Unit 10 单元话题满分范文必背-2022-2023学年八年级英语上册单元重难点易错题精练（人教版）

Unit 10 If you go to the party.

单元话题满分范文必背

1．父母是我们最亲的人，但我们有时候会在与父母沟通时遇到困难。请以“How to communicate with our parents”为题，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈与父母沟通的技巧和做法。要求：词数80词左右。

How to communicate with our parents

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【答案】One possible version:

How to communicate with our parents

As we grow up, we find that it’s not easy to communicate with our parents sometimes. So what should we do when communicating with them? Here are some of my ideas.

Firstly, we can make a list of things our parents and we disagree about most. Try to find out the reason why we have different ideas. Accept each other’s idea little by little. If we still have different ideas, we’d better not get angry. Secondly, we should talk with them more. Sharing ideas can make us closer. Besides, we should also learn how to really listen. Listening is a necessary skill in our life. In the end, be sure to polite. We are a family.

【解析】

1、题干解读：题目要求以“How to communicate with our parents”为题写一篇文章，谈谈与父母沟通的技巧和做法，可适当发挥。

2、写作指导：本文应该以第一人称来叙述内容；时态采用一般现在时为主；介绍怎样和父母沟通时，应详细具体，语句通顺，逻辑性强，保证条理清晰。

2．Mike 是一名中学生，他沉迷于玩电脑游戏，并因此影响了他的学习。作为Mike的好朋友，你打算怎么帮助他呢？请用下面所给的提示写一篇80词左右的短文(开头不计入总词数)。

提示：give up; waste time; be interested in; have a great time

Dear Mike，

Thanks for your letter.I am sorry to hear that you are in trouble now. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【答案】Dear Mike，

Thanks for your letter. I am sorry to hear that you are in trouble now. Don't worry. Let me help you. Now, I'll give you some advice about how to do better in your study. If you play too much computer games, you'll waste lots of time. As a result, you'll have little time to do your homework. If you give up playing computer games, you may be interested in other things, like study or sports. So you should give up the computer games and work hard. I think if you keep working hard, you'll have a great time at school with your good friends.

【解析】

这是一篇材料作文。Mike是一名中学生, 他沉迷于电脑游戏, 并因此影响了学习。假如你是Mike的好朋友，要求你写一篇短文，给他一些意见和建议帮助他。写作前要仔细审题，确定写作的重点，要把握好时态和人称。为使文章更有条理性可以先分条列出写作计划，列出所用到的一些基本词汇、词组；注意语意要通顺，符合逻辑关系，上下文之间可以适当使用连词。为避免文章的单调和枯燥，应该考虑运用比较高级的语法形式让文章增色。注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。

提示词语：give up; waste… time; be interested in; have a great time

3．近年来，青少年的心理健康问题引起了越来越多的关注。你们学校的英语角这周的主题就是“青少年心理健康问题大家谈”。请你根据下面的要点提示写一篇文章，就这一话题进行发言。

提示：1. 学校方面：建立专门的部门；

2. 家长方面：给予更多关注；

3. 青少年自己：正确处理困难。

参考词汇：

心理健康 mental health; 全社会 the whole society; 部门 department

要求：1. 词数80左右(文章开头已给出，不计入总词数)；

2. 根据所给信息可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Nowadays, people are paying a lot more attention to teenagers' mental health. __________________________

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【答案】Nowadays, people are paying a lot more attention to teenagers' mental health. In my opinion, the whole society should work together to solve this problem.

First, schools should organize a special department to help teenagers to solve their problems. Second, parents should care more about the mental health of their children. Last but not least, young people should deal with difficulties in a right way. They can ask their teachers and parents for some advice on how to solve their problems.

We hope that all the teenagers can have a happy life.

