2023届新高考英语读后续写特训八步创意模板法学案

这是一份2023届新高考英语读后续写特训八步创意模板法学案，共13页。
Part2:高考真题实战演练 PAGEREF _Tc4409 \h 5
实战演练1：读后续写浙江卷（2016年真题） PAGEREF _Tc3521 \h 5
实战演练2：读后续写浙江卷（2018年6真题） PAGEREF _Tc26206 \h 8
Part1:八步法详解
（1）情绪：消极情绪
（2）细节：进一步解释描写
（3）转折：个人的努力或借助外界
（4）转机：事情似乎有了转机，并抱有希望，感到欣慰
（5）失望：但是问题还是没有解决或出现了新问题
（6）新法：突然有了一个想法（一句话说明这个想法）
（7）结局：过了一段时间；事情有了最后的转折
（8）总结：点题，呼应前文
详述：
（1）消极情绪
典型表达是：
感到（这个可以有很多表达方式，并且可以结合在每一个环节中，可有非谓语动词形式和介词短语）
1. a flush f (表情绪的名词)=a wave feeling/sense f...一阵...
2.jy/excitement/pride/anger/rage/panic/terrr/srrw/sadness/grief/embarrassment/dispintment/guilt/shame...)
3. (表情绪的名词) flded ver sb=swept ver sb

因...颤抖
tremble//shiver/shake (with fear, panic excitement, rage...)

（2）进一步细节描写
典型是：流泪；心里想……
流泪：
1. Tears blurred ne's eyes.
2. One's eyes gt misty.
3. One's eyes misted/dimmed with tears.泪眼模糊
4. clse t tears几乎要哭了
5. tears (rll dwn ne's eyes/cheeks/face)泪水落下

心里想
1. An inner vice tld sb that 从句内心的声音告诉某人...
2. t neself

（3）转折（个人努力或借助外界）
典型是：鼓起勇气或另外一方的鼓励；毫不犹豫
pluck up/take/gather/ne's curage (t d...)

毫不犹豫：
1. sb culd hardly wait t d sth
2. withut a secnd thught
3. withut even thinking
4. withut delay
5. withut hesitatin

（4）事情似乎有了转机，并抱有希望，感到欣慰
典型表达是：
似乎：
1. It was like ding sth好像...
2. It seemed as if/ that...好像...
希望：
1. hping that 从句抱着一丝希望
2. see/feel a glimmer f hpe看到一丝希望
3. trying hard t d sth
欣慰：
1. a sigh f relief松了一口气
2. with relief松了一口气
3. (A wave f) relief flded thrugh/washed ver sb
4. t ne's relief, .. 使人欣慰的/放心的是

（5）但是还是问题还是没有解决或出现了新问题
典型是：不幸的是；不知道做什么
不幸的是：
1. But bad luck fr sb, ...但是某人真不走运
3. , but in vain
4. , but withut success
5. , but n use
不知道做什么
1. Sb did sth, wndering what t d next.
2. Sb did sth, nt knwing what t d next.
3. Sb did sth, unsure f what t d next.
4. Sb was at a lss what t d.
5. Sb was in a dilemma abut whether t d r nt.感到难以决定...
（6）突然有了一个想法：一句话表示想法
典型：某人想到/明白...; 有了主意
1. It suddenly ccurred t sb that 从句=It hit sb that 从句=It struck me that 从句 =It dawned n sb that 从句
2. (idea, thught...) ccurred/came t sb.= int ne's mind= in ne's mind
3. One's mind began t race
（7）皆大欢喜：过了一段时间，事情有了最后的转折
过了一段时间
1. nt lng after that, afterwards, lng, didn't take lng befre 从句=It tk sme time befre从句不久, ...
2. fr an instant/mment一瞬间

有了结果
1. T ne's surprise(delight)/Strangely enugh, it turned ut that 从句
2. But n secnd thughts, ...但是转而一想，...
3. But what happened next was pure magic. 接下来发生的非常奇妙

皆大欢喜：参考（1）

（8）最后总结，点题
典型是：
直到...才意识到...
1. 倒装句：Nt until 时间状语 did sb realize/ntice that 从句
2. 强调句：It was nly时间状语 that sb realized that 从句

还记得某人的话；还在某人的脑海中
1. One's wrds (eched/rang ut) in ne's ears.
2. One's wrds(vice/sng) lingered/whispered in ne's mind/head.
3. One's head was still full f...

