译林版高中英语选择性必修第三册UNIT4表达作文巧升格课件+学案
展开写一篇关于遗址保护的倡议书
本单元要求写一篇关于遗址保护的倡议书。
[基本框架]
开头(the beginning)——倡议目的
主体(the body)——倡议内容
结尾(the ending)——发出号召
[常用词块]
1．be of great significance 非常重要
2．in favor of 支持
3．contribute to the tourism 有助于旅游业
4．make good use of heritage sites充分利用遗址
5．the enhancement of people's protection 加强人民的保护
6．raise the awareness of...提高……的意识
[常用语句]
★精彩开头
1．It is very important to preserve cultural heritage sites.
2．A lot of cultural heritage sites are in great danger and it is our duty to protect them.
★正文佳句
1．Many people hold the view that cultural heritage sites should be well preserved.
2．Unfortunately，some of the cultural heritage sites have been damaged.
★余味结尾
1．In short，the cultural heritage of human development has an indelible impact，we should protect the cultural heritage，actively repair the damaged heritage of human civilization and contribute to the development.
2．We should keep our mind clear and take more effective measures to protect heritage sites.
文化遗产是古代伟大文明的象征，保护文化遗产可以增强我们的民族自豪感。请你写一篇80词左右的倡议书，提倡保护文化遗产。
[学生习作]
It is important to protect cultural heritage.It is a symbol of great ancient civilization.Some of heritage sites have something to do with great people，so we should protect them to show respect for them.We can make our students feel proud to protect heritage sites.They are of great value. We have made great progresses in protecting heritage sites.But there are still many problems to be solved.We students should learn knowledge of heritage sites by heart and take active steps to protect them. | 点评： 1.该篇习作符合倡议书的写作要求。 2.句式单调，文中用了很多简单句。 3.一些代词及名词用法有误，如第二句的it以及第二段的progresses。 |
[升格作文]
It is important to protect cultural heritage.Cultural heritage is a symbol of great ancient civilization.Most cultural heritage is related to great people，so protecting it shows respect for them.Cultural heritage is of great value and protecting it can make us feel proud of our nation.
Our country's cultural heritage protection has made great progress，but many problems still exist and need to be solved.Therefore，we should keep our mind clear and take more effective steps to better protect cultural heritage.
请你根据下文提示，写一篇短文，提倡保护文化遗产：
1．为了地方经济而破坏文化遗产是一种短见；
2．保护文化遗产的重要性；
3．个人看法。
注意：词数80左右。
【参考范文】
It's alarming to see that many heritage places have to give way to construction of local economy，which I personally think is shortsighted.
It's common sense that cultural relics are part of our history as well as our present life.In my personal opinion, to destroy cultural heritage means ruining our culture and betraying our history. Therefore, things must be done to stop the irresponsible action.As far as I'm concerned, we should first spare no effort to make people realize the importance and necessity of protecting cultural heritage, which seems a challenging task.
