04 记叙文 - 状物篇 备战2023年中考英语书面表达（写作步骤+满分范文+词句积累）

备战2023年中考英语书面表达

（写作步骤+满分范文+词句积累）

第一章 记叙文

记叙文是一种以记人叙事为主要内容的文章,通常包括六个要素：时间、地点、人物、事件、原因及结果。写作时各要素要交代清楚,但并不要求全部具备.写记叙类文章时除了六个要素外,还要注意以下几点：

1.记叙方式.

通常有顺叙、倒叙和插叙三种.顺叙是英语记叙文最常用的一种记叙方式,即按照事件发展的时间先后顺序来叙述。

2.人称.

一般用第一人称和第三人称进行写作.第一人称是从“参与者”亲眼所见、亲耳所闻的经历开始叙述；第三人称是以“观察者”的身份进行记叙,通过作者与读者之外的第三者,直接把故事呈现在读者面前。

3.时态.

记叙文用于记叙过去发生的事件或经历,因此常用一般过去时,还可根据上下文辅以其他时态。

Part 4 状物

写法点拨

在写状物文章的时候,我们可以从以下三部分入手：

1.总体描述事物的特点。

第一部分应就事物的总体特点进行阐述,不宜过于具体,用词用句要简洁明了.在描述总体特点时,要做概括性描写,不能只描述某一部分特点.

2.详细具体地描述事物的各个特点。

这是文章的第二部分,也是主体部分,在描述事物的各方面特点时,要抓住最吸人眼球的特点详细展开.在写作这部分时,要体现细节特点,不能一概而论.

3.表达对事物的感受或评价。

这是文章的最后一部分,也是总结部分,可以对事物的感受进行表述,也可以评价事物的好坏,等等。

必备词汇

1事物类别

2表示颜色

3表示形状

4 表达情感

必备句型

1总体描述事物的特点

(1)It comes in a variety of colors/shapes.  它有很多颜色／形状.

(2) It consists of several integrated parts.  它包含几个组成部分.

(3) It is shaped like a circle.  它的形状像一个圆圈.

2详细具体地描述事物的各个特点

(1) It is round in shape and small in size. 它的形状是圆的,很小.

(2) Attached to the bottom is... 接着底部的是······

(3) It looks like a pearl.  它就像一颗珍珠.

(4) They are as beautiful as flowers. 它们就像花儿一样漂亮.

(5) My room is not large, but it is very comfortable. 我的房间不大,但非常舒适.

(6) The clock is not only beautiful and valuable, but also very helpful. 这个时钟不仅漂亮珍贵,而且非常有用.

(7)The little cat is black all over except her four feet and a small nose.

除了四只脚和一个小鼻子外,这只小猫全身都是黑色的.

3 表达对事物的感受或评价

(1) It is very helpful to me.  这对我很有帮助.

(2) How I want to have it for long!  我真想永远拥有它！

(3) I am afraid I will lose it one day.  我担心有一天会失去它.

(4) It makes me feel relaxed when I am tired.  累的时候它让我感到放松.

(5) I love the book so much that I can't part with it.  我对这本书爱不释手.

美文引路

题目：大千世界,花草树木,皆有其特性与可人之处.你又对哪种植物最为钟情呢?请以一种植物为主题,写一篇小短文,词数不得少于80词.

思路导航

第1步：例文审题

第2步：列提纲

(1)概述植物的整体特点；

(2)展开描述植物的特色和吸引人之处；

(3)表达对植物的感受.

第3步：参考词句

(1) flower; jasmine; culture...

(2) stunning; elegance; fragrance; petal; show off; stand out...

(3) different; special...

第4步：连句成篇

My Favorite Flower

My favorite flower is jasmine, which is a symbol of Chinese culture.

I like jasmine, not because it has stunning beauty, but because it gives off elegance and fragrance. It is white or yellow in color, and its petals are very small. Such plain beauty is exactly one of the characteristics of Chinese culture. It never shows off, but it stands out strikingly among other colorful flowers. Jasmine is also famous for a popular song named after it.

