中考英语作文专项训练：电子邮件

这是一份中考英语作文专项训练：电子邮件，共19页。
电子邮件1．假设你叫李平，你的姐姐李蓉今年七月要去伦敦Linda家住一段时间。请你根据表格信息，用英语给Linda写一封邮件，介绍你姐姐的基本情况。姓名Li Rong年龄16外貌中等身高、黑色短发性格随和、外向、友好爱好历史、博物馆、烹任、打篮球衣着T恤、牛仔裤 注意：(1)文中不得出现个人真实信息，如姓名、校名等；(2)文中应包含表格所给信息，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯； (3)词数80-100。Dear Linda,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours, Li Ping2．为了中学生的心理健康，学校英文报开辟了“HEART-TO-HEART”专栏。假如你是李华，你因为最近心情不好，影响到了你的学习和生活，决定给专栏的主编Jane写一封e-mail倾述你的烦恼，并且向她寻求建议。心情不好的原因：1．学习功课多，学习压力大；2．考试不及格，父母责怪你；3．好朋友因为你未能陪她看电影而生气。要求：1．语句通顺，书写工整。2．词数：80词左右。Dear Jane,       I have a hard time these days._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes,Li Hua3．假定你是Li Hua。阅读你朋友Tony从美国发来的电子邮件。Dear Li Hua,How is everything going? It has been 5 years since I came back to America. What are you like now? Are you taller than before? Are you still shy now? What other changes have happened to you? By the way, the Asian Games will be held in Hangzhou in 2022. There must be a lot of changes in Hangzhou. Can you tell me something about them? Look forward to your reply!Best wishes to your parents.Yours,Tony注意：1）词数80词左右。2）根据要求回复并邀请Tony来杭州。Dear Tony,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua4．假如你是王梅，有一个弟弟/妹妹一直是你的梦想，去年你家里添了一个弟弟/妹妹，你非常开心，请根据内容要点写一封电子邮件给你的朋友李蕾，和她分享你的快乐，告诉她你的变化。内容要点：1.我一直想有个弟弟/妹妹；2.去年我的梦想实现了；3.他/她非常可爱，给我们带来了欢乐，伴我成长，不再孤单；4.更重要的是，我学会了分享和照顾家人；5.请补充3—4条弟弟/妹妹到来后你的变化。要求：1.内容须包括所提示信息，可适当发挥；2.文中不能出现真实的人名和校名；3.词数：90词左右；邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Li Lei,I have been dreaming to have a brother/sister. Last year, __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I’m lucky and happy to have a brother/sister. Look forwarding to hearing from you.Yours,Wang Mei5．假设你是无锡市第五中学的张颖，你的英国笔友珍妮想了解中国学生课外阅读的情况。请根据下图提示，给她回一封电子邮件。注意事项：1. 回复的邮件须包括所给内容要点，要求语句通顺，意思连贯，并展开合理想象，作适当发挥；2. 所给斜体字提示为非限定性内容，仅供参考；3. 词数在100个左右，回复邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；4. 回复的邮件中不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。Dear Jenny,Thank you for your email. I would like to tell you something about __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Best wishes!Yours,Zhang Ying6．假如你是李明，你的朋友李华向你请教学习英语的好方法，你准备给出一些建议。请根据以下中文提示，给李华发一封邮件，要求80词左右，邮件开头已给出，不计入总词数。要点如下：1. 读英文报纸，培养良好语感；2. 看英文电影，了解西方文化；3. 结交一个外国网友，并与之交流；4. 坚持写英文日记，学好语法；5. 补充一两点个人想法。参考词汇：develop v. 培养 sense n. 感觉 e-pal n. 网友Dear Li Hua,       I know that you have some problems learning English. Don’t worry. I’ll give you some advice. ________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________       I hope it will help you.Yours sincerely,Li Ming7．假如你是赵明，你给你的笔友写信，请你根据以下内容提示，以电子邮件的形式向他介绍一下常见的韩国习俗。提示：1. 韩国人见面时应该鞠躬。2. 吃饭时不要随便发出响声，也不准端着碗吃，应该把饭碗放在左边，汤碗放在右边。3. 应邀赴宴，带点小礼物比较好。要求：1. 要点要齐，语句通顺连贯，不要逐句翻译。2. 词数120左右，开头，结尾已给出。Dear Li Wei.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________YoursZhao Ming8．假设你是李华，请根据下面的要点，给你的美国朋友Chris写一封email，向他介绍你是如何在日常生活中保持健康的。Dieteat vegetables and fruitdon’t have too much junk food…Sportsdo sports every day…Sleepgo to bed earlyhave enough sleep… 注意：（1）文中必须包含上表中的所有要点，可适当发挥；        （2）文中不得出现真实人名、校名和地名等相关信息；        （3）词数：80~100；开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Chris,How is everything going? I am glad to tell you how to keep healthy every day._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua9．假定你是李华，在九年级的紧张学习生活中遇到了一些问题，请你给Aunt Linda 写一封电子邮件向她求助，内容包括：1. 表达写信目的；2. 讲述具体问题；3. 表示感谢和期待。注意：1. 词数80-100。开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；2. 短文须包括所给内容信息。可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Aunt Linda, I read your advice page every week. Your advice is very useful.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours, Li Hua10．假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Jack将到你校做交换生，但是他对你校的规定不是很了解，请你用英文写一封邮件告诉他具体的要求。要点： （1）在校务必穿校服；（2）不能在学校使用手机；（3）可以带食物进校园，但是只能休息的时候在教室外面吃。（4）……（至少补充2点）写作要求：1. 用上所给提示要点，并适当发挥； 2. 行文流畅，语句通顺，书写规范；3. 文中不能出现考生的真实姓名、校名和地名；4. 词数80左右。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________                参考答案1．