2023届高考英语二轮复习读后续写课件

这是一份2023届高考英语二轮复习读后续写课件，共34页。PPT课件主要包含了content，高考真题，解题技巧详解，高级词汇句式，Part 01，考查要点，考查能力，评分原则，失误总结，Part 02等内容，欢迎下载使用。

首先,要把握故事的写作意图和目的以及作者对人物、事件的情感和态度;其次,对故事情节的起承转合要了然于胸;再次,对整个语篇的行文结构和写作手段要心中有数;最后,熟悉作者为了突出写作主题和意图而采用的写作手法。这一切都是考生对故事的发展和结局进行合理想象并进行读后续写的前提。
首先,考生要围绕写作主题,遵循作者的情感态度和故事情节,对故事的发展和结局进行合理想象,对故事情节进行合理设置;然后,使用准确的词汇和语法结构以及合理的语篇结构进行叙事表意。
3.创新思维表达能力。
该题型要求考生在理解阅读材料的同时,在原文脉络和语言特点的框架内对故事的发展和结局进行联想、创新表达,使续写内容与原文浑然一体,使故事虽有起伏,但最终有一个合理的结局。
1.词数适当(词数少于130的,从总分中减去2分);2.与短文和所给段落开头语的衔接程度;3.内容的丰富性(浙江卷读后续写还应注意对所标出的关键词语的使用情况); 4.所用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性;5.上下文的连贯性;6.拼写、标点符号的准确性;7.字迹工整,卷面整洁。
1.续写的故事缺乏想象力,叙述单一,内容简单,词数远远少于150。甚至有些续写内容仅仅是原文内容的简单重复,故事没有波澜、缺乏新意。2.有些考生在续写时走向了另一个极端,想象力非常丰富,但情节荒诞离奇,不符合文化常识和行文逻辑。3.续写第一段中的情节与第二段的首句没有衔接或产生断裂,导致故事情节"卡壳"。4.单词拼写错误和时态错误较多。这两方面的失误是低级错误,是写作的"硬伤",容易使阅卷者因反感而直接降档。
1.精读文章,确定文章线索。
每个作者都有自己独特的写作思路,考生可通过精读文章找到该篇文章的写作线索,比如文章是以时间为线索还是以空间为线索来写的,这样有利于考生"顺藤摸瓜"。
2.仔细审题,明确续写要求。
要注意短文续写的具体要求,如词数限制、有无标有下划线的关键词语的使用要求和续写段落的首句提示语,从而做到"心中有数"。
3.回读原文,揣摩续写思路。
根据写作要求,快速回读短文,顺着原文作者的思路,结合续写段落给出的提示语,充分发挥想象,构思完整的故事情节,确定续写段落的思路;若短文中含有带下划线的关键词语,还要结合这些关键词语,最终确定续写段落的内容。
4.拟写草稿,修改错词病句。
在确定了写作思路之后,最关键的就是结合原文内容和提示语拟写草稿。拟写时,注意句子结构的多样性、语言的丰富性,并通过正确使用句与句之间的连接词,使所写内容结构紧凑、行文流畅连贯。
5.检查续写内容,誊写文字。
打好草稿后,考生要通读自己所续写的内容,检查续写的内容是否符合逻辑,与原文和续写段落给出的提示语是否连贯,全文的故事情节是否完整。涉及关键词语的要标注出来,并确认数量是否达到要求。还要检查词数是否达标、标点符号的使用和字母大小写是否正确等。最后在誊写文字时,务必做到字迹工整、卷面整洁。
构织画面,合理自然收尾
1.建议考生根据原文语境构织故事发展的画面,即事件的起因、经过等。2.续写情节一般为故事的高潮或延续,可根据所续写两段的提示语判断第一段发生了什么曲折事件;再依据上下文逻辑和生活常识找到续写第二段的线索,且第二段一般是故事的结局,即第一段出现问题,第二段解决问题。3.续写的内容要积极、健康向上,把人和事物美好的一面展示出来;在第二段结尾处要有恰当的情感、态度的表达,从而使故事的主题得到升华。4.针对标有下划线关键词语的题目,构织有关关键词语的画面,与两段的提示语进行匹配,创设联系,然后判断哪些是属于问题段(第一段)中的词汇,哪些是解决问题段(第二段)中的词汇。
善用词句,丰富细节描写
描写包括对人物的动作、语言、心理、外貌、性格的描写,以及对环境和场景的描写。它作为记叙文的一种辅助的表达方式,对增强文章的表现力有重要的作用。它要求考生善于捕捉、刻画细节,有时还可以用比喻、拟人、夸张等修辞手法。一篇好的作文往往会因为细节描写而出彩。同样,议论、抒情的表达方式对记叙文主题的展现也有重要的作用。考生要在平时多注意积累各种情绪类、动作类、环境类等细节描写的词语和表达,还要多练习高级句式和语法结构,提升语言的生动性和丰富性。对于细节描写的一些必备素材详见高
前后呼应,展现语篇连贯
考生在续写时,要注意文章前后呼应、衔接自然、意义连贯。内容连贯:续写部分要紧扣所给文本故事大意,与写作意图保持高度一致。语句连贯:在写作时要关注段落内部句与句之间的衔接,续写内容与段落首句之间的衔接、两个续写段落之间的衔接以及续写段落与所给文本之间的前后呼应。语言风格连贯:续写部分的语言风格要与所给文本的语言风格保持一致。结构连贯:续写完成后要使整篇文章前后呼应、逻辑通顺、结构完整。
