2023届高考英语二轮复习上海高考英语写作专项训练作业含答案

这是一份2023届高考英语二轮复习上海高考英语写作专项训练作业含答案，共36页。

应用文
1．假定你是李华，上周日你和班里同学游览参观了长城。请你用英语写一篇日记，内容要点包括：1.游览心情；2.具体见闻；3.事后感受。
注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯
My weekend
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2．假定你是李华，上周你校学生到公园开展了义务劳动。请你给校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：
1.时间和地点;
2.劳动内容;
3.你的感悟。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
An Unforgettable Voluntary Labor
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3．假定你是李华,你的外国笔友Johnson的家乡遭遇了特大洪涝灾害，他的家乡受损严重，他本人也受伤了。根据以下要点，请你用英语给Johnson写一封邮件：
1．安慰和鼓励；
2．为他提供帮助（如募捐等）。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Johnson,
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
4．党的二十大(the 20th CPC National Congress)报告指出，要建设全民终身学习的学习型社会和学习型大国。请你根据这一会议精神，写一篇演讲稿，题为“Be a Lifelong Learner”，内容包括：
1. 终身学习的重要性;
2. 如何终身学习。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Be a Lifelong Learner
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5．你校110周年校庆快到了，学生会正在招募志愿者，请你撰写一篇招募志愿者的宣传稿，要点如下：
1.邀请大家加入志愿者;
2.简要介绍志愿工作;
3.谈谈参加活动可能的收获。
注意：1词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。注意：
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6．假如你是校报负责人，急需在学校内聘一位同学任英语版的编辑，负责从英文报刊杂志及互联网上选择适合学生的文章并进行编辑。请你用英文以“An English Editor Wanted”为题目写一则招聘启事。内容要点如下：
1. 工作职责；
2. 招聘条件；
3. 联系方式。
注意：
1) 词数 80 左右；
2) 适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
An English Editor Wanted
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Students’ Union
7．假设你是李华，下面是你的笔友Jenny给你发来的一封邮件。
Dear Li Hua,How are you? A new law has been passed in my city. Smoking is banned in public places. I think it is a wise decision. Do you think so?
Best wishes,
Jenny

请根据邮件内容给她回复，要点如下：
1. 表明你的观点；
2. 给出理由（至少两点）；
3. 得出结论。
注意：1. 词数100左右（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数）；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Jenny,I’m happy to receive your email.
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Best wishes,
Li Hua
8．假如你是校学生会主席，你发现身边很多同学经常不吃早饭，这样危害健康的同时，也给他们的学习带来影响。请你代表学生会发出倡议，呼吁大家养成吃早饭的好习惯。要点如下：
1.不吃早饭的原因和危害；
2.建议大家养成良好的学习和生活习惯。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加情节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear students,
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The Students’ union
9．假定你是李华，你所在的足球队在全市高中生足球比赛中获得一等奖。请你写一篇获奖感言在足球比赛颁奖会上宣读，内容包括：
1.参赛的准备过程；
2.参赛的收获；
3.表示感谢。
注意：
1.词数120左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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10．假定你是李华，上周五学校邀请了 Richard 教授，就高中生如何掌握英语词汇举办了一场讲座，受到大家的一致好评。请你就本次活动给校园英语报写一篇报道。内容如下：
1. 讲座时间与地点;
2. 讲座内容;
3. 学生评价。
注意：1. 词数 80 左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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11．你校英文报正举办主题为“My Favorite Sports Star”的征文活动。请根据以下内容投稿：
1.介绍体育明星；
2.喜欢的理由；
3.给你的启迪。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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12．假设你是李华，你所在的英语社团近期将举办一场主题为“Money isn’t everything in life”的演讲比赛，请你就此写一篇发言稿。
注意：词数100左右，以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Hello everyone!
