该社团的活动。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第三人称为主，时态采用一般现在时。邮件正文可采用四段式：第一段用已给出开头引出话题；第二段给出自己对Tracy设计的活动的看法及理由；第三段补充合适的社团活动；第四段用已给出的结尾收尾。要做到无单词拼写和语法错误。


（五）（2022·湖北随州·中考真题）
“双减”之后，为了引导学生合理利用周末时间，最近你校开展了“如何让周末生活更有意义”的征文活动。请你从体育运动、家务劳动和社会活动三方面，用英语写一篇短文投稿，提出你的建议和看法。
写作要求：1.短文必须包含以上三方面的内容，并适当发挥；
2.词数：80词左右；（文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）
3.文中不得出现真实姓名及校名。
Nowadays, we students have some free time on weekends, but how can we make our weekends more meaningful? Here are my suggestions.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
In a word, let’s try to plan free time well and make our weekends more meaningful.
【答案】[例文]
Nowadays, we students have some free time on weekends, but how can we make our weekends more meaningful? Here are my suggestions.
Firstly, we can take part in many sports activities. Boys can play basketball, football and so on. Girls can go swimming, skating, or mountain climbing. These sports are good for our health. Secondly, when we are at home on weekends, we can help our parents do housework, such as sweeping the floor, washing dishes. Finally, we can also join in some useful social activities. For example, we can go to the nursing home to help the old do things and clean the park.
In a word, let’s try to plan free time well and make our weekends more meaningful.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，从体育运动、家务劳动和社会活动三方面写一篇作文关于如何让周末生活更有意义。
2.写作指导：本文时态采用一般现在时行文。人称以第一人称为主。写作时可用过渡词Firstly，Secondly，Finally连接三个要点。最后确保行文连贯，语句通顺，无单词语法错误。


（六）（2022·江苏连云港·中考真题）
“双减”之后，如何让我们的暑假生活过得快乐而有意义？请你根据以下图片及文字提示，以“Happy Summer Vacation”为题给校报英语专栏写一篇短文，为同学们提供一些建议并说明理由。

注意：
（1）词数90左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）文中应包括所给内容要点，可适当发挥，使文章连贯；
（3）文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。
Happy Summer Vacation
The summer vacation is coming. With more free time, how can we have a happy and meaningful vacation? Here is my advice.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Happy Summer Vacation
The summer vacation is coming. With more free time, how can we have a happy and meaningful vacation? Here is my advice.
First, we can do some sports. We can go running every morning. It can help us keep healthy. Besides, we can do some housework at home. It’s necessary for us to learn some life skills and look after ourselves. What’s more, we need to read some books. Reading helps improve our knowledge and opens up a whole new world to us. We can also join some clubs, such as the Singing Club or the Dancing Club. It can help us develop our hobbies.
I hope you can have a colourful vacation.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“Happy Summer Vacation”为题，结合提示内容进行写作，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来行文，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段从运动，做家务，阅读和参加俱乐部四方面给出建议；第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。

（七）（2022·安徽·中考真题）
假定你是李辉。你的英国朋友Mike想阅读中国经典名著。请你写封邮件，向他推荐《西游记》。要点如下：
1.风趣幽默，深受喜爱；
2.团队合作，历险克难；
3.追逐梦想，永不言弃。
注意：
1.词数80～100；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：character（n.人物）；overcome（v.克服）
Dear Mike,
Since you want to read Chinese classic works, I’d like to recommend Journey to the West to you. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hui
【答案】例文
Dear Mike,
Since you want to read Chinese classic works, I’d like to recommend Journey to the West to you.
The book Journey to the West was written by Wu Cheng’en during the Ming dynasty. It tells a story about the Tang monk Xuanzang and his three disciples. The book is humorous and well received. In the book, the four main characters show teamwork as they overcame numerous difficulties. Finally, they attained the true Buddhist scriptures. This story tells us to chase our dreams and never give up.
You are bound to enjoy yourself while reading the novel and you can share with me your opinions whenever you like.
Yours,
Li Hui
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇邮件作文。要求根据提示内容，向Mike介绍《西游记》这本书。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第三人称来介绍，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段详细介绍这本书的内容以及想表达的哲理；第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。


（八）（2022·湖北武汉·中考真题）
假如你是李欣，你与Bob叔叔及其家人约定了一起去北京旅行。请你给Bob叔叔写一封英文电子邮件，告知你的旅行安排。
内容要点如下：
1. 6月30日下午2:00机场见；
2. 酒店已预订好，直接前往；
3. 第二天观看升旗仪式；
4. 游长城，吃北京烤鸭；
5. 补充一两点与旅行有关的信息或想法。
注意：文中不得透露个人真实姓名和学校；词数60—80；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：book v. 预订     directly adv. 直接地     flag-raising ceremony 升旗仪式

【答案】例文：
Dear Uncle Bob,
I’m so glad to hear from you about visiting Beijing. Here’s the trip plan. We’ll meet at the airport at 2 p.m. on June 30th. We can go to the hotel directly to have a rest as I’ve already booked the rooms. The next day we’ll watch the flag-raising ceremony at Tian’anmen Square early in the morning. It must be amazing! What about the Great Wall? It’s worth visiting and you’ll be impressed. As for dinner, we’ll have the delicious food, Beijing duck. Honestly, I am getting excited about the trip.
Look forward to meeting all of you in Beijing.
Li Xin
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：题目要求根据内容要点及参考词汇给Bob叔叔回一封邮件，告知Bob叔叔自己对旅行的安排。
2.写作指导：邮件的开头和结尾已给出，写作时要补全正文内容，要以第一人称为主，时态多用一般将来时。邮件可分为两段式：第一段介绍具体的计划；第二段表达自己的期待。要做到要点齐全，无单词拼写和语法错误。





（九）（2022·江苏宿迁·中考真题）
实施“双减”政策，推行“阳光作业”，我们同学可以从繁重的课业负担中解放出来，有更多的时间培养兴趣爱好，陪伴家人、朋友。学校请你与学弟、学妹们分享如何合理安排课余生活，请根据下表提示完成一篇题为“Enjoy study, enjoy life”的英语短文。
Enjoy study, enjoy life
校园
1.参加各种活动，如：绘画、舞蹈等；
2.多做运动，有益健康；
3.……（补充一点）
家庭
1.畅说梦想，倾诉烦恼；
2.帮做家务，学会一些生活技能；
3.……（补充一点）

注意事项：
1.词数90左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2.文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。Enjoy study, enjoy life
Because of the “double reduction” policy, we have more time to do what we like to enjoy study and life.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
In a word, if we spend our free time properly, we will get a lot in both body and mind.
【答案】例文
Enjoy study, enjoy life
Because of the “double reduction” policy, we have more time to do what we like to enjoy study and life.
In school, we should actively participate in various activities, such as painting, dancing, football, etc. Through these sports, we can make our bodies healthier and stronger. If students have difficulties, we should also actively help them.
At home, we should live in peace with our parents. We should talk about our dreams with them and talk about our troubles in time. Let parents know everything about us. With their support, we will get twice the result with half the effort. At the same time, we should also help our parents do some housework and learn some life skills. If you are in a bad mood, you can listen to some music or do something you like.
In a word, if we spend our free time properly, we will get a lot in both body and mind.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文以“Enjoy study, enjoy life”为题介绍如何合理安排课余生活，可适当增加细节。
2.写作指导：本文以一般现在时为主，人称以第一人称为主。第一段已给出；第二段介绍在学校的安排；第三段描述在家里的生活。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。


（十）（2022·四川自贡·中考真题）
假定你是李华。你的英国朋友Mike来信说他在人际交往方面感到迷茫，希望得到你的帮助。请写封回信，内容包括：
1. 表示理解和安慰；
2. 建议：正确认识自己的不足；处理好和父母的关系；处理好与同学、朋友之间的关系；
3. 表达祝愿。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mike,
How’s everything going? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Mike,
How’s everything going? I’m sorry to hear that you have difficulty getting along with others. It’s common to have the feeling. Take it easy. I’ll give you some advice.
       First, you should get a thorough understanding of yourself: aware of your strength and shortage. Second, you should communicate with your parents. Tell them your feelings so that they will understand you better. Third, you can take part in some activities with your classmates. It will help you find more about your classmates and they can learn more about you too. Then you can become friends.
       I hope these suggestions can help you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。针对Mike交友方面的问题提出合理的建议。
2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时，人称以第二人称和第三人称为主。分为三段式：第一段表达安慰和理解；第二段根据提示材料提出合理的建议；最后一段表达祝愿。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。




【2021年】
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（2021·湖北宜昌市·中考真题）
假如你是国际学校的学生李华，学校正在为一年一度的艺术节招募表演者和志愿服务者。请你根据自己的意愿，给负责人Mr. Smith写一封邮件推荐自己，并为学校艺术节提出 1～2 条合理建议。内容包括：
● 意愿及理由
● 具体打算
● 合理建议
要求∶
1. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;
2. 词数80词左右，开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mr. Smith,
I’m writing to tell you what I want to do for the art festival. ________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Look forward to your reply soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Mr. Smith,
I’m writing to tell you what I want to do for the art festival.
First, I want to recommend myself to take part in the activity. I want to be a volunteer. I am kind and outgoing. I often volunteer to join in some activities like talent shows. Second, I want to share my plans with you. I will keep order, and clean the school hall after the activity. Finally, I want to give my suggestions about the activity. At the beginning of the activity, we should decorate the school hall. At the end of the activity, we volunteers and players should take photos together.
Look forward to your reply soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。给艺术节的负责人Mr. Smith写一封邮件推荐自己。
2.写作指导：本文主要采用一般将来时和一般现在时。分为三段式：第一段引出出题；第二段描述自荐的理由；具体打算以及合理建议；第三段表达期待对方的回信。写作时保持主谓一致性，逻辑性要强，无语法和标点错误。
B
（2021·四川广安市·中考真题）
习近平主席在全国教育大会上强调, 中学生要做德智体美劳全面发展的社会主义建设者和接班人。某中学正在开展“做一名新时代的合格中学生”活动。假如你是学生会的李扬，请根据以下要点，向全校同学写一篇倡议书。
要点提示∶
1. 爱国，爱家，诚信，友好；
2. 努力学习，实现梦想；
3. 参加体育锻炼，保持身心健康；
4. 热爱大自然，护环境，与动物和谐相处；
5. 积极参加各种活动，如打扫教室，帮助父母做家务等。
要求∶
1. 字迹工整，书写规范，含全部要点，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实的学校、班级名称；
3. 80 词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
4. 请将书面表达内容写在答题卡上的相应位置。
参考词汇∶ keep one’s promise（守信）, nature（自然）, environment（环境）, get on well with（和谐相处）, take an active part in（积极参加）
Dear schoolmates,
I am Li Yang from the Students’ Union. We’re having an activity of being a good student. ________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】
Dear schoolmates.
I am Li Yang from the Students’ Union. We’re having an activity of being a good student. First of all, we must love our country and home. We should be honest and keep our promise. And we should also be friendly to the people around us. Secondly, it’s our duty to study hard, and we should try our best to achieve our dreams. Next, taking exercise can make us keep healthy. After that, we are supposed to show love to nature and protect the environment. Animals are our friends, so we should get on well with them. What’s more, we should get into the habit of taking an active part in all kinds of activities, such as tidying up the classroom and helping our parents with housework.
Come on! I believe we can make it.
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。根据所给要点提示围绕“如何做一名新时代的合格中学生”写一篇倡议书。
2.写作指导：本文主要采用一般现在时，第一人称。第一段根据所给的提示要点，告诉学生们如何做一名合格的中学生，给出建议，；第二段呼吁同学们赶快行动起来。写作时保持主谓一致性，逻辑性要强，无语法和标点错误。
C
（2021·四川达州市·中考真题）
亲爱的同学：本堂英语测试完之后，三年的初中学习生活就结束了。请你以“How to learn English”为题写一篇英语短文，把你三年来的英语学习经验介绍给下一届的初一同学，说说英语学习的重要性、谈谈你是如何学习英语的、以及你对他们学习英语的建议。
参考词语：important, as much as possible, write down
提示问题：●Why do you learn English?
● How do you learn English?
● What is your advice to them?
要求：
1、卷面整洁（无污迹），书写工整（有美感）。
2、条理清楚，句式规范。全文词数80词左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
3、内容尽量包括提示信息，可适当发挥；文中不得出现个人真实信息。
How to learn English
Dear younger sisters and brothers, as we all know, English is used very widely in the world. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
How to learn English
Dear younger sisters and brothers, as we all know, English is used very widely in the world. How can we learn it well? Here are my suggestions.
First, we should often listen to the tapes, English songs and programs. Watching English movies is also helpful to us. Second, we should speak English in class as much as possible. Don’t be afraid of making mistakes. The more you speak, the fewer mistakes you’ll make. We’d better join the English club and practice with others. Third, we can read more English newspapers and magazines. It’s good for us. At last, we should recite some good passages and keep diaries.
In a word, as long as we do more listening, speaking, reading and writing, we will learn English well.
【详解】
1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示词语和问题，写出自己学习英语的方法以及建议等，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导：写作时要与已给出的开头融合起来，用第一人称和其他人称相结合来写作，时态以一般现在时为主，提出建议可以多用情态动词，要做到要点齐全，无单词拼写和语法错误。
D
（2021·山东泰安市·中考真题）
暑假将近，很多人已经开始计划外出旅游了。假定你是李华，请根据以下图示，以“To Be a Good Traveler”为题，给校报专栏写一篇英语短文，倡导“绿色旅游”和“公益旅游”，呼吁同学们做有环保意识和社会责任感的旅行者。