例文Dear Linda,I’m glad to write to you. Today I want to introduce my sister Li Rong to you.She is 16 years old. She is of medium height and she has short black hair. She is easy-going, out-going and friendly. She likes history because she thinks it helps her learn about the history and culture of the past. She likes to go to museums and she likes the cultural atmosphere of the museum. She likes cooking and she always cooks for us. She likes playing basketball and she often plays basketball on weekends. She often wears T-shirts and jeans.I hope you will help her and she won’t give you any trouble.Yours, Li Ping【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据表格内容介绍姐姐的基本情况，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图。借用“介绍姐姐”来引出重点介绍的内容；第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“姓名、年龄、外貌、性格、爱好和穿着”几个方面重点介绍；第三步，书写结语。表达希望对方帮忙，姐姐不会给对方添麻烦。[亮点词汇]①introduce...to...向……介绍……②of medium height中等身高③learn about学习关于……④on weekends在周末[高分句型]①She likes history because she thinks it helps her learn about history and culture of the past.（because引导的原因状语从句和省略that的宾语从句）②I hope you will help her and she won’t give you any trouble.（and连接并列句）2．例文：Dear Jane,I have a hard time these days. As a student of Grade Nine, I must study many subjects at school and do a lot of homework every day. So I am under great pressure. Last week, I failed the exams though I studied very hard. However, my parents didn’t understand me but blamed me. What’s worse, my best friend is angry with me because I can’t go the see the movie with her this weekend for I have to stay at home to study. I feel so upset that I can’t focus myself on study and can’t control my temper. I really don’t know what I should do. I hope you can give me some advice.Thank you for reading my e-mail. I am looking forward to your reply.Best wishes,Li Hua【详解】[总体分析]① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；② 时态：时态为“一般过去时”；③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍自己心情不好的原因；第二步，希望得到对方的建议并期待对方回复。[亮点词汇]① what’s worse 并且② be angry with sb. 对某人生气③ look forward to期待[高分句型]① I failed the exams though I studied very hard.（though引导让步状语从句）② I feel so upset that I can’t focus myself on study and can’t control my temper.（so…that…引导结果状语从句）3．例文：Dear Tony,I’m glad to receive your letter. I have been living a happy life since you came back to America. I am taller than before and more outgoing now. I often join in activities at school. I play ping-pong better than before, because I practice it with my friends after school. The Asian Games will be held in Hangzhou in 2022. There will be many events and a lot of athletes from many Asian countries will take part in it. I know you like sports, so I invite you to come to Hangzhou to take part in the Asian Games.I am looking forward to seeing you early.Best wishesYours,Li Hua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件。②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中我的变化的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图。借用“简单介绍我的变化以及亚运会”来引出重点介绍的内容；第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“我的生活、我的性格、我的爱好”几个方面重点介绍我的变化的具体情况；第三步，书写结语，表达“期望早日见到你”的愿望。[亮点词汇]①come back to回到；②join in参加；③practice 练习④invite sb. to do sth.邀请某人做某事。[高分句型]① I know you like sports, so I invite you to come to Hangzhou to take part in the Asian Games. （so引导结果状语从句）4．例文Dear Li Lei, I have been dreaming to have a sister. Last year, my dream came true. I was really happy to have such a lovely baby sister.She brings lots of joy to our family and she grows up with me day by day. Every time I see the big smile on her face, my heart is full of sweet presents. I will come over to see her and play with her as soon as I get home every day. Now I’m not alone anymore. Above all, I have learned to share and look after others since she was born. I learn to help my mother do the housework, such as washing clothes, cooking and looking after my little sister on my own initiative. In order to set a good example for my little sister, I decide to study hard all the time and go to a famous university one day. Taking care of the baby is a hard job and I learn to be patient from it. I also learn to be tolerant to all my friends because every time my little sister makes me angry, I am still very kind and friendly to her.I’m lucky and happy to have a sister. Looking forward to hearing from you soon.Yours,Wang Mei【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“内容”中需要补充的信息，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，承接开头，介绍弟弟/妹妹的到来；第二步，具体阐述弟弟/妹妹到来后自己的变化。