　　It was summer, and my dad wanted t treat me t a vacatin like never befre. He decided t take me n a trip t the Wild West.　　We tk a plane t Albuquerque, a big city in the state f New Mexic. We reached Albuquerque in the late afternn. Uncle Paul, my dad's friend, picked us up frm the airprt and drve us up t his farm in Pecs.  His wife Tina cked us a delicius dinner and we gt t knw his sns Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spent the night in the guestrm f the farm huse listening t the frgs and water rlling dwn the river nearby. Very early in the mrning, Uncle Paul wke us up t have breakfast. "The day starts at dawn n my farm," he said. After breakfast, I went t help Aunt Tina feed the chickens, while my dad went with Uncle Paul t take the sheep ut t graze (吃草). I was impressed t see my dad and Uncle Paul riding hrses. They lked really cl.
In the afternn, I asked Uncle Paul if I culd take a hrse ride, and he said yes, as lng as my dad went with me. I wasn't ging t take a hrse ride by myself anyway. S, my dad and I put n ur new cwby hats, gt n ur hrses, and headed slwly twards the muntains. "Dn't be late fr supper," Uncle Paul cried, "and keep t the track s that yu dn't get lst!" "OK!" my dad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and his farm huse were ut f sight. It was s peaceful and quiet and the clrs f the brwn rcks, the deep green pine trees, and the late afternn sun mixed t create a magic scene. It lked like a beautiful wven (编织的) blanket spread ut upn the grund just fr us.Paragraph 1:Suddenly a little rabbit jumped ut in frnt f my hrse.   Paragraph 2:We had n idea where we were and it was getting dark.
续写第一段开头语"Suddenly a little rabbit jumped ut in frnt f my hrse"是故事发展的转折点,可以从兔子出现后发生的事情入手进行扩展,可以写马因受到惊吓而狂奔,也可以写作者和父亲因追赶兔子而迷路,还可以写见到兔子后人物的反应,无论从哪个角度去拓展,都要注意与续写第二段开头语的呼应。续写第二段开头语"We had n idea where we were and it was getting dark"呼应前文Uncle Paul的嘱托——不要误了吃晚饭、不要迷路,可以从如何寻路返回入手续写短文。前文提示农场附近有河流,并且"river"为标有下划线的关键词语,所以可以从沿着河流回到农场这一角度进行拓展。
Paragraph 1: Suddenly a little rabbit jumped ut in frnt f my hrse. It was s cute that Dad and I decided t chase it. After a while, we gt lst in the frest. There was nthing in sight but the trees. "We may nt be able t g back t the farm huse in time fr supper," I thught t myself. After a series f fruitless attempts t find the way ut, we felt hungry and tired. Paragraph 2: We had n idea where we were and it was getting dark. We gt stuck in the frest. And an unexpected shwer added t the difficulty f finding ur way, because we culdn't see the track in the rain. I was n the edge f despair when my father said, "Dn't wrry, my by. I remember there is a river near the farm huse. Find the river and we will be back there." Finally, we fund the river and gt back.