要求:语句通顺,意思连贯,可根据提示适当发挥；词数:80~100；文中不得出现姓名,校名,地名等与考生本人相关的真实信息。
To Be a Good Traveler
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】
To Be a Good Traveler
The summer holiday is coming. To make everyone have a good trip, I want to talk about how to be a good traveler. First, you should ride your bike to travel as much as possible. It’s good for the environment. Second, it’s not good to write or draw on any things in the sights. And it’s impolite to spit in public places. Third, please protect the environment. You shouldn’t pick up the flowers or walk on the grass. Fourth, you should take part in volunteer activities. What’s more, don’t waste food. You’d better eat up the food you order.
If you follow the tips above, you can become a good traveler.
【详解】
1.题干解读：该题目属于说明文写作，但写作时要根据图示提示的内容，倡导“绿色旅游”和“公益旅游”，内容包括绿色出行、爱护环境、公益随行和适当消费等。
2.写作指导：本文应用第二人称为主来介绍内容；时态采用一般现在时；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容全面，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。
E
（2021·重庆中考真题）
新冠疫情提醒人们更加重视健康。越来越多的人通过运动来保持健康，但是运动安全也不容小觑。请你给校报的英语栏目English Corner投稿，号召同学们重视运动安全。
要求：
1.80-120词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
参考信息：
1.运动安全的现状和重要性；
2.运动安全的建议（着装、热身、规则……）；
3.…….
参考词汇：热身运动 warming-up exercise
COVID-19 has taught us to pay more attention to our health________________________________________
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【答案】
COVID-19 has taught us to pay more attention to our health. Today I want to talk about sports safety.
Sports safety is of great importance in our daily life. Nowadays, students pay less attention to sports safety. So there are all kinds of accidents that happen at schools. We do exercise because it can improve our physical fitness and health. To keep safe can ensure that we can better achieve the goals of sports.
When we exercise, we should do enough warming-up activities. We should wear comfortable and suitable clothes. We should adopt the right way of rest, pay attention to the reasonable diet and health care.
We should exercise to keep healthy, and we should also pay attention to sports safety.
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据提示内容，介绍运动安全的相关问题。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来介绍，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为四段，第一段引出话题；第二段介绍运动安全的现状和重要性；第三段给出运动安全的建议；第四段收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
F
（2021·重庆中考真题）
教育部近日印发通知，要求控制中小学生的书面作业总量，合理布置不同类型的作业。为此，某英文杂志社正在开展以 “My Creative English Homework”为主题的征文活动。请你写一篇征文，讲述自身经历，提出合理建议。
要求：1. 80-120词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
参考信息：1. 做过的最有创意的英语作业（内容、收获……）；
2. 更多有创意的英语作业建议（形式、理由……）；
3. ……

My Creative English Homework
Doing English homework helps us to practice and use what we’ve learned in class.____________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
My Creative English Homework
Doing English homework helps us to practice and use what we’ve learned in class. Doing creative homework makes us more interested in English.
Once our teacher asked us to write a letter to a foreigner. We were told to introduce the Spring Festival in the letter. It not only helped me improve my written skills but also provided a good chance to spread Chinese traditional culture.
In my opinion, it’s also a good choice to draw mind maps. It helps us to have a better understanding of the lessons. Besides, we can learn to sing English songs, since most of us love singing. In this way, our English as well as hobbies develop.
I hope we’ll have more creative English homework in the future.
【详解】
1.题干解读：这是一篇材料作文，要求根据所给的参考信息以 “My Creative English Homework”为题写一篇征文，从自身经历来谈谈自己的有创意的英语作业，并提出合理的建议。注意要点齐全。
2.写作指导：审题可知，本文写自身经历时用一般过去时，提建议时可采用一般现在时，人称主要以第一、三人称交替使用。文章开头已给出，第一段点题；第二段写自身经历，第三段提出建议；第四段总结。写作中可使用亮点词汇和句型为文章增添色彩，如：not only...but also...，It固定句型等。注意保证上下文语句通顺，条理清晰，文中无单词和语法上的错误。
G
（2021·山东德州市·中考真题）
世界卫生组织和联合国儿童基金会将生活技能（life skills）作为全球青少年儿童发展的重要主题之一。请根据图中提示写一篇英语短文，描述作为青少年, 你们应提高哪些及如何提高自己的生活技能。除了提示中的内容，请你至少再补充一条。
要求：
1. 语言通顺，要点齐全，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称；
3. 80~100词，文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Life skills are necessary for us. What life skills should we teenagers develop? And how? Here is my opinion.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
All in all, if we try our best to improve these life skills, we will lead a happier, and healthier life.
【答案】
Life skills are necessary for us. What life skills should we teenagers develop? And how? Here is my opinion.
First, we should try our best to keep healthy. It’s a good idea to keep a balanced diet and take daily exercise. And be happy every day.
Second, working with others is important. Sometimes, we need to work as a team. When we communicate with others, try to understand them.
Third, solve problems in different ways. We are able to find out the problem, find solutions alone or with others and then solve it.
Besides, learn to manage time. We can make a list of things to do every morning. Get up early and never be late for school.
Finally, learn some basic skills, such as cooking. We can ask family for help or search the Internet. Then practice making some dishes.
All in all, if we try our best to improve these life skills, we will lead a happier, and healthier life.
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇看图作文。围绕青少年应提高哪些生活技能来写一篇短文。
2.写作指导：本文主要采用第一人称，时态采用一般现在时。第一段引出主题；第二段至第六段描述青少年应提高哪些生活技能，以及如何提高这些生活技能；最后一段总结概括。写作时保持主谓一致性，逻辑性要强，无语法和标点错误。
【2020年】
2020年中考真题英语分项汇编
专题21 书面表达
考点3 咨询建议类
（一）【2020•山东省泰安市】
52.新冠肺炎疫情期间，很多年轻人喜欢上了网上点餐服务。这种订餐方式使人们的生活更加方便快捷，丰富多彩，但同时也存在着不少的弊端。请根据以下思维导图及要求写一篇英语短文，谈谈网上点餐的利与弊，并阐述你的看法和建议。

要求：
（1）语句通顺，意思连贯，可根据提示适当发挥；
（2）词数：80~100（文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
（3）文中不得出现学校姓名、地名等与考生本人相关的任何信息。
参考词汇：网上点餐order food online；减少外出reduce going out；规避风险avoid risks；塑料包装plastic packages
With the outbreak of COVID-19, many young people prefer ordering food online.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【写作思路】
本文是一篇材料作文，新冠肺炎疫情期间，很多年轻人喜欢上了网上点餐服务。这种订餐方式使人们的生活更加方便快捷，丰富多彩，但同时也存在着不少的弊端。要求根据所给出思维导图及要求写一篇英语短文，谈谈网上点餐的利与弊，并阐述自己的看法和建议。首先要认真审题，根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。
【参考范文】
With the outbreak of COVID-19, many young people prefer ordering food online.
It’s true that ordering food online has many advantages. First of all, it is convenient and can save time. Besides, we can get all kinds of delicious food by shopping online. We can reduce going out. The most important thing is that the food online is always cheaper. However, there are some problems with ordering food online. The quality of the food seems not as good as it is promised. The plastic packages will pollute the environment. In the way, eating habits are not healthy. In addition, it is not good to improve our independence.
In my opinion, ordering food online should only be used when needed. That’s to say, you may buy things you can’t find in local markets. Besides, people should never rely too much on the Internet.
【名师点评】
1.例文点评：本文紧扣题目要点，内容完整，表述准确，语言的表述符合语法的结构，造句符合英语的表达习惯。而且还使用了一些较好的句式，为文章增添了不少色彩。
2.高分亮点：
短语：First of all，all kinds of，not as…as，in local，too much，on the Internet。
句型：It’s true that ordering food online has many advantages. 的确，网上订餐有很多优势。that引导宾语从句。
The quality of the food seems not as good as it is promised. 这食物的质量似乎没有它所承诺的那么好。not as…as…不如……，是原级比较。
（二）【2020•四川省达州市】

76.
近年来，全球自然灾害频发，极端天气频频出现，2020年新冠肺炎几乎在全球爆发，环境恶化给全球带来的危害正日益凸显。尽管我国政府出台了一系列环境保护方面的政策，采取了很多措施，成效也很显著，但是，我们还需要付出更多的努力。地球是人类共同的家园，时代的一粒灰， 落在个人头上就是一座山，没有人能独善其身。假如你叫李华，作为达州的学生，应该为环境保护做出哪些贡献呢?请以 “Let’s try our best to protect the environment”为题，向达州的学生发出倡议，呼吁大家从小事做起，尽最大的努力保护环境!
写作要点:
（1）了解并让更多的人知道环境保护的重要性；
（2）在日常生活中节约用水，节约能源；
（3）为了减少空气污染，最好乘坐公交车、骑自行车或步行上学；
（4）学会垃圾分类:少用塑料袋。
（5）保护野生动物，不食用野生动物。
写作要求:
（1）要点齐全并适当发挥。
（2）全文字数不少于90词。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
（3）条理清楚，句式规范，标点符号和大小写使用正确。
（4）卷面整洁。
参考词汇；（1） reduce v.减少 （2） sort garbage 垃圾分类 （3） four categories （四类垃圾）: recyclable, harmful ,dry and wet waste （4） No business, no killing.没有买卖就没有杀害。
Let’s try our best to protect the environment
Dear friends,
I’ m a student of Grade 9 in Dazhou. My name is Li Hua. As we know, we have only one earth. But in recent years, many disasters happened on the earth and unusual weather appeared very often. Even worse, the novel corona-virus broke out nearly all over the world this year. All these bad things were caused by the terrible environment, but the terrible environment was caused by humans. Although our government has made some policies and taken many useful measures to protect the environment in the past few years, there are still many things to do. As students in Dazhou, what should we do?
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If we all keep doing these things, I believe the environment will be better and better. Let’s try our best!
A student worrying about the environment
【写作思路】
这是一篇话题作文。要求根据题目“Let’s try our best to protect the environment”和提示的内容完成作文。写作时要注意语句通顺，语意连贯，紧扣要点，注意句子之间的连接与过渡，要注意涵盖所给提示。
【参考范文】
Let’s try our best to protect the environment
Dear friends,
I’m a student of Grade 9 in Dazhou. My name is Li Hua. As we know, we have only one earth. But in recent years, many disasters happened on the earth and unusual weather appeared very often. Even worse, the novel corona-virus broke out nearly all over the world this year. All these bad things were caused by the terrible environment, but the terrible environment was caused by humans. Although our government has made some policies and taken many useful measures to protect the environment in the past few years, there are still many things to do. As students in Dazhou, what should we do?
First, we should know and let more people know the importance of environmental protection. Second, we should save water and energy in our daily life. Third, in order to reduce air pollution, it is better to go to school by bus, by bike, on foot or other public transportation instead of using private cars. Fourth, there are four categories of waste: recyclable, harmful, dry and wet waste. We should learn how to sort garbage and use few plastic bags. Fifth, we should protect wild animals and do not eat them.
If we all keep doing these things, I believe the environment will be better and better. Let’s try our best!
A student worrying about the environment
【名师点评】
例文点评：例文采用三段式；时态选用一般现在时；将题目要求的要点都很好地融入到文章当中，适当发挥部分也很好地展示了对文章主题的理解，表达出自己的观点态度。
高分亮点：
短语：all over the world；in our daily life；instead of；better and better等。
句型：First, we should know and let more people know the importance of environmental protection.
Third, in order to reduce air pollution, it is better to go to school by bus, by bike, on foot or other public transportation instead of using private cars.
（三）【2020•四川凉山州】
81.2020年，COVID-19在全球肆虐，生活因此变得有些艰难。请你根据所提供的信息，以Live in a Healthier Way为题写一篇英语短文，谈一谈怎样以更健康的生活方式度过这段特殊时期。
保持健康
远离疾病
多锻炼 多喝水
日常习惯 保障安全
勤洗手 戴口罩 不聚集
无论多难
笑对生活
培养爱好 关心他人 分享喜忧
做得好 过得好 生活更易更快乐