【解析】

这篇作文的主题是“青少年心理问题”，要求我们对学校英语角举办的这一主题活动进行发言。文章主要从三个方面来叙述：学校方面、家庭方面和青少年自身。题目中只是简单列出了这个结构，文章里具体的内容需要学生们自己发挥想象力进行补充，并用正确的英语表达出来。因此首先我们应对文章内容进行组织和发挥，确定文章的结构和层次；然后确定应使用的时态和人称，通过分析可知，这篇短文应以一般现在时为主，根据表达的需要使用恰当的人称。接下来就是具体的表达，需要注意：英语的表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不能逐词翻译，而应从句子是整体结构考虑，使用较常见的主谓宾结构或主系表结构，穿插使用并列句和复合句，并注意使用恰当的词汇、短语和句型；其次需要注意语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文章整体意思连贯、语句通顺、表达流畅。

【点睛】

这是一篇优秀的作文。首先短文内容完整，结构清晰。短文是总分总的结构，共分为三段。第一段作者引出话题，并用一句话概括自己的观点；第二段是主体段，作者从三个方面叙述了如何对待“青少年心理问题”，它需要学校、家庭和青少年自身的共同努力。这一段所占篇幅最大，是文章的主要内容；第三段作者用一句话表达了自己的愿望，与开头呼应。其次短文中使用了正确的人称和时态，语法规范，语句通顺，句式表达符合英语的习惯，以简单句为主，也使用了并列句和复合句，如宾语从句等。长短句结合，使文章富有节奏感。短文第二段中作者使用了First, Second, Last but not least来连接各部分内容，使文章内容非常连贯。文章中使用了较丰富的短语和句型，如In my opinion, the whole society should work together to solve this problem. 、First, schools should organize a special department to help teenagers to solve their problems. 、Last but not least, young people should deal with difficulties in a right way. 、They can ask their teachers and parents for some advice on how to solve their problems. 、We hope that all the teenagers can have a happy life.等等。

4．健康的身体是我们中学生学习的保证。但是网络抢走了我们的锻炼时间，垃圾食品威胁着我们的健康。请根据下面的提示，以“How to Keep Healthy”为题写一篇英语短文。

提示：1.坚持锻炼；

2.健康饮食；

3.合理上网；

4.充足的睡眠；

5.保持愉快的心情。

要求：1.不要逐条翻泽，可适当发挥；

2.词数80左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数；

3.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等详细信息。

参考词汇：junk food (垃圾食品）

How to Keep Healthy

It’s important for us to keep healthy. As a middle school student, we should have a healthy lifestyle. Here are some suggestions.

【答案】How to Keep Healthy

It’s important for us to keep healthy. As a middle school student, we should have a healthy lifestyle. Here are some suggestions.

First, we should do exercise at least one hour a day,such as running or walking. Second, have a healthy diet. Eat more fruit and vegetables. Try not to eat junk food. Third, we’d better not spend too much time going online. It is bad for our studies and eyes. Fourth, go to bed early and don’t stay up too late, because enough sleep is good for our health. Finally, be happy as possible as we can. Learn to smile at ourselves at any time.

If we do so, I believe we can keep healthy.

【解析】

本篇习作成功地完成了写作任务，表达顺畅，结构连贯，字数符合要求。准确运用时态，要点全面，语法正确，上下文意思连贯，适当发挥了想象。本文应用了很多短语使得文章很生动，例如As a middle school student，at least ，such as，stay up，be good for等。特别是运用了序数词，例如First，Second，Third，Fourth和Finally等，使短文表达顺畅，层次清晰，更是本文的亮点，是一篇非常棒的作文。

5．假如你叫Tom，你的朋友John在学习上、生活方面遇到一些问题和困扰，他很焦虑。请根据以下内容提示给他写一封电子邮件，给他一些建议帮助他克服焦虑。

提示：1.每个人都会有苦恼、焦虑的时候；2.要找人诉说你的烦恼；3.遇到困难可以和同学们，老师，家长交流。4.可适当发挥内容。80词左右。

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【答案】例文

Dear John,

It’s normal for everyone to have problems and worries. But I think talking to someone helps a lot.

Firstly, if you have problems with schoolwork or life, you should talk to your classmates, teachers or parents. Sharing a problem is like cutting it in half. So you are halfway to solving a problem just by talking to someone about it! Secondly, listening to music or taking part in outdoor activities is another way to help you get relaxed. Last, it’s best to smile at yourself and never keep problems to yourself.

Please remember you are not alone. I believe we can overcome them in the end.

