(新高考)高考英语一轮复习课件选择性必修四 Unit 5 Launching Your Career (含详解)

这是一份(新高考)高考英语一轮复习课件选择性必修四 Unit 5 Launching Your Career (含详解)，共60页。

主题语境：人与自我(职业规划)【话题词汇】1.appint v. 任命，委任2.dismiss v. 解雇3.hire vt. 雇用；租用4.recmmend vt. 推荐5.prmte v. 晋升；促进6.undertake vt. 承担；从事7.train vt. 培训；训练8.easy­ging adj. 随和的9. well­paid adj. 薪水高的10.vacant adj. 空缺的11.skilled adj. 熟练的；有技能的
12.certificate n. 证书13.utspken adj. 直言的，坦诚的14.part­time adj. 兼职的15.cmpetent adj. 能胜任的16.diligent adj. 勤奋的17.awarding adj. 有回报的18.cnsiderate adj. 考虑周到的19.respnsibility n. 责任，负责20.welfare n. 幸福；福利21.salary n. 工资；薪水22.incme n. 收入；所得23.unemplyment n. 失业
【话题短语】1.apply fr 申请2.vluntary wrk 志愿者工作3.devte a bit f ne's time t... 为……抽出一点时间4.shw kindness 表达善意5.wrking experience 工作经验6.be qualified/fit fr 适合，胜任7.take n 雇用；承担8.graduate frm 毕业于
9.get/be prmted 获得晋升10.have a talent fr... 有……才能11.have a gd cmmand f 精通；通晓12.rganisatinal ability 组织能力13.cmmunicatin skills 交流技能14.have an advantage ver... 比……有优势15.make preparatins fr... 为……做准备16.get alng well with... 与……相处得好
【话题佳句】1.And I am writing t apply fr being a vlunteer f ur schl English assciatin.我写信是为了申请成为我们学校英语协会的志愿者。2.I'd be very grateful if yu culd take sme time t g thrugh my resume and make necessary changes.如果你能拿出一些时间仔细检查我的简历并做必要的修改，我将不胜感激。3.I have written my applicatin letter and my resume, which are enclsed in the attachment.我已经写了申请信和简历，并附在了附件里。
【话题练习】1.Anyne wh wants t apply fr the jb must meet the fllwing requirements.任何想申请这份工作的人必须满足以下要求。2.I'd appreciate it if yu wuld ffer me the glden pprtunity I'm always lnging fr. I'm lking frward t yur early reply.如果你给我机会，我会感激不尽。盼望你早日答复。
Ⅰ.重点单词1．________ n. 天资；天赋2．________ n. 律师3．________ vt. 组装；装配vt.&vi. 收集；聚集；集合4．________ vt.&vi. 弹起；上下晃动n. 弹性；弹跳；活力5．________ n. 胸部；乳房6．_________ n. 手腕；腕关节7．____________ n. 新郎8．________ n. 债务；欠债9．________ n. 简介；概述；侧面轮廓vt. 扼要介绍；概述；写简介
10．________ n. 侦探；警探11．________ n. 庄园；住宅区；工业区12．________ n. 密探；间谍vi. 从事间谍活动vt. 突然看见；发现13．________ n. 公平；公正；合理14．________ vt. 控告；控诉；谴责15．________ adj. 贪婪的；贪心的16．________ n. 社会主义者17．________ vt. 把……奉献给18．_____________ n. 书法；书写；笔记
handwriting
19．____________________ vt.&vi. 缝制；缝；做针线活20．________ n. 油炸食品vt.&vi. 油炸；油炒；油煎21．________ n. 优先事项；首要的事；优先22．________ n. 资金；财政；金融vt. 提供资金23．________ n. 合格证书；证明24．________ n. 沙漠；荒漠vt. 遗弃；舍弃；放弃25．________ vt. 获得；购得
sew (sewed—sewed/sewn)
certificate
Ⅱ.拓展单词1．law n．法律；法学；诉讼→________ n．律师→________ adj.法律许可的；合法的2．participate vi.参加；参与→________ n. 参与者；参加者→____________ n．参加；参与 3．rient vt.使适应；使面对→________ adj.东方的；光彩夺目的→________ adj.东方的；东方人的→________ n．方向；定向；适应；情况介绍4．accunt vt.&vi.解释；导致；报账→________ n．会计师5．just adj.公正的；公平的→________ n．公平；正义；司法→________ vt.&vi.为……辩护；证明合法
participant
participatin
6．accuse vt.控告；控诉；谴责→________ n．控告；控诉→________ n．被告→________ n．原告7．greed n．贪婪→________ adj.贪婪的，贪心的→________ adv.贪婪地 ，贪心地→________ n．贪心；贪婪8．receive vt & vi收到；接收；接待→________ n．收据；接收→________ n．接待；接收；招待会；→___________ n. 接待员；传达员9．sciety n．社会；社团→________ adj.社会的；社交的→________ n．社会主义者；adj.社会主义的→________ n．社会主义10．dedicate vt.把……奉献给→________ adj. 专注的；献身的→________ n．奉献；现身11．finance n．财政，财政学；金融 ; vt.&vi.负担经费，供给……经费；筹集资金→________ adj. 财政的；金融的；________ adv. 财政上；金融上12．acquire vt.获得；购得→________ adj. 后天的；已获得的；已成习惯的→________ n．习得；获得；收购
