专题02 毕业感想-备战中考英语热点话题满分作文强化训练

专题02—毕业感想A（2022·湖北十堰·中考真题）假设你叫李华，即将从初中毕业。请你根据下面表格中的信息给校长写一封信，谈谈你对学校的一些看法。优点不足优秀的老师课外活动少友好的同学休息时间短美丽的校园……你的建议…… 提示词：schoolyard校园要求：1.短文应涵盖上述所有内容，可适当发挥。2.行文连贯，条理清楚，语句通顺，书写规范。3.不得在文中出现学校名称和人名。4.词数80-100，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总数。Dear Mr./Ms. Headmaster,I am writing to show my sincere gratitude to you for the progress I have made in the past three years. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Best wishes.Sincerely yours,Li Hua【答案】例文Dear Mr./Ms. Headmaster,I am writing to show my sincere gratitude to you for the progress I have made in the past three years. I am writing to tell you some things that have affected our school life.There are many advantages in our school. We have excellent teachers and friendly classmates. Our schoolyard is beautiful and big. But there are still some problems. First of all, we are faced with endless homework every day. Some students have to stay up very late to deal with it, which makes us have less rest time. Secondly, as we all know, colorful out-of-class activities are of great importance to our healthy growth, but we can hardly spare time to participate in them. In my opinion, we should have more free time to balance our study and life. We should have more colorful and meaningful activities. Best wishes.Sincerely yours,Li Hua【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。要求根据提示内容，写信给校长谈谈学校的优点与不足，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。2.写作指导：写作时要以第一和第三人称来行文，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为四段，首尾两端已给出；第二段介绍学校的优点与不足；第三段给出建议。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。B（2022·贵州黔东南·中考真题）每个人都有不同的生活习惯，养成良好的生活习惯能帮助我们拥有健康的体魄和美好的生活。临近毕业，校团委正在向九年级学生征文，请结合自身实际，以How to Develop Good Living Habits为题，从日常起居，卫生习惯，健康饮食，体育锻炼，交通安全等方面进行阐述，写一篇英语短文投稿。写作要求：1. 意思连贯，表达准确，书写规范，适当发挥；2. 文中不能出现任何真实的人名、校名及所在地等信息；3. 词数80左右，文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数。How to Develop Good Living HabitsEveryone has different living habits. Good habits can help us keep healthy and have beautiful lives. As teenagers, what should we do? In my opinion, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文How to Develop Good Living HabitsEveryone has different living habits. Good habits can help us keep healthy and have beautiful lives. As teenagers, what should we do?In my opinion, everyone should get up and go to bed on time every day. Don’t stay up too late. Everyone should wash hands before meals. Everyone should eat more vegetables and fruit. Don’t eat too much junk food. What’s more, everyone should do exercise. No littering and spitting. It is not allowed to play on the road. When crossing the road, everyone should obey the traffic rules. In a word, we must develop good living habits so as to keep healthy.【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。以“如何养成良好的生活习惯”为题写一篇短文。2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时，人称以第三人称为主。分为三段式：第一段开头已给出；第二段从日常起居，卫生习惯，健康饮食，体育锻炼，交通安全等方面进行阐述；最后一段总结概括。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。C（2022·浙江台州·中考真题）毕业之际，学校英文报将举行以“My dream job”为题的征文比赛。请你根据自己的理想，选择下表中一个职业或自行确定另一个职业写一篇英语短文，向校英文报投稿。内容要点参考词汇What do you want to be when you grow upa teachera scientistWhy do you want to be a(n)…?●be good at communicating●work with children●be interested in science●invent new productsHow are you going to do that?●get a good education●learn how to teach children●study science hard●do scientific researchWhere are you going to work?●…●…When are you going to start?●…●…注意：(1)文中必须包括所给的内容要点，可适当发挥，参考词汇仅供选择使用；(2)文中不能出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息；(3)词数80～100。