01 记叙文-写人篇 备战2023年中考英语书面表达（写作步骤+满分范文+词句积累）

这是一份01 记叙文-写人篇 备战2023年中考英语书面表达（写作步骤+满分范文+词句积累），共21页。试卷主要包含了记叙方式，人称，时态，他／她出生在··等内容，欢迎下载使用。
备战2023年中考英语书面表达
（写作步骤+满分范文+词句积累）
第一章 记叙文
记叙文是一种以记人叙事为主要内容的文章,通常包括六个要素：时间、地点、人物、事件、原因及结果,写作时各要素要交代清楚,但并不要求全部具备.写记叙类文章时除了六个要素外,还要注意以下几点：
1.记叙方式.
通常有顺叙、倒叙和插叙三种.顺叙是英语记叙文最常用的一种记叙方式,即按照事件发展的时间先后顺序来叙述.
2.人称.
一般用第一人称和第三人称进行写作.第一人称是从“参与者”亲眼所见、亲耳所闻的经历开始叙述；第三人称是以“观察者”的身份进行记叙,通过作者与读者之外的第三者,直接把故事呈现在读者面前.
3.时态.
记叙文用于记叙过去发生的事件或经历,因此常用一般过去时,还可根据上下文辅以其他时态.

Part 1 写人
写法点拨
在写人的时候,我们可以通过以下三部分来写作：
1.简单介绍人物的概况.
一般包括姓名、性别、年龄、职业、家庭背景等.写作时,使用的语言必须符合英语表达习惯,如姓名的书写、年龄的表达、人称或称呼的选取等.
2.从多方面对人物进行刻画.
为了使人物的形象丰满起来,给读者留下深刻印象,我们可以对人物的外貌、神态、动作等进行描写,并选取简短的事例来说明其品质和个性.在具体写作时,要正确把握现在时、过去时和将来时的用法.
3.对人物进行评价.
在文章结尾处要介绍你对人物的评价或谈论你的个人感受,无论是喜欢还是讨厌,是称赞还是批评,都要明确地表达出来.

必备词汇
1家庭背景
Live in...居住在···..·
Be born in...出生于······
Spent one's childhood in...在······度过童年
Live a happy/busy life过着幸福／忙碌的生活
2外貌特征
tall高的
short矮的
slim苗条的
thin瘦的
overweight超重的
fat胖的
ugly丑的
beard胡须
beautiful漂亮的
pretty漂亮的
handsome帅气的
strong强壮的
Round face圆脸
Broad face宽脸
Straight hair直发
Curly hair卷发
short/longhair短／长发
Long nose高鼻梁
big/bright eyes大的／明亮的眼睛
good-looking好看的
ordinary-looking长相普通的
Wear glasses戴眼镜
3教育背景
Graduate from...毕业于··...·
Get a...degree得到······学位
Major in...以······为专业
Study hard at...努力学习···..·
Get further education深造
Study abroad出国留学
4品质个性
kind和蔼的
determined坚决的
open-minded思想开明的
reliable可靠的
humorous幽默的
clever/smart聪明的
gentle温柔的
considerate体贴的
active/optimistic积极的
easy-going随和的
attractive有魅力的
charming有魅力的；迷人的
patient耐心的
hard-working努力的
friendly友好的
warm-hearted热心的
generous慷慨的
responsible有责任心的
sensible明智的
sociable好交际的
strict严厉的
honest诚实的
shy害羞的
selfish自私的
rude粗鲁的
impatient没有耐心的
careless粗心的
bad-tempered坏脾气的
5兴趣爱好
Be good at...擅长··....
Do well in...擅长··....
Be fond of...喜欢··....
Enjoy doing sth.喜欢做某事
Be crazy about...对······着迷
Have a gift for...有······天赋
Be interested in...对······感兴趣
Be in the lead处于领先地位
6评价
knowledgeable知识渊博的
famous著名的
well-known知名的
Think highly of...对······评价很高
Be remembered as...被后人誉为··...·
Be regarded as...被当作···.··
Be respected by...受······尊敬
Devote one's lifetime to...倾注毕生精力在··....