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13．假定你是李华，你和好朋友Tom说好本周六一起去参与志愿者活动，你因故无法赴约。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1.表达歉意；2.说明原因；3.另约时间。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Tom,
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Yours,
Li Hua
14．每个人的一生中都有许多值得感谢的长辈。请你以“The Elder I Want to Thank Most”为题写一篇英语短文，向你校英语报投稿，内容包括：
1. 介绍你最想感谢的长辈;
2. 陈述感谢该长辈的原因。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The Elder I Want to Thank Most
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15．你校学生会主办的读书节活动将于7月15日在图书馆举行，急需招募一批志愿者，请你以学生会的名义写一篇招募志愿者的启事，呼吁学生报名参加志愿者工作。志愿者条件包括：
1.有强烈的责任心；   
2.有无私奉献精神；
3.有积极的态度；        
4.有充裕的时间。
注意：1.词数 80 左右；          
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Volunteers Wanted
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16．假定你是李华,你的英国笔友Peter寒假期间要去番禺长隆欢乐世界,请根据提示信息给他写一封回信,介绍番禺长隆欢乐世界(Panyu Chime-Long Paradise)。
1. 位于广州市番禺区迎宾路, 占地约2000亩，于2006年正式开业;
2. 拥有八大主题园区、包括欢乐水世界(Happy Water World)、历险天地(Adventure World)、哈比王国(Habib Kingdom)、尖叫地带(Scream Zone)等;
3. 它是具有国际先进技术和管理水平的超大型世界顶尖主题游乐园(international advanced technology and management level),入选2021年度中国主题公园综合实力(comprehensive strength)前10名;
4. 你对番禺长隆欢乐世界的总体评价。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
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17．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你是明启中学高三学生李明，你校即将举行读书节活动，校英语报因此号召全校同学推荐一位作家。写一篇短文，内容须包括：你推荐这位作家的理由。
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18．假定你是李华，某英文报正在举办以“My favourite sportsperson/sports star”为主题的征文活动。请你给该报投稿，内容包括：
1.简单介绍这位体育运动爱好者/体育明星；
2.陈述你喜欢他（她）的原因。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
My Favourite Sportsperson/Sports Star
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19．假定你是李华，最近你对读后续写(Continuation Writing)感到苦恼和不安。请你给英语老师Mr.Jim发一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.表达焦虑和疑惑；
2.寻求建议和帮助。
注意：
1.词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
20．Directions: Write an English composition in   120- 150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你是明启中学的高三学生李华。学校为了帮助学生减压，拟从以下三种形式中选择其一：午睡三十分钟，设立“音乐角”和开设瑜伽 (Yoga) 课程。现听取全校学生的意见。请给负责的王老师写封邮件，内容须包括：
1)你的选择；
2)你的理由。
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参考答案：
1．One possible version:
Last Sunday, I went to visit the Great Wall with my classmates. It was a sunny day, which brought us good moods. Beyond our imagination, there were a large number of visitors from home and abroad. No wonder that it is well known worldwide. Climbing up the Great Wall and seeing how splendid the scenery is , we couldn’t help taking photos around. What make us excited then was completing the Hero Slope. Standing on the slope, I felt myself to be a real man then.
That day I walked too much. Tired as I was, I was feeling happy. I was rewarded and taught a lot. If there were another chance one day, how I wish I could pay a visit to the great man-made wonder a second time.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生在游览参观了长城后，用英语写一篇日记。
【详解】1.词汇积累
参观，游览：visit → pay a visit to
众所周知的，出名的：well known → famous
疲倦的：tired → exhausted
高兴的：happy→ pleased
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Last Sunday, I went to visit the Great Wall with my classmates.
拓展句：It was Last Sunday that I went to visit the Great Wall with my classmates.
【点睛】[高分句型1] It was a sunny day, which brought us good moods. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] No wonder that it is well known worldwide.(运用了that引导同位语从句)
2．An Unforgettable Voluntary Labor
Last week, a voluntary labor was launched in the park by our school, which left a deep impression on us.
On arriving at the park, we got down to business happily. Firstly, we cleared the waste paper and bottles and put them into the rubbish bin. Besides, we watered the flowers and trees and cleaned the benches. Though we were exhausted, we felt what we did was quite worthwhile.
From this activity, I realize labor brings happiness to us and that we can make a big difference in building a greener future.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于新闻报道。要求考生给校英文报写一篇报道，报道上周学校学生到公园开展的义务劳动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
劳动：work→labor
到达：arrive at→get to
另外：moreover→besides
非常：very→quite
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：On arriving at the park, we got down to business happily.