Yours,

Tom

【解析】

1.题干解读：本文是写一篇电子邮件；假如你叫Tom，你的朋友John在学习上、生活方面遇到一些问题和困扰。根据题干提示给他写一封电子邮件，给他一些建议帮助他克服焦虑。

2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时，以第二人称为主；文章第一段告诉对方，每个人都会遇到困难；第二段详细叙述如何解决困难和困扰；最后一段鼓励对方，最后总会克服这些困难。保证叙述完整，条理清晰；注意电子邮件格式。

6．假设你是David，你的好朋友Toby非常喜欢体育运动，但是他的父母不允许他花费太多时间在运动上，为此他很苦恼。请你根据下面的提示给他写一封信，针对他的问题，提出你的建议，并给他一些安慰和鼓励。

提示：1. What should David do in his study？2. What should David talk to his parents？

3. What should David do to his parents？

要求：1. 语句通顺、符合逻辑，可适当发挥；2. 70词左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Toby，

I’m sorry to hear that

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Yours，

David

【答案】Dear Toby,

I'm sorry to hear that you have problems with your parents.

As for your problems, I have two pieces of advice. First, finish your homework on time every day，and listen to the teachers carefully in class. Make sure that you won't fall behind. Second, have a talk with your parents. You should let them know that doing sports doesn't take up your study time. Instead, it is good for both your study and health.

Just be patient with your parents. I think they will understand you.

Yours,

David

【解析】

1.题干解读：这是一封建议信，短文要求我们以David的身份给好朋友Toby写信，对他遇到的问题提出自己的建议。题目中利用问题的形式，列出了文章的主要内容，这也是学生们写作的依据。审题可知，短文应用一般现在时，第一人称和第二人称来叙述。

2.例文点评：这是一篇优秀的作文，短文有以下几个优点：首先文章内容充实、完整，提出的建议很合理；层次清晰，用First, Second列出了自己的建议。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范、准确，语言得体；句式结构完整，符合英语的表达习惯；最后使用了较丰富的短语和句型，如宾语从句、状语从句、祈使句等的使用，增加了文章的表现力。

3.高分亮点：

短语：as for；have problems with；on time；listen to；in class；fall behind；have a talk with；take up；be good for；be patient with。

句型：First, finish your homework on time every day，and listen to the teachers carefully in class.；You should let them know that doing sports doesn't take up your study time. Instead, it is good for both your study and health。

7．假如你是李华，你加拿大的笔友Sandy考试前总是很紧张。尽管她学习刻苦，但一开始考试，她就会忘记所有知识。她感觉自己好笨，为此她感到很苦恼。于是她通过电子邮件向你寻求帮助，请你根据她的问题给她回复邮件。

●Do you have the same problem as I do?

●Do you think I am a little stupid (笨的)?

●What can I do when I take an exam?

要求：1. 短文中至少含有两句if引导的条件状语从句；

           2. 词数90 左右；电子邮件的格式、开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。

参考词汇：自信的confident   注意 attention

全神贯注于concentrate on

Dear Sandy,

I am happy to receive your e-mail and I am sorry to hear about your problem. I hope I can help you.

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I hope my advice will help you.

 Yours,

 Li Hua

【答案】Dear Sandy,

I am happy to receive your e-mail and I am sorry to hear about your problem. I hope I can help you.

Sometimes I feel the same way you do. I also feel a little nervous before exams. Maybe everyone does. I don't think you are stupid and you will always be clever in my eyes.

Be confident when you take an exam. You should read the questions carefully and think over your answers. You shouldn't worry about your grades while taking the exam. Just concentrate on answering the questions. If you worry too much, it will take your attention away from them. If so, you won't get good results.

I hope my advice will help you.

                                                                                                              Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

这篇作文要求我们以李华的身份给自己的笔友Sandy写信，就她提出的问题进行解答。审题可知，这是一封建议信，信中应对Sandy出现的问题给予她一些建议，题目中设置了三个问题，这三个问题也是作文的写作提纲，学生们可以针对这几个问题展开想象，做出相应的回答，串联成一篇完整的短文。在这三个问题中最后一个应该是文章的主体，即给Sandy提出一些建议，告诉她考试时应怎样做，怎样克服紧张的情绪。写作中有两个难点：第一个是学生们要根据题目要求和设置的问题，自己组织语言，充实文章的具体内容和细节。可以联想自己的现实生活，从自己的实际出发。第二个难点是表达，英语的表达习惯和汉语是不同的，所以不能逐词翻译。写作时应从句子的整体结构出发，使用较常见的主谓宾或主系表结构，然后选择适当的单词、短语或一些好的句型进行表达。穿插使用并列句或复合句的句式，调整文章的节奏。如题目中要求文章里需要使用至少两个含有if引导的条件状语从句，这一点需要注意。语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯、表达自然。

