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5年（2018-2022）中考1年模拟英语真题分项汇编（河北专用）
专题07 书面表达

（2022年河北省中考英语真题）
56．假如你是学校英文网站的主编，准备在网站设立Dialogue with Teachers专栏（column）.
请根据下面的提示写一篇短文，谈一谈设立此专栏的目的。
提示：（1）Develop a good relationship（understand, become friends）.
（2）Give some suggestions（on homework, after-school activities,…）.
注意：（1）短文须包括提示中的两个要点，可适当发挥。
（2）文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
（3）词数80个左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
We plan to have a new column—Dialogue with Teachers on the school English website. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
例文
We plan to have a new column—Dialogue with Teachers on the school English website. We hope to help students and teachers understand each other and eventually become good friends through this column. If you have any questions, you can ask the teacher directly through the column, and the teacher will reply on time.
At the same time, some teachers will put forward some suggestions on how to work efficiently and solve problems. Of course, we will also make suggestions for after-school activities. When the exam comes, some teachers will give some suggestions on homework and how to review.
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据提示内容，谈一谈设立此专栏的目的，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第二、第三人称来行文，时态用一般现在时和一般将来时。作文可分为两段，第一段介绍设立专栏的目的之一是为了发展良好的关系；第二段介绍设立专栏的目的之一是为了给一些建议 。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
（2021·河北中考真题）
初中生活已近尾声，同学们即将步入高一级学校。请你仔细阅读下表中的内容和所给提示，从下面两所学校中选择一所你喜欢的学校，并根据该校信息写一篇短文。
Names
Items(条目)
Purple School
Orange School
Schools
public, a long history
private, well-known
Teachers
hard-working
young and active
Students
less homework
colorful activities
提示：(1) Which school would you like to go to?
(2) Why do you choose it?
注意：1. 短文须包括表格中你所选学校的全部信息和提示中的两个要点，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名；
3. 词数80个左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)
I would like to go to __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
例文:
I would like to go to Orange School.
I like Orange School better because it is a private school and it is well-known in our city. There are a lot of new and modern teaching facilities. We can have access to the most advanced equipment and experience the best teaching effects. What’s more, the teachers in Orange School are young and active. I think it is important and helpful for us to develop a good relationship with teachers. And it is good for our study. Last but not least, students there have colorful activities and I hope the school life will be wonderful there.
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据提示内容，选择一所喜欢的学校进行写作。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一和第三人称来行文，时态用一般现在时。作文要分别介绍学校的特点、学校老师和学生的情况等。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
（2020·河北中考真题）
李硕今年五岁，他的妈妈疫情期间去支援武汉。请根据下面四幅图片及文字提示写一篇短文。

say goodbye kiss his mother

receive a warm welcome give her a big hug
注意：（1）短文须包括每幅图片的主要信息，可适当发挥，提示词语供参考；
（2）文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名；
（3）词数80左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Li Shuo is a five-year-old boy. One Sunday afternoon, his mother was going Wuhan to help patients there.

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例文：
Li Shuo is a five-year-old boy. One Sunday afternoon, his mother was going Wuhan to help patients there. His father took him to say goodbye to her. One day, he saw his mother on TV while she was away. He missed her so much that he kissed his mother across the TV screen. When the outbreak was under control, his mother came back with other medical workers. They received a warm welcome. As soon as his mother got home, Li Shuo gave her a big hug. How he misses his mother!
【详解】
1. 题干解读：本题属于看图作文，题目的开头已给出。要求根据图画内容并结合文字提示，发挥想象来写一篇英语作文。写作时要包含每幅图片的主要信息并进行适当发挥。适当使用副词和连词等增加亮点。写好时，再阅读一遍，减少语法错误，不要犯单词拼写上的错误。
2. 例文点评：这是一篇比较优秀的例文。例文紧扣题目要求，根据图画及文字提示，以一般过去时讲述了李硕的妈妈去武汉抗疫到回来的过程中的几个细节。例文简明扼要，结构清晰，语言表达到位。
3. 高分亮点：
短语：say goodbye to sb.；across the TV screen；be under control；come back；medical workers；receive a warm welcome；give sb. a hug。
句型：while引导的时间状语从句；so ... that引导的结果状语从句；when引导的时间状语从句；as soon as引导的时间状语从句；以how开头的感叹句。
（2019·河北中考真题）
文明礼貌从我做起，从现在开始，从点滴小事做起。请根据下面的提示和要求，以 “When to Say Thank You”为题，写一篇短文。
提示:1) When should we say “thank you” at home?