经历与教训
1. What sb taught me(sb learned frm sb)! (valuable/useful/great/painful)
2. What sb had!
(enjyable/pleasant/wnderful/unfrgettable/memrable/interesting/valuable)
3. Dwn deep in ne's heart, ...在某人的内心深处
Part2:高考真题实战演练
实战演练1：读后续写浙江卷（2016森林遇险）
夫妻旅游途中吵架，妻子独自离开，述路在树林里，直升飞机来了几次授救但没有看见她。她感到很失望，
One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tm, had driven three hurs t camp vernight by a lake in the frest. Unfrtunately, n the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started t quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was s angry that she said t Tm. “I’m ging t find a better spt fr us t camp” and walked away.
With n path t fllw, Jane just walked n fr quite a lng time. After she had climbed t a high place, she turned arund, hping t see the lake. T her surprise, she saw nthing but frest and, far beynd, a snwcapped muntain tp. She suddenly realized that she was lst.
“Tm! ”she cried. “Help!”
N reply. If nly she had nt left her mbile phne in that bag with Tm. Jane kept mving, but the farther she walked, the mre cnfused she became. As night was beginning t fall, Jane was s tired that she had t stp fr the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much t be with Tm and her family. She wanted t hld him and tell him hw much she lved him.
Jane rse at the break f day, hungry and thirsty. She culd hear water trickling (滴落）smewhere at a distance. Quickly she fllwed the sund t a stream. T her great jy, she als saw sme berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling strnger nw, Jane began t walk alng the stream and hpe it wuld lead her t the lake.
As she picked her way carefully alng the stream, Jane heard a helicpter.Is that fr me? Unfrtunately, the trees made it impssible fr peple t see her frm abve. A few minutes later, anther helicpter flew verhead. Jane tk ff her yellw bluse, thinking that she shuld g t an pen area and flag them if they came back again.
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为l50左右；
2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1：
But n mre helicpters came and it was getting dark again.
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Paragraph 2:
It was daybreak when Jane wke up.
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第一段：But n mre helicpters came and it was getting dark again.(但是没有直升机来了，天又黑了。)
第二段：It was daybreak when Jane wke up.简醒来的时候天已经亮了。
实战演练2：读后续写浙江卷（2018年6月）
父亲带儿子去西部荒野的一个朋友家体验农场生活，见父亲和叔叔骑马，儿子也很想骑，于是亲身上马体验。临走叔叔告诫我们不要走偏了路（"Dn’t be late fr supper," Uncle Paul cried, "and keep t the track s that yu dn’t get lst!"）。一路上，风景优美，让人陶醉。
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
It was summer, and my dad wanted t treat me t a vacatin like never befre. He decided t take me n a trip t the Wild West.
We tk a plane t Albuquerque, a big city in the state f New Mexic. We reached Albuquerque in the late afternn. Uncle Paul, my dad’s friend, picked us up frm the airprt and drve us up t his farm in Pecs.
His wife Tina cked us a delicius dinner and we gt t knw his sns Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spent the night in the guestrm f the farm huse listening t the frgs and water rlling dwn the river nearby. Very early in the mrning, Uncle Paul wke us up t have breakfast. "The day starts at dawn n my farm," he said. After breakfast, I went t help Aunt Tina feed the chickens, while my dad went with Uncle Paul t take the sheep ut t graze(吃草). I was impressed t see my dad and Uncle Paul riding hrses. They lked really cl.