要求：1. 语言表达准确，短文连贯、通顺。
2. 短文应包括所有内容，可适当发挥，不要逐句翻译。
3. 词数80左右。文章开头和结尾部分已给出，不计人总词数。
________________________________
In 2020, people around the world suffer from a kind of serious illness named COVID-19. We have to face more difficulties in our life because of it. ________________________________________________________________
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Thanks to the special period, we have learned that if we live in a healthier way, we can win.
【写作思路】
阅读题干可知是结合2020年，COVID-19在全球肆虐，生活因此变得有些艰难的情况。以Live in a Healthier Way为题写一篇英语短文，谈一谈怎样以更健康的生活方式度过这段特殊时期。这是一篇建议类作文，写作内容应该包括日常生活方式和生活态度等等。
【参考范文】
Live in a Healthier Way
In 2020, people around the world suffer from a kind of serious illness named COVID-19. We have to face more difficulties in our life because of it.
As we all know, health is importance to us. Only when we are healthy can we study well and enjoy life. So how should we spend this special period in a healthier lifestyle? Keep exercising and drink more water can make us healthier. In order to stay away from disease, we should wash our hands frequently, wear masks and do not get together. It is also important to have a good attitude towards life. No matter how difficult life is, we should face it with a smile. We can develop hobbies, share joys and sorrows with friends and family, and learn to care about others. The better you do, the happier your life will be.
Thanks to the special period, we have learned that if we live in a healthier way, we can win.
【名师点评】
例文点评：这是一篇优秀的例文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确的运用的时态，例文中运用的是一般现在时为主，人称是第一人称为主，主谓一致。例文采取三段式的写作手法，第一段是题干给出的，点明了目前的情况；第二段开始强调健康的重要性，引出话题保持健康的重要性及一些保持健康的方法，从生活方式和生活态度两方面出发；最后一段也是题干给出，表达了积极的态度。例文同时使用一些亮点词句，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。
高分亮点：
短语：As we all know众所周知；healthy lifestyle健康生活方式；keep doing sth一直做某事；In order to为了；get together一起；have a good attitude towards对……有良好的态度。
句型：（1）Only when we are healthy can we study well and enjoy life. 只有当我们身体健康时，我们才能好好学习，享受生活。Only位于句首的倒装句。
（2）The better you do, the happier your life will be. 你做得越好，你的生活就会越幸福。The+比较级…，the+比较级… 越……,就越……。
（四）【2020•浙江省湖州市】
53.假定你是李雷，请你对英国朋友Bruce的邮件进行同复。你可以根据邮件内容作适当发挥；邮件中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；词数：80-100；短文首句仅供选择使用，不计入总词数。
To
LiLei@mail.com
Subject
Exchange Visit!
Hi there, Li Lei!
I'm really excited about going to be at your school for the exchange visit later this year—hope you are too!
But the thing is, I really don't want to do the wrong thing while I'm there and especially at the school, so I'm wondering if you could tell me a bit about the rules, about phones, clothes, food...
Could you send me a quick email? I'd love to hear from you.
Love,
Bruce

To
Bruce@mail.com
Subject
Re:Exchange Visit!
Hi, Bruce!
Thanks for your email. I'm looking forward to the exchange too!



Love,
Li Lei
【写作思路】
这是一篇书信作文。要求根据提示的内容完成作文。写作时要注意语句通顺，语意连贯，紧扣要点，注意句子之间的连接与过渡，要注意涵盖所给提示。
【参考范文】
Hi, Bruce!
Thanks for your email. I'm looking forward to the exchange too!
You really don't have to worry a lot about the school rules here. But there are a few things you need to know.
We usually wear uniforms on school days, but you can wear what is suitable. And it'll be kind of cold when you are here so you'd better bring some warm clothes.
We are not allowed to use mobile phones at school. Besides, if we bring food to school, we must eat it outside during the break.
Hope this helps. Tell me if there's anything else you want to know.
Love,
Li Lei
【名师点评】
例文点评：例文采用五段式；时态以一般现在时为主；将题目要求的要点都很好地融入到文章当中，适当发挥部分也很好地展示了对文章主题的理解，表达出自己的观点态度。
高分亮点：
短语：look forward to；worry about；need to do sth；kind of；be allowed to do sth等。
句型：And it'll be kind of cold when you are here so you'd better bring some warm clothes.
Besides, if we bring food to school, we must eat it outside during the break.
（五）【2020•重庆市B卷】

62.某中学对高一新生进行了英语口语能力问卷调查, 以下是其中两个问题的调查数据。假如你是该校高一新生, 请结合下图数据和自身口语情况, 给你的英语老师写一篇短文。

要求∶
1. 80-120词, 开头已给出, 不计入总词数;
2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
参考信息:
1. 描述问卷调查结果（频率、方法）;
2. 介绍自身口语情况（水平、打算·…）;
3. ….
The results of the survey show that 17% of the students hardly ever practise speaking English. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【写作思路】
这是一个看图作文，图中列出了某中学对学生进行的英语口语能力的调查问卷，包括两个问题，一个是“你多久练习说一次英语”；另一个是“你怎样练习说英语”。学生们应仔细观察图表中的信息，将这两个问题的调查结果表达出来。短文中还应包括另外一个内容，即介绍自己口语的情况，并对如何提高口语能力，提出自己的建议。短文应以一般现在时态为主，根据表达需要选择适当的人称。
【参考范文】
The results of the survey show that 17% of the students hardly ever practise speaking English. 45% of the students usually practice speaking English, and 38% of the students practise speaking English sometimes. How do you practise speaking English? Most students speak more only in class. Some of the students talk with friends in English. Some students practise speking English in other ways.
In my opinion, we should talk with our partners in English as much as we can. Also, we should often listen to English stories in order to improve our understanding about English. Never be afraid of speaking English in front of others! This is quite important. Over and above, we should learn more English words. Only in this way, can we be good English speaker!
【名师点评】
例文点评：这是一篇优秀的作文。首先短文内容完整，叙述条理，结构清晰。文章采取两段式结构，第一段主要介绍该问卷调查的结果，包含了图表中的所有信息，没有遗漏要点，且各部分内容安排合理，有层次；第二段是自己的口语情况，以及对如何提高口语能力的建议。其次短文语法正确，用词准确，句式结构完整，符合英语的表达习惯。短文以简单句结构为基础，还使用了祈使句、宾语从句、非谓语动词等结构，表达流畅，意思连贯。
高分亮点：
短语：talk with；in other ways；in one’s opinion；be afraid of；in this way。
句型：45% of the students usually practice speaking English, and 38% of the students practise speaking English sometimes.；In my opinion, we should talk with our partners in English as much as we can.；Never be afraid of speaking English in front of others!；Only in this way, can we be good English speaker!
（六）【2020•重庆市A卷】
62.国家提出了将劳动教育(Labor Education)纳入中小学国家课程的方案。为此，你校校报英语栏目English World就开展劳动教育的意义，以及如何在校园内开展劳动教育，发起征文。请你以 "Some Advice on Developing Labor Education in Our School" 为题，写一篇短文参赛。
要求:
1. 80-120词，开头已给出，不计人总词数；
2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
参考信息：
1. 劳动教育的意义(学习生活技能、养成良好习惯……)；
2. 校内劳动教育建议(开设种植课、组织做蛋糕比赛……)；
3. ……
Some Advice on Developing Labor Education in Our School
It's reported that Labor Education will be included in the education of middle schools and primary schools in China. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【写作思路】
本文是一篇材料作文，国家提出了将劳动教育(Labor Education)纳入中小学国家课程的方案。为此，学校校报英语栏目English World就开展劳动教育的意义，以及如何在校园内开展劳动教育，发起征文。要求以 "Some Advice on Developing Labor Education in Our School" 为题，写一篇短文参赛。首先要认真审题，根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。
【参考范文】
Some Advice on Developing Labor Education in Our School
It's reported that Labor Education will be included in the education of middle schools and primary schools in China. I think it's important. We can learn some life skills and form good habits. Both will help us a lot in the future.
As for how to run the course in our school, I have some ideas. The school can offer classes to teach us how to do the cleaning and grow plants. What's more, the school can set up some clubs, such as cooking club and paper-cutting club. The school can also hold competitions to see who is the best in making cakes. Such activities will make our school life more colorful and meaningful.
I am looking forward to taking the course in the new term. I believe I will do well in it.
【解析】
【名师点评】
1.例文点评：本文时态为一般现在时，人称主要为第一、第三人称。文章紧扣题目要点，内容完整，表述准确，语言的表述符合语法的结构，造句符合英语的表达习惯。
2.高分亮点：
短语：a lot，in the future，what's more，set up，such as，look forward to，do well in。
句型：I am looking forward to taking the course in the new term. 我期待着在新学期上这门课。look forward to doing sth期待做某事，固定搭配。
I believe I will do well in it. 我相信我会做得很好。I believe后接宾语从句；do well in在……方面做得好。
2020年中考真题英语分项汇编
专题22 书面表达
考点3 咨询建议类
【2020•吉林省】
76.假如你是李华，你所在的学校即将开展以“文明礼貌伴我行争做文明中学生”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请完成下面的演讲稿。
内容包括：
1. 列举生活中至少两种不文明现象并写出各自产生的影响；
2. 提出至少三条争做文明中学生的建议；
3. 发出争做文明中学生的号召。
写作要求：
1. 词数80—100词，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 文中不能出现真实的学校名称和姓名；
3. 可以适当发挥。
Hello, everyone! My name is Li Hua. Nowadays, people care more about our grades. In fact, good behavior is as important as good grades. However,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I believe we'll be better students as long as we behave ourselves.
That's all. Thanks for listening.
【写作思路】
该题目属于演讲稿写作。在写作时应紧接开头继续写作，根据内容提示列举生活中至少两种不文明现象并写出各自产生的影响，提出至少三条争做文明中学生的建议并发出争做文明中学生的号召。
【参考范文】
Hello, everyone! My name is Li Hua. Nowadays, people care more about our grades. In fact, good behavior is as important as good grades. However, some bad behavior can be seen around us. For example, some students throw rubbish everywhere, which makes the environment worse and worse. Some students are always shouting back angrily to their parents gradually the relations between them have become difficult.
How can we behave well? First, I think we should be polite and kind to others. Be ready to help others in need. Second, try to be honest and keep promises. The most important thing is to follow the rules at school or in public.
Let's pull together and take action from now on.
I believe we'll be better students as long as we behave ourselves.
That's all Thanks for listening!