2) When are we supposed to say “thank you” at school?
3) ...
要求:1) 短文须包括提示中的两个要点和一个补充要点，可适当发挥。
2) 短文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
3) 词数80个左右。(开头已给出，不计入总词数)
参考词汇:wash, encourage, open
When to Say Thank You
It’s polite to say “thank you” when others help us or say something kind to us.
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例文：
When to Say Thank You
It’s polite to say “thank you” when others help us or say something kind to us.Being polite is a good tradition in our country.Nobody likes a person who is impolite.It’s important for us to be polite.We should say “thank you” to parents when they cook for us.We should say “thank you” when they wash clothes for us.We should also be polite at school.When the teachers help us work out questions ,we should say “thank you” to them.When we get bad grades and the teachers and classmates encourage us,we should say “thank you”.When someone open the door for us,we should say “thank you”.We should say “thank you” as often as possible.If everyone is polite to others,the world will be more and more beautiful.
【详解】
这是一篇要求介绍我们在家和在学校怎么做个有礼貌的人。动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料可知本文主要是应用第一人称，一般现在时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
重点短语和句型：say “thank you” to sb 对某人说“谢谢”，it’s+形容词+for sb to do sth 做某事对某人来说怎么样，help sb do sth帮助某人做某事，as often as possible尽可能经常的
（河北省2018年中考英语试题）
56．请仔细观察下面的图片，并根据所给提示和要求写一篇短文。
提示：（1）What are the man and the woman doing?
（2）What should you do when you see people litter like this? Why?
要求：（1）短文须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。
（2）短文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名。

（3）词数80个左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
参考词汇：throw, environment, civilized(文明的
I can see a man and a woman in the picture. The man is_______________
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【答案】
I can see a man and a woman in the picture. The man is throwing his rubbish in the public place.The other woman is stopping him and telling him to put it into the dustbin.The city is our home. We should protect it. Therefore, when we see someone litter like this, we should act like the woman.The environment should be protected by everybody.We should be civilized citizens.
【解析】
亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如in the picture，in the public place，the other woman，put it into the dustbin，like this。而I can see a man and a woman in the picture./ We should protect it./ We should be civilized citizens.等多种情态动词句式it is important for everyone to protect them.的运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样，是本文的最大亮点。
点睛：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

1．（2022·河北·廊坊市育人学校一模）
请根据问题提示和要求写一篇短文。
提示：
(1) Do you have a lot of homework these days?
(2) How can you relax yourself?
(3) What’s your advice about developing good learning habits?
要求：
(1)短文须包含所有提示内容，可适当发挥；
(2)短文不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
(3)词数 80 字左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）
I am a Grade 9 student in the middle school. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2．（2022·河北保定·二模）
2021年，国家出台了“双减”政策（“double reduction” policy），即有效减轻义务教育阶段学生过重作业负担和校外培训负担。请你根据以下提示，谈谈政策实施后同学们该如何规划自己的学习和课余时间。
提示：
（1）What should we do in class?
（2）How will we finish our homework?
（3）How should we make good use of our free time?
