【查缺补漏】专题03 单元话题满分范文20篇（期末必考话题）七年级英语下学期期末复习（牛津译林版）

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牛津译林版七年级下学期期末复习 查缺补漏
(期末必考话题作文)
专题03 单元话题满分范文20篇

1.注意篇章结构，合理布局
开始部分说出文中的要点、核心问题。
正文部分围绕主题展开叙述、讨论。
结尾部分对全文内容进行总结和概括。
2.确定主题句
主题句是全文对概括，是文章的主旨。它能在文章中起到“画龙点睛”的作用。通常主旨句最好放在作文的开头，而后是对全文主题句所提出的内容进行解释、论述。
3.重要连接词
表示顺序增加
First, then / next, after that / next, finally
For one thing … for another…,
On (the) one hand…on the other hand,
Besides / what’s more / in addition / furthermore / moreover / another / also
表示时间顺序
now, at present, recently,
at first, in the beginning, to begin with,
later, next, finally,
form now on, from then on,
till, not…until, before, after, when, while, as during,
表示解释说明
now, in addition, for example, for instance, in this case, moreover
表示转折关系
but, however, while, though, or, otherwise, on the hand
表示并列关系
or, and, also, too, not only … but also, both… and, either …or, neither…nor
表示因果关系
because, because of, since, now that, as, thanks to…, due to…, therefore

1．根据所给提示以“My dream house”为题，写一篇短文。80词左右。要点如下：
1. 房子很大，是一个有花园和游泳池的三层房屋。花园里长满了花，很好看。
2. 底楼有一个大的厨房和餐厅，我可以邀请20多个朋友来吃饭。
3. 二楼有电脑房，和一个大客厅，可以和朋友在客厅聊天、看电视。
4. 我有自己的卧室，大又干净。
My dream house
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【答案】My dream house
My dream house is very big. It has three floors with a garden and a swimming pool. The garden is full of flowers and looks very beautiful.
On the ground floor，there is a big kitchen and a dining room. I can invite over twenty friends to have dinner. On the first floor，there is a computer room and a big living room. My friends and I can chat and watch TV in the living room. I have a bedroom of my own. It is big and clean.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇话题作文。以“My dream house”为题，写一篇短文。80词左右。时态主要为一般现在时。人称主要为第三人称。本文较简单，所给词汉语提示，就是本文的提纲要点，根据要点列出提纲，所写内容必须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范。尽量使用高分句型。要运用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有连贯性。根据提示要点，列出本文的写作提纲。写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无单词拼写、标点、语法错误（时态、主谓一致等）。本文提纲：
我梦想的房子
我梦想的房子很大。它是一个有花园和游泳池的三层房屋。花园里长满了花，很好看。
底楼有一个大的厨房和餐厅，我可以邀请20多个朋友来吃饭。二楼有电脑房，和一个大客厅，可以和朋友在客厅聊天、看电视。我有自己的卧室。它又大又干净。
【点睛】
书面表达要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。语言要规范，时态运用要正确，叙述清楚条里，学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用。注意书写的规范：大小写、标点符号等的正确运用。注意检查：单词拼写、语法、动词时态、语序、主谓一致等。写作六步法：1.审题：文体，时态，人称。2.抓住要点：要点是否齐全，适当补充。3.扩充句子：通过增加状语，定语，连词，使句子意思饱满充实。4.连句成文，合理使用连词。5.改正错误：拼写是否错误，语法时态是否正确，连词是否恰当等。6.誊写作文：注意书写工整美观整洁。
2．憨态可掬的熊猫是中国的国宝，人们都喜欢它们。请你根据表格中的信息写一篇英语短文，把这只熊猫介绍给你的好朋友。
要求：不少于60词。
Name
Xiaoxiao
Age
Six
Appearance (外表)
Black and white Two big eyes Gentle (温和的) and cute
Favorite food
Bamboo
Hobbies
Climb (爬) trees and swim