【点睛】

这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求给Sandy写了回信，对她遇到的问题进行了解答，并提出了具体的建议。首先短文内容完整，作者根据题目中的三个问题进行解答，也用这三个问题串联起来整篇文章。内容安排合理，结构清晰，主次分明，第一、二个问题只用了四句话，文章的重点在第三个问题上，即给Sandy提出了一些建议。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，文章以一般现在时为主来叙述，主要使用了第一人称和第二人称，符合表达的需要。句式结构完整，符合英语的表达习惯，以简单句结构为主，按题目要求使用了if引导的条件状语从句，表达非常准确。文章中还用了一些较好的句型和短语，如I don't think you are stupid and you will always be clever in my eyes、You should read the questions carefully and think over your answers.、If you worry too much, it will take your attention away from them. If so, you won't get good results.等。

8．假如你是劳拉(Laura)，你的好朋友蒂娜(Tina)对于将要到来的考试感到很担忧，担心不能取得好成绩。请你给她写一封信，针对她的问题，提出你的建议，并给她一些安慰和鼓励。

提示词：worried about, normal, helpful (有帮助的), first of all, next, if, will, nervous (紧张的), believe in oneself, best

要求：1.语句通顺、符合逻辑，可适当发挥；2.70词左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Tina,

I’m sorry to hear that ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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Yours,

   Laura

【答案】Dear Tina，

I’m sorry to hear that you are worried about the coming exam. It’s normal to feel nervous when there is an exam. I have the same feeling as you. Here is my advice. I hope they are helpful to you.

First of all，the exam results don’t mean everything. It’s good to care about the result，but if you care too much about it，you will not be able to enjoy your study. Next，if you are too nervous，you’d better do something to relax. Don’t spend your time worrying about the exams all the time.

Just believe in yourself and try your best. I always believe you’re the best!

Yours，

Laura

【解析】

1.题干解读：本篇书面表达是一封书信，结合所给的写作要求，阐明问题、给出建议。

2.写作指导：根据内容提示可知本文会使用到一般现在时态，注意一些常见句式的应用。写作中注意连词、固定短语的交替使用，使文意连接紧密。还要注意使用丰富的语句，如宾语从句、状语从句等。注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，最好表达出自己的感想和看法。

9．Mike是一名中学生, 他沉迷于电脑游戏, 并因此影响了学习。假如你是Jack, 作为Mike的好朋友, 你打算怎么帮助他呢?请根据下面所给的提示写一封不少于80词的信(开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数)。

提示：give up; waste… time; be interested in; have a great time

Dear Mike,

Thanks for your letter. I am sorry to hear that you are in trouble now.

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Yours,

Jack

【答案】Dear Mike，

Thanks for your letter. I am__sorry__to hear that you are in trouble now. Don't worry. Let me help you. Now, I'll give you some advice on how to do better in your study. If you spend too much time on computer games, you'll waste__lots__of__time．As__a__result,__you'll have little time to do your homework. If you give__up playing computer games, you may be__interested__in other things, like study or sports. So you should give up the computer games and work hard.

I think if you keep working hard, you'll have a great time at school with your good friends.

Yours，

Jack

【解析】

这是一篇书信作文。Mike是一名中学生, 他沉迷于电脑游戏, 并因此影响了学习。假如你是Mike的好朋友Jack，要求你写一封信帮助他。写作前要仔细审题，确定写作的重点，要把握好时态和人称。为使文章更有条理性可以先分条列出写作计划，列出所用到的一些基本词汇、词组；注意语意要通顺，符合逻辑关系，上下文之间可以适当使用连词。为避免文章的单调和枯燥，应该考虑运用比较高级的语法形式让文章增色。注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。

提示词语：give up; waste… time; be interested in; have a great time