My dream job________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：My dream jobWe all have dream jobs. As for me, I dream to be a scientist. I have always been interested in science. I want to invent new products to improve people’s life and I also hope to discover the mysteries of the world.To be a scientist, I need to take actions right now. First, I’m going to study science really hard. Second, I plan to do scientific research. And most importantly, I’ll read as many books as possible. If I become a scientist, I will live in Beijing where I can communicate with more experts. I believe my dream will come true if I work hard.【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。以“我梦想的工作”为题写一篇短文。2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时，人称以第一人称为主。分为两段式：第一段介绍自己梦想的工作是什么；第二段介绍自己如何让自己的梦想实现。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。D（2022·湖南湘潭·中考真题）亲爱的同学，恭喜你即将毕业。在过去的三年初中学习中，你的老师教导、关心、帮助过你。请你选择一位老师，表达你对他（她）的感激之情。内容包括：1.你对这位老师的印象；2.你感谢他（她）的原因；3.你对他（她）的祝福。注意：1.词数在80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；2.可适当举例或拓展；3.文中不能出现可能透露真实身份的任何信息（如校名，师生名字等）。It’s time for me to say goodbye to my junior school life. I’m here to say thanks to _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：It’s time for me to say goodbye to my junior school life. I’m here to say thanks to my English teacher Mr. Zhang. She is very kind and patient. She has helped me a lot in my studies since I came to this school. When I was in trouble, she used to encourage me and give me some good advice. At one time I failed to pass an English test and I was very sad about it. She came and cheered me up. She told me some good ways to improve my English. With her help, I have made great progress in English. I’m so thankful to her for her kind help that I will work harder and try to do better in the future. I hope she will become better and better.【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，本文开头已经给出，选择一位你想要感谢的老师，表达感激之情，根据提示要点进行写作，可以适当发挥。2.写作指导：本文主要用第一人称和第三人称来描述，时态以一般过去和一般现在时为主。本文可以采用一段式写作，要求描述对老师的印象，感谢的原因以及对老师的祝福。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。E（2022·福建厦门·二模）凤凰花开，毕业在即。你会怎样利用初中阶段剩余的时间呢？你计划做哪些有意义的事情呢？请以“Plans for the Rest of Junior High”为题，结合下图，选取至少两方面说说你的想法，投稿至厦门中学生助手微信公众号中。注意事项：1.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范，不少于80词； 2.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文                                                                                                                   Plans for the Rest of Junior HighHow time flies! Our junior high is coming to an end. How are you going to spend the last several days of junior high? Here are my plans.To start with, I’m going to put in more effort in order to get into my dream high school. For example, I plan to improve my English reading by reading more English passages. No pains, no gains. I believe as long as I try my best, everything is possible. Besides, I’m really thankful to my teachers who are always there for me whenever I need them. So I’m going to write some cards to say “thank you” to each of them for what they’ve done for me.         All in all, I will make the best use of the rest days of my junior high to make them the most valuable memories for me forever.【解析】【详解】1. 题干解读：题目要求以“Plans for the Rest of Junior High”为题，写一篇英语短文；要求根据图中信息，选取至少两方面说说你的想法。2. 写作指导：此作文时态以一般将来时为主；采用第一人称口吻；第一段：开门见山，引出话题；第二段：阐述自己的具体计划；第三段：总结全文。最后确保语句通顺，无单词语法错误。F（2022·山东菏泽·三模）高中生活即将开始，毕业之际，学校将举办一场高中生活规划分享会。假设你叫李华，你对于高中生活有什么规划呢？请根据以下提示，谈谈你在家、在学校将会怎么做。1. 努力学习，业余时间参加俱乐部……2. 对人有礼貌，与老师、同学融洽相处……3. 帮助他人，积极参加志愿者活动……4. 