[亮点词汇]①grow up长大②be full of充满③such as例如[高分句型]①In order to set a good example for my little sister, I decide to study hard all the time and go to a famous university one day.（不定式作目的状语）②I also learn to be tolerant to all my friends because every time my little sister makes me angry, I am still very kind and friendly to her.（because引导的原因状语从句）5．例文Dear Jenny,Thank you for your email. I would like to tell you something about the extra-curricular reading in our school. In fact, most students in our school haven’t realized the importance of extra-curricular reading. Therefore, the time devoted to reading is limited. Some students prefer comic books to classic reading materials. Here are the reasons. Some students haven’t formed a good habit of reading. Others have so little interest in reading that they would rather spend time on videos or computer games. Some people have no time or interest. Reading is good for both our life and study, which can open up a new world to us. So it is necessary for students to take up reading. Since last year, I have read many world classics, such as a Dream of Red Mansions. I have learned a lot about Chinese history.   Best wishes!Yours,Zhang Ying【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为电子邮件；②时态：时态为“一般现在时和现在完成时”；③提示：注意回复的邮件须包括所给内容要点，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。[写作步骤]第一步：表明写作意图。根据所给内容要点，给英国笔友珍妮回一封电子邮件，介绍一下中国学生课外阅读的情况。第二步：具体阐述写作内容。首先点明主题；其次介绍中国学生课外阅读的现状；接着介绍学生不喜欢阅读的原因；接下来介绍阅读的好处；最后介绍我的阅读经历。第三步：书写结语。表示祝福。[亮点词汇]①would like想要  ②the importance of……的重要性 ③prefer…to…比起……来，更喜欢……   ④would rather宁愿；宁可  ⑤open up打开[高分句型]①Others have so little interest in reading that they would rather spend time on videos or computer games.（so…that…引导结果状语从句，表示“如此……以至于……”） ②Reading is good for both our life and study, which can open up a new world to us.（which引导的定语从句）  ③So it is necessary for students to take up reading.（It is+形容词+for sb.+to do sth.”意为“对某人来说做某事怎么样”）6．例文：Dear Li Hua,I know that you have some problems learning English. Don’t worry. I’ll give you some advice. First, you can read English newspapers. It can help you develop a good sense of language. Although it may be difficult at the beginning, don’t give up, and you will get good results. Second, if you are free at weekends, you can watch English movies that you are interested in and learn about western culture. Third, you can make a foreign friend, and you can communicate with him in English. I think it can help you improve your speaking skills. Fourth, keep an English diary. You may make some mistakes, but don’t worry. You can ask your classmates or teachers for help. Because writing can help you learn grammar well. Last but not least, you can improve your listening skills by listening to tapes or English songs. If you accept my advice, I believe you’ll make great progress in your English study. I hope my advice will help you.Yours sincerely,Li Ming【详解】[总体分析]① 题材：本文是一篇给材料的书信作文，属于电子邮件；② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，写作包含要点中的所有提示以及自己的观点等。 [写作步骤]第一步，总体指出要提出一些建议；第二步，具体从不同的方面提出建议，包括要点提示的所有内容；第三步，最后总结希望自己的建议对朋友有用。[亮点词汇]① give up放弃② be interested in对……感兴趣③ communicate with和……交流[高分句型]① If you accept my advice, I believe you’ll make great progress in your English study.（if引导的条件状语从句）② you can watch English movies that you are interested in（that引导的定语从句）7．例文：Dear Li Wei,I am happy to hear that you are going to South Korea for further study. Life in South Korea is not difficult, but you should know some customs before you go in order to make your life there easier. In South Korea, you are supposed to bow when you meet someone. The table manners there are a bit different from those in China. You are not supposed to make noise while eating or pick up your bowl. You should put your rice bowl on your left and your soup bowl on your right. If you are invited to a South Korean’s house, you’d better take off your shoes, so it is rude if you don’t wear your socks. By the way, if you are invited to a dinner party, remember to bring a small gift. I hope you will have a good time in South Korea. Yours Zhao Ming 【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已部分给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“内容提示”中的韩国人的几种礼节。