receptinist
financially
联想拓展-­ant表示职业，意为“……人；……者”①participant n. 参与者②accuntant n. 会计③assistant n. 助手④applicant n. 申请者⑤cntestant n. 参赛选手⑥immigrant n. 移民 
-­fy表示动词，意为“使……”①justify vt.&vi. 为……辩护；证明合法②beautify vt. 美化③clarify vt. 澄清；阐明④identify vt. 确定；鉴别⑤classify vt. 分类⑥simplify vt. 简化
Ⅲ.核心短语1．________________ 跳来跳去；蹦来蹦去2．_________________ 起步前的优势3．_________________ 抽屉柜4．________________ 房地产经纪人5．________________ 得出结论6．________________ 关怀；照料；处理7．________________ 灭蚤颈圈8.__________________ 职业能力测试
bunce arund
a chest f drawer
(real) estate agent
cme t a cnclusin
career aptitude tests
9．_________________ 各种各样的10．_________________ 对……热爱 _________________ 对……热爱11．________________ 坐落于……12．________________ 在……方面有经验13．________________ 热衷于做某事14．________________ 为……而准备15．_________________ 适合做某事
a variety f
be passinate abut
have a passin fr
be lcated in
have experience in
be keen t d sth.
be meant fr
be suited t d sth.
联想拓展be＋adj.＋abut 短语小结①be passinate abut 对……热爱②be enthusiastic abut 对……热爱③be curius abut 对……好奇④be psitive abut 对……积极⑤be anxius abut 对……焦虑⑥be particular abut 对……挑剔 “cme t” 短语荟萃①cme t a cnclusin 得出结论②cme t an agreement 达成一致③cme t life 苏醒过来④cme t light 真相大白⑤cme t sb's rescue 营救某人⑥when it cmes t... 当提及……
Ⅳ.重点句型1．This is because... 这是因为……。________________ (这是因为)yur career is a very imprtant part f wh yu are.2．ne way t d sth is t d sth. 一种做……事情的方法是去……________________________________________________________________________ (一个最有效的知晓潜在职业道路的方式是完成) a “career aptitude test”. 3．wish 后的宾语从句要用虚拟语气I wish I ________________ (曾经想过) mre abut what I really wanted t be.
This is because
One f the mst effective way t get sme insight n a pssible career path is t cmplete
高频考点探究Ⅰ.核心词汇1．debt n．债务；借款【典型例句】The cmpany annunced a series f measures t raise cash and reduce debt.这家公司宣布了一系列筹措现金、减少债务的措施。(1)be in heavy debt 负债累累(2)get ut f debt 摆脱债务(3)get int debt 负债(4)pay ff ne's debts 还清某人的债务
【拓展延伸】“in＋n.”短语大聚会①in disguise　　伪装②in shck 震惊③in debt 负债，欠账④in sight 能看到，在视线之内⑤in surprise 吃惊地⑥in danger 处于危险当中⑦in truble 处于困境中
【练透考点】完成句子①Mst f his adult life has been a lsing struggle against ________ (债务) and misfrtune.②With the prblem wrsening，it is ging t be a tugh test fr EU t help Greece __________ (摆脱债务)．③What made him happy was that after all these years he at last ________________.(偿还清所有债务)
paid ff all his debts
2．participant n．参与者；参加者【教材原句】One ppular test asks the participants t grade their preferences fr a variety f wrk tasks. 一个很流行的测试是让参与者给各种各样的工作任务按照偏爱程度打分。(1)participate vi. 参加；参与participate with sb. in sth. 同某人一起参与某事participate in (ding) sth. 参与做某事take part injin in 参加……(2)participatin n. 参与；分担；共享
【词汇升级】低频表达：I am ging t jin in the English speech cntest t be held in July this year.高频表达：I am ging t participate in the English speech cntest t be held in July this year.【练透考点】单句语法填空①Any student wh is interested in this activity is welcme ________________ (participate)．②We encuraged anyne t participate in the singing cmpetitin and the ________ wh wins will be given a gift as prize fr the ________.(participate)③That was the first time that I ________________ (participate) in the exchange study prgramme，which nt nly braden my hrizn but als imprve my cnfidence.