注意：
a.短文须包括所有要点，可适当发挥；
b.文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名；
c.词数80左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
It is really wonderful news that the “double reduction” policy has been carried out. As middle school students, we need to make good use of our time. I’d like to share my ideas.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3．（2022·河北唐山·二模）
假如你是李华，你所在的阳光学校开展丰富多彩的课外活动（After-school Activities），请你用英语介绍你校的课外活动及你本人参加的课外活动的情况。
Activities at school
English corner
Chess club
…
You
…
Your thought
…

要求：1、表达中必须包含所给提示要点，可以适当发挥；
2、词数80左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
3、短文中不得出现真实人名、校名和地名。
参考词汇：relax, keep healthy, improve, knowledgeI’m Li Hua, from Class 1, Grade 9. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
4．（2022·河北保定·二模）
你的美国笔友David想了解现在初中生的偶像观，下表是深圳某中学一些学生的回答。假如你是该校的一名学生李华，请根据下表的文字提示，给David回信，谈谈你校同学的偶像观，并适当发表自己的观点。
过去的偶像：歌星、影视明星
1. 明星有酷的发型和服饰，他们很时尚；
2. 他们有天赋，会表演有趣的节目；
3. 他们的表演让人放松；
如今的偶像：科学家、医护人员等
1. 科学家发明高科技产品来保卫国家安全；
2. 医生和护士拯救人们的生命；
3. 当国家和人民处于困境时，他们……
你的观点
作为学生的我们……
要求：1.   80-100词。（开头的首句已给出，不计算在词数内）
2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。
参考词汇：idol偶像       fashionable时尚的       wisdom智慧       respect尊重
Dear David,Last week, our school did a survey about “Who is your idol?”. Here are our answers. In the past, we ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
5．（2022·河北唐山·二模）
国务院颁布了“双减”政策，旨在减轻义务教育阶段学生课业负担，同时提质增效。某英语报就此将举办“双减时代如何提高学习效率”的征文比赛。请根据以下要点写一篇英语短文参赛。
要点提示：
Learning methods:
preview(预习), review…
Good habits:
sleep well, do sports…
Others:
do more reading , take notes …

参考词汇： efficiency(效率); double reduction policy(双减政策)
注意事项：
1. 短文词数 80 左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 意思通顺，表达清楚，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名。With the double reduction policy, we have less homework to do. Learning efficiency is becoming more important.
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6．（2022·河北唐山·一模）
疫情居家隔离期间，九年级一班的小华在日记本上记录了居家一日活动，请仔细阅读下表中的内容和所给提示，根据下面表格中的信息写一篇短文。
STUDY
have online classes
take online exams
ACTIVITIES
do some sports
take up some hobbies
OTHERS
take daily nucleic acid tests(做核酸检测)
……

要求：(1)短文须包括表格中的全部信息，可适当发挥，提示词语供参考；(2)文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名；            
(3)词数80个左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Because of the outbreak of the new coronavirus in Tangshan, Xiao Hua as well as her family ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
7．（2022·河北唐山·二模）
三年来，因为疫情，我们经历过特殊的学习生活，有的居家隔离不能按时上学，有的被封控在学校不能回家。请你选择其中一种情况谈谈你的经历、感受和收获。
提示要点: (1) What did you do when you stayed at home/school
(2) How did you feel at that time
(3) What did you learn from this special experience
参考词汇: positive（乐观的）, self-disciplined（自律的）
注       意: (1) 短文须包含所有提示要点，可适当发挥，参考词汇供选用。
(2) 短文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
(3) 词数80个左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)
When I stay at ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
8．（2022·河北石家庄·二模）
新修订的职业教育法（the Vocational Education Law）于5月1日起施行，明确了职业教育是与普通教育具有同等重要地位的教育类型。请根据以下思维导图谈谈你对职业教育（vocational education）的认识。

提示∶
1. 语句通顺、意思连贯、可根据提示适当发挥；
2. 词数80个左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
The Vocational Education Law took effect（生效）on May 1. It says that vocational education is as important as general education. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
9．（2022·河北·邯郸市邯山区芳园实验中学一模）
俗话说“没有规矩不成方圆”。请你根据下面的提示内容，围绕“Family Rules”这一主题写一篇英语短文。
提示：
（1）What are your family rules?
（2）How do you feel about the rules?