例文二：
Hello, everyone! My name is Li Hua. Nowadays, people care more about our grades. In fact, good behavior is as important as good grades. However, we can hear some students talk loudly on the bus. What's worse, some students smoke in public places. These may make others uncomfortable and smoking is harmful to people's health to be better students.
We should think of others and keep the voice down in public. And we should follow the traffic rules to make sure we are safe. Besides, we should try to be honest students and we shouldn't lie to others.
Let's pull together and take action from now on.
I believe we'll be better students as long as we behave ourselves.
That's all. Thanks for listening.
【名师点评】
例文点评：例文主要用第三人称进行写作，主要采用一般现在时态来写作。讲述争做文明中学生的建议分成三点来写，叙述完整且条理清晰。
高分亮点：
短语：care more about; in fact; for example; throw rubbish; shouting back; behave well; in need; try to; keep promises; follow the rules; pull together; take action; from now on；what's worse; is harmful to; think of; keep the voice down; in public; make sure; lie to。
句型：I think… 宾语从句；which引导的定语从句；as long as引导的条件状语从句；we should do表示建议的句子。
【2020•东营市】
八、书面表达
66.在你的成长历程中, 收到过很多建议吧？有的建议帮你解决了生活中的烦恼，有的帮你解决了学习上的困难。好的建议能帮助我们解决难题，受益终生。某英语杂志以“The best advice I ever got”为题举办征文活动，请写一篇短文参加此次活动。
内容包括：
1. 你遇到了什么问题？
2. 你收到的最好的解决这个问题的建议是什么？
3. 这个建议对你有什么帮助？
要求：
1. 100 词左右；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名及校名。
The best advice I ever got
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【写作思路】
该题目属于记叙文写作。在写作时应根据内容提示讲述自己遇到的问题，收到的最好的解决这个问题的建议以及此建议对自己的帮助。

【参考范文】
The best advice I ever got
Once I lost my wallet, and worried for days. I was afraid to tell my parents about it. I even walked three miles to school each day because I didn't have any money. I just kept thinking, "If I tell my parents, they'll be angry!"
My English teacher, Ms. Li found I was so upset, and talked to me. “It is best not to run away from our problems. We should always try to solve them” she said. She thought that my parents have more experience, and are always there to help me. She advised me to communicate with my parents. In the end, I talked to my parents and they were really understanding. My dad said he sometimes made careless mistakes himself. They got me a new wallet and asked me to be more careful.
From then on, when I’m in trouble, I always remember to find someone I trust to talk to. Talking is the first step to solve problems. Sharing a problem is like cutting it in half. So I’m halfway to solving a problem just by talking to someone about it.
【名师点评】
例文点评：例文主要用第一人称进行写作，讲述经历主要采用一般过去时态来写作。讲述自己遇到的问题以及收到的最好的解决这个问题的建议叙述完整且条理清晰。
高分亮点：
短语：be afraid to; kept thinking；run away from；communicate with；in the end; from then on; in trouble; cutting it in half; solving a problem。
句型：if 引导的条件状语从句；that引导的宾语从句；and表示并列的句子；when引导的时间状语从句。
【2020•山东日照】
八、写作
71.假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Peter因要参加高中入学考试(SSAT)而感到焦虑，来信向你倾诉。请你根据以下提示用英语写一封邮件，提出建议。
1. 考试态度(放松心情、无需焦虑……)；
2. 功课准备(用心做功课、学习方法恰当……)；
3. 减压方式(……)；
4. 表达祝愿。
要求：
1. 根据提示内容，不要逐字翻译；
2. 文中不能出现真实的人名和校名；
3. 词数90左右。
Dear Peter,
I have learnt you are worried about the coming SSAT. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作思路】
该题目是书信类书面表达，根据彼得的来信，结合题目要求，向彼得提出建议。
【参考范文】
Dear Peter,
I have learnt you are worried about the coming SSAT. Here are some suggestions that help you.
It’s very important for you to be in a good mood. Don’t be much nervous and you should relax yourself, which can give you enough courage to face the exam. Finsh your schoolwork carefully and listen to your teachers in class carefully. You can make a plan to help you study well and choose the suitable way to study. When you have difficulty leaning your subjects, you can ask your teachers or classmates for help. Besides, you can listen to some music or do some sports to relieve stress.
I hope that you can pass the exam.
Yours,
Li Hua
【名师点评】
例文点评：例文采用三段式结构，第一段讲述得知彼得担心即将到来的考试；第二段提出具体的建议，可以帮助彼得；第三段向彼得表示祝愿；整篇文章内容完整，结构清晰条理；人称主要是第二人称，时态主要是一般现在时。
高分亮点：
短语：be worried about；have difficulty doing sth.；ask sb. for help；listen to music；do some sports。
句型：that引导的限制性定语从句；it’s+形容词+for sb. to do sth.；which引导的非限制性定语从句。
【2020•绵阳市】
51.假定你是李华，请回复笔友Mike的邮件，给他至少3条建议并说明理由。词数100左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计人总词数。
To: Li Hua
From: Mike
Hi, Li Hua. Is everything going well? Summer holiday is coming. I planned a graduation trip to China with my best friend. But we are not allowed to travel abroad. I am so disappointed. Would you please give me some advice?
All the best,
Mike

To: Mike
From: Li Hua
Hi, Mike.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Li Hua
【写作思路】
本文是一篇书信作文，假如你是李华，要求你根据笔友Mike的邮件，给他写一封回信，至少给出3条建议并说明理由。首先要注意邮件的格式，然后认真审题，根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。

【参考范文】
To: Li Hua
From: Mike
Hi, Mike.
I'm glad to hear from you. And congratulations on completing your studies. But I know you are not allowed to travel abroad.I'm so disappointed.
However, there are things you can do at home to prepare for future trips to China. Firstly, you can learn about Chinese places of interest and customs through the Internet or TV. Secondly, I can send you pictures of some famous tourist attractions in China by email, such as the Great Wall in Beijing, the Summer Palace and so on. Thirdly, you can talk with local Chinese to help you better understand China and its culture. Finally, I hope you have a good time in the summer vacation.
I am looking forward to your early trip to China .
【名师点评】
例文点评：本文时态为一般现在时，人称主要为第一、第二人称。文章紧扣题目要点，内容完整，表述准确，语言的表述符合语法的结构，造句符合英语的表达习惯。
3.高分亮点：
短语：hear from，learn about，places of interest，by email，such as，so on，talk with，have a good time，look forward to。
句型：I hope you have a good time in the summer vacation. 我希望你在暑假过得愉快。I hope后接宾语从句。
I am looking forward to your early trip to China.我期待着你早日来中国旅行。look forward to期待……，固定词组。
【2020•广东省深圳市】
56． 深圳市正在争创全国文明城市、假定你是鹏城中学学生会主席，希望同学们为"创文'做出自己的贡献。请你按照所提示的要点，代表学生会写一篇倡议书。
环境保护
①垃圾分类；②绿色出行
公益慈善
①志愿服务；②……
人际交往
①诚信友善；②……

要求：
1、词数80左右(开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数)；
2、要点齐全，可适当发挥；
3、条理清晰，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范；
4、文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
参考词汇：分类 sort out 志愿者volunteer 贡献 contribution
Dear friends,
As we know, Shenzhen is working hard to win the title of China's National Civilized City.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________._________________
All in all, Shenzhen is our home. It's time to take action.
The Student Union
July 20, 2020
【写作思路】
该题目属于倡议书写作。在写作时应承接短文开头；第一段引出话题；第二段写倡议缘由；第三段具体介绍如何做；第四段进行展望；第五段号召大家行动起来。
写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来进行写作；时态采用一般现在时为主，写作时要注意语句通顺，语意连贯，紧扣要点，注意句子之间的连接与过渡，要注意涵盖所给提示。
【参考范文】
Dear friends,
As we know, Shenzhen is working hard to win the title of China's National Civilized City.(引出话题)
It's well known that Shenzhen is striving for one of the ten civilized cities in China, and now it is a good opportunity for us to make our own contributions.(倡议缘由)
Firstly, more changes in our daily life, such as sorting out the rubbish and travelling in a greener way, can be made to protect the city environment. What's more, to make Shenzhen a loving city, we are also supposed to help those in need by doing some voluntary work or raising donations.【高分句型一】 Last but not least, get along with others in an honest and friendly way. We'd better avoid talking about others' privacy if we want to show our respect.(具体介绍如何做)
I strongly believe that we will make Shenzhen a more civilized and beautiful city with our joint efforts.(展望)
All in all, Shenzhen is our home. It's time to take action.【高分句型二】(号召)
The Student Union
July 20, 2020
【2020•陕西省】
61． 某英文网站开展关于“美丽校园, 健康生活”的征稿活动。请你根据以下图示内容积极投稿, 倡导同学们“爱护校园环境, 健康快乐生活”。

keep the school clean

do sports

look after yourself

other


1.参考提示内容, 可适当发挥;
2.语句通顺, 意思连贯, 书写工整;
3.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);
4.词数:不少于70词。(开头和结尾已给出, 但不计人总词数。)
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【写作思路】
该题目属于说明文写作。在写作时应根据图片内容提示讲述学生健康校园生活的一些建议。
【参考范文】
Students need to have a healthy school life. What can we do to make it? Here I’ve got some ideas to share with you.
First, it’s important to keep our school clean. For example, we can clean the desks and floor every day, because good environment is helpful to our study and health. Second, it’s good to do some sports like running, playing basketball and so on. Third, we’d better look after ourselves well, such as washing hands in time and wearing masks when it is necessary. Finally, if we always get on well with each other and keep happy, we’ll enjoy a happy and healthy school life.
【名师点评】
例文点评：例文主要用第一人称进行写作，主要采用一般现在时态来写作。介绍自学生健康校园生活的一些建议分成四点来写，叙述完整且条理清晰。
3.高分亮点：
短语：need to; make it; share with; for example; do some sports；and so on；look after；such as；get on well with。
句型：because引导的原因状语从句；it做形式主语的句子；if引导的条件状语从句。
【2020•扬州市】
81.为倡导绿色环保新时尚，学校将开展以创建“绿色校园”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你以“Go green at school”为题, 根据表格中的内容要点写一份英语演讲稿, 号召全体同学行动起来, 共建美好校园。
Purposes
develop a green lifestyle
Actions
save resources
1. save paper: reuse the textbooks; use both sides of the paper
2. save ... : two examples
3. save ... : two examples
reduce pollution
1. take care of the trees and flowers
2. ...
Hopes
...