t participate　
had participated
【佳句背诵】As far as I'm cncerned，it will als help yu fit in with yur classmates if yu participate in a variety f after­schl activities.我认为，如果你能参加各种各样的课外活动，这有助于你融入你的同学之中。
3．dedicate vt.把……奉献给【典型例句】Teachers are s cncerned with achievement and “teaching t the test” that they have little time t dedicate t “explratry learning”， the reprt said. 该报告指出，由于教师过分看重成绩和“应试教育”，他们极少会投入精力致力于“探究性学习”的教学。(1) 把……奉献给； 把……专注于dedicate neself/ne's life t 致力于；献身于(2)dedicated adj. 专注的；献身的be dedicated t 专心于；致力于(3)dedicatin n. 献身；奉献
【拓展延伸】表示 “专心于；致力于” 的短语还有：put ne's heart int sth. be devted t sth.be lst/buried in sth.be absrbed in sth.fcus/cncentrate ne's attentin n sth.
【练透考点】单句语法填空①He ________ (dedicate) his whle life t helping the pr and sheltering the hmeless.②The ld teacher devted all his life t educating his students and he was admired fr his _________ (dedicate) t the educatin cause.③Yu will never gain success unless yu are fully dedicated ________ yur wrk.【佳句背诵】As yung peple search fr meaning in their lives, their minds are ften pen t all pssible chices abut what t believe, hw t live, and what, if anything, t dedicate themselves t. 当年轻人探索他们的生命意义时，他们的心灵往往向一切可能的选择敞开，像是关于信仰什么，如何生活，以及——如果一定要这样说的话——为了什么而献身。
4．accuse vt.控告；控诉；谴责【教材原句】There was a huge debate abut whether the reprter shuld be accused f spying n the star cuple.对于是否要控告这名记者监视这对明星夫妇有一场激烈争论。(1)accuse sb.f (ding) sth.＝charge sb.with (ding) sth. 因(做)某事指控某人(2)the accused/accuser 被告/原告(3)accusatin n. 控告；控诉；指控
【拓展延伸】“v.＋sb.＋f＋sth.”结构大集合①infrm sb. f sth. 告知某人某事②warn sb. f sth. 警告某人某事③cure sb. f sth. 治好某人某病④remind sb. f sth. 提醒某人某事⑤suspect sb. f sth. 怀疑某人……⑥rb sb. f sth. 抢劫某人某物⑦cnvince sb. f sth. 使某人相信……⑧accuse sb. f sth. 指控某人……
【练透考点】单句语法填空①A ftballer ________ (accuse) f taking mney fr deliberately nt scring gals s as t let the ther team win.②Fr lack f enugh evidence, the ________ (accuse) was allwed t g free.③A piece f bad news has been spread that the rich man has been accused ________ ding gd things nly t achieve a gd reputatin.【佳句背诵】Have yu ever had a case where smene accused yur jurnalists f getting the wrng end f the stick?你们有没有过这样的情况： 别人控告你们的记者， 说他/她们的报道失实呢？
was accused
5．attend vt.出席；参加；照顾；护理 ；vi.专心；留意【教材原句】We are building a team f keen yung peple t help us attend t hundreds f students frm all ver the wrld.我们正在组建一个由热情的年轻人组成的团队来照料数百名来自全球各地的学生。(1)attend a meeting/lecture/wedding/class　　参加会议/听讲座/参加婚礼/上课(2)attend n/upn sb. 伺候某人；照顾某人attend t 处理；倾听；专心于；照顾(3)attendant n. 服务员；随员，陪从attendee n. 出席者；在场者(4)attendance n. 出席；到场；考勤
【练透考点】①单句语法填空I ________ (attend) Mary's wedding last Saturday，where I ran int ne f my university classmates.②能力提升——句式升级普通表达：[2016·全国卷Ⅲ书面表达]I have an imprtant class meeting t attend，s I can't accmpany yu t the bk stre.高级表达： _________________________________，I can't accmpany yu t the bk stre.(with 复合结构)
With an imprtant class meeting t attend
③一词多义　写出下列句中attend的含义a．Devted t her wrk，she had n time t attend her children.________b．Yu knw，my uncle Li Ming is ging t the city where yu live t attend an internatinal meeting.________c．I can't g ut with yu tnight because I have an urgent thing t attend t.________【佳句背诵】Knwing that yu shw great interest in Chinese culture，I'd like t invite yu t attend the exhibitin with me.知道您对中国文化感兴趣，我想邀请您与我一起参加展览。
Ⅱ.核心短语6．cme t a cnclusin 得出结论【教材原句】S I cme t a cnclusin that if yu want a great career, yu need t cmmit yurself t smething meaningful.所以我得出了一个结论，如果你想有一份伟大的事业，你就必须要投身于有意义的事情。(1)arrive at/cme t/draw/reach a cnclusin得出结论(2)in cnclusin 最后；总之(3)t cnclude 总之
【思维拓展】“总之” 结构大集合in cnclusin　t sum up　in summary　t summarizeall in all　in generaln the whle　generally speaking【练透考点】单句语法填空①________ cnclusin，everyne shuld make cntributins t prtecting the envirnment.②It was ________ that he didn't tell us the truth. I als came t the ________ that he lied.(cnclude)③When the grup discussin is nearing its end，make sure ________ (cnclude) it with imprtant pints.