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【答案】参考例文
There is a zoo in our city. I often go there on weekends. There is a panda in the zoo. I like her very much, because she is kind of interesting. Her name is Xiaoxiao. She is six years old. She is black and white. She has two big eyes. She is very gentle and cute, so people all like her very much. Her favorite food is bamboo. She likes climbing trees and swimming in the water. Isn’t she interesting?
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据提示内容介绍熊猫Xiaoxiao，注意要点要齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时主要以第三人称来介绍，时态用一般现在时。要分别介绍熊猫的姓名、年龄、外表、最喜欢的食物和爱好。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
3．假设你所在的城市有一个大动物园，周末你常去那儿。那里有很多动物，如大象、 老虎、熊猫、狮子和长颈鹿。你认为这些动物不快乐，它们应该生活在森林中，应该享受自由。
参考词汇：in the cages在笼子里，in the forest在森林里。80词左右
Animals in the Zoo
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【答案】例文：
Animals in the Zoo
There is a big zoo in our city. It isn’t far from my home. On weekends, my father often takes me to the zoo. There I can see many kinds of animals like elephants, tigers, pandas, monkeys, lions and giraffes. They are from different places. Because some of them are dangerous, they have to live in the cages. I think they aren’t happy because they aren’t free. They should live in the forest.
【解析】
【详解】
1、题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，写作时应先介绍你所在的城市有一个大动物园，然后介绍动物园里的动物，最后介绍你对这些动物生活在动物园的看法，可适当发挥。
2、写作指导：本文应该以第一人称和第三人称来叙述内容；时态采用一般现在时为主；介绍动物园动物时，应详细具体，语句通顺，逻辑性强，保证条理清晰。
4．请根据下面提示写一篇英语短文，介绍一下北京动物园（Beijing Zoo)。
提示：
1．北京动物园在北京西城区（Xicheng District），每天7:30开馆；
2．园内大约有15,000只动物，有来自南非的狮子、澳大利亚的树袋熊、中国的大熊猫等；
3．每年大约有600万名游客到此参观。
要求：1．语句通顺，语意连贯，无语法错误；
2．60词左右。
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【答案】例文
Beijing Zoo is a very big zoo. It's in the Xicheng District. It is open at 7:30 every morning. The tickets sell at a good price. There are about 15,000 animals in the zoo. There are lions from South Africa, koalas from Australia, pandas from China and so on. They are very cute. Every year about 6,000,000 people visit the zoo. If you have time, please come and visit it.
【解析】
1.题干解读：根据提示内容，介绍一下北京动物园。介绍北京动物园的位置、开放时间、园内动物的种类以及数量、每年到此地参观的游客数量等。
2.写作指导：本文是对北京动物园的介绍，时态采用一般现在时；写作时，句型上可采用there be句型来写，写作中，注意名词单复数的运用、主语是否是第三人称单数等，使文章通顺、连贯、无语法错误。
5．根据下面提示内容写一篇短文，词数60~70。

内容要点：
1.狗是一种动物，也是一种宠物，大多数狗招人喜爱；
2.许多人养狗解闷，给狗喂食，还为狗建窝；
3.狗是人类的朋友，狗能在许多方面帮助你，狗能看家，夜里带狗出去，你不会感到孤独；
4.我们应该……
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【答案】例文：A dog is a kind of animal. It's also one of pets. Most of them are welcomed by people Many people keep the dogs for pleasure. They give food to the dogs every day and build the houses for them. Dogs are good friends of people. They can help people in many ways. They can look after the house. If you go out with a dog at night, you will feel less lonely. So we should be kind to then and take good care of them.

【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇材料作文，根据材料中的相关信息写一篇有关狗的文章。主要从1.狗是一种动物，也是一种宠物，大多数狗招人喜爱；2.许多人养狗解闷，给狗喂食，还为狗建窝；
3.狗是人类的朋友，狗能在许多方面帮助你，狗能看家，夜里带狗出去，你不会感到孤独；4.我们应该……。这几个方面去介绍。时态为一般现在时，人称为第三人称。注意作文中必须包含内容要点上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。
【高分句型一】
They give food to the dogs every day and build the houses for them. 他们每天给狗吃东西，为它们盖房子。本题是由and连接的并列句。
【高分句型二】
If you go out with a dog at night, you will feel less lonely. 如果你晚上和一条狗出去，你会觉得不那么孤独。
句子If you go out with a dog at night是由if引导的条件状语从句。
6．动物是人类的朋友。学校英语俱乐部将组织题为“My favourite animal”的征文比赛，请结合上文内容和下列提示，写一篇短文参赛。
1. What does it look like?
2. What’s its lifestyle?
3. Why do you love it?