必备句型
1介绍人物的基本情况
(1) Wang Nan, a world champion in ping-pong, is...tall with the weight of...
王楠,乒乓球世界冠军,身高······,体重······
(2) My mother is a rural woman, who...我的母亲是一个农村妇女,她···.··
(3)...is a young beautiful lady.······是一位年轻漂亮的女士.
(4) If you ask me who is..., I will tell you it is...at once.如果你问谁是······,我会马上告诉你是······
(5)...was from a worker's/teacher's family······出生于一个工人／教师家庭.
(6)He/ She was born on...(time)in...place).他／她出生在··.···(时间)·····(地点).
2 进一步刻画人物的形象
(1) Her eyes are very big/bright.她的眼睛很大／很明亮.
(2) He often wears casual clothes like jeans and T-shirts.他经常穿着像牛仔和T恤之类的便装.
(3) He had very little school education, but he knows that...他没怎么上过学,但是他知道··....
(4)His/ Her family was so poor/rich that...他／她的家庭是如此的贫穷／富裕以至于···..·
(5) He worked hard every day to make money to keep our family.他每天都努力工作赚钱来供养我们的家庭.
(6)When at...,he...当在··....,他·...
(7) I was about to...when...我正要··....,突然··....
(8) He/ She worked hard so as to improve...他／她为了提高····,工作／学习很努力.
(9) His/ Her father was so strict with him/her that...他／她的父亲对他／她是如此的严厉以至于····..
3对人物的看法、感受
(1) He deserves/is worthy of our respect.他值得我们尊重.
(2)Without her help, I will never...如果没有她的帮助,我永远都无法······
(3) I will respect and love...forever.我将会永远尊敬和爱戴··....
(4) She is honest and always ready to help others.她为人诚实,并且乐于助人.
(5) She has set an example for...她给······树立了榜样.
(6) Now I understand my father's love for me. I will never forget my father.
现在我明白了父亲对我的爱.我永远不会忘记我的父亲.

美文引路

题目:每个人心目中都有自己最喜欢的一位明星,你可能喜欢他(她)的歌声,也可能喜欢他(她)英俊或甜美的外表.请以“My Favorite Star”为题,说说你最喜欢的明星,不得少于80词.
要求：1.描述他(她)的外貌和个性特征.2.你为什么特别喜欢他(她)?
注意：内容可以适当扩充.

思路导航
第1步：例文审题
主体人称
题目要求说说你最喜欢的明星,故主体人称应为第三人称“he”或“she”.
主体时态
由于文章主要介绍最喜欢的明星的一般情况,故主体时态用一般现在时.
写作贴士

题目要求中包含的要点主要为三点,故可以将文章分为三部分进行撰写；
要点1要求写的是外貌和个性特征两方面内容,注意不要遗漏.
第2步：列提纲
(1)简单介绍明星的基本概况,如外貌等；
(2)详细描写明星的个性特征；
(3)你最喜欢他(她)的原因.
第3步：参考词句
(1) singer; be born on; beautiful...
(2) voice; attract; full of energy and confidence; stage; charity; feel proud of..
(3) favorite; excellent...
第4步：连句成篇
My Favorite Star
My favorite star is a singer called Sun Yanzi, who is well received by many people from all over the world. She was born on July,23rd,1978.She is 162 cm high with a beautiful face.
Sun Yanzi has a great voice. And the songs she sings can always attract me. Besides, she can be full of energy and confidence all the time, whether on the stage or in her real life. What she impresses me most is that she often takes part in the charity work. We all think highly of what she has done to help people in need. She helps poor children go to school and the blind see the world again. This is why I choose her as my favorite star. I feel very proud of her.
This is my favorite star, an excellent singer.
参考译文
我最喜欢的明星
我最喜欢的明星是一个叫孙燕姿的歌手,她受到全世界很多人的热爱.她出生于1978年7月23日.她身高162厘米,有着漂亮的脸蛋.
孙燕姿的声音很好听.她唱的歌总能吸引我.除此以外,不管是在舞台上,还是在现实生活中,她总是充满能量和自信.最让我印象深刻的是,她经常做慈善活动.我们都对她帮助生活困难的人这一行为评价很高.她帮助穷苦孩子上学,帮助盲人重见光明.这也是我选她作为我最喜爱的明星的原因.我为她感到很自豪.
这就是我最喜欢的明星,一位卓越的歌手.