拓展句：As soon as we arrived at the park, we got down to business happily.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Last week, a voluntary labor was launched in the park by our school, which left a deep impression on us. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Though we were exhausted, we felt what we did was quite worthwhile. (运用了though引导的让步状语从句，以及what引导的主语从句在宾语从句中作主语)
3．Dear Johnson,
I’m so sad to know that a heavy flood struck your hometown the other day. I’m writing to offer my genuine concern and sincere backup.
I know that your hometown has been badly destroyed and you are physically hurt and mentally affected as well. I do feel bad about this and I hope you can get recovered soon. Meanwhile, never lose heart and don’t forget I am by your side though I can not fly there to fight against the disaster alongside you. I have been raising money and collecting useful items for you, which will be sent to you as soon as possible.
Wish you all the best. And feel free to contact me if you need any more help.
Yours sincerely,
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外国笔友Johnson写一封邮件，就他的家乡遭遇了特大洪涝灾害受损严重及对方受伤这一事故进行安慰和鼓励，并为他提供募捐一类的帮助。
【详解】1.词汇积累
袭击：strike→attack
后援/支持：backup→support
同时：Meanwhile→At the same time
帮助：help→assistance
2.句式拓展
句式变化
原句：I’m so sad to know that a heavy flood struck your hometown the other day.
拓展句：I’m so sad when knowing that a heavy flood struck your hometown the other day.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Meanwhile, never lose heart and don’t forget I am by your side though I can not fly there to fight against the disaster alongside you.（运用了宾语从句和状语从句）
【高分句型2】I have been raising money and collecting useful items for you, which will be sent to you as soon as possible.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
4．One possible version:
Be a Lifelong Learner
The report by the 20th CPC National Congress has pointed out we are living in a remarkable time which is calling us to break new ground and display full talents. How to achieve our greatest potential? Here is the answer: be a lifelong learner.
Lifelong learning is the best education. For one thing, our times are changing in ways like never before. To better cope with them, we are supposed to embrace new technology and learn new knowledge. For another, learning is a good way to remain vigorous and stay young. Above all, it helps us to be adapting to changes. There are various ways to achieve lifelong learning. Post-school training, online courses and interest groups are all available in our time.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇题为“Be a Lifelong Learner”的演讲稿，响应全民终身学习的号召。
【详解】1.词汇积累
非凡的：extraordinary→remarkable
显示：show→display
好的：nice→good
方法：method→way
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Lifelong learning is the best education.
拓展句：Lifelong learning is the best education, which is beneficial to our life.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The report by the 20th CPC National Congress has pointed out we are living in a remarkable time which is calling us to break new ground and display full talents. (运用了which引导的限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】To better cope with them, we are supposed to embrace new technology and learn new knowledge. (运用了非谓语动词不定式作目的状语)
5．Dear students,
Because the 110th anniversary of our school is coming, our school will hold various activities to celebrate the grand 110th anniversary. At the same time, it will welcome many influential guests and alumni from all walks of life at home and abroad. Now our school decides to recruit volunteers for all the students. The details are as follows:
First of all, the volunteers are mainly responsible for guiding and serving the famous alumni, acting as their campus explanation and campus guide. Volunteers will also help organize other events. Finally, by attending this event, you will not only have the opportunity to meet famous alumni, but also to fully understand the long history and development of our school.
Sincerely, look forward to your active participation.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。学校110周年校庆即将到来，要求考生撰写一篇招募志愿者的宣传稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
首先：first of all → first and foremost
各种各样的：various→ varieties of
机会：opportunity→ chance
诚挚的：sincerely→genuinely
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：First of all, the volunteers are mainly responsible for guiding and serving the famous alumni, acting as their campus explanation and campus guide.
拓展句：First of all, the volunteers are mainly responsible for guiding and serving the famous alumni, who act as their campus explanation and campus guide.
【点睛】【高分句型1】First of all, the volunteers are mainly responsible for guiding and serving the famous alumni, acting as their campus explanation and campus guide. （运用了现在分词作伴随状语的结构）
【高分句型2】Finally, by attending this event, you will not only have the opportunity to meet famous alumni, but also to fully understand the long history and development of our school.（运用了not only…but also…的并列结构）
6．One possible version:
An English Editor Wanted
Our school newspaper is looking for an editor for its English edition. The job mainly involves choosing and editing proper English articles from other newspapers, magazines or Internet for us students.
