译林版高中英语选择性必修第一册UNIT3表达作文巧升格课件+学案

描写一位画家

本单元的写作项目是介绍画家的文章，属于说明文的写作范畴。

[基本框架]

开头(the beginning)——引出要介绍的人物

主体(the body)——详细介绍人物

结尾(the ending)——简要评价

[常用词块]

1．was born into a peasant family出生于一个农民家庭

2．have a talent for 有……的天赋

3．be in good health/shape/condition 身体健康

4．have a good command of精通……

5．develop a great liking for...渐渐爱上……

6．have a desire to do...有做……的愿望

[常用语句]

★精彩开头

1．Leonardo da Vinci is one of the greatest painters in the world.

列奥纳多·达·芬奇是世界上最伟大的画家之一。

2．Xu Beihong，a famous Chinese painter，is famous for his horse painting.

徐悲鸿，中国著名的画家，以画马而闻名于世。

★正文佳句

1．His unique style is called cubism which consists of shapes to create many scenes with squares and circles.

他的独特风格被称为立体主义，它包含许多阴影，以创作出许多带有正方形和圆的绘画作品。

2．His life in Spain was plain but yet fascinating，his paintings became really popular among people and it even was noticed by the royalties at that time.

他在西班牙的生活平淡无奇，却又引人入胜，他的画深受人们的喜爱，甚至受到当时王室成员的关注。

★余味结尾

1．We can never forget Picasso for his contributions for modern arts to grow.

我们永远不会忘记毕加索对现代艺术发展的贡献。

2．His paintings are of far­reaching significance and give us a profound warning.

他的画意义深远，给我们以深刻的警示作用。

请你根据下列要点提示，写一篇80词左右的英语短文，简要介绍中国著名画家张大千。

1．出生于1899年，1983年去世。年轻时学诗。受妈妈和哥哥的影响学习中国画；

2．他不断地学习和探索西方绘画，形成了自己独特的风格；

3．他一生中大部分时间都在临摹传统绘画；

4．他被认为是20世纪最有天赋的画家之一。

注意：可适当增添细节，以使行文连贯。

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[学生习作]　

Zhang Daqian is a great artist in China，who was born in 1899 and died in 1983.When he was young，he learnt poetry and Chinese painting.He gained lots of experience from his mama and brother.He kept on learning and starting to explore western paintings when he got older.It really helped him form his unique style.Throughout his life，he devoted most of time to copying traditional painting.He was regarded as one of the most gifted painters in the 20th century.

点评：

1．能够涵盖基本要点，描述较为全面；

2．结构单一，内容不够充实；

3．词汇和句式有待于提升。

[升格作文]　

Zhang Daqian，born in 1899，is a great artist in China.

When he was young，he learnt poetry and he learnt Chinese painting from his mama and brother and gained lots of experience from them.He kept on learning and starting to explore western paintings when he got older，which really helped him form his unique style.He died in 1983.Throughout his life，he devoted most of time to copying traditional painting.

He was regarded as one of the most gifted painters in the 20th century，which is an honor of Chinese people.

请根据下列提示写一篇关于画家毕加索的英语短文。

1．著名画家，其独特风格是立体主义(cubism)，包含方和圆；

2．在西班牙期间平淡无奇，但是他的画受人们欢迎。他也喜欢画战争和犯罪的图画，这样人们就能看到这个世界上真正正在发生的事情。例如《韩国万象》(Masscare in Korea)是他关于朝鲜战争的著名画作之一；

3．我们永远不会忘记毕加索对现代艺术发展的贡献。

要求：1.词数80左右；

2．可以适当增添细节，以使行文连贯。

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【参考范文】

Picasso is a great painter in the history. His unique style is called cubism which consists of shapes to create many scenes with squares and circles. His life in Spain was plain, but his paintings became really popular among people. He also liked to draw drawings about wars and crimes so that people can see what is really happening in this world. For example, Masscare in Korea is one of his famous paintings that was about Korean War.

We can never forget Picasso for his contributions for modern arts to grow.