帮助父母做家务，如扫地、洗衣服……5. 保护环境，不乱扔垃圾……6. 锻炼身体，健康饮食……要求：1. 应包含所给要点，可适当发挥；2. 语言规范，语句通顺。3. 字数：100词左右，开头已经给出，不计入总词数。可能用到的词汇：senior middle school高中； volunteer 志愿者As a senior middle school student, I should try my best to be a better student. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文As a senior middle school student, I should try my best to be a better student. First, as a good student, I should learn to help others. I will have a good relationship with my classmates and friends and don’t quarrel with them. Second, I am supposed to help parents do housework at home, such as sweeping, taking out the trash and so on. Third, I should study hard at school and respect teachers. I should also get on well with classmates. Fourth, I should help people who need help and actively take part in volunteer activities. I will go to the nursing home to help the old or visit the sick children in the hospital, in fact, to help others is to help ourselves. Fifth, I should protect the environment and not litter. Sixth, exercise, eat healthy food, eat more vegetables and fruits, and eat less junk food. Finally, it’s not a good idea to depend on our parents and I should learn to be independent. Do you want to be a good child? Let’s get moving!【解析】【详解】1. 题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，根据所给提示，谈谈自己高中生活的规划。2. 写作指导：时态用一般现在时和一般将来时，人称用第一人称；题目已经给出要点提示，学生将其转换为英语即可，可在此基础上进一步发挥；注意语法的正确运用，可恰当使用一些连接词，使文章衔接自然，叙述流畅。G（2022·湖南·长沙县湘郡未来实验学校二模）2022毕业季如期而至。作为即将毕业的湘郡初三学子，年级组倡导大家 “携手爱校园，为母校献礼”。请写一篇短文，表达你对母校感激之情，介绍作为初三的同学，我们可以做些什么为母校献礼，并祝福母校越来越好！要求：1. 字迹工整，段落清晰，表达清楚，语法正确，行文连贯；2. 要点必须包括所有相关信息，并请适当发挥；3. 文中不能出现真实的姓名；4. 词数：80词左右。How time flies! ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文How time flies! As a student who is about to graduate, I’d like to do something special for our school.First, I will clean up the school with my classmates to make our school look more comfortable. What’s more, I will hold some lectures to give some useful learning methods to younger schoolmates in my spare time. Last but not least, I will call for more people to join us and everyone can play his or her part in these activities.I hope my school will get better and better.【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。围绕如何给母校献礼写一篇短文。2.写作指导：本文采用一般将来时，人称以第一人称为主。分为三段式：第一段引出主题；第二段介绍打算如何为母校献礼；最后一段表达对母校的祝福。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。H（2022·江苏·景山中学三模）初中三年我们在老师的辛勤教诲、家长的悉心照料、同学朋友的关心下收获很多，如今即将毕业，你很想感谢他们。你校英语报正在征集感恩为主题的文章，请以“The Person I’d Like to thank most”为题，结合具体事例写一篇英语作文。Who do you want to thank?Why do you want to thank him/her? What can you learn from him/her?注意事项：1.词数：100 词左右；2.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名等信息；3.文章必须包含所有要点，可适当发挥。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文The Person I’d Like to thank mostThe person I want to thank most is my mother. My mother plays an important role in my life. She not only brought me up, but also taught me many skills. My family background is average, but my mother does not hesitate to invest money in my life and study, and she is not willing to buy clothes and delicious food for herself. I want to do something for her at home and help her clean up. I want to cook her a meal personally on her birthday.【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“The Person I’d Like to thank most”为题，结合具体事例进行写作，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。2.写作指导：写作时要以第一和第三人称来行文，时态综合使用一般现在时和一般过去时。作文要分别介绍想感谢谁，为什么想要感谢他/她以及你能从他/她身上学到什么。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。I（2022·北京东城·二模）假如你是李华，你校的英语广播站计划做一期“毕业生感言”的专题节目，想邀请你参加。请你用英语写一篇发言稿，谈谈你毕业之际的感受，初中三年的进步，以及对学弟学妹们的建议。