注意：
（1）短文应包括所给提示内容，可适当发挥，使文章连贯；
（2）不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息；
（3）词数：80左右。
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10．（2022·河北唐山·二模）
李梅是一名九年级的学生，一天放学后，她发现父母还没有下班回家，于是懂事的她想亲自为父母做一顿饭，请根据下面四幅图和文字提示写一篇英语短文进行描述，并谈谈你对这件事情的看法。
注意：
（1）短文需包括每幅图片的主要信息，可适当发挥，提示语供参考；
（2）文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名和人名；
（3）词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Li Mei is a student in Grade Nine. One day after school, she found her parents didn’t come back from work. Then she got an idea._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
11．（2022·河北秦皇岛·二模）
习主席在全国教育大会上强调，中学生要做德智体美劳全面发展的社会主义建设者和接班人。假如你是李华，请根据以下要点提示写一篇英语演讲稿，简单谈谈如何做一个新时代合格的中学生。
要点提示：
1.爱国爱家，诚实守信，善良感恩;
2.努力学习，做个有创造力的人;
3.多参 加体育锻炼，保持身心健康;
4.善于发现生活中的美,热爱大自然，守护家园;
5.积极参加校内外的各种劳动。
写作要求：
1.词数90左右 (开头已经给出，不计人总词数);
2.根据要点提示，可以适当发挥;
3.文中不得出现真实的姓名及校名。
参考词汇: keep one's promise 守信;   be thankful to sb. 感恩某人； creative有创造力的;       nature自然; protect保护; beauty美; activity活动
Boys and girls，
My name is Li Hua. Today I'm glad to share my ideas about how to be good students
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参考答案：
1．例文：
I am a Grade 9 student in the middle school. I have a lot of homework these days. I am very busy.
To relax myself, I often listen to music at home. I sometimes do some sports on the playground after class.
About learning habits, I have some advice. First, we should listen to the teacher carefully and take notes in class. Second, It’s important for us to finish homework in time. If we meet problems, we can ask teachers for help.
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文要求围绕题干三个提示点完成一篇短文，内容包括：最近家庭作业多吗；怎样才能放松自己；就如何养成良好的学习习惯，提出自己的建议。
2.写作指导：本文用第一人称、一般现在时写作。书写时要紧扣题干的三个提示点；使用表顺序的副词提出建议，使上下文之间逻辑清楚；注意短语、语法的正确使用和单词拼写。适当使用连词提高文章的档次。
2．例文
It is really wonderful news that the “double reduction” policy has been carried out. As middle school students, we need to make good use of our time. I’d like to share my ideas. First of all, we should listen to our teachers carefully and take notes of the key points in class. Secondly, we should make full use of time. For example, whenever we have trouble in our study, we can discuss the problems with our classmates or turn to our teachers after class. Thirdly, we are supposed to finish our homework efficiently, which means we should develop the ability of focusing on what we are doing.
I’m sure, with the policy successfully carried out, we will enjoy a happier life and grow into a better person.
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文写作内容主要分为三个部分：第一部分论述在课堂上我们应该怎么做；第二部分论述我们应如何完成家庭作业；第三部分论述我们课下应该怎么做。文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名；开头已给出，不计入总词数，字数在80左右。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述内容；时态采用一般现在时为主。在写要点的时候要逻辑连贯，善用连接词；且适当写出具体措施，不要宽泛，保证条理清晰。
3．[例文]
I’m Li Hua, from Class 1, Grade 9. In our school, there are many after-school activities such as English corner, Chess club, Basketball Club, Football Club and Art Club.
After school, I always join some interesting activities to relax myself. I like joining the English corner because it can improve my ability of speaking English. And I also like playing basketball because it can keep me healthy.
All in all, after-school activities make my life more colorful and meaningful.
【解析】
1.题干解读：本题为材料作文，要求根据所给提示要点写一篇文章，介绍学校开展的课后活动以及自己参加的课后活动和想法。
2.写作指导：写作时人称应用第一人称，时态应用一般现在时。题目所给要点不全，所以写作时要适当增加细节使文章内容更加饱满。文章分三个部分，第一部分写学校开展的课后活动，第二部分写自己参加的活动，第三部分写自己对课外活动的看法。文章应做到层次分明，思路清晰，语言流畅。
4．Dear David,
        Last week, our school did a survey about “Who is your idol?”. Here are our answers. In the past, we thought singers and movie stars were our idols. They always have cool hairs and clothes. They are fashionable. Also, they are talented and can put on funny shows. Their performances are so relaxing that they make our life colorful. But now we think scientists and medical workers are our idols. Scientists invent high-tech products to protect national security and improve people’s living standard. Doctors and nurses save people’s lives and help them get out of pain and back to health. When our country and people are in trouble, they help people with wisdom, courage and hard work.