We hope that he/she could meet the following requirements: First and foremost, a good command of English is basically needed. More importantly, he/she is willing to devote some of the spare time to serving the others. Needless to say that the ability to use the computer is important as well.
Those who are interested in the job, please get in touch with the Students’ Union this week.
Students’ Union
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假如你是校报负责人，急需在学校内聘一位同学任英语版的编辑，负责从英文报刊杂志及互联网上选择适合学生的文章并进行编辑。请你用英文以“An English Editor Wanted”为题目写一则招聘启事。
【详解】1.词汇积累
需要：need→require
感兴趣：be interested in→show interest in
有益的：get in touch with→get into contact with
重要的：important→vital
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：Our school newspaper is looking for an editor for its English edition. The job mainly involves choosing and editing proper English articles from other newspapers, magazines or Internet for us students.
拓展句：Our school newspaper is looking for an editor for its English edition, which mainly involves choosing and editing proper English articles from other newspapers, magazines or Internet for us students.
【点睛】[高分句型1] We hope that he/she could meet the following requirements: First and foremost, a good command of English is basically needed. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] Those who are interested in the job, please get in touch with the Students’ Union this week. (运用了who引导定语从句)
7．Dear Jenny,
I’m happy to receive your email. I strongly support the government’s decision to ban smoking in public.
Smoking is a bad habit and very harmful to people’s health. It makes it easier for smokers to get various diseases. At the same time, secondhand smoke can also badly affect other people’s health, especially babies’. Cigarette smoke can pollute the air inside a building and stay there for a long time, which stops people from breathing freely. What’s more, smoking can cause a fire, which can result in great loss.
In a word, we should avoid smoking in public and create a green environment together.
   Best wishes,
                                                                                                                                                           Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给你的笔友Jenny回复邮件，就她的城市通过了一项新的法律——公共场所禁止吸烟发表自己的观点。
【详解】1.词汇积累
对……有害：be harmful to→do harm to
同时：At the same time→Meanwhile
导致：result in→lead to
总之：In a word→In short/In general
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I strongly support the government’s decision to ban smoking in public.
拓展句：I strongly support the government’s decision that smoking is banned in public.
【点睛】[高分句型1] It makes it easier for smokers to get various diseases.(运用了it作形式主语)
[高分句型2] What’s more, smoking can cause a fire, which can result in great loss.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
8．试题答案
Dear friends,
As we all know, we are what we eat. However, so many of our students often skip breakfast.
Some say that they are too busy to prepare it. Others just wants to lose weight. But has anyone ever thought about the side effects? Weakness, even illnesses, may occur consequently. In my opinion, we’d better have various healthy diets in order. Besides, we should have meals regularly. Only in this way can we take in enough nutrition to study better.
Let’s form healthy study and daily habits together!
The Students’ union
【导语】这篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生以学生会主席的身份代表学生会发出倡议，呼吁大家养成吃早饭的良好生活习惯和学习习惯。
【详解】1.词汇积累
想要做某事：want to do→feel like doing
因此：consequently→as a result
各种各样的：various→a variety of
养成：form→build
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：However, so many of our students often skip breakfast.
拓展句：However, there are so many of our students who often skip breakfast.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Some say that they are too busy to prepare it. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] Only in this way can we take in enough nutrition to study better. (运用了only+方式状语位于句首，将助动词提前的部分倒装句型)
9．Ladies and gentleman,
I’m so excited that our football team won the first prize in this competition.
Before the competition we kept on practicing for a long time. Luckily, our efforts paid off, which, to be honest, is beyond our expectations. What’s more, we learned a lot from this competition. On one hand, participating in the football match helps me to learn more about sport techniques, improve my team consciousness and develop my self-confidence as well. On the other hand, thanks to the football club, I have known many friends sharing the same interest with me. Finally, I’d like to express my thanks to all of our teachers who directed us, our friends who helped me, and our partners who worked hard. Without you, we couldn’t have made such a great achievement.
