(2011-2020)高考英语十年真题分项汇编专题32 书面表达之读写任务 (含解析)
展开十年(2010~2020)高考英语真题分项详解32
书面表达·读写任务
1.(2020年,江苏卷)
请阅读下面有关中国题材纪录片(documentary)的对话,并按照要求用英语写一篇150个词左右的文章。
Su Hua: Hi, Li Jiang! Did you see the BBC documentary on CCTV 9 last week?
Li Jiang: You mean Du Fu: China’s Greatest Poet? Yes, I did. Fantastic!
Su Hua: Just think an English actor recites Chinese poems.
Li Jiang: I don’t really understand every line he recites, but I believe he truly loves the poems himself.
Su Hua: Right. It is reported that the film is well received outside China.
Li Jiang: Yeah, It’s my first time to hear Chinese stories told by an English speaker.
Su Hua: In fact, documentaries about our country are plentiful both at home and abroad. These films can help foreign friends better understand this land-Chinese literature, geography history, food...
Li Jiang: I couldn’t agree more.
(写作内容)
1.用约30个词概括上述对话的主要内容;
2.谈谈中国题材纪录片受到外国朋友欢迎的原因(至少两点)。
(写作要求)
1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句;
2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3.不必写标题。
(评分标准)
内容完整语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。
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【答案】
CCTV 9 broadcast Du Fu: China’s Greatest Poet, a documentary produced by BBC. This well-made film provides foreign audiences with a fresh way of better knowing China’s past and present.
Documentaries about China, produced either in China or in other countries, are becoming increasingly popular among foreigners. For one thing, the overall development over the past decades has been so striking that they feel eager to familiarize themselves with what is going on in China.
For another, China enjoys a long history and rich culture. It has always been an attraction for those who are keen on anything that is Chinese. These documentaries present a splendid picture of China in front of their audiences-it history, landscape, art, food, or even traditional Chinese medicine.
Because of these films, some foreigners have begun to think of coming to China. In this way, they can form a true picture of China themselves.
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇读写任务。
【详解】
第一步:审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。要求阅读中国题材纪录片的对话,写一篇150个词文章。包括两部分。(一)、用30词概括对话内容。(二)、谈谈中国题材纪录片受到外国朋友欢迎的原因。要求至少两点原因。
第二步:布局段落,确定主要段落,次要段落,段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为四段。第一段,概括对话内容。第二段和第三段,中国题材纪录片受到外国朋友欢迎的原因。第四段,总结因为电影吸引外国人想来到中国。
第三步:确定关键词汇和短语: produced by, provide…with, either…or, be keen on, present , because of, in this way, the overall development,so striking that,feel eager to familiarize themselves with.
第四步:确定较为高级的句子: 非谓语动词结构a documentary produced by BBC; 定语从句的运用:It has always been an attraction for those who are keen on anything that is Chinese.
第五步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接: for one thing, for another.
第六步:注意书写,保持卷面整洁,避免划线,乱擦。
【点睛】
文章思路清晰,语言规范,段落整齐,语篇连贯,层次清晰。使用了较为高级的句式: 非谓语动词结构a documentary produced by BBC; 定语从句的运用:It has always been an attraction for those who are keen on anything that is Chinese. 状语从句和宾语从句的运用 the overall development over the past decades has been so striking that they feel eager to familiarize themselves with what is going on in China.这些高级句式的应用提升了写作的档次,整个短文显示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力
2.(2019年,江苏卷)
请阅读下面文字,并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。
Li Jiang: Have you heard this? A group of exchange students from the UK are visiting our school next month.
Su Hua: Yes, I have. Some are already recommending the traditional Chinese dress for the welcome ceremony.
Li Jiang: But it seems people have different opinions.
Su Hua: What do you think?
Li Jiang: I think it’s a good idea. It’s an opportunity to make the Chinese culture better known to international students.
Su Hua: I agree. But we don’t have to dress that way. That’s not our daily style. Besides, it’s not very convenient.
Li Jiang: You see, it’s the Chinese culture that the British friends are coming for. Just the right occasion.
Su Hua: I prefer the school uniform. It’s nice. It’s also a better display of our school culture.
(写作内容)
1. 用约30个词概括上述信息的主要内容;
2. 在上述场合,你是否倾向于穿中国传统服装?请说明理由(不少于两点)。
(写作要求)
1. 写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句;
2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3. 不必写标题。
(评分标准)
内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。
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【答案】
Possible version one:
Li Jiang and Su Hua are discussing what to wear when receiving the British students next month. Li recommends the traditional Chinese dress while Su prefers the school uniform.
I would be happy to wear traditional Chinese clothes at the welcome ceremony. Firstly, this is precisely what the British visitors are expecting. They come to learn about Chinese culture with their own eyes. Their Chinese peers in the typical Chinese dress would be highly impressive. The school uniforms are fine, but not special enough to give a unique Chinese flavour. Secondly, the inconvenience is not a problem if our purpose is to share Chinese culture. It is just the so-called inconvenience that displays the richness, delicacy and great fascination of Chinese culture with a history of thousands of years.