In my opinion, those who help us when we are in need deserve our respect and admiration. As students, we should learn from them and study hard to be a useful person to the country and society.                                                                                                              
   Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
1.题干解读：这篇短文要求学生们根据题目中给出的表格，谈一谈学生们的偶像观，并发表自己的看法。审题可知，这篇短文的主要内容应包括三个方面：首先是同学们过去所崇拜的偶像；然后介绍现在同学们的偶像；最后发表自己的看法。表格中有非常详细的内容提示，这些也是学生们组织文章内容的依据和提纲，注意要将表格中所有内容都包括在内，可以适当拓展，补充一些细节，但不能遗漏要点。
2.写作指导：这是一篇优秀的作文。首先短文内容丰富、完整，结构清晰。短文应以第一人称、一般现在时和一般过去时为主来叙述。短文每段的主题都非常明确。理由充分、合理。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，用词准确。句式结构完整，符合英语的表达习惯。
5．例文：
With the double reduction policy, we have less homework to do. Learning efficiency isbecoming more important. How to learn efficiently? Here are some suggestions.
First, have good learning methods. Preview before class and review in time after class. We’d better finish our homework all by ourselves. Second, form good living habits. Sleeping well and doing sports can make us energetic. What’s more, a good balanced diet is good for our bodies, too. Third, open up our minds. In our spare time, we can do more reading and take notes. We can also learn something else on the Internet.
I hope all the students can value their time to improve their learning efficiency.
【解析】
1.题干解读：该题目属于材料作文写作。在写作时应承接短文开头，按照要点提示逐条叙述提高学习效率的方法。
2.写作指导：本文应采用第一人称复数形式来叙述提高学习效率的方法，时态为一般现在时。列举建议时，应按照要点提示分成三板块：学习方法，好的生活习惯以及其他，并做详细的叙述，要保证文章的完整性，结构清晰条理。
6．例文
Because of the outbreak of the new coronavirus in Tangshan, Xiao Hua as well as her family stayed at home together. He recorded their life by keeping diaries.
He had online classes at home. And he sent his homework by Dingding after finishing homework. Moreover, he took online exams. He didn’t like online class, because it is not convenient to communicate with his teacher. At the same time, he did some sports and took up some hobbies. For safety, he and his family took daily nucleic acid tests. To keep healthy, he also kept eating healthily. He hopes to go back to school as soon as possible.
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。根据材料内容介绍小华居家隔离期间的家庭生活。
2.写作指导：本文主要采用一般过去时，人称以第三人称为主。分为两段式：第一段引出主题；第二段从学习，活动，饮食等方面介绍隔离期间的家庭生活。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
7．例文1
When I stayed at home, I tried my best to manage my time wisely. I spent most of my time studying. To keep healthy, I spend some time to do some exercise every day. On weekends, I usually read some books to relax myself. Besides, I helped mum do some housework. I felt comfortable and relaxed.
I learned to be more self-discipline during these days. It was not easy, But I made it. I also learned that we should do something meaningful to encourage ourselves when facing difficulties.
例文2
When I stayed at school, I studied and rested with our classmates, our school offers us many kinds of healthy food every day. What a pity that we can not go home on weekend as usual, some of my classmates missed their parents and felt sad. But our teacher cared for us, they often communicated with us after class. On weekends, we had many colorful activities, I think I didn’t feel lonely.
From this special experience, I learned to be positive and active when facing difficulties. I also learned that we can overcome any difficulty if we get together.