Jasmine is very different and special, so I am very fond of it. How about you?

参考译文

我最喜欢的花

我最喜欢的花是茉莉花,它也是中国文化的象征之一.

我喜欢茉莉花,不是因为它有惊人的美丽,而是因为它散发出来的香气和优雅.它的颜色是白色或黄色,它的花瓣非常小.这样质朴的美丽恰好是中国文化的特点之一.它从不炫耀,但它总能在其他五颜六色的花朵里脱颖而出.茉莉花出名的另一个原因是,有一首流行的歌是以它来命名的.

茉莉花非常与众不同,所以我非常喜欢它.你呢?

植物博览

范文1

My Favorite Plant

My favorite plant is the Lucky Bamboo. I was attracted by it when I first saw it. It is always green and easy to plant. It is also slim and tall.

At first, I thought if I could give it enough water, it would grow quickly. However, a month later, I found the leaves were still the same size as when I got the plant. I asked my grandma why the bamboo couldn't grow up. She told me that the Lucky Bamboo needs a lot of sunshine. So I moved it to my table by the windows at once. Now it is growing bigger and stronger. And it seems to be greener and greener.

Thanks to the Lucky Bamboo, it brings me more fresh air and makes my room look nicer.

参考译文

我最喜欢的植物

我最喜欢的植物是富贵竹.当我第一次看到它时,就被它吸引住了.它四季常绿,并且很容易种植.它又瘦又高.

一开始,我认为,只要给予它足够的水分,它就可以长得很快.然而,一个月过去了,我发现叶子还是像我刚得到这棵植物时一样的大小.我问奶奶,为什么富贵竹长不大.她告诉我,富贵竹需要很多的阳光.所以我马上将它移到了窗边的桌子上.现在它长得又大又强壮.它看起来也越来越绿了.

感谢富贵竹,它带给了我很多新鲜空气的同时,还让我的房间变得更漂亮了.

亮点词汇

1 bamboo /n.竹子

2 grow up成长,长大

3 at once 立刻,马上

出彩句型

1 I was attracted by...我被······吸引.

2 ...is/are still the same size as...······还是和·····一样的大小.

3 It seems to be...它似乎·····.

高分点评

本文是一篇较为成功的状物文章,围绕着富贵竹这一植物,分别从其颜色、形状、大小展开,随后辅之以作者的种植经验,从各个角度展现了富贵竹的特点.文章的词句描写非常具体详细,如“easy to plant”“slim”等,形象展示出了富贵竹独有的特点.

范文2

Tomatoes

The tomatoes are very common, but they have some special characteristics.

They are usually red and round. There are often some green leaves on the tomatoes. When you taste tomatoes, most of them are sour and sweet. But they are juicy, too. How delicious they are! They can also be used to make all kinds of tasty dishes. Besides, the tomatoes are green food. If you usually eat tomatoes, you will be healthy and strong.

I like tomatoes very much. How about you?

参考译文

西红柿

西红柿非常常见,但它们也有一些特别的特点.

它们通常是红红的、圆圆的.西红柿上通常会有一些绿色的叶子.当你品尝时,大部分酸酸甜甜的而且很多汁.它们是多么美味啊！它们也可以用来做各种各样美味的菜肴.除此以外,西红柿是绿色食品.如果你经常吃西红柿,你会变得健康和强壮.

我非常喜欢西红柿.你呢?

亮点词汇

1 common/adj.常见的；普通的

2 characteristic /n.特点；特征

3 sour/adj.酸的

4 juicy /adj.多汁的

5 green food 绿色食品

出彩句型

1 They have some special characteristics.它们有一些特别的特点.

2 There are often some...on.......·.上通常会有一些......

3 They can also be used to...它们也可以被用来·.....

4 If you...,you will be healthy and strong.如果你··..··,你会变得健康和强壮.

高分点评

本文描述西红柿时,从颜色、形状、味道等多方面展开,体现了作者对这种蔬菜的喜爱之情.how引导的感叹句和if引导的条件状语从句,都为文章增色不少.文章层次清晰,介绍有条理,值得学习.