The traditional Chinese clothes, it seems to me, will make the occasion very Chinese and inviting to the British guests.
Possible version two:
Li Jiang and Su Hua don't agree on what to wear when greeting the British students. Li suggests traditional Chinese clothes while Su thinks the school uniforms are more suitable.
I prefer the school uniform to the traditional Chinese dress at the welcome ceremony next month. Although the traditional Chinese dress may look more beautiful and stylish, it is a little bit strange to walk around in it. We feel at ease in our school uniforms every day. What's more, the traditional Chinese dress can't reflect the unique culture of our school. From the design and colour of our uniforms, the British friends will learn more about our school. Besides, the choice of the traditional Chinese dress means extra money, and extra time, for we have to change it back after the event.
So the school uniforms are a better choice than the traditional Chinese dress for such an occasion.
【解析】
【分析】
本文是读写任务,今年的话题是关于中国传统服装的。
【详解】
读写任务首先要写好概括。概括短文的内容要点实为客观简要地转述作者的观点、论据和结论,概括包括两个部分:主题句和支撑句。概括注意要抓住要点,语言精练,不能添加自己的见解,但是要用自己的语言概括。
第二段用恰当的过渡语引出自己的观点(反对或赞成)。过渡语起承上启下的作用,要显自然、连贯。提出自己的观点后要具体论证自己的观点。
最后一段要总结观点,提出具体做法或号召,升华文章的主题。
3.(2018年,江苏卷)
请阅读下面文字,并按照要求用英语写一篇150 词左右的文章。
(写作内容)
1. 用约30个词概括上述利用排名(ratings)进行消费的现象;
2. 谈谈你如何看待消费排名,然后用2-3个理由或论据支撑你的看法。
(写作要求)
1. 写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句;
2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3. 不必写标题。
(评分标准)
内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。
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【答案】
Possible version one:
As a major channel of consumption information, the rating is an efficient source of information for shopping in our own consumption. Interestingly, the same rating may have different influences on different consumers.
I tend to consult consumption ratings whatever I purchase. Firstly, the higher rating means the higher quality of the product, or better service. Based on the ratings, I bought my beloved backpack, saw interesting films and tasted delicious foods. Secondly, ratings can save time to make decisions in shopping. For example, there are huge amounts of reference books which I am often confused to choose from. In that case, it is both convenient and economical to buy books according to the ratings.
There is no doubt that it is unwise to depend completely on the ratings in consumption. The advantages and disadvantages of ratings are often closely related. It is necessary to hold an objective attitude towards ratings.
Possible version two:
Nowadays, most commodities or services are rated through certain channels. These ratings, easy to access, are playing an increasingly important role in customers' purchase decision. However, results are sometimes unsatisfactory.
There is no denying that such ratings might bring convenience to consumers, but they are often misleading and unreliable. As we all know, most of the ratings are based on others’ judgment on the product or service concerned. Every judgment comes from a specific need or a unique psychological state. Apparently, blindly following others' advice will affect our own judgment. Another fact should not be neglected that some of the ratings are the outcome of a careful manipulation of companies or sellers. It has become a common practice for some to pay
for good ratings on their products or services so as to increase their sales.
Therefore, we should give a second thought to these ratings whenever we go shopping.
【解析】
今年作文仍然是读写作文,即先用30词概括阅读材料,然后针对材料中的话题写一篇议论文谈看法。首先要认真阅读两段有关消费排名现象及观点的纯文字材料,然后进行比较和分析,表明态度,作出价值判断。
文章首段要简要介绍两段材料,第一段材料为一对母子买旅行箱看了网上的评论,结果买回来的旅行箱质量很好。第二段材料为一家人去餐馆吃饭,看了on-line rating,选择去了其中一家,但饭菜很不好吃,从而凸显出online rating的不靠谱。
然后写你对online rating的看法,表明观点,注意用2-3个论据来支撑自己的看法。
首先在概括要点时,要抓住要点,语言精炼。本文所给材料是描述某种现象,那么就必须用概括的文字来说明某种现象。
第二步是提出自己的观点并加以论证。首先提出自己的观点,之后用论据来证明自己的观点,结尾要总结要点,与自己的观点句相呼应,使读者对主题有深刻的印象。
4.(2017年,江苏卷)
请认真阅读下面有关我国电影票房收入(box-office income)的柱状图及相关文字,并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。
One Day in 2016.At Home.
Son:Mum, shall we go and see a film tonight?
Mother: Why bother?We can stay at home and watch films online. It’s convenient with our new and faster network
Son: But it feels good in a cinema.
Mother: And the price… We have to pay 50 yuan a ticket.
Son: Only 10 yuan more than last year.