【佳句背诵】In cnclusin, peple arund the wrld shuld be aware f the real situatin f water shrtage，prtect the present water resurces and explre ptential (潜在的) nes scientifically.总之，全世界的人们应该意识到水资源短缺的现状，保护现有的水资源并科学地开发潜在资源。
7．be meant fr为……而准备【教材原句】Hwever, it is imprtant t remember that they are nly meant fr guidance.但是，请记住，它们仅仅是用作指导，这很重要。be meant/designed/prepared fr sth. 为……而准备mean t d sth. 打算做某事mean ding... 意味着……by this means 通过这种方法by means f 用……办法；借助……by all means 一定，务必；当然可以by n means 决不，一点也不(位于句首时，句子用部分倒装)a means f cmmunicatin 一种通讯/交流工具
【练透考点】单句语法填空①Sme researchers pint ut that daydreaming is a ________ (mean) f relaxatin.②________ n means is punishment a wise chice t help them grw up mentally and physically.③He said mildly t me that he didn't mean ________ (upset) me.
Ⅲ.典型句式精析8．because引导表语从句【教材原句】This is because yur career is a very imprtant part f wh yu are.(P50)这是因为你的职业是你很重要的一部分。【句式分析】because 除了可以引导原因状语从句以外，还可以引导表语从句，主句中系动词要用be动词，用于强调原因，一般译为“这是……的原因”
【误区释疑】三个句型做好区分：This is because... 这是因为……(强调原因)The reasn that... ……的原因是……This is why... 这就是……的原因(强调结果)【练透考点】单句语法填空①That is the reasn ________ he didn't cme t my birthday party yesterday.②Tm was absent­minded in class. This is ________ he stayed up late last night t watch the final game f the Wrld Cup.③The reasn ________ he explained t me fr his absence was that he caught a bad cld.
一句多译她越来越胖的原因是吃太多的垃圾食品。④She is becming fatter and fatter. This is ________ she eats t much junk fd.⑤She eats t much junk fd. That's ________ she is becming fatter and fatter.⑥________________________________________________________________________ she eats t much junk fd.
The reasn why she is becming fatter and fatter is that
9．wish 的宾语从句【教材原句】I wish I had thught mre abut what I really wanted t be. (课本P50)我真希望我当初能想想我到底想干什么啊。【句式分析】wish后面的宾语从句一般用虚拟语气，表示一种不可能实现的愿望，其谓语动词构成形式如下表：
I wish (that)I were a bird and culd fly freely in the sky.我希望我是只小鸟，能在天空自由飞翔。When yu phned me, I was having a meeting；hw I wish I had answered yur call.当你给我打电话的时候，我正在开会。我多么希望当时能接电话啊。
【思维拓展】虚拟语气中表示“希望”的句型(1)if型虚拟语气，如果……，就……Secndly, if I were yu, I wuld take a walk in the evening with my friends.第二，如果我是你，我会在傍晚和朋友一起散步。If I were yu，I wuld certainly make gd use f the time t imprve my perfrmance at schl and prepare myself well fr the future.要是我是你，我肯定会充分利用时间来提高成绩，为未来做好充分准备。(2)wish型虚拟语气，希望……I wish (that) I had met that film star yesterday.我多希望昨天见到了那个影星。(3)if nly型虚拟语气，要是……就好了；但愿……If nly I culd g back and reset my gals.要是我能够回到过去重订目标该有多好。
【语境速测】单句语法填空①I wish there ________________ (be) t many students in a class, s that everyne culd have a chance t vice their pinin.②I wish that yu culd ________ (抓住) this pprtunity t learn traditinal Chinese culture further.③If nly the whle family culd ________ (unit) during the Spring Festival this year!④If I ________ (be) her staff，I really wuldn't tlerate being sclded by her every day.