◆ 表示"开心、快乐、兴奋、激动"
1.宽慰地笑了smile with relief2.突然大笑起来burst int laughter3.某人嘴角挂着微笑with a smile n ne's lips 4.难以形容的开心a feeling f indescribable jy5.嫣然一笑/淡淡一笑smile sweetly/faintly6.使某人心情大好brighten ne's md 7.精神高涨be in high spirits 8.心情很好 in a gd md9.欣喜若狂be ver the mn/be wild with jy10.既兴奋又开心a mixture f excitement and happiness11.一想到……就欣喜若狂g wild with jy at the thught f12.Her face was shining with jy.她的脸上洋溢着喜悦。13.She wre a big smile n her face.她脸上带着灿烂的笑容。14.The by's heart was verflwing with jy.这个男孩满心欢喜。15.Her vice trembled with excitement. 她激动得声音颤抖。
◆ 表示"难过、伤心、沮丧"
1.强烈的失落感a strng sense f lss2.陷入绝望fall int despair 3.快要哭了clse t tears4.某人泪流满面with tears streaming dwn ne's face5.情绪低落in lw spirits 6.强忍住泪水fight back tears7.令某人失望的是t ne's disappintment8.感到失望和沮丧feel disappinted and frustrated9.擦去某人脸上的泪水wipe tears frm ne's face10.Tears rll dwn his face.眼泪沿着他的面颊流下来。11.Tears well up in his eyes.他热泪盈眶。12.Her eyes were filled with tears. 她眼里噙满了泪水。13.She wre a big smile n her face.她脸上带着灿烂的笑容。14.The by's heart was verflwing with jy.这个男孩满心欢喜。15.Her vice trembled with excitement. 她激动得声音颤抖。
1.强烈的失落感a strng sense f lss2.陷入绝望fall int despair 3.快要哭了clse t tears4.某人泪流满面with tears streaming dwn ne's face 5.情绪低落in lw spirits 6.强忍住泪水fight back tears7.令某人失望的是t ne's disappintment8.感到失望和沮丧feel disappinted and frustrated9.擦去某人脸上的泪水wipe tears frm ne's face10.Tears rll dwn his face.眼泪沿着他的面颊流下来。11.Tears well up in his eyes.他热泪盈眶。12.Her eyes were filled with tears. 她眼里噙满了泪水。13.She sbbed with her face buried in her hands.她掩面啜泣。14.She lked pale and upset. 她看起来脸色苍白,一脸苦恼。15.She's been very depressed and upset abut the whle situatin. 整个境况使她感到非常沮丧,心烦意乱。
◆ 表示"焦虑、愤怒、恐惧"1.怒视某人glare at sb. 2.惊恐地in panic/terrr3.满腔怒火be filled with anger 4.恐惧的感觉a feeling f fear 5.忧虑的目光/面容/表情an anxius lk/face/expressin 6.His anger biled ver.他的愤怒爆发了。7.He culd hardly/scarcely cntain his rage.他几乎控制不住怒火。8.His vice trembled with anger.他的声音因愤怒而颤抖。9.She felt her stmach knt with fear.她感到害怕,心都揪紧了。10.When I saw a snake,I felt s scared that my thrat tightened and my knees felt weak.当我看到一条蛇时,我感到非常害怕,以至于我的喉咙发紧,膝盖发软。11.When a tiger was appraching me, I frze with terrr,t scared t mve an inch.当一只老虎向我逼近时,我吓得呆住了,一动也不敢动。
1.抬头/点头/低头/摇头raise/nd/lwer/shake ne's head2.转过头去turn ne's head 3.抬起头来hld ne's head high4.羞愧地低着头hang ne's head in shame5.头部受伤suffer head injuries