Thank you so much, again.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，你所在的足球队在全市高中生足球比赛中获得一等奖。请你写一篇获奖感言在足球比赛颁奖会上宣读。
【详解】1.词汇积累
继续做某事：keep on doing sth.→continue to do sth.
指导：direct→guide
由于：thanks to→due to
培养：develop→foster
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Before the competition we kept on practicing for a long time. Luckily, our efforts paid off, which, to be honest, is beyond our expectations.
拓展句：Luckily, our efforts paid off, which, to be honest, is beyond our expectations because before the competition we kept on practicing for a long time.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m so excited that our football team won the first prize in this competition. (运用了so…that…引导结果状语从句)
[高分句型2] Luckily, our efforts paid off, which, to be honest, is beyond our expectations. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
10．One possible version:
A Lecture Widely Received Among Students
To clear up students’ confusion about having a good command of English vocabulary, our school invited Professor Richard to deliver a lecture last Friday in the auditorium, and many students attended it.
As an experienced and knowledgeable expert, Professor Richard referred to the trouble that some English learners spend much time on vocabulary but achieve little. He recommended that words be memorized in the context and reviewed on a regular basis, which received students’ positive response.
“I’ve benefited a lot today”, a freshman commented. The lecture indeed offered practical suggestions to students.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就上周学校举办的“高中生如何掌握英语词汇”的讲座写一篇英文报道，内容包括讲座时间与地点、讲座内容和学生评价。
【详解】1.词汇积累
精通：have a good command of → have a good grasp of
博学的：knowledgeable → learned
困难：trouble → challenge
实用的建议：practical suggestions → constructional advice
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：To clear up students’ confusion about having a good command of English vocabulary, our school invited Professor Richard to deliver a lecture last Friday in the auditorium, and many students attended it.
拓展句：
In order to clear up students’ confusion about having a good command of English vocabulary, a lecture was delivered by Professor Richard in the auditorium last Friday, which many students attended.
【点睛】【高分句型1】
He recommended that words be memorized in the context and reviewed on a regular basis, which received students’ positive response.（运用了that引导的宾从句，which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】
As an experienced and knowledgeable expert, Professor Richard referred to the trouble that some English learners spend much time on vocabulary but achieve little.（运用了that引导的同位语从句）
11．Su Bingtian stands out as a 100-meter runner. Not only did he break the Asian Games’ record, but he competed with Usain Bolt many times.
Why do I like him? On top of his talent for sprint, what impresses me most is his intense training. His diligence and persistence have pushed his running career to new heights.     
I learned a lot from him. In our studies and lives, as long as we hold on to our dreams and never give up, we will become better versions of ourselves.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于记叙文。要求考生以“My Favorite Sports Star”为题写一篇文章，介绍自己最喜欢的体育明星，参加征文比赛。
【详解】1.词汇积累
喜欢：love→like
职业：profession→career
放弃：abandon→give up
变得：get→become
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Su Bingtian stands out as a 100-meter runner.
拓展句：Su Bingtian who is my favorite sports star stands out as a 100-meter runner.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Not only did he break the Asian Games’ record, but he competed with Usain Bolt many times. (运用了部分倒装句型)
【高分句型2】On top of his talent for sprint, what impresses me most is his intense training. (运用了what引导的主语从句)
12．Hello, everyone!
Nowadays some people think money is the answer to all of life’s problems and the cause of happiness. Worse still, they care nothing but money.
In my opinion, people can’t do many things without money, but money is not everything. There are many things in the world, which money cannot buy, such as friendship, love, health and knowledge. What money will bring you depends on your personal beliefs and goals. If you are kind enough to help others, especially the poor, money is a good thing. Only then can money be certainly a true source of happiness.
That’s all. Thank you!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“Money isn’t everything in life”为题，写一篇发言稿，参加所在的英语社团近期举办的一场演讲比赛。
【详解】1.词汇积累
以我的观点：In my opinion→From my point of view
购买：buy→purchase
依赖：depend on→rely on
帮助某人：help sb.→give sb. a hand
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Nowadays some people think money is the answer to all of life’s problems and the cause of happiness.
