【中考复习】【话题写作】【学习生活】课件PPT

这是一份【中考复习】【话题写作】【学习生活】课件PPT，共21页。PPT课件主要包含了 写作评分标准， 内容，下一步直接动笔写， 语言， 语言， 结构，句子与句子之间缺少， 作文， 思路， 练习等内容，欢迎下载使用。
7-9分 写出部分要点，句子基本通顺，有一些语法和拼写错误；
语言 语言正确，流畅（文章‘亮点’合理出现）
写作话题：学习生活
三年初中学习生活即将结束，同学们在毕业纪念册上互赠留言。假如你是Li Hua，曾在英语学习方面遇到困难，是外籍交换生Sam同学主动关心、帮助你，让你走出困境。临近毕业！你想对他表示感谢。请根据下表中的内容和要求，在Sam的毕业纪念册上用英语写一段留言。【下城拱墅滨江 一模】
Dear Sam, Hw time flies! It’s time fr us t say gdbye.______________________________________________________________________ Thank yu fr all yur help. And best wishes fr yu!Yurs,Li Hua
1 .have difficulty/truble (in) ding sth. 在做······有困难 I have difficulty/truble memrizing new wrds.2. It is +adj. fr sb. t d sth. 做某事对某人来说怎么样 It is hard fr me t memrize new wrds.
I can’t memrize wrds.
犯错：make mistakes in (ding) sth. I ften make mistakes in grammar.
My grammar is pr.
口语差：have pr spken English can’t express myself clearly in English
spken English
Dear Sam, Hw time flies! It’s time fr us t say gdbye.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank yu fr all yur help. And best wishes fr yu!Yurs,Li Hua
I still remembered three years ag, I had difficulty memrizing new wrds. I ften made mistakes in grammar and had pr spken English.
He talked with me.
Dear Sam, Hw time flies! It’s time fr us t say gdbye.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank yu fr all yur help. And best wishes fr yu!Yurs,Li Hua
Yu advised me t read mre and listen mre. Yu suggested me watching mre English mvies and listening mre English sngs. Yu had cnversatins with me in English. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Dear Sam, Hw time flies! It’s time fr us t say gdbye.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank yu fr all yur help. And best wishes fr yu!Yurs,Li Hua
Finally, I made great prgress and my spken English imprved a lt.
1. Yu advised me t read mre and listen mre. 2. Yu suggested me watching mre English mvies and listen mre English sngs. 3. Yu had cnversatins with me in English.
firstly/first f allbesides/what’s mre
Dear Sam, Hw time flies! It’s time fr us t say gdbye.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank yu fr all yur help. And best wishes fr yu!Yurs,Li Hua
Firstly, yu advised me t read mre and listen mre. Besides, yu suggested me watching mre English mvies and listen mre English sngs. What’s mre, yu had cnversatins with me in English.
要点与要点之间/段落与段落之间缺少？
I still remembered three years ag, I had difficulty memrizing new wrds. I ften made mistakes in grammar and had pr spken English.
Hwever, I was s lucky t meet yu wh were s kind that give me smeadvice./ Hwever, yu were s kind and gave me sme advice n learning English
Dear Sam, Hw time flies! It’s time fr us t say gdbye.I still remembered three years ag, I had difficulty memrizing new wrds. I ften made mistakes in grammar and had pr spken English. Hwever, yu were s kind and gave me sme advice n learning English. //Firstly, yu advised me t read mre and listen mre. Besides, yu suggested me watching mre English mvies and listen mre English sngs. what’s mre, yu had cnversatins with me in English. //Finally, I made great prgress and my spken English has imprved a lt. Thank yu fr all yur help. And best wishes fr yu!Yurs,Li Hua
列大纲：避免漏掉要点句式：联系学习过的固定搭配衔接：连接词；衔接句
假如你叫Mike，是一个成功的英语学习者。你的朋友Paul在英语学习过程中遇到一些困难，请针对他的问题谈谈你的学习方法。字数要求80个词左右。
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