自我写真
范文1
To Introduce Myself
Hi, my name is Lin Xiao, a girl of 14 years old. I'm studying in Class1, Grade 7 of Dongzhou Middle school.
I love music very much although I'm not very good at singing. I've been playing Guzheng, an ancient traditional instrument for a long time. I practice it every day after I finish my homework. Apart from that, I also like reading and writing which both give me a lot of fun and enrich my school life. I often write some articles for our school newspaper.
This is me. What about you?
参考译文
自我介绍
嘿！我叫林萧,一个14岁的女孩.我就读于东洲中学七年级一班.
虽然我不太擅长唱歌,可我非常喜爱音乐.我学习古筝这种古老而传统的乐器已经有很长一段时间了.每天做完作业后我都会练习古筝.除此之外,我还喜欢看书和写作,它们都给我带来了许多乐趣,而且也丰富了我的校园生活.我经常为我们的校报写一些文章.
这就是我.你呢?
亮点词汇
1 ancient /adj.古老的；古代的
2 traditional / adj. 传统的；守旧的
3 instrument /n.乐器；仪器；器械
4 apart from 除了·····以外
5 enrich /v.丰富；充实
出彩句型
1 Sb. be good at doing sth.某人擅长做某事.
2 I love...我喜欢·....
3 I've been...for a long time.我已经······很长一段时间了.
4 ..give me a lot of fun and enrich my school life.···.·给我带来了许多乐趣,而且也丰富了我的校园生活.
5 ...write...for.......·.为··.··写···..·
6 What about you?你呢?
高分点评
本文向我们展示了一个多才多艺、热爱生活的女孩的形象.作者在遣词造句和语言表达上都有不俗的功底,各种高级词汇信手拈来,文中还使用了同位语“an ancient traditional instrument”和定语从句“which both give me a lot of fun and enrich my school life”等,更使文章在表达上有了升华.

范文2
To Introduce Myself
My name is Zhang Wei. I'm fifteen years old and I live in Beijing. I'm a junior middle school student and I do well in my study.
My favorite subject is chemistry. I want to be a chemist when I grow up. I'm also interested in drawing. In my free time, I often draw some pictures of my cat Kitty. I won the first prize in a painting contest last year.
Do you want to be my friend? You can email me at zhangwei@163.com.
参考译文
自我介绍
我叫张伟.我15岁了,住在北京.我是一名初中生,我的学习成绩很优异.我最喜欢的科目是化学.我长大后想成为一名化学家.我对画画也感兴趣.在空闲时,我经常给我的猫凯蒂画一些画.去年我在一场绘画比赛中得了第一名.
你想跟我做朋友吗?你可以发邮件到zhangwei@163.com(与我联系).
亮点词汇
1 favorite /adj.最喜欢的；n.最喜欢的人或物
2 chemistry /n.化学
3 chemist /n.化学家
4 in one's free time 在某人空闲时
5 the first prize 第一名
6 painting contest绘画比赛
7 email /v.给······发邮件；n.电子邮件
出彩句型
1 Sb. does well in...某人善于做··...·
2 My favorite subject is...我最喜欢的科目是·....·
3 I want be...when I grow up.我长大后想成为···...
4 sb. draw(s) some pictures of...某人给······画一些画.
5 Do you want to be my friend?你想跟我做朋友吗?
6 email sb. at...(email address)给某人发邮件到···..·(邮箱地址)
高分点评
本文分为三段,每一段都简短有力,分别从不同方面介绍了“我”.第一段简单介绍了“我”的背景；第二段详细阐述了“我”的兴趣爱好；第三段表达了“我”想与人交友的热切愿望.本文逻辑清晰,详略得当,感情真挚,不失为一篇佳作.