提示词语：sad, active, plan, try out, ask for提示问题：•How do you feel as a school-leaver?•What progress have you made?•What advice would you like to give to the students in Grade 7 and 8?Dear fellow students,I’m very happy to speak to you today. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Hope you all enjoy your time and make progress in middle school! 【答案】例文Dear fellow students, I’m very happy to speak to you today. As a school-leaver, I feel a little sad to leave our school and I’m very thankful to my teachers and classmates. With their help, I have become a more active learner in the past three years. At the start of middle school, I didn’t do my homework until my teachers reminded me. Then I followed their advice and learned to make study plans. Besides, I tried out different ways to improve my study. Now I do much better in all subjects. My advice for you is to make practical plans for your study and actively ask for help when necessary. Hope you all enjoy your time and make progress in middle school!【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，体裁为发言稿。写作时要按题目要求谈谈毕业之际的感受、初中三年的进步。最后，提出对学弟学妹们的建议。2.写作指导：本文应以第一人称来展开写作；时态主要采用一般现在时和一般过去时。写作时要正确运用不同的时态叙述自己的感受、进步并提出建议。在叙述内容时，力求语言准确，保证行文连贯、条理清晰。J（2022·福建宁德·三模）假设你是王明，你的笔友Lisa想了解在毕业之际，你将为母校做些什么有意义的事。从提示的五方面内容中，至少选择两方面的内容用英语给 Lisa 写一封电子邮件。提示：1. volunteer to do(clean up the school, ...) 2. give something away(such as books, ...) 3. give suggestions(organize more activities, ...) 4. make the school more beautiful(plant trees, ...)5. write to younger schoolmates(how to use time, ...)要求：1. 文中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息；2. 词数100左右；3. 短文开头供选择使用，不计入总词数。Dear Lisa, How is it going? It’s time for me to leave school. You ask me what I can do for my school.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,   Wang Ming【答案】例文Dear Lisa,How is it going? It’s time for me to leave school. You ask me what I can do for my school. Here are my plans that I would like to share with you. First of all, I will volunteer to do some cleaning with my classmates, such as cleaning the windows and sweeping the floors. To keep our school clean, we will ask our schoolmates not to litter at school. Also, I will give away my favourite books to the school library so that our younger schoolmates can read more good books. And I will call on more schoolmates to do so.It’s really hard for me to say goodbye. I wish my school to have a better future.Yours,Wang Ming【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：本文主要是根据题干中的提示内容讲述自己要为母校做一些什么有意义的事情，可适当增加细节。2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来展开内容，时态采用一般将来时为主；在写作时应承接短文开头；第二段具体展开将为母校做些什么有意义的事；第三段总结并给予希望。叙述具体所做事件的时候注意连词的使用；确保按照提示的内容进行展开，保证条理清晰。K（2022·内蒙古呼伦贝尔·模拟预测）假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Mike来信想了解你们学校每年在学生毕业前夕开展的各种毕业活动，请根据以下要点给他写一封回信，并询问他们学校的毕业活动。要点如下：1. 师生拍照留念   2. 举办毕业典礼       3. 植树     4. ......要求：1. 文章应包括所有要点并围绕要点适当发挥； 2. 文中不能出现真的人名、校名和地名等；3.       词数90左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇： graduation ceremony (毕业典礼)Dear Mike,    My middle school life is coming to an end._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Mike,My middle school life is coming to an end. There are always kinds of meaningful activities every year before students leave school.Usually the school-leavers take photos together with their teachers. All of them will treasure the photos which can help them remember their teachers and friends. Besides, a ceremony is held every year. It provides the students a chance to say goodbye to their school. After that, students may send presents to their friends and teachers. They can also get some presents, too. Finally, several students may be chosen to do something special for the school. For example, they can plant a tree in the school. All the students are glad to take part in these activities and also unwilling to say goodbye.Do you have activities like these in your school? I would be happy to know about them.