【解析】
1. 题干解读：本文属于材料作文写作，写作时按说明文的格式来写。根据题目要求，在“居家学习”和“在校学习”两种情况中任选一种来写，要包括提示的三个要点内容。
2. 写作指导：本文主要采用第一人称单数来写，时态采用一般过去时。写作时承接短文开头，直接表明写的是“居家学习”还是“在校学习”，再按照提示的要点依次说明。叙述所做的事情这一部分应详写，感受可略写。第三部分写个人感悟时可结合“面对困难”和“克服困难”时应具备的精神品质这一方面展开说明。
8．例文
The Vocational Education took effect on May 1. It says that vocational education is as important as general education. First of all, I want to talk about its advantages. Students spend less money than general education. They can learn useful skills and easy knowledge, so they have more free time. Besides, it is easy for them to find a job or go to college in the future.
However, there are some disadvantages. For example, the whole learning atmosphere is not great. There are limited majors for students to choose.
In my opinion, our government is supporting the development of vocational education. Students who choose it will have a bright future.
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文主要是根据题干中的思维导图谈谈对职业教育的看法，可适当增加细节。
2.写作指导：本文以一般现在时和第三人称为主。第一段主要介绍职业教育的优势；第二段描述职业教育的劣势；第三段描述自己的看法。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
9．例文:
Every family has its own rules, so does mine.
Being a student in school and a child at home, I think basically I should fit to some of the family rules. They can help me follow the right directions. For example, my mom doesn’t allow me to go out or return home late. She thinks it does no good to my study and my safety.
What’s more, I must get up at six o’clock every morning and do homework immediately after school. I cannot watch TV, surf the Internet or play computer games during the nights on school days. On weekends, I have to clean my room by myself.
My family rules make me busier than others. Although I am very busy, I still feel happy and meaningful.
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“Family Rules”为主题，根据提示问题，写一篇英文短文介绍自己的家规。
2.写作指导：本文运用第一人称为主；时态采用一般现在时。按照提示问题的两个方面进行写作，内容要写全，注意保证语言通顺，行文连贯；语法正确，无标点和单词拼写错误。
10．例文：
Li Mei is a student in Grade Nine. One day after school, she found her parents didn’t come back from work. Then she got an idea. She wanted to cook a meal for her parents.
Firstly, she opened the fridge and checked what kinds of things there were. Luckily, there were many vegetables in the fridge. Then, she washed the vegetables and cut them up. After preparing all the things, she heated the oil and put them into the pot as the cook book says. Next, she added seasonings to the vegetables. Finally, she took all the dishes out of the pot. When her parents ate them, they were surprised and praised her. She felt so happy. They ate dinner together.
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文要求根据所给四幅图和文字提示写一篇英语短文来描述李梅为父母做饭的情况。文章可以分为两段来写：第一段引出李梅为父母做饭的原因；第二段结合图片，具体描述李梅做饭的过程及父母品尝之后的感受。
2.写作指导：文章以一般过去时为主；以第三人称的角度表述；写作时文章要围绕图片信息，紧扣所给要点，条理清晰，无语法和单词拼写错误。
11．例文：
Boys and girls，
My name is Li Hua. Today I'm glad to share my ideas about how to be good students.
First of all, we must love our country and home. We need to keep our promise. We should be kind and be thankful to our parents and friends. Second, we must work hard. It is necessary for us to be active and creative. Third, it is helpful to take exercise, and keep us healthy both physically and mentally. Also, we can find the beauty of the nature. It is important for us to love the nature and protect the environment. What’s more，we can take part in all kinds of activities in and out of school.
【解析】
1.题干解读：该题目属于说明文写作。在写作时应紧接文章开头继续写作，根据内容提示讲述一个新时代合格的中学生应该做的事情。
2.例文点评：例文主要用第一人称进行写作，主要采用一般现在时态来写作。讲述一个新时代合格的中学生应该做的事情分五个方面来写，叙述完整且条理清晰。
3.高分亮点：
短语：share my ideas；first of all；keep our promise；be thankful to；take exercise；keep us healthy；protect the environment；what’s more; take part in; all kinds of。
句型：how+动词不定式的结构；it 做形式主语的句子；and表示并列的句子。