亲密家人
范文1
A Happy Family
My name is Lin Min. I have a happy family. There are three people in my family, father, mother and l.
My father is very tall, who likes to wear suits very much. He is very fond of reading. Even before he goes to bed, he always reads for a while. My mother is a thin lady with long hair. She often makes delicious food for me. I am of medium height with a pair of glasses. I take great interests in insects. I am very happy when my parents take me to the countryside, because I can observe the insects there.
This is my family, a family with lots of happiness.
参考译文
一个幸福的家
我叫林敏.我有一个幸福的家庭.我家有三口人：爸爸、妈妈和我.
我的爸爸非常高,他很喜欢穿西装.他非常喜欢看书.甚至在睡觉前,他总会看一会儿书.我的妈妈瘦瘦的,留着长发.她经常给我做美味的食物.我有着中等身材,戴着一副眼镜.我对昆虫很感兴趣.当爸爸妈妈带我去郊外时,我很高兴,因为我可以在那里观察昆虫.
这就是我的家,一个幸福的家.
亮点词汇
1 be fond of...喜爱·.....
2 go to bed 上床睡觉
3 for a while 一会儿
4 make delicious food 做好吃的食物
5 take interests in...对······感兴趣
6 insect/n.昆虫
7 observe /v.观察；注意到
出彩句型
1 There be...有···...
3 My father...,who likes to do...我的爸爸··.··,喜欢做····.·
3 Even before...,he...甚至在······之前,他··...·
4 My mother is...with...我的妈妈有着······的外表.
5 This is my family, a family with...这就是我的家庭,一个······的家庭.
高分点评
本文先总说了家庭的组成,然后分别介绍各成员,最后以“幸福”的家结尾,层次分明,详略得当.文中使用了较为丰富的句式,如 who 引导的定语从句和 before 引导的时间状语从句,还有“with+名词”和“be fond of”等各种短语.

2
My Grandmother
My grandmother is a kind-hearted person. Whenever people come to her for help, she is always ready to help them out.
She is well over sixty, but she still runs a garden. She grows all kinds of flowers and plants in her garden. You can always find beautiful flowers there. My grandmother has taken care of me, since I was a little baby. We are like good friends and spend a lot of happy time together.
I love my grandmother very much. Now she is getting old, and I want to look after her in the future.
参考译文
我的祖母
我的祖母是一个热心肠的人.无论何时,人们来找她帮忙,她总是很乐意帮助他们.
她已经60多岁了,但她还打理着一个花园.她在花园里种了各种各样的花和植物.你总是可以在那里看到漂亮的花朵.从我还是小婴儿时,我的祖母就开始照顾我.我们就像好朋友,一起度过了很多开心的时光.
我非常爱我的祖母.现在她越来越老了,我以后想照顾她.
亮点词汇
1 kind-hearted /adj.仁慈的,好心肠的
2 help sb. out 帮助某人解决困难
3 run a garden 打理花园
4 all kinds of各种各样的
5 look after 照顾
6 in the future在以后；将来
出彩句型
1 Whenever people come to her for help,...无论何时人们来找她帮忙,···...
2 She is always ready to...她总是很乐意··...·
3 You can always find...there.你总是可以在那里找到······
4 My grandmother...,since...我的祖母····,自从···...
5 We spend a lot of happy time together.我们一起度过了很多开心的时光.
高分点评
本文从三个方面－“祖母的热心肠”“爱植物”和“对我的关爱”入手,对祖母的形象进行了生动地刻画.本文中短语的运用是一大亮点,如“come for help”“ready to”“run a garden”等.文章处处都流露着作者对祖母的深切感情,感染力极强,是另一大夺目之处.