动物世界

范文1

Dolphin

Have you ever seen dolphins? Are you fascinated by them?

The dolphins live in the ocean. And they are cute and beautiful. They not only swim fast, they are also smart. They are often in grey color. Besides, they are good at swimming and jumping in the ocean. They are also friendly animals. They look like fish, but they actually are mammals. Because they are able to learn things very quickly, dolphins can be trained by people. So now, we can often see the dolphin show in the aquarium.

They are so friendly. I love them very much.

参考译文

海豚

你见过海豚吗?你有没有被它们吸引呢?

海豚生活在海洋里.它们既可爱又美丽.它们不仅游得快,而且很聪明.它们通常是灰色的.除此之外,它们擅长在海洋里游泳和跳跃.它们也是一种友好的动物.它们看起来像鱼,但它们是哺乳动物.因为海豚学东西很快,人们可以训练它们.所以现在,我们可以经常在水族馆看到海豚表演.

它们非常友好.我非常喜欢它们.

亮点词汇

1 fascinate /v.使着迷；吸引

2 ocean /n.大海；海洋

3 smart /adj.聪明的；机智的

4 mammal/n.哺乳动物

5 aquarium /n.水族馆

出彩句型

1 Are you fascinated by them?你被它们吸引了吗?

2 They not only... ,but also...他们不仅·····,而且··....

3 They are often in...color.它们通常是······颜色.

4 They are good at...它们擅长于··....

5 They look like...它们看起来像·.....

高分点评

本文描写的是海豚这一种动物,主要抓住了它的活动方式进行展开,显示出了海豚可爱、可人的特点.文章的开头别具一格,使用了两个问句,吸引读者注意力的同时,拉近了与读者的距离.其次,文章的逻辑承接较好,如“besides”“because”“so”等词的使用,将句与句之间的关系清楚地体现了出来.

范文2

Tortoise

Tortoise is a cute animal. It doesn't walk very fast, but it always attracts people's attention.

It has a short tail, four short feet, a little head and a hard shell. They like to play in the water. When they are afraid of something, they would shrink their heads into the shells quickly. Their favorite food is fish. They have a good knack for catching fish. Firstly, they have a fake sleep. When the fish swim near their mouth, they catch the fish at once and bite the fish's head. In winter, they usually sleep in the sand.

love the tortoise because of its cuteness.

参考译文

乌龟

乌龟是非常可爱的动物.它爬得不是很快,但是它总能吸引人们的注意.

它有一条短尾巴、四条短腿、一个小脑袋和一个硬壳.它们喜欢在水里玩.当它们害怕某样东西时,它们会迅速将脑袋缩进硬壳里.它们最喜欢的食物是鱼.它们非常擅长于抓鱼.首先,它们会假装睡觉.当鱼游近它们的嘴巴时,它们马上抓住鱼,并咬住鱼的脑袋.冬天的时候,它们通常会在沙子里睡觉.

我喜欢乌龟,因为它很可爱.

亮点词汇

1 shell /n.壳；硬壳

2 shrink /v.缩；缩水

3 fake /v.假装adj.伪造的

4 bite /v.咬

出彩句型

1 It always attracts people's attention.它总能吸引人们的注意.

2 They are afraid of...它们害怕··....

3 They have a good knack for...它们擅长于·...

4 They have a fake sleep.它们假装睡觉.

高分点评

本文着重描写了乌龟的外形以及其抓鱼的经过,尤其是对其抓鱼过程的描述非常生动具体,刻画得入木三分.作者对乌龟的观察可谓细致入微,将其遇到危险时的举动描写得惟妙惟肖.除此以外,丰富的词组,贴切的运用,如“attract people's attention”“have a good knack for”等,无疑都为文章添加了不少闪光点.