Ⅰ.高考能力同步化——单句语法填空1．[2020·新高考全国Ⅰ卷]95 undergraduate wmen were individually invited int a lab t stensibly (表面上) participate ________ a study abut mvie viewership.2．[2020·江苏高考]I began a secnd ________ (draw) fr mre general discveries: new cave system discvered with dzens f nameless species，fur hundred species f bacteria fund in the human stmach.3．[2020·新高考全国Ⅰ卷]After high schl, Jennifer ________ (attend) a lcal technical cllege, wrking t pay her tuitin (学费), because there was n extra mney set aside fr a cllege educatin.4．[2019·全国卷Ⅰ]Abve 4,000 meters is the highland ________ (沙漠): gravel (砾石)，stnes and rcks.5．[2019·全国卷Ⅰ]And when yur ________ (emply) begin adding smiling emjis t their business cmmunicatin, yu'll knw yu have succeeded in imprving yur wrk culture.
6．Chris was a true her in his ________ (dedicate) and cmmitment t bringing the imprtant news and the stries f thse less frtunate t us all frm far ff places.7．Is learning a freign language a questin f learning new skills r a questin f ________ (acquire) new knwledge? 8．Once upn a time, in a beautiful muntain inn, there was a ________ (greed) ld innkeeper wh was always thinking abut mney. 9．There is a gd scial life in the village，and I wish I ____________ (have) a secnd chance t becme mre invlved.10．On display are mst f ur prducts, such as silk, ________ (wl) knitwear, cttn piece gds, and garments.
Ⅱ.必备知识试题化——完成句子1．There is n dubt that the best prize in life is the pprtunity ___________________________________.毫无疑问，生命最好的奖品就是有机会从事值得奉献的事业。2．By analyzing the data f the experiment, the authr ________________ students' attitude t English has a change and their English scres can be imprved in the cperative learning class. 通过数据的分析，作者最后得出结论，即学生对英语的学习态度通过合作学习有了很大改变，并且他们的成绩有了很大提高。
t dedicate t a cause wrthy f dedicatin
drew a cnclusin that
3．I wish ________________________________， but that's fr yu t decide. 我希望你和我们一起回华盛顿，但由你自己决定。4．Mst peple say they are happy, but perhaps ________________ they are expected t be. 大多数人声称自己幸福，或许只是因为他们希望如此而已。5．I think _____________________________ is t read English nvels. 我认为扩大词汇量的最好方法是读英文小说。
yu wuld cme back t Washingtn with us
that is because
the best way t enlarge yur vcabulary
Ⅲ.教材语篇高考化——语法填空阅读下面短文，在空白处填入1个适当的单词或括号内单词的正确形式。Yur career plays a vital rle in yur life and defines wh yu are, s it is wrthwhile t take time t think abut it.Yu'd better start 1.________________ (cnsider) yur future career when yu are still at schl. 2.________， this is nt always easy, fr yu may just have a few ideas 3.________ (bunce) arund in yur head.
cnsidering/t cnsider
One f the best way t get sme insight 4.________ an pssible career path is t cmplete a “career aptitude test”， the result f 5.________ will tell yu abut yur advantages and interests and give yu advice n the career yu may be 6.________ (suit) t. There are a large number f different kinds f career aptitude tests, sme fr yur persnal attitudes and interests, 7.________ thers fcusing n asking yu t rate different kinds f wrk scenaris. After finishing the test, yu may get a list f career 8.________ (suggest). Hwever useful career aptitude tests may be, yu need t remember that they are nly meant fr 9.________ (guide). S what's the secret t a gd career? The answer is finding smething that yu are 10.________ (true) passinate abut!
[2021·山东省实验中学高三期中考试]阅读下面材料， 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段， 使之构成一篇完整的短文。A lng time ag, when I had lng brwn hair and fewer wrinkles—actually s lng ag that I nearly had n wrinkles—I gt my first jb in a televisin statin. Yu have t remember, that was in 1975.I had struggled int the lcal newsrm, but there were nt many wmen n TV at that time, and I had gently reminded the management f that. I had n experience n televisin, but with a sigh, the news directr admitted he might be able t make me, a 25­year­ld yung wman, int a TV reprter.