要求：
（1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
（2）必须包括表格中所有要点内容，并适当发挥;
（3）词数：100词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）;
（4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Go green at school
Hi, guys,
Isn’t it pleasant to study in an environmentally friendly school? To develop a green lifestyle, we students can go green at school in smaller ways. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thank you!
【写作思路】
要求写一篇演讲稿，轮廓已经给出，学生需要将内容填充进去，合理有据即可。全文人称应以第一人称为主，时态应用一般现在时态。
【参考范文】
Go green at school
Hi, guys,
Isn’t it pleasant to study in an environmentally friendly school? To develop a green lifestyle, we students can go green at school in smaller ways.
On one hand, we should save resources. First, we should save paper. we can reuse the textbooks and use both sides of the paper. Second, we should save water. We can take short showers and reuse water. Third, we are supposed to save electricity. We can turn off the light when we leave from the classroom. Also, we needn't turn on all the lights if enough. On the other hand, we should reduce pollution. We can take care of the trees and flowers, choose the public transport and use the cloth bags instead of plastic bags. We should develop a green lifestyle, we can do more exercise and watch less TV. If we take good care of our earth today, it will be more beautiful tomorrow.
That’s all. Thank you!
【名师点评】
例文点评：例文分为三段。第一段直接点题；第二段从两个部分说明了如何行动，分别是节约资源和减少污染；第三部分礼貌结尾。内容详实完整，语言规范。
高分亮点：
短语：On one hand ... on the other hand 一方面……；另一方面……；both sides of...……的两面；take showers洗澡；be supposed to do sth.应该做某事；turn off 关闭；turn on 打开；take care of 照料；instead of 代替，而不是；do exercise 锻炼。
句型：when引导的时间状语从句；if引导的条件状语从句。

【2020•湖北省黄石市】
76．我市某英文杂志社正面向九年级毕业生征文，请从以下要点中选择两到三点，写一篇题为“How to keep healthy”的短文，参加此次活动。
要点：
1.运动有益身心健康。多锻炼，如跑步、爬山、骑车等；
2.养成健康的饮食习惯, 如多喝水和牛奶，多吃蔬菜和水果，少吃垃圾食品和快餐；
3.学习有计划，早睡早起不熬夜，劳逸结合；
4.乐观、积极、友好，与同学和睦相处。
要求：
1.可结合自身事例、适当发挥；语言通顺，意思连贯
2.80词左右。（无须写标题，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）
参考词汇：keep healthy physically and mentally保持身心健康
regularly有规律地 optimistic乐观的
Keeping healthy plays an important role in our daily life.
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【写作思路】
本题为材料作文，要求就“How to keep healthy”为主题写一篇短文。时态用现在时，人称用第一人称或第二人称。

【参考范文】
Keeping healthy plays an important role in our daily life. What should we do to keep healthy?
First, exercise is good for keeping healthy physically and mentally. We can participate in regular exercise, such as cycling, mountain climbing, running and so on. Second, it’s very important for us to form healthy eating habits. We should drink more water and milk, and eat more vegetables and fruits. And we should avoid eating too much junk food and fast food. Third, we should be optimistic, positive and friendly. We should also get along well with classmates.
If we try to do that, we’ll be a healthier person.
【名师点评】
例文分三段，首段用于引出文章主题，第二段则详细叙述了应该如何健康生活，第三段做结尾，倡议人们按照上面的建议去做，去健康生活。例文层次分明，思路清晰，叙述流畅，是一篇合格的例文。
3.高分亮点：
短语：be good for，participate in，such as，and so on，get along well with。
句型：
（1）Second, it’s very important for us to form healthy eating habits.（it作形式主语）
（2）If we try to do that, we’ll be a healthier person.（if引导条件状语从句）
（2020 •湘西土家族苗族自治州）

56.初中三年的学习生活即将结束，请你根据下图的内容要点提示，为学校英语俱乐部写一篇英语短文，给七年级新生在学习生活上提几点建议，并祝福他们在未来的学习生活中过的愉快。

注意：1. 文中不得透露个人真实姓名和学校名称；
2. 词数：80左右；
3. 短文的开头已给出，不计人总词数。
Welcome to our school! In junior high school, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【写作思路】
这是一篇给材料作文，自己即将毕业，给七年级新生的学习生活提几点建议。结合所给的材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般将来时，以第二人称为主，要注意主谓一致，所写的句子要符合英语语法，用自己熟悉的单词和句式来写。
【参考范文】
Welcome to our school! In junior high school, life will be different from before. Here are some suggestions about the study and life for you.
Firstly, you'll have more subjects to learn, it is important to find good learning methods. Secondly, in order to be better at study, you must do more exercise to keep healthy. Thirdly, you can join some clubs to make the school life more colorful in your spare time. Fourthly, you'd better get on well with your classmates and help each other. In addition, it is a good choice to read more books and make more friends. At last, if you have problems in school life, please talk with your teachers or parents. They are always there for you. I hope you will have a wonderful school life.
【名师点评】
这是一篇比较优秀的例文。例文紧扣题目要求，根据内容要点提示给七年级新生提了一些关于学习和生活的建议，并进行了适当发挥。第一段点明主旨，第二段给出建议和自己的祝福。例文简明扼要，结构清晰，语言表达到位。
高分亮点：
单词和短语：be different from；good leaning methods；in order to do sth.；be good at；do exercise；in your spare time；get on well with；help each other；in addition；at last；be there for sb.。
句型：祈使句；倒装句；it固定句型；if引导的条件状语从句；宾语从句。
【2019年】
2019年中考真题英语分项汇编
专题21 书面表达
考点3 咨询建议类
（一）【2019 •哈尔滨市】
假如你是英语校报的编辑李平，请你根据以信息，给新入学的学弟学妹们写一封信，欢迎他们来到新学校，并对他们在学校如何做合格的中学生提出建议。
写作要点：
1. 欢迎他们来到新学校。
2. 介绍学校：
(1) 课程有趣；
(2) 有多名外教；
(3) 活动丰富。
3. 请对他们在学校如何做合格的(qualified)中学生提出具体建议。
写作要求：
1. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。
2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。
3. 字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。
4. 至少80词。
Dear new friends,
It’s my pleasure to write you this letter.
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ping
【写作思路】
这是一篇书信作文，内容是关于学校生活的。首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；提示内容就是本文的写作要点。这些要点构成写作的基本框架。我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来，并适当发挥想象提出自己的建议。不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般现在时态来写，要注意主谓一致等问题。在写作过程中，要注意句与句段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。
【参考范文】
Dear new friends,
It's my pleasure to write you this letter. Welcome to our new school. Our school is clean and beautiful. The classrooms are big and bright. All the subjects are very interesting. I am good at English. There are many foreign teachers in our school. In our spare time, we can communicate with them and improve our oral English skills. Our after class activities are also rich and colorful. There are different clubs in our school. You can take part in all kinds of activities you like.
Now you are going to be middle school students. How to be a qualified middle school student? At first, you should follow the school rules. It's also important to have good study habits. You must listen to the teachers carefully in class.I think you should learn to share things with your classmates and help each other.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ping
（二）【2019 •江苏省苏州市】
假定你是苏华，最近你的澳大利亚笔友Nathan犯了一些错误，倍感懊恼，写了一封邮件向你诉说，为帮助他排解困感，请你根据他的邮件内容并结合自身经历．用英语回信开导他。
To：subua@china.com
From：nathan.australia.com
Subjects： Learning from mistakes
Dear Su Hue,
I'm unhappy that I've made some mistakes recently. They're troubling me a lot these days. I really need your help. Would you please share your experience with me?
Do you agree that everyone makes mistakes?
Can you tell me one of your mistakes?
How did you deal with your problem?
What have you learned from the mistake?
I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.
All the best,
Nathan
注意：
l. 词数90左右。开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词量；
2. 回复须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；
3. 文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear Nathan,
I'm sorry to know that you are not happy these days. _____________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope my experience can help you out.
Best wishes
Su Hua
【写作思路】
书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。
【参考范文】
Dear Nathan,
I'm sorry to know that you are not happy these days. You needn't worry too much. It's true that everyone makes mistakes.
Take me, for example. One day, I spent so much time playing football with my friends that I forgot to do my homework. I said sorry to my teacher and finished it the next day. I found it important to achieve a balance between schoolwork and hobbies.
It doesn't matter whether or not you make mistakes. What matters most is to correct and learn from them. In this way, others will understand you. Then you will feel much better.
I hope my experience can help you out.
Best wishes.
Su Hua
【名师点评】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如too much，make mistakes，for example，so much，spend time doing，forgot to do，say sorry sb.，between and，whether or not，learn from，in this way，feel much better等。而固定句型I found it important to achieve a balance between schoolwork and hobbies.和It's true that everyone makes mistakes./ It doesn't matter whether or not you make mistakes. / I hope my experience can help you out.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。
（三）【2019 •浙江省衢州市】
假设你是Li Ming， 以下是你的南非笔友Seb发给你的一封电子邮件，请根据该邮件内容给Seb回一封邮件。