静物素描

范文1

The Computer

Nowadays, computers are becoming more and more popular.

Computers can help different people in different ways. They can help students and scholars do calculations, analyze data and present the latest achievements. Moreover, they can assist engineers and experts in the design of a bridge or a spaceship. Besides, computers can offer fun and entertainment to us with the Internet games, movies, and music. I have my own computer and its color is gray. It's more convenient for me to study with a computer. And the best of all is that computer can tell me almost everything. It really helps me a lot.

Indeed, computers have become a good companion of man.

参考译文

电脑

现在,电脑变得越来越受欢迎了。

电脑可以在不同方面帮助不同的人.它们能帮助学生和学者做计算、分析数据和呈现最近的成果.还有就是,它们能够帮助工程师和专家设计桥梁或太空船.除此以外,通过互联网游戏、电影和音乐,电脑能为我们提供乐趣和娱乐.我有一台电脑,它是灰色的.对我来说,用电脑学习更方便.最大的用处是电脑可以告诉我几乎所有的事情.这真的对我帮助很大。

实际上,电脑已经成了人们的好伙伴。

亮点词汇

1 do calculations 做计算

2 analyze/v.分析

3 achievement /n.成就

4 indeed /adv. 确实；实际上

5 companion /n.同伴；伙伴

出彩句型

1 ....is/are becoming more and more popular.······变得越来越受欢迎了.

2 They can assist...in...它们能在······方面帮助··....

3 They can offer...to us with...它们通过··...·(方式),能够提供·····给我们.

4 It's more convenient for me to...做······对我来说更方便.

高分点评

从一般到特殊,是本文主要的模式.作者先从电脑对人们的一般作用讲起,继而推及到自身经历,详述了电脑对自己学习的帮助.文章的表达多样化,如在描述电脑对人们的三个方面的帮助时,分别使用了“help...in..”“assist...in...”“offer...to...”三个表达.

范文2

My Favorite Newspaper

Century Weekly is my favorite newspaper. It is a good helper for me.

It is an English newspaper. It is published in Beijing each week. There are plenty of beautiful pictures and interesting articles in it. I enjoy reading the paper. By reading it, I have greatly improved my English. For example, I have learnt a lot of new words and useful expressions. Besides, I can get information about different things, from politics to sports and music. Century weekly is very popular with students and English learners.

I really love this newspaper.

参考译文

我最喜欢的报纸

《世纪周报》是我最喜欢的报纸.它是我的一个好帮手。

这是一份英语报纸.它发行于北京,每周出版一次.里面有很多漂亮的图片和有趣的文章.我喜欢阅读报纸.通过阅读这份报纸,我已经大大地提高了我的英语水平。例如,我学会了很多新的词汇和有用的表达.除此以外,我能够得到关于不同东西的信息,从政治到体育到音乐.《世纪周报》在学生和英文学习者中很受欢迎.我真的很喜欢这份报纸。

亮点词汇

1 helper/n.助手

2 publish /v.出版

3plenty of 很多

4 improve /vt.提高；改善；改良 vi.变得更好；改进；改善

5 expression /n.表达

6 politics/n.政治

出彩句型

1 It is a good helper for me.它是我的一个好帮手.

2 It is published in...它发行于······

3 I enjoy doing...我喜欢做······

4 I can get information about different things.我能够得到关于不同东西的信息.

5 ...is/are popular with......····在···.··中受欢迎.

高分点评

本文描述的事物－《世纪周报》别有特点。作者对其基本信息介绍后,就其对自己的作用展开了详细的说明,有条有理,逻辑清晰.各种句型在文章中的使用都较为恰当,如“It is published in...”“I enjoy doing...”,有助于文章大意的传达,同时,增强了文章语言的丰富感。