And what if he culdn't? N big deal. I had n cntract, and my salary was $8000 a year. If anyne wh desperately needed a mentr (导师), it was me. I had n idea hw t reprt, write r sht a stry fr televisin news. And just as scary as that, n ne seemed eager t teach me. As a result, I nw admit, every night fr tw weeks r s, I went hme sbbing. Terrified and verwhelmed, I had n idea what I was suppsed t d, let alne hw t be successful at it. It lked pretty unprmising fr my TV career.Then ne day, I was assigned a stry n health care. I thught that wuld certainly be the end f it. Nt nly did I knw nthing abut TV, but als I knew nthing abut the new health care law. There was n way this was ging t wrk. I felt lst and cnfused. But then I knew I gt assigned t wrk with an experienced phtgrapher named Walt. He'd been arund since he became a prfessinal.
Stand here. Say this. Call this guy. Ask this questin. Here's hw t hld the micrphne. Here's hw t use yur hands. Here's hw t cntrl yur vice. Here's hw t lk int the camera. Fr maybe three weeks, he taught me at every mment. And sn after, I realized, “Hey, I lve this. And I can d it well.” And I've been a TV reprter ever since. Withut my mentr, I culdn't have made it. I prmised myself that I wuld pass it alng.
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2．请按如下格式作答。One day, a newcmer, Linda, arrived at my TV statin.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Tw years later, Linda became an excellent editr in ur TV statin, and she may prvide valuable advice fr my new bk.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Step 1　品读语篇　抓住要点Wh：____________________________________________________What：___________________________________________________Where: ________________________________________________________When: ____________________________________________________________人称： ________ ; 时态： ________ ；何种细节描写为主：心理□ ；动作□；语言□；表情□；环境□；外貌□
Mr. Walt; the authr; Linda
Mr. Walt, like a mentr, taught the authr hw t be a qualified reprter.
the lcal newsrm
Linda was new in the newsrm
Step 2　审题构思　研读首句Para. 1: One day, a newcmer, Linda, arrived at my TV statin.1．据第一段开头关键词和原文可知，本段应该描写 ________________________________________。Para. 2: Tw years later, Linda became an excellent editr in ur TV statin, and she may prvide valuable advice fr my new bk.2．据第二段开头关键词可知，本段应该描写_________________________________________________。
作者如同当年Authr 帮助她一般帮助了新人Linda
Linda如何帮助作者编辑新书
Step 3　斟酌打磨　丰富句式1．精挑细选——核心词汇想周全①________________　　　　热情②___________________________ 给……留下深刻印象③________________ 熟悉④________________ 取得巨大进步⑤___________________ 表达感谢
leave a deep impressin n sb.
be accustmed t
make great prgress
express my appreciatin
2．闪耀登场——句式升级是亮点句式翻译：①我决定成为她的导师，就像当年Walt先生做的一样，许诺要不遗余力地帮助她指导她成为一个优秀的编辑。I decided t be her mentr just like Walt did t me，and prmised t spare n effrt t help her and instruct her t be an excellent editr.(用非谓语作伴随状语)→________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I decided t be her mentr just like Walt did t me, prmising t spare n effrt t help her and instruct her t be an excellent editr.
②尽管琳达没有经验，但是她进步很大也展示出对工作的热情。Althugh Linda was unexperienced, she made great prgress and shwed her dedicatin t her jb.(用倒装句)→________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Unexperienced as Linda was, she made great prgress and shwed her dedicatin t her jb.
Step 4　逻辑衔接　连句成文参考范文：One day, a newcmer, Linda, arrived at my TV statin.The instant I saw her, her passin and cnfidence left a deep impressin n me. Cnfused and lst, at first, she was quiet nt accustmed t the jb as an editr and failed t make a head start. S I decided t be her mentr just like Walt did t me, prmising t spare n effrt t help her and instruct her t be an excellent editr. Unexperienced as Linda was, she made great prgress under my guidance and shwed her dedicatin t her jb. Once in a while, it reminded me f the time I spent with Walt, which inspired me t write a bk abut my career and my fellw clleagues.Tw years later, Linda became an excellent editr in ur TV statin, and she might prvide valuable advice fr my new bk.It was a bk abut my life in the TV statin, aimed at expressing my appreciatin t Mr. Walt as well as inspiring all thse yung wmen wh wrked hard and wanted t make a difference t the wrld. Deeply mved by it, Linda tried her best t plish the language. On the day the bk came ut, I thanked Linda with gratitude, but Linda tld me that she wuld never frget my help and wuld like t pass it alng.