要求：1. 考生需按电子邮件格式完成整封邮件；
2. 邮件中不能出现真实姓名、校名等相关信息；
3. 词数：90~100。

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【写作思路】
本题是书信作文。假设你是Li Ming， 以下是你的南非笔友Seb发给你的一封电子邮件，请根据该邮件内容给Seb回一封邮件。注意电子邮件格式。时态主要是一般现在时。认为阅读材料，认真审题，确定主题，根据Seb的电子邮件，列出提纲。表达要条理清楚，语言规范。要运用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有连贯性。写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无单词拼写、标点、语法错误（时态、主谓一致等）。
【参考范文】
From: LiMing
To: Seb
Subject: Learning Chinese in Quzhou
Hi, Seb,
I’m so glad that you’ll come to live in my city.
To improve Your Chinese quickly. You can go and take a course in a Chinese Language School. It can always help you to speak better and learn more.
Then, try to experience life here in Quzhou. Of course. I’ll take you around Quzhou. We can visit the Confucius Temple. It’s the best way to understand our culture. And you can practice speaking Chinese at the same time. It’s very helpful.
Hope to see you soon!
Yours,
Li Ming
【名师点评】
书面表达要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。语言要规范，时态运用要正确，叙述清楚条里，学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。注意书写的规范：大小写、标点符号等的正确运用。注意检查：单词拼写、语法、动词时态、语序、主谓一致等。写作六步法：1.审题：文体，时态，人称。2.抓住要点：要点是否齐全，适当补充。3.扩充句子：通过增加状语，定语，连词，使句子意思饱满充实。4.连句成文，合理使用连词。5.改正错误：拼写是否错误，语法时态是否正确，连词是否恰当等。6.誊写作文：注意书写工整美观整洁。
（四）【2019 •山东省济宁市】
假如你是Wang Hong, 你的美国笔友Kevin下学期将作为名交换生来你们学校。下面是他发给你的一封e-mail.请根据邮件内容给予恰当的回复。
注意:
1.文中不得出现可能透露考生真实身份的任何信息.
2.100词左右(开头,结尾已给出,不计人总词数)。
Dear Wang Hong,
How are you doing?
You might not believe it, but I’m going to your school as one of five exchange students next term. And I’m so excited! However, I’m worried about communicating with the teachers and students. As you know, I can speak only a little Chinese. What should I do? Besides, I want to learn to play pin-pong. Can you find a good player to help me? If you can, tell me something about him or her.
Looking forward to your reply
Best wishes!
Yours,
Kevin
参考词语talk in English, help sb. with, be friendly and helpful, practice... with, play well, win a good prize.
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【写作思路】
这是一篇图表，要求介绍自己。动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料注意不同的时态和人称，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
【参考范文】
Dear Kevin
I’m glad to hear from you. You said you were worried about communicating with the teachers and students because you could speak only a little Chinese. You don’t be worried about it. You can talk with them in English. They can also help you with Chinese. They are very friendly and helpful. You also said you wanted to learn to play ping-pong. You can practice it with Li Lei. He is my best friend. He plays it very well. He won a good prize last week. He is ready to do others. With his help, you will be good at it.
Welcome to our school.
Best wishes.
Yours
Wang Hong
（五）【2019 •广安市】
当前，许多学生在课外沉溺于智能手机(smart phones)。针对这一现象，学校将组织开展一次“拒绝手机诱惑，健康学习生活”的演讲活动。请你根据下面的提示用英语写一篇演讲稿。
活动内容
1.花大量时间玩游戏，上课睡觉，不按时完成作业。
2.伤害眼睛，不利健康。
建议
1.远离智能手机，认真学习。
2.多花时间与家人、朋友交流。
3.积极参加各种活动，如打篮球、唱歌……
要求：1. 字迹工整，书写规范，包含全部要点，适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实的学校、班级名称；
3. 80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
4. 请将书面表达内容写在答题卡上相应的位置。
参考词汇：eyesight(视力)；disadvantage(不利条件)；keep away from(远离)；take an active part in(积极参加)
Girls and boys,
With the develop of the Internet, many students have smart phones. _________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That's all Thank you!
【写作思路】
本文是一篇给材料作文。请你根据下面的提示用英语写一篇演讲稿。文章时态用一般现在时，人称主要为第三人称。本文所给材料比较详细，考生要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并可适当发挥。在写作时，注意紧扣主题，连句成篇，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。
【参考范文】
Girls and boys,
With the development of the Internet, many students have smart phones. The students often spend so much time in playing games with them that they feel very tired. Someone doesn’t finish their homework on time. Someone even sleeps in class. Besides, smart phones do harm to our health, some students’ eyesight is becoming poorer and poorer.
To avoid these disadvantages, I think we should make some changes.
First, we should keep away from smart phones and work hard.
Second, stay with our family or friends if we are free and talk with them about our daily life, feelings and so on.
Third, take an active part in all kinds of activities, such as playing basketball, singing songs.
That’s all. Thank you!
【名师点评】
首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。
（六）【2019 •湖南长沙】
假如你是李华，你们班输了上周的篮球赛。Henry认为是他未能投进最后一球所造成的，有的队友也因此而责怪他。请你写一封英文邮件安慰他，谈谈你对此事的看法，并就如何取得队友的理解提出建议。
要求：
（1）80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）信中不得出现真实人名和校名。
Dear Henry,
I learned that you are feeling sorry and upset because of losing the basketball game. ____________________
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【写作思路】
这是一篇给材料的书信作文。假如你是李华，就输球事件安慰Henry，谈谈你对此事的看法，并就如何取得队友的理解提出建议。人称为第二人称，时态以一般现在时为主。动笔前先要注意认真阅读材料确定写作内容；文章必须包括要点中所给的信息，但不要逐句翻译，补充两条个人的观点并提出建议。注意表达的条理性，用好连接词，可适当发挥使行文连贯，多种句式交叉使用来丰富文章的文采。
【参考范文】
Dear Henry,
I learned that you are feeling sorry and upset because of losing the basketball game. It's not easy being in your situation, and it's normal to have these feelings. Anyway, don't be too hard on yourself.
You know, basketball is about team effort. It's never just one person's fault. What matters is that you should learn from the games as well as your mistakes. Besides, you need to think about how you can do better next time.
As a whole, teammates should support and believe in each other. Why don't you sit down and communicate with them? And you could promise that you will spare no efforts to better your skills. If all of you pull together, you're sure to win the next one.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【名师点评】
高分句型一：What matters is that you should learn from the games as well as your mistakes. 重要的是你应该从比赛中吸取教训，也要从错误中吸取教训。What matters is that重要的是，that引导的是表语从句。as well as常用来连接两个并列的成分，作“也，还”讲。
高分句型二：And you could promise that you will spare no efforts to better your skills. 你可以保证你会不遗余力地提高你的技能。that引导的是宾语从句，spare no efforts to do sth.不遗余力做某事。高分句型三：If all of you pull together, you're sure to win the next one. 如果大家齐心协力，你们一定会赢得下一场比赛。此句是if引导的条件状语从句；be sure to do sth.必定做某事。
（七）【2019 •江苏省南京市】
假如你是李华，在网上看到英国B公司为正在开发的一款提高英语写作能力的应用软件（app）征集网友建议．请根据网上的征集信息，用英语给该公司写一封电子邮件．
IDEAS NEEDED
Britech is now designing an app that helps learners with their English writing． The app is to help learners explore ideas， organize them and write them down． Your ideas are needed！
Here' s what to do：
Write to share your ideas! Feel free to be creative！
Please let us know：
● What's the name of the app？
● What problem does the app solve？
● What does the app do？
Contact us at appdesign@Britech com
注意:
1．内容涵盖所有要点，可适当发挥；
2．词数80左右（已给出的文章开头，不计入总词数）；
3．文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。
Dear Sir or Madam，
Thanks for designing an app for English writing．_______________________________________________
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【写作思路】
这是一篇根据英国Britech公司为正在开发的一款提高英语写作能力的应用软件（app）征集网友建议。请根据网上的征集信息，用英语给该公司写一封电子邮件。动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料可知本文主要是应用第一人称，一般现在时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
【参考范文】
Dear Sir or Madam，
Thanks for doing an APP for English writing． I'd like to share my ideas here． Could its name be "right made easy"？【APP的名字】
Many of us have difficulty in writing．【高分句型一】We don't know how to organize ideas，use proper words，and so on． I hope it can solve these problems．【APP要解决的问题】
Here is my advice on what the APP does． First， it should provide some reading materials． The more we read， the better we write． Second． The APP should have an online course so that we can develop our writing skills． Third， there should be an e-teacher who can correct mistakes and offer suggestions．【APP能做什么】
I hope my advice is worth taking．【高分句型二】
【名师点评】
【高分句型一】
Many of us have difficulty in writing．我们中的许多人写作困难．
have difficulty doing干某事有困难．
【高分句型二】
I hope my advice is worth taking． 我希望我的建议值得采纳．
be worth doing 值得干某事．
（八）【2019 •湖南省衡阳市】
根据一项新的调查，学生安全已经成为一个大的问题。假设你是一名老师，对学生进行以“自我保护”为主题的消防安全教育，请以“How to Protect Yourself in a Fire”为题，提出你的建议。
要求：
1.短文中不得出现真实的人名和地名。
2. 书写工整，语句通顺，连贯，词数不少于80.
参考词汇： cover v. 遮盖 take the lift 乘坐电梯 exit n. 出口 towel n. 毛巾shut off 切断
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【写作思路】
根据一项新的调查，学生安全已经成为一个大的问题。假设你是一名老师，对学生进行以“自我保护”为主题的消防安全教育，请以“How to Protect Yourself in a Fire”为题，提出你的建议。考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
【参考范文】
How to Protect Yourself in a Fire
According to a new survey, student safety has become a big problem. You should know some ways to protect yourself .It will help to keep you safe in the fire. First, you should shut off the electricity. You should cover your mouth with the wet towel. You mustn't take the lift or jump off a window, you should find the exit. The most important thing is to keep calm. If you can't go in the house, the safest place is close to water, like washroom .If the fire is serious, you should call 119 for help. These may help us.
【名师点评】
这篇短文不使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。如First, You should shut off the electricity. You should cover your mouth with the wet towel等使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。
2019年中考真题英语分项汇编
专题21 书面表达
考点3 咨询建议类
（一）【2019 •四川省成都市】
假如你叫Ann，你的中国朋友小华发来email请教如何利用词典学习英语。请参考截图及注释，根据提示回一封email。要点如下：
1. 根据示例，概括介绍词条构成；
2. 如何用词典解决词汇学习中的问题（至少两点）；
3. 介绍词典对英语学习的好处（至少两点）。