注意事项：
(1) 词数：80词左右；
(2)文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
(3)文章必须包含所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺。My favourite animal
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【答案】参考范文：
My favourite animal
I have a lovely dog, and it’s my favorite animal. It’s a young dog. It’s black and white. I call it Nancy. It’s only one year old.
When I do my homework in my bedroom, it usually plays on my bed. It likes playing with me. We go to the park every evening. When I am lying on the grass, it will sit near me. It can help me do many things and make me smile. All my friends love my dog very much! What a lovely dog it is!
I love my dog and it loves me too!
【解析】
【分析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“My favourite animal”为题，结合提示问题进行写作，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一和第三人称来介绍，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为三段，第一段主要介绍动物的长相；第二段介绍它的生活方式；第三段介绍对它的喜欢它。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
7．重庆光明中学将举行表彰大会, 请根据表格所给信息推荐你班同学刘星参加"优秀学生"评选。
姓名
刘星
性格
善良, 友好, 乐于助人
爱好
阅读, 打篮球, 拉小提琴
学习情况
学习努力, 最喜欢英语, 每天花很多时间阅读英语
主要事迹
帮助一个迷路的小男孩回家

要求∶1. 字数80字左右, 开头和结尾已经给出, 不计入总词数。
2. 必须包含以上要点, 可以适当发挥。
3. 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
Dear Sir/Madam:
I want to recommend（推荐）Liu Xing for "Excellent Student".
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I hope you can choose（选择）Liu Xing. Thanks!
Yours sincerely,
Wang Tao
【答案】例文
Dear Sir/Madam:
I want to recommend Liu Xing for "Excellent Student". He is always friendly to others. Also, he is my best friend. He likes to help others. For example, last Monday a little boy lost his way, so he helped him find his way home. He likes reading, playing basketball and playing the violin. His favorite subject is English. He spends much time reading English every day, so he is good at English. He works very hard. I think he is excellent. We should learn from him. Do you think so?
I hope you can choose Liu Xing. Thanks!
Yours sincerely,
Wang Tao
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：该题目属于书信写作，写作时要按照书信格式来写。在写作时应承接短文开头；接下来要根据表格叙述刘星的基本信息：性格、爱好、学习情况、主要事迹等；最后一段表达自己的希望和谢意。
2.写作指导：本文主要采用第三人称来叙述；时态为一般现在时；叙述个人基本情况时应表达清楚详细，按照表格顺序逐条叙述；叙述过程中应注意各种语法的运用，使作文内容丰富、完整。
8．请根据所给信息，写一篇题为“My favourite sport—basketball”的短文，词数为80左右。
My favourite sport-basketball
Who likes
我
Why
激动人心的比赛
感到放松（relaxed）
喜欢NBA球星如乔丹
What benefit（好处）
有利于健康
使人兴奋
What to do
常常和朋友们在操场上打篮球
How to feel
一起打球时很开心
对我来说学会打篮球很容易
What to hope
大家都喜爱篮球

My favourite sport-basketball
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【答案】My favourite sport-basketball
My favourite sport is basketball because it is an exciting game. I feel relaxed after playing it. And I like NBA stars and the best basketball players, such as Michael Jordan. As everyone knows，playing basketball is not only good for our health, but also makes people excited. In my free time, I often play basketball with my friends on the playground. We have a good time when we play basketball together. I think it is easy for me to learn to play basketball. I hope everyone loves basketball.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如feel relaxed，NBA stars，such as，as everyone knows，not only…but also，be good for，make people excited，in my free time，on the playground，have a good time等。而固定句型I think it is easy for me to learn to play basketball.和My favourite sport is basketball because it is an exciting game./ As everyone knows，playing basketball is not only good for our health，but also makes people excited./ We have a good time when we play basketball together./ I hope everyone loves basketball.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。
【点睛】
书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。
9．下面是王冰的一次周日活动记录，根据所给的信息，请以第三人称He描写他的开心的事，字数80左右。
A happy day
When
Who
Where
What
How
今天
王冰和父母