读后续写专题之七　润色文采　完美亮卷读后续写多以记叙文故事类文章或者夹叙夹议类文章为主，故事情节有曲折、有起伏，但故事线索的逻辑性比较强。因为该题型具有一定的开放性，不仅要发挥想象力、创造性思维构思情节，注意行文通顺与连贯、过渡与衔接等，还要对文章进行润色，尝试使用高级词汇和复杂句式，运用修辞手法，以增加文章的亮点。一、词汇1．注意区分同义词、近义词的细微差异。a little by小男孩(侧重年龄小) a small by小男孩(侧重体型小)rest rm 厕所(不是休息室)What a shame! 多可惜，真遗憾！(不是真可耻)
2．恰当使用限定词用词准确，从另一个角度来讲就是要使论述客观、适度，这就需要考生适当使用一些限定词，以避免观点的绝对化，从而提高说服力和可信度；或根据需要加以强调，增强感染力。He is the tp student in ur class.→He is ne f the tp students in ur class.He is the teacher wh knws French in ur schl.→He is the nly ne f the teachers wh knws French in ur schl.3．使用较正式的书面语，避开口语化的表达。This is the best htel yu can find here.Yu can't find a better htel here.或Nwhere else can yu find a better htel.
二、句式1．恰当运用连词和句型，变简单句为并列句或复合句。Natural resurces are very limited.They will be exhausted in the near future.It is nt true.But it becmes a majr cncern arund the wrld.This is a widely accepted fact.→It is a widely accepted fact that there is a majr cncern arund the wrld fr the exhaustin f limited natural resurces in the near future，thugh it is unlikely t be true.2．借用关键词汇(介词，不定式等)压缩句子长度，提升句子品位。The flat has an area f 25 square metres and there is a bedrm，a bathrm，and a kitchen in it.The flat has an area f 25 square metres with a bedrm，a bathrm and a kitchen.
3．转换语态，主动变被动。Smene saw him studying hard in his study.→He was seen studying hard in his study.4．运用倒装，调整语序。The schlar didn't write a single paper the whle term.→Nt a single paper did the schlar write the whle term.The rain came dwn and the umbrellas went up.→Dwn came the rain and up went the umbrellas. 5．巧妙强调，增强震撼力。He didn't realize his mistake until the whle case came t light.→It was nt until the whle case came t light that he realized his mistake.Yu must write t me when yu get there.→D remember t write t me when yu get there.
6．感叹、省略，精炼有力。Time flies like an arrw.→Hw time flies!Lk ut fr cars when yu are crssing the street.→Lk ut fr cars when crssing the street.7．虚拟语气，娓娓道来。Yu didn't take my advice，s yu failed in the exam.→If yu had taken my advice，yu wuldn't have failed in the exam.8．非谓语动词，提升品位。They sang and laughed as they went back t schl.→Singing and laughing，they went back t schl.9．运用插入语，活泼跳脱。I think the bk is well wrth reading.→The bk，in my pinin，is well wrth reading.
10．格言警句，入情入理。(1)Where there is a will, there is a way.有志者事竟成。(2)N pains, n gains.没有付出就没有收获。(3)Cnstant dripping wears away a stne.水滴石穿，绳锯木断。(4)Care and diligence bring luck.谨慎和勤奋才能抓住机遇。(5)Genius is nthing but labr and diligence.天才不过是勤奋而已。(6)Great hpes make great man.伟大的抱负造就伟大的人物。(7)Industry is the parent f success.勤奋是成功之母。(8)N rse withut a thrn.没有不带刺的玫瑰。(9)There is n ryal rad t learning.书山有路勤为径，学海无涯苦作舟。(10) Success belngs t the persevering.坚持就是胜利。
三、修辞手法1．比喻(like, as, , as if, f, cmpared t, be similar t等)The scenery alng the jurney is just like a breath－taking landscape painting.沿路的风景就像一幅美丽的山水画卷。The smile n her face was as vibrant as the sun n a summer day.她脸上的笑容和夏天的太阳一样充满活力。Her hair grew greyer and greyer, as if (it were) cvered with snw and frst.他的头发越来越白了，简直像盖了一头皑皑的霜雪。
2．拟人Fear seized/swallwed him.恐惧把他吞噬了。The breeze gently kissed her cheeks. 微风轻柔地亲吻着她的脸庞。Birds n the tree are singing a beautiful sng.树上的小鸟在树上唱着美妙的歌曲。The feathery snwflakes danced in the night air, making a beautiful picture.鹅毛般的雪花在空中飞舞，像一幅美丽的图画。
3．夸张I feel like I am flating in an cean f sadness.我感觉自己像漂浮在悲伤的海洋中。My heart brke in abut a millin pieces.我的心成了碎片。I almst laughed my head ff.我都快笑死了。正是这些语言能力的充分体现，词汇句法的准确与复杂程度，细节描写的生动性，让故事更加立体饱满。考生在写作练习中要多次修改，精益求精，使得续写段落在各个语言层次的表达风格上和原文保持一致，达到水乳交融的效果。多积累、勤练习，定会收到满意的效果。
四、学以致用阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。[2020年浙江卷读后续写改写]“I'm ging t miss yu s much, Pppy，” said the tall, thin teenager. He bent dwn t hug his ld friend gdbye. He std up, hugged his parents, and smiled, trying nt t let his emtins(情绪) get the better f him.His parents were nt quite able t keep theirs under cntrl. They had driven their sn several hurs ut f twn t the university where he wuld sn be living and studying. It was time t say gdbye fr nw at least. The family hugged and smiled thrugh misty eyes and then laughed.The by lifted the last bag nt his shulder, and flashed a bright smile. “I guess this is it，” he said. “I'll see yu back hme in a mnth, kay ” His parents ndded, and they watched as he walked ut f sight int the crwds f hundreds f students and parents. The by's mther turned t the dg, “Okay, Pppy, time t g back hme.”