Mother: But still we cannot get the money’s worth.Some films are just boring…
【写作内容】
1.用约30个单词概述柱状图信息的主要内容;
2.我国电影票房收入变化的原因有哪些,简要谈谈你的看法(上述对话仅供参考,原因不少于两点);
3.谈谈你对我国电影票房收入走向的看法,并简要说明理由。
【写作要求】
1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句;
2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3.不必写标题。
【评分标准】
内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。
【来源】2017年全国普通高等学校招生统一考试英语(江苏卷精编版)
【答案】
Possible version one:
The box-office income of Chinese movies witnessed a constant increase from about 17 billion yuan in 2012 to over 40 billion in 2015. However, that increase slowed down in 2016.
The reasons behind this are various. The fast economic development before 2016 was probably the most powerful engine driving the constant growth in the box-office income. The application of new technologies and the wide appeal of movie stars could also account for the increase. However, China saw a decline in its economic growth rate last year. And the internet increased options for movie lovers. Consequently, some viewers began to turn away from cinemas, leading to a slower growth.
China’s economy is expected to grow at a medium speed in the coming years, so an increase is possible in the investment in the movie industry and the number of quality movies. Therefore, its box-office income will probably enjoy a slight increase.
(150 words)
Possible version two:
As is indicated in the graph, the box-office income of Chinese films increased constantly from 2012 to 2015, but its growth, for one reason or another, slowed down in 2016.
The increase in the box-office income can be attributed to a number of factors. The quality of life has improved and watching films is regarded as a good means of entertainment. Besides, filming technology has advanced and more quality films are on offer. Moreover, the internet plays an important part. On the internet, people can seek information about their favorite stars and buy tickets at a discount as well, which is both time-saving and economical.
However, the film market may witness a slowdown in the near future. Cinemas have gradually given way to the rise of the internet and cellphones, and the ticket price is on the increase. Therefore, the film industry should make greater efforts to attract more viewers.
(150 words)
【解析】本篇书面表达要求考生根据英语短文写一篇文章,总结短文大意,阐述对电影票房的看法,并说明理由。文章为任务型读写,属于议论文,主要使用第三人称为主,第一人称为辅。一般现在时为主,一般过去时为辅。考生首先应当仔细阅读短文,明确文章主旨;接着指出电影票房收入变化的原因,以及将来的走向;再在此基础上合理安排好文章结构。本文可用三段写作:第一段用约30词概括短文大意,提出文章主题;第二段阐述电影票房收入变化的原因;第三段论述电影票房将来的走向。
在遣词造句上,应当注意合理使用连接成分,以提高文章的逻辑性,如在列举理由时可以用to begin with, what's more, last but not least等;还应尽量使用较复杂句型,如在总结全文大意时可以用定语从句、分词结构;在其他地方可以用主语从句、倒装语序等。
5.(2015年,江苏卷)
请阅读下面文字及图表,并按照要求用英语写一篇 150 词左右的文章.
[写作内容]
1. 用约 30 个单词概述上述信息的主要内容;
2. 结合上述信息,简要分析导致交通问题的主要原因;
3. 根据你的分析,从社会规范(rules and regulations)和个人行为两方面谈谈你得到的启示(不少于两点)。
[写作要求]
1. 写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句;
2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3. 不必写标题。
[评分标准]
内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。
【答案】
The traffic issue is a hard nut to crack. It not only affects our everyday life, but may also threaten people’s lives. The three selections presented above are typical examples.
Quite a few things give rise to the traffic problem. In spite of the large-scale construction of roads and highways, there is still much room for improvement, because of the ever increasing number of cars these years. What’ s worse, some drivers, cyclists and pedestrians do not think it vital to obey traffic rules.
In fact, traffic rules are part of the rules and regulations closely related to public order. Without them, people could not enjoy harmony or the country would be in chaos. But rules alone don’t secure an orderly society. It is the people who obey the rules that matter. It is everybody’s duty to observe them to keep our society in order and going on the right track. (150 words)
【解析】
试题分析:今年江苏高考英语采用了“材料类+图形+提纲类”形式,综合考查考生阅读材料,识图和写作能力,较往年有所创新,也增加了难度。材料分为三部分:第一部分讲述了一位老奶奶阻止车辆停放引发的争议。第二部分讲述了行人和自行车不遵守红绿灯,导致交通事故发生的现象。第三部分是图表和文字,
反映近几年车辆的数量激增现象。要求第一段用30个单词概括材料内容;第二段分析导致交通问题的原因;第三段从社会规则和个人行为谈谈启示(不少于两点)。
【亮点说明】范文严格按照“三步走”的格局,第一段用短短26字(不含标点)概括了所给材料,得益于使用了“not only…but also…”这一经典句型;第二段分析了导致交通问题的原因,使用了“give rise to, large-scale construction of, the increasing number of, (be) vital to”等高级词汇,同时“what’s worse”衔接词的恰当使用使该段条理清晰。第三段句型多样,变换使用了“Without虚拟语气,it is…who…强调句型,it is one’s duty to do sth.”等句型,为文章增色不少。
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