去公园
/
然后
父母
在公园
在河边散步
看起来开心

王冰和孩子们
在公园
开始跑步
不久累了，但是开心
后来
王冰和孩子们
在公园
唱歌、聊天
/
最后
王冰和父母
在公园
带王冰吃晚饭
美餐一顿
A happy day
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【答案】It was a happy day this Sunday. Wang Bing went to the park with his parents. After they got to the park, they saw many people there. Wang Bing’s parents took a walk near the river. They looked very happy. Wang Bing began to run with children. They looked tired soon, but they had a good time. After that，they chatted and sang. Finally Wang Bing’s parents took him to have a delicious supper. Wang Bing enjoyed himself that day.
【解析】
【详解】
本文属于材料作文，描述王冰周日开心的事情。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。
亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如with, take a walk, begin to do, have a good time, enjoy oneself等，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。
【点睛】
写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：
认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。
构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。
初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。
修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。
10．根据下面的提示以"Amazing animals"为题写一篇短文。词数在80左右。
1.世界上最大的动物不是大象，是蓝鲸(blue whale) ;
2.世界上最大的动物在海洋里，但不是鱼;
3.它们很久以前就生活在地球上;
3.它们通常有30米长，重1000千克。
4.它们是世界上最聪明的动物之一，它们可以相互交谈。当然，我们是听不懂的。
Amazing animals




【答案】One possible version
Amazing animals
     Elephants are not the biggest animals in the world. The world's biggest animals are in the sea-but not fish. They lived on the earth a long time ago.   They're usually 30 metres long and 1，000 kilos heavy. They're one of the cleverest animals in the world.   They can talk to each other, but people don't know what they are saying. What are they? They're called blue whales.
【解析】
【详解】
本文叙述了世界上最大的动物是蓝鲸，所以句子的主语应该用第三人称，叙述蓝鲸现在的情况用一般现在时，叙述它们过去住在陆地上应该用一般过去时。短文用了一些短语和句式，如：one of the cleverest animals in the world世界上最聪明的动物之一；talk to sb给某人交谈；用了what引导的宾语从句，增加了文章的亮点。
11．假设你是李雷，今天早上，你们班去参观了神奇博物馆(Amazing Museum)。回来后，你写了一篇文章记叙这次神奇之旅。旅游经过及感受如下：
1. 早上8点，在校门口集合，乘公共汽车前往神奇博物馆。
2. 在神奇博物馆，你了解了很多神奇的事情，知道了谁发明了电视，了解了三明治的历史。导游向你们介绍了一些神奇的动物，如：金鱼记事情只有三秒钟，大象靠脚趾走路。
3. 你们玩得非常快乐。你感觉这个世界真是太神奇了。
要求：
1. 注意人称和时态。
2. 不要逐字翻译，词数80左右。
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】One possible version:
We went to Amazing Museum by bus at eight this morning. We met at the school gate.
In the Amazing Museum, we learned about many amazing things. We knew who invented TV. We also learned about the history of sandwich. The guide introduced some amazing things to us. For example, the goldfish can only remember things in three seconds. Elephants walks on tiptoe.
We had a good time in it. I think the world is full of amazing things.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，要求根据题目所给旅游经过和感受，写一篇短文。保证内容完整，条理清晰，不要逐字翻译。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称为主；时态采用一般过去时为主，在写作时第一段描述出发的时间地点以及目的地；第二段描写旅游经过；第三段描述自己的感受。
12．假如你是Daniel，学校开展以“My hometown“为题的征文活动。请根据下面表格内的提示，用英语完成一篇短文。
家乡
1．城镇；2．位于苏州南部；3．距离市中心30公里
环境设施及活动
1．空气清新；
2．有公园，可以散步；
3．有购物中心，喜欢购物；
4．…（自拟）
感受
…（自拟）