良师益友
范文1
My Good Friend
My good friend is Lisa. She comes from Canada. We are both studying in Dongfang Middle School.
She is tall and lovely with blond hair. She is a funny girl, who often tells jokes to make you laugh. She does well in English, so I often ask her questions about English. Lisa is good at dancing, too. She won many prizes in the dancing competition. We share many interesting things with each other.
This is my good friend. I am very lucky to have such a friend.
参考译文
我的好朋友
我的好朋友叫丽萨.她来自加拿大.我们俩都在东方中学上学.
她很高,很可爱,还有一头金色的头发.她是一个很有趣的女孩,经常说笑话来逗别人笑.她英语学得很好,所以我经常问她关于英语的问题.丽萨也很擅长跳舞.她在跳舞比赛中赢过很多奖.我们互相分享很多有趣的事情.
这就是我的好朋友.我非常幸运能交到这样一个朋友.
亮点词汇
1 lovely /adj.可爱的
2 blond /adj.金色的
3 funny /adj.有趣的；搞笑的
4 tell jokes 讲笑话
5 question /n.问题
6 competition /n.比赛
出彩句型
1 She does well in...她擅长·.....
2 I ask her questions about...我问她关于···.··的问题.
3 She won many prizes in...competition.她在······比赛中赢过很多奖.
4 We share...with each other.我们互相分享··...
5 I am very lucky to...我非常幸运··....
高分点评
本文采用“总一分一总”的结构,首段先总述了Lisa的情况,第二段详细描述 Lisa的各方面特点,最后再总结,详略得当,条理清晰.作者对短语的运用非常娴熟,如“tell jokes”“won many prizes”等,都恰如其分地表达出了人物的特点,人物形象生动.

范文2
My Favorite Teacher
Miss Ye is my favorite teacher, who is now 25 years old. She is from Guangdong Province. She is a beautiful lady, and she often has a smile on her face.
She does a great job in teaching. She can skillfully get the students involved in listening to her and doing exercises. Those topics that she introduces in the class can always catch the eye of students. Therefore, lots of students love to take her classes. Not only does she do well in classes, but also she is good at music. Between the classes, she sometimes plays a small piece of music, which is very helpful for us to relax our minds.
Isn't she wonderful? We all like her very much.
参考译文
我最喜欢的老师
叶老师是我最喜欢的老师,她现在25岁.她来自广东省.她是一位漂亮的女士,她的脸上经常挂着笑容.
她教书教得很好.她能巧妙地让学生专心听讲,认真做练习.她在课堂上介绍的那些话题总是能吸引学生的注意.因此,很多学生都喜欢上她的课.她不仅课上得好,也很擅长音乐.在课间的时候,她有时会弹一小段音乐,这对放松我们的头脑很有帮助.
她是不是很棒?我们都非常喜欢她.
亮点词汇
1 skillfully/adv.巧妙地；精巧地
2 involved /adj.参与其中的；涉及的
3 topic /n.主题；话题
4 introduce /v.介绍
5 catch the eye of...吸引·····的注意
6 wonderful/adj.精彩的；奇妙的
出彩句型
1 She has... on her face.她的脸上有······
2 She does a great job in...她在······方面做得很好.
3 She can get...involved in...她能让······参与到······中去.
4 Those topics that she introduces in the class...那些她在课堂上介绍的话题·.....
5 Not only..., but also... 不仅···..,而且··.·
6 ...is very helpful for...to do.........对··.··做······很有帮助.
高分点评
本文的细节描写是一大闪光点,例如对老师善于教书这一特点的描写,作者深入课堂的特点,将一个精彩的课堂完全展现出来,对细节的把握非常准确细致.其次,文章词汇运用丰富多彩,如副词“skillfully”的使用,非常贴切自然.