1.紧紧拥抱hug tightly 2.挥舞手臂wave ne's arm3.举手raise ne's hand 4.把某人抱在怀里hld sb. in ne's arms5.伸出双臂搂着某人 put ne's arms arund gave her an encuraging pat n the shulder. 他轻拍她肩膀以示鼓励。7.She leapt ut f the back seat, and gave him a hug. 她从后座上跳了出来,给了他一个拥抱。
1.挣扎着起床struggle t get ut f the bed2.溜进slip int/steal int3.摇摇晃晃地站起身来stagger t ne's feet4.前往head fr/twards 5.冲进rush int6.漫无目的地在大街上走着walk n the street aimlessly7.I dragged myself ut f bed and walked int the bathrm. 我吃力地从床上爬起来走进浴室。8.He sprang t his feet and rushed after her. 他立刻站起来,冲过去追她。
1.专心地听listen attentively 2.扫视glance at3.直视某人的眼睛lk sb. straight in the eye4.严肃地说speak in a serius vice 5.好奇地问ask with curisity 6.自言自语talk t neself7.陷入沉思be lst in/absrbed in/buried in thught8.She began t hear her wn nervus breathing.她开始听到自己紧张的呼吸声。9.He was aware f the wind in his face.他感到风在脸上吹拂。10.She wke t feel a searing pain in her feet. 她醒来后感到脚上一阵灼热之痛。11.I can smell smething burning in the kitchen.我闻到厨房有东西烧焦了。
1.雨季the rainy seasn 2.放晴clear up3.暴风雨之夜a strmy night 4.一阵清新的微风a fresh breeze5.难以忍受的热unbearable heat 6.乌云密布be full f dark cluds 7.狂风暴雨fierce/heavy/vilent strms8.下倾盆大雨be raining cats and dgs 9.正在融化的冰melting ice10.The sun is shining brightly in the sky.太阳在天空中明亮地照耀着。11.It was freezing cld. Even wrse, they lst their way. 天气极冷。更糟糕的是,他们还迷路了。
1.山间小路a muntain track2.挡住某人的路blck ne's way3.茂密的森林a dense frest 4.崎岖不平、多石的土地rugh, stny grund5.The hills are bathed in the sunlight. 群山沐浴在阳光下。6.The water glitters in the sunlight. 水面在阳光下闪闪发光。7.The smell f the sea called up memries f her childhd. 大海的气息勾起了她对童年的回忆。
1.繁忙的街道busy streets 2.不断聚集的人群gathering crwds 3.人来人往many peple cming and ging4.繁忙拥挤的城市busy and crwded cities5.昏暗的路灯灯光下in the dim light f streetlamps6.The streets were nisy and full f activity. 街上熙熙攘攘,车水马龙。7.Heavy traffic blcked the rad. 拥挤的车辆阻塞了道路。
1.双下巴a duble chin 2.粗糙的双手rugh hands 3.脸色苍白a pale face 4.中年男子a middle-aged man5.留着齐肩发wear shulder-length hair6.饱经风霜的脸a weather-beaten face7.一个衣衫褴褛的姑娘a girl in rags8.She is charming when she smiles.她笑起来的时候很迷人。9.He had beautiful blue eyes I had never seen. 他有一双我从未见过的漂亮的蓝眼睛。10.My uncle is f average/medium height with a pair f thick glasses.我叔叔中等身高,戴一副厚眼镜。11.He is abut 1.75 meters in height and has brad shulders.他身高大约一米七五,肩膀宽阔。12.She is tall and slim with waist-length hair.她又高又苗条,长发齐腰。