要求：
1．词数90词左右。短文开头、结尾已经写好，不计入总词数；
2．短文须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；
3．文中不得提及真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。My hometown
I live in a small town. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope you can come and visit one day.
【答案】例文：
My hometown
I live in a small town. It is in the south of Suzhou. It is 30 kilometres away from the centre of Suzhou.
It is beautiful and the air is fresh here. You can see many trees and flowers in the town. There is a beautiful park in the town centre. Local people often go to the park. They like jogging in the park in the morning or after supper. Children like flying kites in it, too. And there's a big shopping mall. There are lots of nice shops in it. Most things are not expensive. There are many people shopping there at weekends. Also we have a modern cinema in the town. Sometimes we go there to see films when we're free.
We enjoy our life here. It is a wonderful place to live. I hope you can come and visit one day.
【解析】
【分析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，要求以“我的家乡”为题，按照表格中内容介绍自己的家乡，要点包括：位置、环境设施及活动、感受。
2.写作指导：本文应以一般现在时、第三人称为主，注意主谓一致问题；写作时按照要点分段叙述，第一段介绍家乡位置；第二段介绍家乡的环境设施；第三段介绍个人感受。
13．杰克所在的Helping Hands Club要颁发最乐于助人奖 (Most Helpful Student Award)，他想推荐他们班的Andy竞争这个奖。请以杰克的名义给俱乐部主席写一封70词左右的推荐信。推荐信中必须包括下列要点：
a. 常帮助同学们学习；
b. 周末帮助照顾邻居的孩子；
c. 暑假教社区里的老人使用电脑。
A letter of recommendation
Dear Sir or Madam,
I would like to recommend my classmate Andy for this year's Most Helpful Student Award.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
If Andy gets the award, we will be very happy.
Yours faithfully,
Jack
【答案】A letter of recommendation
Dear Sir or Madam,
I would like to recommend my classmate Andy for this year's Most Helpful Student Award.
Andy is helpful. He often helps our classmates with their lessons. At weekends, he helps his neighbours look after their children. And in the summer holidays, he often teaches the old people in his neighbourhood how to use
computers. The old people there like him very much.
If Andy gets the award, we will be very happy.
Yours faithfully,
Jack
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇关于杰克所在的Helping Hands Club要颁发最乐于助人奖 (Most Helpful Student Award)，他想推荐他们班的Andy竞争这个奖。请以杰克的名义给俱乐部主席写一封70词左右的推荐信。动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料可知本文主要是应用第三人称，一般现在时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
重点短语：help sb with sth帮助某人做某事，at weekends在周末，look after照顾。
三、书信作文
14．假如你是李明，你所在社区的“爱心俱乐部”（Helping Hands Club）将吸收新的志愿者。你想加入该俱乐部，根据下面表格中的内容，用英语写一封自荐信。
姓名
李明
性别
男
班级
七年级3班
本人情况
14岁；住在南通市中心的一所公寓里；健康良好；学习努力；乐于助人；
“爱心”表现
1. 给希望工程筹钱， 给贫困儿童收集衣物和课本。
2. 喜欢帮助邻里检查电脑，帮助老人购物。
加入目的
1.加入俱乐后能帮助更多的人解决问题，能和更多的人交朋友
2. ……
要求：1. 所写内容必须包括提供的所有信息，并适当发挥；2. 文章90词左右，开头、结尾己给出，不计入总词数；
3. 语意通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
4. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。
Dear chairperson,
I’m a boy student from Class 3, Grade 7. I’d like to be a volunteer of he Helping Hands Club._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I’ll be happy if I’m accepted. I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours
Li Ming
【答案】参考例文：
Dear chairperson,
I’m a boy student from Class 3, Grade 7. I’d like to be a volunteer of the Helping Hands Club.
I'm 14 years old. I'm strong and healthy. I live in an apartment in the center of Nantong. I work hard at all my lessons and I’m good at them. I like computer studies best. I'm kind to my classmates. So they all like me very much. I'm also always ready to help others. I often raise money for the Project Hope and collect clothes and textbooks for poor children. I like to help neighbors check the computer and help the old people shopping. I can make more friends after I join the club. I can also learn different skills from the other volunteers in the club. Then I can do more for others and help more people solve more problems.