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：本文是书信作文，要求以李华的身份，给笔友Mike介绍学生毕业前夕开展的各种毕业活动，并询问他们学校的毕业活动。该题目写作时要按信件格式写。2.写作指导：本文应该用第三人称来叙述信件内容；时态采用一般现在时为主；在写作时应承接短文开头；第二段详细叙述学校的各种活动以及活动背后的意义；第三段询问对方是否有相似经历，期待分享。描述学校开展的毕业活动时，要点需要全部写出，并将场景描写细致，保证逻辑清晰。L（2022·山东济南·三模）“芬芳毕业季，悠悠师生情”，你校九年级近期将举办一场毕业晚会，假定你是学生会主席李华，请写信邀请你校外教Smith前来参加，内容包括：1. 发出邀请；2. 时间：5月18日晚上7：00地点：学校大厅3. 具体活动安排（至少三项）注意：1. 词数100左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。参考词汇：学校大厅school hall 学生会主席 president of the student union Dear Smith,We are going to have a graduation party. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua【答案】例文Dear Smith, We are going to have a graduation party.I’m writing to invite you to our graduation party. The party will be at 7: 00 p.m. on May 18th in our school hall. We have made a full preparation for it. During the party, first we are going to share our sweet memories in the past three years with each other. Second, we are expected to talk about our dreams about the future. Then we will give thanks to teachers who have helped us a lot. We’ll also thank our classmates for our friendship. After that we’ll sing a song together and send presents. Last but not least, students and teachers will take photos together. We’re expecting your coming. Yours,Li Hua【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：本题为书信作文，要求根据要点提示写一封信，邀请外教Smith前来参加毕业晚会。2.写作指导：写作时人称应用第一人称，时态应用一般现在时或一般将来时。题目已提供基本要点提示，学生按照思路可自行发挥补充具体细节，文章应做到条理清晰、层次分明，书信结构符合标准。M（2022·贵州安顺·一模）转眼间毕业季又要到了，同时我们学校又会迎来一批初一新生。作为一个即将毕业的初三学生，对自己的初中生活有了很多的感悟。好习惯的养成对初中生来说是很重要的，请你以“Good Habits Make Me ____________ ”为主题给初一的新同学写一篇演讲稿。要求：1．短文须包含所有提示内容，语句通畅，语法正确，并适当发挥。2．文中不得出现真实的人名，校名和地名。3．词数：80-100个。（短文开头已给出，不计入总词数）_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：        Boys and girls, it is my great honor to talk with all you here. As the saying goes, the second half of a man’s life is made up of nothing but the habits he has acquired during the first half. There is no doubt that good habits can benifit us a lot throughout our lifetime.        Over the past three years, I have formed some good habits, which without doubt make me a better man. First is the habit of doing sports. I keep exercising for an hour every day no matter what the weather is like, which makes me healthy and relaxed and as a result, lays a solid foundation for my study. Another good habit which is deserved to be mentioned is never putting off what should be done today till tomorrow. I would make a plan for the whole day the night before, and cherish every minutes to finish all the tasks one by one. Thanks to this, I always achieve good results in my stdudy as well as my life. Last but not the least, I keep the habit of reading every day, which helps open my mind and make me relaxed at the same time. Because of these good habits, I makes progress all the way. And I believe they will keep benifiting me in the future.        So, boys and girls, in the coming three years or more, please develop some good habits and become a better you! 【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：本题目属于观点建议类文章，写作时要按照演讲稿格式写，应具有说服力、号召力。2.写作指导：写作前应先将演讲主题补充完整，然后进行构思。本文时通过自己的亲身体会，向初一新同学讲述养成好习惯的重要性。因此应以第一人称为主，时态采用一般过去和一般现在时相结合，讲述好习惯给自己带来的好处，并鼓励号召初一新同学培养好的习惯。