拓展句：Nowadays some people hold the belief that money is the answer to all of life’s problems and the cause of happiness.
【点睛】【高分句型1】There are many things in the world, which money cannot buy, such as friendship, love, health and knowledge. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】What money will bring you depends on your personal beliefs and goals. (运用了What引导的主语从句)
13．Dear Tom,
I’m sorry to say that I can’t take part in volunteer activity with you this Saturday.
I have just known that this Saturday is my mother’s birthday. My family and I will go to the restaurant to celebrate it for her. I hope such change won’t trouble you much. If it is convenient for you, let’s make it next Saturday. If not, please tell me in advance.
Please allow me to make an apology again.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生因为本周六不能和好朋友Tom一起参与志愿者活动写信道歉，并需要说明原因和另约时间。
【详解】1.词汇积累
参加：take part in →join in
麻烦：trouble →bother
知道：know →be aware of
告知：tell →inform
2.句式拓展
主动句变被动句
原句：I hope such change won’t trouble you much.
拓展句：I hope you won’t be troubled by such change much.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m sorry to say that I can’t take part in volunteer activity with you this Saturday.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】If it is convenient for you, let’s make it next Saturday.（运用了if引导的条件状语从句和let引导的祈使句）
14．参考范文：
The Elder I Want to Thank Most
Everyone has many elders to thank in their life, and the one I want to thank most is my mother. She’s slim with big eyes and long hair. She’s a considerate lady who cares me in every aspect of my life.
I am grateful to her for many reasons. Since I was born, she has always been there for me. She is my first life coach. It is she who teaches me to be a well-behaved and honest person. Although she’s always busy, she has never ignored me. I dare say I couldn’t be who I am today without her.
【导语】这是一篇应用文。要求考生以“The Elder I Want to Thank Most”为题写一篇英语短文，向校英语报投稿。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
关心，照顾：care → look after
老师，教练：coach → teacher
忽视，忽略：ignore → neglect
体贴的：considerate → thoughtful
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：She’s slim with big eyes and long hair.
拓展句：She’s slim, who has big eyes and long hair.
【点睛】【高分句型1】
She’s a considerate lady who cares me in every aspect of my life.（运用了who引导的定语从句）
【高分句型2】
It is she who teaches me to be a well-behaved and honest person.（运用了强调句型）
15．Volunteers Wanted
Entitled to organize the Reading Festival in our school library, we are urgently in need of volunteers. Basic requirements are as follows.
The applicants are supposed to have a strong sense of responsibility as well as selfless devotion. Additionally, a positive attitude to the related work is of great importance. Volunteers who are going to assist us in organizing the relevant affairs shall be available for at least one day without absence. If you are interested, please call Li Hua at 12345678900 for an interview.
Students' Union
【导语】这篇文面表达属于应用文中的招募启事。要求考生以学生会的名义，为校学生会主办的读书节活动写一篇招募志愿者的启事，呼吁学生报名参加志愿者工作，并对有意参加的志愿者提出了有责任心等要求。
【详解】1.词汇积累
筹备：organize→arrange
需要：in need of→in want of
应该：be supposed to→ought to
相关的：relevant→relative
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Entitled to organize the Reading Festival in our school library, we are urgently in need of volunteers.
拓展句：Since we are entitled to organize the Reading Festival in our school library, we are urgently in need of volunteers.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Volunteers who are going to assist us in organizing the relevant affairs shall be available for at least one day without absence. (运用了who引导的限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] If you are interested, please call Li Hua at 12345678900 for an interview. (运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
16．参考范文:
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to hear you are coming to Guangzhou and visit Panyu Chime-Long Paradise during the winter holiday.
Officially opened in 2006，Panyu Chime-Long Paradise is located in Yingbin Road, Panyu District, Guangzhou, covering an area of about 2,000 mu.
Panyu Chime-Long Paradise consists of eight theme parks, including Happy Water World, Adventure World, Habib Kingdom, Scream Zone, and so on. It is a super large world top theme park with international advanced technology and management level, which has been selected into the top 10 comprehensive strength of China’s theme parks in 2021.
Panyu Chime-Long Paradise is a wonderland for you with various amusement games, where you will experience the joy of screaming and excitement.