I’ll be happy if I’m accepted. I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Ming
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：这是一 篇书信作文。要求根据表格所给内容写一封自荐信，申请加入所在社区的“爱心俱乐部”。注意写作时要包含所有要点，同时也可进行合理而又紧扣主题的发挥。
2.写作指导：本文主要使用第一人称，时态以一般现在时为主。文章开头和结尾已给出，写作时，注意承接上文；中间部分要包含李明的基本情况、平时的爱心表现和加入的目的；写作时，可以运用一些短语和常用句型为文章增添色彩；注意单词书写的准确度，语法运用的准确度，上下文注意连接的流畅度，以及逻辑合理。
15．你的远方朋友Kathy想从北京到你所在的海滨城市玩几天。
请根据以下要点给她写一封信，告诉她怎样到你家等内容。
1.出火车站乘9路公交车至迎宾路社区；
2.你家在社区中心，即在公交站后边；
3.你家离大海不远，可以每天步行去那儿。
注意：
1.可以适当增加细节；
2.词数：80词左右，短文开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Kathy，
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Sue
【答案】例文Dear Kathy
Welcome to my hometown! Now I am happy to tell you the way to my house. After you come out of the train station，you can take the Number 9 bus to Yingbin Road Community. My home is in the centre of the community. It’s behind the bus stop. You can't miss it. By the way, my home is not far from the sea. So we can walk there every day. The sea is very beautiful. I think you will have a great time here.
Yours，
Sue
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇给材料作文，写信告诉Kathy怎样到我家。
【详解】
结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：Now I am happy to…，My home is…，I think…等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
【点睛】
本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头欢迎Kathy来我的家乡，接下来介绍怎样到我家，最后祝愿她在这里玩得高兴。此处the way to, come out of, in the centre of, by the way, have a great time等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。
16．本周日是你的15岁生日，你想邀请你的同学们来参加你的生日聚会。请你写一封80个词左右的邀请信，信中必须说明到达你家的路线。要点如下：
1.时间：本周日中午12：00开始。地点：你家。
内容：聚餐、唱歌、跳舞等各类活动。
2.路线：走出校门，向右拐，一直往前走，在第三个路口向左转。经过中国银行并穿过人民路，在路的左边有一幢高楼，你家就在504室。
Dear friends,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Jim
【答案】Dear friends，
This Sunday is my 15th birthday. Could you come to my party? I plan to have the party at home. It will begin at 12 o’clock this Sunday noon. We can have dinner, sing and dance. Of course, you can do many other things.
Now, let me tell you the way to my home.
First, go out of the school. Then turn right and go along the street all the time. When you see the third turning, turn left. Walk past Bank of China, and go along Renming Street. There is a high building on the left side of the street. My home is Room 504.
Yours
Jim
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇书信作文，根据材料中的相关信息写一封邀请信。所提供的材料中列举了到达你家的路线。主要从1. 时间：本周日中午12：00开始。地点：你家。内容：聚餐、唱歌、跳舞等各类活动。 2. 路线：走出校门，向右拐，一直往前走，在第三个路口向左转。经过中国银行并穿过人民路，在路的左边有一幢高楼，你家就在504室。这几个方面去介绍。时态为一般现在时，人称为第一人称。注意作文中必须包含材料上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。
【高分句型一】
When you see the third turning, turn left. 当你看到第三个转弯处时，向左转。
句子When you see the third turning是由when引导的时间状语从句。
【高分句型二】
There is a high building on the left side of the street. 这条街左边有一座高楼。
该句话用there be结构来写的。
17．假如你是王强，你在上海学习的英国笔友Ryan要去你家乡南京游玩。现在你想要写一封邀请信，邀请他来参观游玩。邀请信需包含如下内容：
1. What is your home town like?
2. What is in your community?
3. What do your neighbours do to help?
4. What can you do together at your home?
5. How can Ryan get to your home?
注意：
1. 词数60左右（短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 参考要点，可进行补充和拓展；
3. 文中不得透露校名、姓名等信息。
Dear Ryan,
I am writing to invite you to visit my hometown Nanjing.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Hope to see you soon in Nanjing.
All the best!
Yours,
Wang Qiang
【答案】例文：
Dear Ryan,
I am writing to invite you to visit my hometown Nanjing. Nanjing is a modern city with a long history. There are a lot of places of interest around it.
I live in a flat in the centre of Nanjing. There are many shopping malls and restaurants around my community. My neighbours are very nice and helpful. They often help us with my homework. When you come, you can live in my flat. I have lots of CDs in my study. We can enjoy listening to music together? And I can teach you Chinese in my home, too.
You can take a taxi or the underground at the airport and get off at Xinjiekou. I will pick you up at Exit 4 there.