The huse seemed quiet as a tmb withut the by living there. All that week, Pppy didn't seem interested in her dinner, her favrite ty, r even in her daily walk. Her wners were sad t, but they knew their sn wuld be back t visit. Pppy didn't.They ffered the dg sme f her favrite peanut butter treats. They even let her sit n the sfa, but the ld girl just wasn't her usual cheerful self. Her wners started t get wrried. “What shuld we d t cheer Pppy up” asked Dad. “We've tried everything.”
“I have an idea, but it might be a little crazy，” smiled Mm. “Withut anybdy left in the huse but us, this place culd use a bit f fun. Let's get a little dg fr Pppy.”It didn't take lng befre they walked thrugh the frnt dr carrying a big bx. Pppy welcmed them hme as usual, but when she saw the bx, she stpped. She put her nse n it. Her tail began wagging(摆动)ever s slwly, then faster as she caught the smell.
注意：1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2．续写部分分为两段， 每段的开头语已为你写好。Dad pened the bx and a sweet little dg appeared.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________A few weeks later, the by arrived hme frm university._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
读后续写的部分写作片段：1．初写①Pppy was fascinated by the adrable puppy.②She stared at him feverishly. ③Then she bunced arund with energy n the sft pads.润色：Fascinated by the adrable puppy, Pppy stared at him feverishly, buncing arund with energy n the sft pads.2．初写①Pppy Sptted the puppy. ②She was verjyed.③Her eyes became mellw and affectinate. 润色：Sptting the puppy, Pppy was verjyed, with her eyes becming mellw and affectinate.
3．初写：Pppy stared at the little dg. The little dg als stared at her, t. The pppy shared her dinner and her favrite ty with the little dg.润色：Pppy stared at the little dg in curisity, wagging her tail in a cheerful spirit t shw her welcme. The little dg als stared at her cautiusly with his crystal­blue eyes which were s adrable and then let ut a sft bark as if t greet Pppy. After a brief sniffing, the tw dgs seemed t enjy each ther's cmpany, barking, chasing each ther arund the living rm happily. Pppy even shared her dinner and her favrite ty with the little dg.
4．翻译：令父母开心的是这只大眼睛小狗的到来成功地为这个一直闷闷不乐的Pppy 带来了欢乐。初写：T the parents' delight, the arrival f the puppy brught happiness t Pppy.润色：T the parents' delight, the arrival f the puppy with big eyes successfully brught happiness t Pppy wh had been unhappy fr a lng time.
5．润色之后的读后续写Dad pened the bx and a sweet little dg appeared.Pppy stared at the little dg in curisity, wagging her tail in a cheerful spirit t shw her welcme. The little dg als stared at her cautiusly with his crystal­blue eyes which were s adrable and then let ut a sft bark as if t greet Pppy. After a brief sniffing, the tw dgs seemed t enjy each ther's cmpany, barking, chasing each ther arund the living rm happily. Pppy even shared her dinner and her favrite ty with the little dg. T the parents' delight, the arrival f the puppy with big eyes successfully brught happiness t Pppy wh had been unhappy fr a lng time.
A few weeks later，the by arrived hme frm university. Fr several weeks he had been picturing Pppy's lnely and miserable life and exhilarated eyes upn seeing him. Entering the huse, hwever, he was surprised t find playing s cheerfully n the flr were just his Pppy and anther dg, cmpletely absrbed in their happy wrld. Then he felt a gentle pat n his shulder. It was mm with a smile, “Amazing they get alng s well and the nce energetic Pppy came back again.” Instantly, mments f lneliness in the university flashed acrss his mind. “I shuld als learn t get alng with thers and adapt t new envirnment, just like them，” he murmured.