译林版高中英语选择性必修第四册UNIT4表达作文巧升格课件+学案
展开给校报写一篇号召人们多读书的短文
本单元要求给校报写一篇号召人们多读书的短文,属于投稿信的写作范畴。
[基本框架]
开头(the beginning)——投稿目的
主体(the body)——分析原因
结尾(the ending)——给出建议
[常用词块]
1.broaden our vision开阔我们的视野
2.be of benefit to our life对我们的生活有益
3.get hold of a large amount of information掌握大量信息
4.have access to knowledge 获取知识
5.cultivate people's reading habits培养人们的阅读习惯
6.keep up with the pace of the world跟上世界的步伐
[常用语句]
★精彩开头
1.Book of medicine also,good reading can cure a fool.
书犹药也,善读之可以医愚。
2.We all know that reading has a lot of benefits.
我们都知道阅读有很多益处。
★正文佳句
1.What we learn from class is limited.We need to read as much as possible to fulfill our mind.
我们从课堂上学到的东西是有限的,我们需要尽可能多的阅读来充实我们的思想。
2.Reading can broaden our knowledge and horizons,which is important to job hunting in the future.
阅读可以拓宽我们的知识面和视野,这对将来找工作很重要。
★余味结尾
1.Then,you may find the great charm and benefits of reading.
然后,你就会发现阅读的魅力和好处了。
2.In short,the benefits of reading are countless.Come on! Let us soar in the sky of knowledge fully!
总而言之,读书的好处数不胜数。来吧!让我们在知识的天空尽情地翱翔吧!
假如你是李华,请你根据下面要点提示给校报写一篇短文,介绍阅读的好处。
1.可以增长见识;
2.可以提高阅读和写作能力;
3.开阔眼界,为未来工作打基础;
4.可以提高自我修养。
注意:词数80左右。(开头已给出,不计入总词数)
I think reading is important in the whole life for people.There are many benefits of reading.__________________________________________________________
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[学生习作]
I think reading is important in the whole life for people.There are many benefits of reading.
Firstly,reading can make us knowledgeable and we can learn the outside world well.Secondly,reading can improve our skills of reading and writing.You can learn more from others.Thirdly,reading can broaden our knowledge and horizons.It is important for you to find a job in the future.Finally,reading can help us improve selfcultivation which would be of great benefit to our life.
In a word,start reading at once and then you may find the great charm and benefits of reading.
点评:
1.本篇习作符合写作要求,能够提出观点,分析原因,简要总结,结构合理,内容充实。
2.该生能够使用firstly,secondly,thirdly等过渡词,使得文章更加连贯;同时动名词作主语,it作形式主语等高级句式的使用,增添了文章的语言色彩。
[升格作文]
I think reading is important in the whole life for people.There are many benefits of reading.
Firstly,reading increases our knowledge and we can learn the world affairs without going out.Secondly,reading is a good way to improve reading and writing skills.Before you learn to write,you must know how others write.Thirdly,reading can broaden our knowledge and horizons,which is important to job hunting in the future.Finally,reading helps us become selfcultivated that would be beneficial to our whole life.
Therefore,start reading,no matter how old you are and what you are doing.Then you may find the great charm and benefits of reading.
假如你是李华,某中学生英文报就“保护中国传统文化”为主题举行英语征文活动。你准备给该报投稿,稿件内容包括:
1.保护中国传统文化的重要性;
2.谈谈你对文化保护的建议。
注意:词数80左右。
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【参考范文】
Dear editor,
I know that the readers are expected to have a discussion on the topic of Protecting Traditional Chinese Culture.I have a strong desire to share my personal view on it.
In my opinion,some measures should be taken to protect traditional culture effectively.We should make a law to regulate the society's performance.What's more,we should draw more people's attention to it,for the more they know about the importance of culture protection,the stronger support we can get from the public.
In a word,it is high time we should treasure and develop our own valuable culture.
Yours,
Li Hua