Hope to see you soon in Nanjing.
All the best!
Yours,
Wang Qiang
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：要求以王强的身份给在上海学习的英国笔友Ryan写一封邀请信，邀请他来南京参观游玩。邀请信需要包含所列出五条内容，文中不得透露校名、姓名等信息。
2.写作指导：本文是一篇邀请信，大部分是对事实的介绍，时态上主要以一般现在时为主。写作时要包含所列举的五条内容，可先对南京进行简单介绍，接着写你所住的位置、你的邻居以及你和Ryan可以在家做什么等，最后写Ryan怎么到达你家。为保持文章连贯，可对内容补充和拓展。
四、日记
18．假如你叫张华，今天是星期六，你和同学们一起去森林公园郊游，在那里度过了快乐的时光。请根据提示内容，用英语写一篇日记，70词左右。
要点：
1.天气；
2.目的地；
3.出行方式；
4.活动包括野餐、放风筝、爬山等；
5.自己的感受。
Saturday
I had a good time today.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】One possible version:
Saturday
I had a good time today. It was fine, and I got to school very early. My classmates and I took a special bus to Forest Park at 8:30. When we got there, we were very excited. The mountain was so beautiful. We could see flowers and grass here and there. The air was so fresh. The birds were singing happily. We flew kites and climbed the mountain there. At noon, we had a picnic together. Everyone took out delicious food and drinks to share. Then we danced and sang for a long time. Certainly we also took many pictures together. We all enjoyed the nature and felt very happy.
【解析】
【分析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇日记。要求根据提示内容，介绍自己星期六的活动。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来行文，时态用一般过去时。日记要分别介绍天气、目的地、出行方式、活动以及感受。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
五、讲稿
19．假如你们班将要举行一个关于“乐于助人”的主题班会，大家都要在班会上发言，并推荐自己心目中“最乐于助人”的同学。你准备推荐Wendy。请你根据下面的要点提示，用英语写一篇短文，以此作为自己在班会上的发言稿。
提示：1. at home, do housework;
2. at school, help others with their lessons;
3. in the park, keep it clean;
4. last weekend, visited the home for the elderly...
要求：
1. 发言稿须包括上述所有要点，可适当发挥；
2. 语言流畅，书写工整；
3. 80词左右，发言稿的开头与结尾已经给出，但不计入要求词数。
Dear friends,
Helping others is a great thing. I’d like to recommend Wendy for the award.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thanks for listening! And please vote for her!
【答案】例文：
Dear friends,
Helping others is a great thing. I’d like to recommend Wendy for the award.
Wendy is always helpful to others. When she is at home, she always helps her parents do a lot of housework. And when she is at school, she often helps others with their lessons. And at weekends, she often goes to the park to do some cleaning. Last weekend, she visited the home for the elderly. She did a lot of things for them. She says she likes to chat with the elderly and it can make them happy.
Thanks for listening! And please vote for her!
【解析】
【分析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：本篇写作要求写一篇发言稿，要求我们推荐自己心目中“最乐于助人”的同学——Wendy。并根据要点提示，用英语写一篇短文。
2.写作指导：写作时应当以第一人称和第三人称为主；时态用一般现在时和一般过去时为主；文章开篇说明写作目的，然后陈述推荐对象的基本信息、个性品质和优秀事迹；最后表达期待推荐成功地愿望。
六、通知
20．假设你所生活的小区将在这周末举行一个互帮互助的活动，为社区居民提供一些便民服务。请你根据所学内容并适当发挥想象，帮助社区中心写一篇80词的英语书面通知。通知的开头和结尾已给出，但不计入要求词数。
Notice
We are going to have an activity called “Helping each other” at the community centre this Saturday afternoon.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Everyone is welcome!
Community Centre
January 21, 2016
【答案】One possible version:
Notice
We are going to have an activity called “Helping each other” at the community centre this Saturday afternoon.
Some volunteers will come here and help us with some problems. Mr. Zhang and Mr. Wang are good engineers. If there is something wrong with your broken TV sets, computers or fridges, you can ask them for help. Miss Yang, a good English teacher, will give children a talk on how to study English well.
There are also some doctors from the community hospital. They will help us with our health problems.
It will begin at 9:00 a.m.
Everyone is welcome!
Community Centre
January 21, 2016
【解析】
【分析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一则通知。要求结合给出的开头和结尾，根据提示内容进行写作，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一和第三人称来行文，时态以一般将来时为主。作文要分别介绍活动的时间、内容和志愿者会分别来帮忙做什么。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。