社会人物
范文1
Lin Dan-A Super Sports Star
Lin Dan, whose nickname is Super Dan, is a famous badminton player of China. Lin Dan has an outstanding performance in the badminton history. At the age of 27, he won all the major titles in the badminton world. No one in the world has done better than him.
Lin Dan is an enthusiastic man, and he is a person full of passion. He puts his heart and soul into his training and contests. He is the kind of person who believes in himself. And he will not give up, until he achieves his goals. It is this kind of spirit and hard work that make him a legend in the badminton world.
Lin Dan is worthy of the name-super sports star.
参考译文
林丹－一位超级体育明星
林丹,昵称为“超级丹”,是中国著名的羽毛球运动员.林丹在羽毛球历史上有着出色的表现.在他27岁时,他就赢得了羽毛球世界里的全部主要荣誉.世界上没有哪个人能比他更优秀的了.
林丹是一个非常热情的人,同时,他也是一个充满激情的人.他会全身心地投入到训练和比赛中.他是那种一直坚信自己的人.不实现目标,绝不轻言放弃.正是这种精神和他的刻苦,让他成了羽毛球世界里的传奇人物.
林丹不愧为超级体育明星.
亮点词汇
1 nickname 昵称
2 outstanding /adj.卓越的；出众的
3 passion/n.激情
4 achieve one's goal 实现某人的目标
5 spirit /n.精神
6 legend /n.传奇
出彩句型
1 ...,whose nickname is......·,昵称为··...
2 He has an outstanding performance.他有着出色的表现.
3 He puts his heart and soul into...他全身心投入到······
4 He will not give up, until...他不会放弃,直到····.·
5 It is...that...正是······,才······
高分点评
本文主要围绕“super”这一字眼展开,以对林丹性格特点的详细描写,来突出他的卓越之处.本文多处使用了定语从句,如whose引导的定语从句和who 引导的定语从句,还运用了强调句“It is...that...”,使文章变化多样、精彩绝伦.

范文2
A Pop Singer
Justin Bieber, a Canadian pop singer and actor, was born on March 1st, 1994. He lives in the U.S.A. now. He has a handsome look.
He has a deep love for music. When he was eight years old, he could play the guitar and drum. At that time, he often played the guitar in the street, which attracted many passers-by. Now he is a real superstar, who is popular all around the world. A lot of teenage fans are obsessed with him. One reason is that his songs are very positive, encouraging people not to give up easily.
He has a great talent in music. I hope he can do better in the future.
参考译文
一位流行歌手
贾斯汀·比伯,一位加拿大流行歌手和演员,出生于1994年3月1日.他现在居住在美国.他有着英俊的外表.
他很热爱音乐.他八岁的时候,就能弹吉他和打鼓.那时候,他经常在街上弹吉他,吸引了很多路人.现在他是一个真正的超级明星,在全世界都很受欢迎.很多青少年粉丝迷恋他.其中一个原因是他的歌很积极,鼓励人们不要轻易放弃.
他在音乐上很有天赋.我希望他以后能做得更好.
亮点词汇
1 handsome/adj.英俊的
2 passer-by /n.路人；行人
3 positive /adj.积极的
4 encourage /v.鼓励
出彩句型
1 He has a...look.他有着······的外表.
2 He has a deep love for...他很热爱·····.
3 At that time,...在那时,·....
4 ...is/are obsessed with.......·.对······迷恋
5 One reason is that...一个原因是·...
高分点评
本文从贾斯汀·比伯的基本概况到音乐之路依次展开,通过连接词“at that time”等的使用,使得文章起承转合顺畅自然.作者将同位语、分析结构和定语糅合使用,既使表达简练,又使句子富于变化.如文章的第一句中同位语“a Canadian pop singer and actor”和who引导的定语从句结合使用,清晰明了地传递了作者的意思,非常精彩.