(taken from an English- Chinese dictionary
注意：l. 截图内容仅供参考，可以引用，不能照抄；
2. 文中不能出现真实学校和姓名；
3. 词数：100左右。
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【参考范文】
Dear Xiaohua,
Glad to receive your letter. You asked me how to use a dictionary to learn English. Here are some of my thoughts.
Words in a dictionary are called entries. Each entry has five sections, such as pronunciation, part of speech, definition, usage and word group. Of course, sometimes the same word has different parts of speech and definitions.
Using dictionaries can solve problems in vocabulary learning. When we meet a new word, with the help of a dictionary, we can not only find out its pronunciation, but also know its meaning. A dictionary is of great benefit to English learning. First of all, it can help us understand the meaning of words accurately. Secondly, it can enrich our knowledge and exercise our thinking. Finally, it can help us learn to express our ideas.
I hope it's helpful to you.
Yours,
Ann
【名师点评】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如how to use a dictionary, such as, to learn English, part of speech, word family, of course, different parts of, with the help of a dictionary, not only... but also, find out, first of all, help sb. do, learn to do等。而You asked me how to use a dictionary to learn English./ When we meet a new word, with the help of a dictionary, we can not only find out its pronunciation, but also know its meaning./ I hope it's helpful to you等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。
（二）【2019 •安徽省】
假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Mike最近因视力减退而感到不安，请你用英文给他写封电子邮件，谈谈你在保护视力方面的一些做法。要点如下：
1. 经常做户外活动；
2. 很少用电子产品；
3. 坚持做眼保健操；
4. ……
注意：1.词数80-100；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.文中不能出现与本人相关的信息；
4.开头和结尾已为你写好，不计人总词数。
Dear Mike,
I'm sorry to learn that your eyesight is getting weaker. ____________________________________________
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Yours,
Li Hua
【写作思路】
这篇作文要求我们以李华的身份，给自己的英国笔友Mike写信，给他介绍一下你在保护视力方面的做法。审题可知，这篇短文应使用一般现在是，第一人称来叙述，内容应包括：首先讲述题目中Mike的视力减退问题，并引出文章的主题；然后具体介绍自己在保护视力方面的做法，这一部分是文章的主体可以按照题目中所列的内容进行介绍，并对第四条进行补充；最后提出自己的希望或祝愿。写作时应注意：短文按内容表达的需要，分成三段，每一段一个主题；内容应包括题目中的所有要点，不能遗漏；课根据表达需要，增加细节内容，使文章更加充实、丰富。其次应注意文章的表达，不能根据汉语思维逐词翻译，句式应符合英语的表达习惯。句子结构应完整，可以简单句结构为基础，穿插并列句、复合句以及其他复杂句式和结构的使用，提升作文档次。同时语句之间使用恰当的衔接成分，使行文连贯，表达流畅。
【参考范文】
Dear Mike,
I’m sorry to learn that your eyesight is getting weaker. I’d like to share with you some ways of protecting eyesight in my daily life.
At school, I often go out of the classroom to play with my classmates or do physical exercise during the breaks. In my free time, I also try hard to avoid using the mobile phone or computer. You know, the light they give off is harmful to our eyes. Besides, doing eye exercises plays an important role in relaxing my tired eyes. Lastly, I usually have my eyes examined every term to make sure my eyes stay healthy.
I hope you’ll find my ways helpful.
Yours,
Li Hua
【名师点评】
这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，对Mike介绍了自己在保护视力方面的一些做法。短文有以下几个特点：首先文章内容完整，包括了题目中要求的所有内容，没有遗漏要点。短文结构清晰，共分成三段：第一段将题目中的写作背景进行了介绍，并引出了文章的话题；第二段具体介绍了自己的做法，这一段是文章的中心，所占篇幅最大。作者按照题目的提示进行表述，并对细节进行了拓展；第三段提出了自己的希望。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，用词准确，句式结构完整，符合英语的表达习惯。句式结构比较复杂，使用了很多较高级的表达方式，包括动词短语、介词短语、宾语从句、状语从句、非谓语动词等。如I’d like to share with you some ways of protecting eyesight in my daily life. At school, I often go out of the classroom to play with my classmates or do physical exercise during the breaks.、In my free time, I also try hard to avoid using the mobile phone or computer.Besides, doing eye exercises plays an important role in relaxing my tired eyes. 等。
（三）【2019 •湖南湘西州】
湘西自治州正在进行“美丽湘西”建设，我们要积极参与“美丽湘西”建设活动，从小事做起，让我们家乡变得更美。作为学生，请以“Start out small”为题，用英语写一篇倡议书。
要点提示：1. 多种植树木和花草，不乱砍伐树木。
2. 购物时重复使用袋子。
3. 不乱扔垃圾，保持河流等干净。
4. 遵守公共秩序，做文明学生。
要求：1. 80词以上。文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 文章须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文意思通顺、语气连贯、过渡自然。不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。
参考词汇：protect the environment；reuse bags；plant；cut down；throw；wait in line；be wie；oboeysart outsnal
Start out small
Hello, everyone. We should try our best to make our hometown Xiangxi more beautiful and comfortable. What can we do for our hometown?
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【参考范文】
Hello，everyone．We should try our best to make our hometown Xiangxi more beautiful and comfortable．What can we do for our hometown？（点题）In order to make our hometown more beautiful，as students，I think we should start from small things．【高分句型一】（从小事做起）First of all，we should know the importance of protecting the environment．We should plant more trees and flowers and not cut down trees randomly．Second，we had better reuse the bag when shopping．【高分句型二】We can't throw rubbish about，and we should keep the rivers clean and so on．In addition，we must obey public rules and be civilized students．When we got on the bus，we should wait in line．（具体做法）
【名师点评】
能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
【高分句型一】
In order to make our hometown more beautiful， as students， I think we should start from small things．为了使我们的家乡更美丽，作为学生，我认为我们应该从小事开始。
in order to do sth为了做某事；I think+宾语从句。
【高分句型二】
Second， we had better reuse the bag when shopping．第二，我们最好重用当购物袋。
had better do sth 最好做某事。
（四）【2019 •湖南省益阳市】
最近，你美国的笔友Tony在与同学的交往中遇到了烦恼，他写邮件向你寻求帮助。请你以李华的身份给他写一封邮件——提出你的一些建议。
建议内容包括：遇到问题多倾诉，多与他人分享情绪，尊重他人，与人为善，诚实守信……
要求：l．词数60-80，开头结尾己给出，不计入总词数；
2．可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
3．文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息。
参考词汇：share solve respect friendly be honest to
Dear Tony,
I'm sorry to hear that you have problems with classmates: I'm glad to help you. ________________________
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I hope everything will go well with you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作思路】
本文的写作要求是一封电子邮件。首先，对于朋友在交友过程中遇到难题表示歉意。用情态动词提建议，最后希望能交到跟多朋友。然后，分步骤给出另外四个建议处理和同学们的关系。最后希望一切会好起来。
【参考范文】
Dear Tony,
I'm sorry to hear that you have problems with classmates. I'm glad to help you. Here are some suggestions for you.
First, when you have difficulties, you should talk to your parents, your teachers or your friends and share your sadness and happiness with them. They will help you solve the problem.
Second, when you get along with your friends, you are supposed to respect them.
Third, you should be friendly to people around you. You can help each other.
Last but not least, you have to be honest to your friends. Then you will make more friends.
I hope everything will go well with you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【名师点评】
本文对于在和同学们交往中遇到的问题提出建议，分四步给出合理建议，最后指出对朋友要诚实，并希望能够交到更多朋友。用到的短语有：share sth. with sb.；get along with和……相处；be supposed to do应该做某事和Last but not least等，使得文章丰富多彩；长短句搭配合理。
（五）【2019 •贵州省黔南州】
每年的6月6日是我国的"爱眼日"，可见保护中小学生的视力非常重要，为此，学校将在英语文化节期间举行一场"爱眼日"英语演讲比赛．请你写一篇英语演讲稿，谈谈你对保护视力重要性的认识和建议．
内容：1．保护视力的重要性（请写1点）
2．对保护视力的建议：
（1）阅读时注意用眼卫生；
（2）少用电子产品；
（3）常看绿色植物；
（4）做眼保健操；
（5）多做户外运动．
要求：1．结构完整，表达通顺，语言规范，书写清晰；
2．文中不得出现任何真实的人名，学校名等信息；
3．词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：Sight Day "爱眼日"； electronic products 电子产品； eye-protecting exercises 眼保健操
Dear friends,
June 6 is our country's Sight Day _____________________________________________________________
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Thank you!
【参考范文】
Dear friends,
June 6 is our country's Sight Day. As we know, "Eyes are the windows of the soul". Everyone understands the importance of the eyes.（保护视力的重要性）But now more and more students are getting near-sighted. So how can we protect our eyes? Here is some advice on how to protect our eyes.
First, we should be cautious on the health of using eyes. We should not keep your eyes working for a long time. While reading, we should keep the book about a foot away from us. After reading for an hour or two, we had better have a rest by looking at the plants in the distance. Second, using less electronic products is a good way to protect our eyes.【高分句型一】 Besides, we should see green plants as often as possible. Finally, remember to do eye-protecting exercises or do more outdoor sports, which will help us keep good eyesight.【高分句型二】 （对保护视力的几条建议）
（六）【2019 •吉林省】
假如你是李华，想参加China Daily 举办的以"梦想职业体验"为主题的2019年夏令营活动。请给主办人Mr. Smith写一封介绍个人情况的申请邮件。
内容包括：1. 个人信息与兴趣爱好；
2. 梦想职业与个人计划。
写作要求：1. 词数90词左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 文中不得出现真实的学校名称与姓名。
Dear Mr. Smith,
It's my pleasure to introduce myself to you. _____________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I do hope to join in the activity and look forward to your reply．
Best wishes!
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Mr. Smith,
It's my pleasure to introduce myself to you.（开篇点明题意）
My name is Li Hua. I like reading and writing. I spend lots of time reading in the library with my classmates after school （高分句型一）．And I have a habit of keeping a dairy．I want to be a writer when I grow up．So After knowing your summer camp ，I feel very excited because it's about dream job experience．If I have this kind of oppotunity to experience my dream job，I will cherish this chance（高分句型二）．After work，I will spend more time making a summary．（从自己的个人信息和兴趣爱好出发进行介绍自己）
I do hope to join in the activity and look forward to your reply．（结尾给出期望）
Best wishes!
2019年中考真题英语分项汇编
专题21 书面表达
考点3 咨询建议类
（一）【2019 •贵阳市】
假定你是李华，请你以初三毕业生的身份给学弟学妹们写一封电子邮件。要求如下：
1. 重点分享你在处理学习困难方面的经验以及你下一步学习或生活的打算；
2. 邮件不少于80词，开头与结尾已给出，不计入字数；
3. 不得出现真实的个人信息。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【写作思路】
考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。运用适当的短语表达中心思想，增加作文的可读性。完成提示词时也要符合事实。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
【参考范文】
I'm going to graduate from junior high school. Looking back on three years of junior high school life, there are many gains and difficulties. I have many difficulties in learning English. At the very beginning, listening seemed a little difficult for me. So I have been doing a lot of listening practice, such as listening to tapes, watching English TV programs. And I found it really helped a lot. In fact, there are some more helpful ways to learn English well. For example, I enjoy singing English songs and I want to join an English club or find a pen pal from English-speaking countries. I believe that nothing is impossible if you put your heart into it. I am about to start high school life, I will continue to work hard, I hope you bravely face junior high school life, have a happy junior high school life.
【名师点评】
这篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短语,如:So I have been doing a lot of listening practice, such as listening to tapes, watching English TV programs.，这些文章增色不少。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。
（二）【2019 •山东省烟台市】
假设你某英语报社的编辑Rina, 收到Li Wei 同学的来信，诉说了因为肥胖常遭到同学嘲笑的苦恼，并向你寻求建议。请你根据以下提示给Li Wei 回信。

要求：1. 须包括所有要点提示并适当补充，语句通顺，意思连贯；
2. 词数：100词左右；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 文中不得出现个人真实姓名和校名。
参考词汇：laugh at; care about; high- fat food; the more... , the healthier...
Dear Li Wei,
I’ve received your letter and I can understand you. _______________________________________________
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Yours,
Rina
【写作思路】
假设你某英语报社的编辑Rina, 收到Li Wei 同学的来信，诉说了因为肥胖常遭到同学嘲笑的苦恼，并向你寻求建议。请你根据以下提示给Li Wei 回信。本题给出了主要写作要点，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，确定写作内容，并适当发挥。根据内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态和将来时态，写作中注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
【参考范文】
Dear Li Wei,
I have received your letter and I can understand you. You must feel bad when being laughed at use of your over-weight. Here is my advice for you.
Firstly, there is no need to care about what others think of you. The most important thing is to be confident, as it will help you have courage to face and overcome your trouble.
Secondly, try to eat healthily keep away from high-fat food and eat more fruit and vegetables instead. A balanced diet is very important for losing weight.
Thirdly, I strongly advise you to exercise more often. You'd better get up early in the morning and do some sports regularly. The more you exercise, the healthier you'll be.
I hope my advice will be helpful to you.
Yours,
Rina
【名师点评】
这是一篇很好的文章，文中用到了一些好的句型：Firstly, there is no need to care about what others think of you.；Secondly, try to eat healthily keep away from high-fat food and eat more fruit and vegetables instead. A balanced diet is very important for losing weight.这些给文章增色不少。
（三）【2019 •广西省贵港市】
48．（10分）假如你是林涛，你的笔友Sam在学校和同学发生了一些矛盾．现在他来信，请你给他一些关于怎样与他人相处和自我保护的建议．请根据下面表格提示，用英文给他写一封回信
学会相处
学会倾听；
互相帮助；
不在网上交友；
……
自我保护
学会和同学沟通；及时求助老师和父母
对学习、生活的影响
……（不少于2点）
写作要求：1．短文内容必须包含所给要点，并适当发挥
2．语句通顺、语法正确、书写规范
3．文中不能出现考生的真实姓名、校名和地名；
4. 词数80左右．开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数．
参考词汇： respect尊重
Dear Sam，
How is it going？ I'm happy to tell you how to get on well with others and protect ourselves．
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Best wishes!
Yours，
Lin Tao
【写作思路】

【参考范文】
Dear Sam，
How's it going？ I'm happy to tell you how to get on well with others and protect ourselves．（开篇点明题意）
First，We should study how to listen to others．We could be quiet when others are talking with you．Just listen carefully，then you can describe your opinions．Second，We also should be ready to help each other（高分句型一）．Helping others will improve the relationships with your friends．Third，Please don't make friends via the Internet．It's not truthful and you can't judge the truth by yourself．Therefore，we can protect ourselves via communicating with classmates．Meanwhile，We can ask teachers and parents for help．（从如何与人相处和保护自己方面提出建议）
I understand why you are worried，since the friendship also plays an important role in studying， even sometimes in your daily life．Please take above advice，Hope you will deal with it soon．（高分句型二）（对学习，生活的影响以及给出期待）
Best wishes!
Yours，
Lin Tao
（四）【2019 •广西河池市】
"人生没有彩排，生命没有重来"，你平安、健康、快乐地成长是父母最大的心愿．今年6月下旬学校将举办一场以" Keep away from the danger!"为主题的英文演讲比赛．假如你是王雷同学，大家推选你参加这次比赛．请根据以下思维导图提示，写一篇英文演讲稿．
写作提示：

写作要求：1．不得使用真实姓名和学校名；
2．所有的提示词都须用上，包含以上所有要点，可适当增加细节，使内容充实，行文连贯；
3．字迹工整，语言精练，表达准确，条理清楚；
4．词数100词左右。（演讲稿的开头和结尾己给出，不计入总词数。）
Hello! Everyone．I'm Wang Lei．The danger is around us． So we must learn how to keep away from the danger． First， we mustn't go swimming without our parents' or teachers' permission. ______________________
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In a word， we must try our best to keep away from the danger!
That's all． Thank you for listening!
【参考范文】
Keep away from the danger！
Hello! Everyone．I'm Wang Lei．The danger is around us．So we must learn how to keep away from the danger． First， we mustn't go swimming without our parents' or teachers' permission．When we swim in the water，we must wear life jackets．（游泳安全） Second， it's important for us to follow the traffic rules．【高分句型一】We mustn't go across the street when the traffic light is red．While crossing the street， never use mobile phones．We must walk on the pavement．（交通安全）Third，we have to be careful when we make friends， especially online．We mustn't meet net friends alone．（交友安全）Fourth，we are supposed to eat healthily and safely． Eating the food that goes bad will do harm to out health．【高分句型二】Remember to wash hands before meals．（饮食安全）What's more，we have to follow the school rules．Don't run in the hallways，or we'll be hurt easily．We should get on well with our classmates．Don't fight with them．If we are threatened， we should call the police for help in time．（校园安全）Last but not least，we must say no to the drugs．Never try them．When you see someone sell drugs，remember to call 110．（远离毒品）
In a word， we must try our best to keep away from the danger!
That's all． Thank you for listening!
（五）【2019 •贵州省黔南州】
每年的6月6日是我国的"爱眼日"，可见保护中小学生的视力非常重要，为此，学校将在英语文化节期间举行一场"爱眼日"英语演讲比赛．请你写一篇英语演讲稿，谈谈你对保护视力重要性的认识和建议．
内容：1．保护视力的重要性（请写1点）
2．对保护视力的建议：
（1）阅读时注意用眼卫生；
（2）少用电子产品；
（3）常看绿色植物；
（4）做眼保健操；
（5）多做户外运动．
要求：1．结构完整，表达通顺，语言规范，书写清晰；
2．文中不得出现任何真实的人名，学校名等信息；
3．词数80左右．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
参考词汇：
Sight Day"爱眼日"； electronic products电子产品； eye﹣protecting exercises眼保健操
Dear friends．
June 6 is our country's Sight Day _____________________________________________________________
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Thank you！
【参考范文】
Dear friends．
June 6 is our country's Sight Day．As we know，"Eyes are the windows of the soul"． Everyone understands the importance of the eyes．（保护视力的重要性）But now more and more students are getting near﹣sighted．So how can we protect our eyes ？Here is some advice on how to protect our eyes．
First，we should be cautious on the health of using eyes．We should not keep your eyes working for a long time． While reading ，we should keep the book about a foot away from us．After reading for an hour or two，we had better have a rest by looking at the plants in the distance．Second，using less electronic products is a good way to protect our eyes．【高分句型一】 Besides，we should see green plants as often as possible．Finally， remember to do eye﹣protecting exercises or do more outdoor sports， which will help us keep good eyesight．【高分句型二】 （对保护视力的几条建议）
（六）【2019 •海南省】
据悉，我国青少年的近视率居全球第一，70%的学生有视力方面的问题．为引起广大青少年的重视，某英语报刊正在开展以" Saving Our Eyesight"为题的征文活动．请根据以下
提示写一篇短文投稿，分析造成青少年近视的原因并提出保护视力的合理建议．

