高中Unit 5 Learning from nature图片课件ppt

写一篇因违背自然规律而得到教训的短文

此类文章属于夹叙夹议类小短文。写作通常只需包含“谁？干了什么事？结果如何？”等，然后再谈谈从这次经历中得出了什么经验教训。需要注意的是：

1．叙事时态多用一般过去时，看法和感受多用一般现在时；人称多以第一和第三人称为主；

2．其次还要注意叙事的衔接性，常见的衔接词如：(just)then，after (that)，when，as soon as等。

[基本框架]

第一部分：叙述事情的起因；

第二部分：叙述事情的经过；

第三部分：感受和教训。

[常用词块]

1．to live a better life为了过更好的生活

2．thank you very much for your concern

非常感谢你的关心

3．have problems with their noses and lungs

他们的鼻子和肺有问题

4．have to take action to protect our environment

必须采取措施来保护我们的环境

5．be nowhere to find无处可寻

6．be to blame for it要为此负责

7．waste plenty of resources浪费大量的资源

8．make the world a pleasant place to live in

让世界成为一个宜居的地方

9．learn a lesson from this failure从这次失败中吸取教训

10．the lesson from my previous mistake以往的错误给我的教训

[常用语句]

1．Once lost，they can never be replaced.

一旦失去，就再也无法弥补。

2．This is a warning to me to be more careful in the future.

这对我是个警告，以后要多加小心。

3．Improper human activities contribute a lot to those disasters.

不适当的人类活动导致了这些灾难。

4．So it is high time that we protected our environment.所以，是时候保护我们的环境了。

5．Only if we stop damaging the environment and do our best to protect it can we make the world a pleasant place to live in.

只有我们停止破坏环境，并尽我们最大的努力保护它，我们才能使世界成为一个宜居的地方。

假如你是李华，你的朋友Mike向你询问汉语成语“揠苗助长”的含义。请你根据下面的汉语提示用英语写一篇短文，向其解释该成语的由来和意义。

宋人有闵其苗之不长而揠之者，芒芒然归，谓其人曰，“今日病矣！予助苗长矣！”其子趋而往视之，苗则槁矣。

注意：1.词数80左右；

2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【学生习作】

The set phrase“ya miao zhu zhang”means“Trying to help seedlings grow by pulling them up”．There is a story behind it.

A man in the Song State was anxious about the slow growth of his seedlings.He pulled them upward one by one.He came back and said to his family，“I'm exhausted today.I've helped the seedlings grow much taller.”Hearing this，his son ran to look and found all had dried up and died.

点评：

1．遗漏要点；

2．缺少必要的衔接手段。

【升格作文】

The set phrase“ya miao zhu zhang”means“Trying to help seedlings grow by pulling them up”．There is a story behind it.

A man in the Song State was anxious about the slow growth of his seedlings.So，he pulled them upward one by one.He came back saying to his family，“I'm exhausted today，for I've helped the seedlings grow much taller.”Hearing this，his son ran to look and found all had dried up and died.

This set phrase teaches us the lesson that going against the law of development in things and being overanxious for quick results will make things worse.

下面是一幅有关自然现象的图画，根据这幅图画写一篇80词左右的短文，说一说这幅图画表现的自然现象以及你从中领悟到什么样的道理。

【参考范文】

Fallen Leaves Are Destined to Return to Their Roots

The picture above shows when autumn arrives，leaves from trees will fall to the ground.The fallen leaves gather around the tree in order to cultivate the tree's roots, which symbolize one's motherland.

More and more overseas Chinese are returning or have already returned to China.While they have spent a long time abroad，regardless of the life they may have led，they will return to their roots, home.Because they are grateful for their motherland's nourishment and support，they return to contribute to constructing their homeland with the knowledge，experience and wealth gained abroad.