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍自己写这篇邮件的目的，是为了告诉Li Wei去韩国留学时需要注意的一些当地的传统礼节；第二步，介绍内容提示中所提到的三点传统礼节；第三步，收尾，向对方表达祝福。[亮点词汇]①be supposed to应该；②by the way顺便说一下。[高分句型]①Life in South Korea is not difficult, but you should know some customs before you go in order to make your life there easier.（but连接表示转折的并列句）②By the way, if you are invited to a dinner party, remember to bring a small gift.（if引导条件状语从句）8．[例文]Dear Chris,How is everything going? I am glad to tell you how to keep healthy every day.First, we should eat healthily. We should eat more vegetables and fruits. And we shouldn’t eat too much junk food. As the saying goes, “An apple a day keeps the doctor away.” Second, exercise is necessary. There is no doubt that exercise can give us strong bodies, so we should do sports every day. Finally, we should form good living habits. We should go to bed early and have enough sleep every day. What’s more, never drink coffee before going to bed. If we start now, the change will show.Yours,Li Hua【详解】[总体分析]① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③ 提示：根据所给表格提示，介绍自己是如何在日常生活中保持健康的，可适当发挥。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍从饮食习惯上如何保持健康；第二步，从运动上介绍如何保持健康；第三步，从睡眠上介绍如何保持健康。[亮点词汇]①There is no doubt毫无疑问②living habits生活习惯③what’s more而且[高分句型]If we start now, the change will show.（if引导的条件状语从句）9．例文：Dear Aunt Linda,I read your advice page every week. Your advice is very useful. I’m writing this letter to ask you to do me a favor.Recently, I’ve been busy reviewing my English, but unfortunately I find it difficult to focus on my studies because of some problems. First, I have to spend so much time on my homework that I hardly have time to memorize English words and phrases. Besides, the high expectation from my parents makes me very stressful. They think I don’t work hard enough. But I don’t think so.I would really appreciate if you could help me. I’m looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua【详解】［总体分析］①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；③提示：要求写信给Aunt Linda介绍自己在紧张学习生活中遇到的问题，征求对方的建议，考生应注意不要遗漏内容提示所给要点，且要注意书写格式。［写作步骤］第一步，承接邮件开头，介绍自己来信的目的；第二步，详细给出自己在学习生活中遇到的问题；第三步，征求对方的建议并表达感谢。［亮点词汇］①be busy doing sth忙于做某事 ②focus on集中③do me a favor帮我一个忙 ［高分句型］①I would really appreciate if you could help me.（if引导的条件状语从句）②but unfortunately I find it difficult to focus on my studies because of some problems.（sb find it＋adj＋to do sth句型）③First, I have to spend so much time on my homework that I hardly have time to memorize English words and phrases.（so…that…句型）10．例文Dear Jack,Long time no see. I miss you very much. I know that you will be an exchange student in our school. I feel so happy. I think you should know my school rules. Here let me tell you something about them. First, we must wear school uniforms in school. We aren’t allowed to wear other clothes. Second, we can’t use mobile phones in school. Because some students play games with them in class. Third, we can take foods to school. But we aren’t allowed to eat them in class. We can only eat them outside classroom after class. Finally, we can go to the library and read books in the evening. But we can’t talk with each other loudly. These are some of our school rules. I think our school rules are very strict. What do you think of them?Welcome to our school. See you!Yours, Li Hua【详解】[总体分析]① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③ 提示：写作要点已经给出，考生在写作时注意不要遗漏要点，注意适当增加细节来丰富要点。[写作步骤]第一步：开篇点题，介绍学校有一些校规；第二步：具体介绍学校的校规有哪些，如校服、手机使用、就餐地以及图书馆使用规则等；第三步：评价校规，书写结语。[亮点词汇]① school uniform 校服② play games 玩游戏③ go to the library 去图书馆[高分句型]① We aren’t allowed to wear other clothes.（be allowed to do sth. 被允许做某事）② I think our school rules are very strict.（省略that的宾语从句）