要求：1．语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范．
2．所有提示须全部用上，并作适当发挥．
3．文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名．
4. 80词左右（文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）．
Saving Our Eyesight
As the saying goes， "Eyes are the window to the soul（心灵 ） "However， 70% of us have poor eyesight． What has caused this problem？ _______________________________________________________
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In a word， lets take care of our eyes so that we can see our bright future．
【参考范文】
Saving Our Eyesight
As the saying goes， "Eyes are the window to the soul（心灵 ） "However， 70% of us have poor eyesight． What has caused this problem？ The main reason is the bad habits of using eyes．For example， many of us read in wrong positions，such as reading in bed or keeping our eyes too close to the book．Besides，taking less exercise can also cause poor eyesight． What's more， some of us spend too much time playing computer games or watching TV． It's bad for our eyes． So how can we protect our eyes ？Here is some advice on how to protect our eyes．（造成青少年近视的原因）
First，we should be cautious on the health of using eyes．We should not keep our eyes working for a long time． While reading ，we should keep the book about a foot away from us．After reading for an hour or two，we had better have a rest by looking at the plants in the distance．Second，using less electronic products is a good way to protect our eyes．【高分句型一】 Besides，we should see green plants as often as possible．Finally， remember to do eye﹣protecting exercises or do more outdoor sports， which will help us keep good eyesight．【高分句型二】 （对保护视力的几条建议）
In a word， let's take care of our eyes so that we can see our bright future．
（七）【2019 •湖南省邵阳市】
每年三月的最后一个星期一是"全国中小学生安全教育日"．为了提高同学们的安全意识，学校决定在毕业前再举行一次以安全教育为主题的班会．请根据所给提示，就日常生活中需要注意的安全写一篇英语发言稿．
提示：1．上学、放学途中的安全；
2．校园里的安全；
3．家里的安全．
要求：1． 80词左右，开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2．语法正确，语句通顺、流畅；
3．文中不得出现真实姓名、校名．
Hello， everyone! The last Monday in March every year is National Safety Education Day of Primary and Middle School Students． As middle school students， we should _____________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Safety is very important． We should always keep it in mind．
Thank you!
【参考范文】
Hello， everyone! The last Monday in March every year is National Safety Education Day of Primary and Middle School Students． As middle school students， we should pay more attention to safety．To be safe，we must follow rules．
When we go to school or go home from school，we must follow the traffic rules．For example，we must walk on walk-side．When we cross zebra﹣crossing，stop and look right and left，then go across the road fast．【高分句型一】We mustn't run through red lights when crossing the road．Don't play football on the road．（上学、放学途中的安全）
At school，don't push when we go upstairs or downstairs，or we may hurt ourselves or others．Never use sharp things like the knife when we play with our classmates．We should get on well with our classmates．Don't fight with them，or we'll be hurt．（上学、放学途中的安全）
At home，we should be careful when we use electricity．If there is a fire or a thief，we should call the police for help in time．（家里的安全．）Also，food satety is important．Never eat the food that goes bad．【高分句型二】
Safety is very important． We should always keep it in mind．
Thank you!
（八）【2019 •青海省】
假如你是小明，你的笔友Sam给你发了电子邮件，请根据邮件内容进行回复．
要求：1．逻辑清晰，内容完整，书写规范．
2．词数80左右．邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数．
chairman：主席 unique：特别的
Dear Xiao Ming
How are you doing？
I am writing to ask you something about the Chinese Culture Week that we are going to hold in September． As the chairman of the Chinese Learning Club at school， I am thinking about how we can organize a unique and amazing activity． Therefore， could you please give me some good suggestions on what theme might be better and what exactly we are going to do？Thanks．
Sam
Dear Sam，
It's a good idea to have such a Culture Week in your school．_______________________________________

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Yours，
Xiao Ming
【参考范文】
Dear Sam，
It's a good idea to have such a Culture Week in your school．It's a good opportunity for you to learn more about culture．（开篇点题）First ，a paper﹣cutting exhibition is a good choice for you． As a traditional Chinese art， paper﹣cutting includes different themes like plants， animals， stories and so on． （剪纸展览）Second， holding a Chinese calligraphy competition can also arouse people's interest， which is very helpful in learning Chinese culture．【高分句型一】（书法比赛） What's more， lectures about Chinese history， poems， traditional festivals，or even food， are surely welcome．（历史，诗歌，传统节日，食物等讲座） And a Chinese painting show is always attractive．（中国画展览）I hope my suggestions will be of great help to you．【高分句型二】
Yours，
Xiao Ming
【名师点评】
高分句型一：
Second， holding a Chinese calligraphy competition can also arouse people's interest， which is very helpful in learning Chinese culture．
第二，举办中国书法比赛也能激发人们的兴趣，这对学习中国文化很有帮助．arouse one's interest激发某人的兴趣，which is very helpful in learning Chinese culture本句使用了非限制性定语从句
高分句型二：
I hope my suggestions will be of great help to you．
我希望我的建议对你有很大帮助．be of great help 有很大帮助
（九）【2019 •山东省烟台市】
假设你是某英语报社的编辑Rina，收到Li Wei同学的来信，诉说了因为肥胖常遭到同学嘲笑的苦恼，并向你寻求建议．请你根据以下提示给Li Wei回信．

要求：1．须包括所有要点提示并适当补充，语句通顺，意思连贯；
2．词数：100词左右；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3．文中不得出现个入真实姓名和校名．
参考词汇：laugh at；care about；high﹣fat food；the more…，the healthier…
Dear Li Wei，
I've received your letter and I can understand you．______________________________________________
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Yours,
Rina
【参考范文】
Dear Li Wei，
I've received your letter and I can understand you．After reading your letter，I can understand you，But don't worry，you're not alone，I am always on your side，Now，I want to share my experience with you． Here is some advice I want to give you．（引起下文）
To keep fit， it is necessary for you to have a healthy diet． You'd better have different foods， especially fruits and vegetables， and drink milk as often as possible．【高分句型一】 It's not a good idea to take weight﹣loss pills for a slim and attractive figure． It is not worth it．（均衡饮食） Having enough sleep together with regular exercise such as walking and riding is also beneficial to your health． Besides， you should take an active part in school sports．（适当运动） In my opinion， it is not a good habit to spend too much time reading， watching TV or chatting on﹣line． 【高分句型二】 Always be active and keep optimistic and don't be discouraged （disappointed/frustrated/upset） whenever you meet with trouble．（保持自信）
If you follow the suggestions above， in no time you will look and feel much better．
Best wishes．
Yours，
Rina
（十）【2019 •四川省达州市】
随着我们不断成长，生活不仅给予了我们许多快乐时光，同时伴随不少烦恼．仔细阅读下面小华写给英语报社的信，结合自己的实际，运用所学知识，请你以编辑的名义，就他的频恼在回信中给出好的建议．
Dear sir，
I'm Xiaohua，15，a middle school student． I have some problems to tell you， my parents always say to me， "Study， study， do homework， do your homework． " when I come back． However，they don' t know how hard I study at school from 7：00 am to 8：30 p．m． every day．
And last Sunday， my 3﹣year﹣old brother troubled me again and again while I was studying for the coming exam． I really wanted to get better grades， so I couldn't stand him any more， I shouted at him in anger， thus he cried loudly． Then my mother came in， she blamed me without asking "why"．
My eyes were full of tears at that time． It was not my fault． Why did she treat me like that？Didn't mother love me？ After all． I'm also her birth child， My dear editor， what can I do？ Could you give me some suggestions？
Sincerely，
Xiaohua
要求：
（1）卷面整洁（无污迹），书写工整（有美感）．
（2）全文字数不少于90词．书信开头和结尾已给出，不计入单词总数．
（3）条理清楚，句式规范，标点符号和大小写使用正确．
（4）内容尽量就小华的烦恼给出好的建议，并适当发挥：文中不能出现真实的人名、地名．
Dear Xiaohua，
I'm glad to receive your letter． I have ever had the same experience． I even had a fight with my parents．But now， I fully understand them． ________________________________________________________________
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I hope these help!
Tony
【参考范文】
Dear Xiaohua，
I'm glad to receive your letter． I have ever had the same experience． I even had a fight with my parents．But now， I fully understand them．（开篇表明自己也碰到过）
First，As parents，their dream is that one day you can get good grades．So they put emphasis on homework every day．Why not talk with your parents？【高分句型一】 you can tell them that you finished your homework if you really did it．Or you can help them do some housework after school．Second，For your little brother，He is just a baby．He is glad to see you after your coming back from school．So he wants to play with you．Why don't you play with him for a few minutes．And you also can tell him that you have something important to do．Maybe he will get your point．At last，Believe your parents．They all love you forever．All you need to do is communication．Then you will get on well with your parents and brother【高分句型一】．（针对对方的信提出三点建议）
I hope these help!（结尾给出期望）
Tony
（十一）【2019 •四川省遂宁市】
在成长过程中，青少年面临越来越多的烦恼，主要体现在精神压力太大．请以此为话题写一篇80词左右的短文．
要点提示：
1． 导致青少年精神压力大的主要原因：
（1）学业 （2）与他人相处
2．减少压力的措施：
（1）积极参加课外活动 （2）多与他人交流沟通
3．简要谈谈你对压力利弊的看法．（至少一点）
注意：1．文章开头已给出，不计入总词数．
2．文章必须包含所给要点提示，要求语句通顺，行文连贯．
3． 不可逐词翻译，应有独自的见解并适当发挥．
4．文章中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名．
We teenagers have more and more pressure while growing up．_____________________________________
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【参考范文】
We teenagers have more and more pressure while growing up．The main reason for pressure is schoolwork and getting along with others．Students have been competing with each other since they were very young， which brings them too much pressure． 【高分句型一】Some students don't know how to get along well with others． They feel loney． This can also bring them pressure and worries．（导致青少年精神压力大的主要原因）I'll give you some ways to relieve pressure．
First of all，you need to take part in all kinds of class activities， such as sports meetings， football games and singing competitions．【高分句型二】In addition， you should be active in group work in class and be brave enough to express your ideas． Try to communicate with your classmates as often as possible．（减少压力的措施）
In my opinion，pressure is not a bad thing．Proper pressure is beneficial to our growth and development．If a person doesn't have pressure， he will become lazy easily．We should learn to face pressure in our life．（对压力利弊的看法）