In the afternn, I asked Uncle Paul if I culd take a hrse ride, and he said yes, as lng as my dad went with me. I wasn’t ging t take a hrse ride by myself anyway. S, my dad and I put n ur new cwby hats, gt n ur hrses, and headed slwly twards the muntains. "Dn’t be late fr supper," Uncle Paul cried, "and keep t the track s that yu dn’t get lst!" "OK! " my dad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and his farm huse were ut f sight. It was s peaceful and quiet and the clrs f the brwn rcks, the deep green pine trees, and the late afternn sun mixed t create a magic scene. It lked like a beautiful wven(编织的) blanket spread ut upn the grund just fr us.
Suddenly a little rabbit jumped ut in frnt f my hrse.
注意：
（1）所续写短文的词数应为l50左右；
（2）至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语：
（3）续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
（4）续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1: Suddenly a little rabbit jumped ut in frnt f my hrse.
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Paragraph 2: We had n idea where we were and it was getting dark.
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Paragraph 1: Suddenly a little rabbit jumped ut in frnt f my hrse.
Paragraph 2: We had n idea where we were and it was getting dark.
读后续写
续写
1.A wave f terrr swept ver her.
一阵恐怖的浪潮席卷了她。
1.情绪
2.Her heart punding fiercely and her palm sweating, an inner vice tld her that she had t find a safe place.
她的心剧烈地跳动着，手心冒汗，一个内在的声音告诉她，她必须找到一个安全的地方。
2.细节：详述情绪
3.Tired and terrified as she was,Jane plucked her curage t feel the way.
虽然她很累，也很害怕，但简鼓起勇气去感受这条路。
3.转折∶ 个人努力
4.Luckily, it didn't take lng befre she fund a cave.
5. Sighing with relief, she felt a glimmer f hpe, saying t herself."Tmrrw is anther day."
4.幸运的是，没过多久她就找到了一个洞穴。
5.松了一口气，她感到了一丝希望。 对自己说。 “明天又是新的一天。”
转机：成功、希望来了。
With that, she went t sleep, in whse dream her husband kept her cmpany.
说完，她就去睡觉了，她丈夫在梦里陪伴着她。
衔接句
读后续写
续写
1.Hungry and disappinted, she fund nt any helicpter verhead,at a lss what t d.
1.饥饿和失望，她发现头顶上没有任何直升机，不知所措。
再度失望（出现新问题）
2.It suddenly dawned n her that she shuld find a big pen area first.
3. Having gbbling dwn sme blackberries, she can't wait t set ff.
4. After what seemed a century,such an area did cme int sight.
Her face brightened up.
2.她突然明白，她应该先找一个大的空地。
她狼吞虎咽地吃了些黑莓，迫不及待地要出发了。
4.好像过了一个世纪之后，这样的地区确实出现了。
5.她的脸变亮了。
突然有了办法
What a cincidence that meanwhile, a helicpter was flying twards her.
Upn its landing, ut dashed her husband wh hugged Jane tightly, tears welling up in their heart.
6.与此同时，一架直升机正朝她飞来，真是巧合。
7.她的丈夫紧紧地拥抱着简，眼泪涌上心头。
结果解决问题，巧不成书，皆大欢喜
It was at the mment that they decided nt t quarrel any mre but learned t cmprmise.
8.就在这时，他们决定不再争吵了，而是学会了妥协
（总结）
读后续写
八股文思路
1. A wave f nervusness swept ver me especially when the hrse ran like crazy.
（情绪）
2. My heart punding and my palms sweating, an inner vice tld me that I had t calm dwn.
（细节详述）
3. Thugh in a panic, I plucked my curage t pull n the reigns.
（转折：个人努力）
4. Luckily, it didn’t take lng befre I settled dwn the hrse.
（转机：成功，希望来了）
5. Just at that mment, Dad ran ver, gasping fr air.
（衔接句：新问题来了）
6. “By, we are way ff the track.” He said seriusly, a lk f cncern spreading acrss his face.
1. Hungry and frustrated, we tried t find a way ut but in vain.
(努力，失败)
2. It suddenly dawned n me we culd rde dwn the river nearby.
（突然有了办法）
3. Unexpectedly, the river brught us t the familiar track at last.
（开始做）
4. After what seemed tw hurs, Uncle Paul’s farm huse did cme int sight.
（成功了）
5. My father’s face brightened up, s did mine.
（感受）
6. Upn ur arrival, Uncle Paul culdn’t wait t asked us, “Where have yu been? I am just calling 911.”
（幽默对话）
7. “T Alice’s Wnderland” my father answered, winking at me with a big grin.
8. What an unfrgettable experience we had!
(总结)