Hope you will have a good time.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本文是一篇应用文写作，现要求考生为英国笔友Pete写信介绍番禺长隆欢乐世界(Panyu Chime-Long Paradise)。其内容主要包括欢乐谷的位置、主题、特色以及你对番禺长隆欢乐世界的总体评价等。
【详解】1.词汇积累
坐落于：be located in→be situated in
由...组成：consist of →be composed of
大的：large→huge
不同的：various→a variety of
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Officially opened in 2006，Panyu Chime-Long Paradise is located in Yingbin Road, Panyu District, Guangzhou, covering an area of about 2,000 mu.
拓展句：Officially opened in 2006，Panyu Chime-Long Paradise is located in Yingbin Road, Panyu District, Guangzhou, which covers an area of about 2,000 mu.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Panyu Chime-Long Paradise consists of eight theme parks, including Happy Water World, Adventure World, Habib Kingdom, Scream Zone, and so on. （运用了现在分词作状语）
【高分句型2】Panyu Chime-Long Paradise is a wonderland for you with various amusement games, where you will experience the joy of screaming and excitement.（运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句）
17．Hello, everyone. I’m Li Ming, a senior high school student in Mingqi Senior High. The writer I want to recommend to you today is J.K Rowling.
Many years ago, I saw the movie Harry Potter. I was so impressed by the magical world. The main character Harry is such a tough boy, who overcomes all the difficulties. After seeing the movie, I started to read the books. They are much excellent than the movie. The writer J.K Rowling is such a great woman. She writes the amazing books. Now she is my favorite writer. It is not only her works impress me, but also her experience inspires me.
Rowling began her writing career at the very late age. She was poor before she got famous, but she never gave up her writing when she was not in good situation. Finally, she became successful.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假设你是明启中学高三学生李明，你校即将举行读书节活动，校英语报因此号召全校同学推荐一位作家。写一篇短文，内容须包括：你推荐这位作家的理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
推荐：recommend→nominate
激励：inspire→encourage
有益的：excellent→extraordinary
著名的：famous=known
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：The writer J.K Rowling is such a great woman. She writes the amazing books.
拓展句：The writer J.K Rowling is such a great woman and she writes the amazing books.
【点睛】[高分句型1] The main character Harry is such a tough boy, who overcomes all the difficulties. (运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] She was poor before she got famous, but she never gave up her writing when she was not in good situation. (运用了before和when引导的时间状语从句)
18．[参考范文]
My Favourite Sportsperson/Sports Star
When it comes to my favorite sports stars, the first one that springs to mind is Eugenio Monti.
During a competition, Monti helped a British competitor who had broken a part of his bobsleigh by lending him the same part of his own. It was a remarkable, unselfish decision, which set an example to us all. As an athlete, Monti devoted himself to achieving sporting excellence and pushing the boundaries of human achievement. Moreover, his story indicated that sport is not just about winning, but also about passing on the spirit of friendship, solidarity and fair play.
In conclusion, Monti did not come first but he walked away a true hero.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于记叙文，要求考生介绍自己最喜欢的体育运动爱好者/体育明星，并陈述喜欢他（她）的原因。
【详解】1.词汇积累
比赛：competition→match
帮助：help→assist
卓越的：remarkable→extraordinary
致力于：devote oneself to→contribute oneself to
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：As an athlete, Monti devoted himself to achieving sporting excellence and pushing the boundaries of human achievement.
拓展句：As an athlete, it was achieving sporting excellence and pushing the boundaries of human achievement that Monti devoted himself to.
【点睛】[高分句型1] It was a remarkable, unselfish decision, which set an example to us all. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Moreover, his story indicated that sport is not just about winning, but also about passing on the spirit of friendship, solidarity and fair play. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
19．Dear Mr. Jim,
Recently, Continuation Writing, a new test type, has been upsetting me. I am writing to ask you for a favor.
With the big exam approaching, so limited is the time that I feel at a loss about how to cope well with the new test type. Meanwhile, lack of relevant knowledge and practice makes me increasingly anxious and uneasy. Therefore, your guidance is urgently needed. I would appreciate it if you could offer me some suggestions.
Looking forward to your earliest reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对对读后续写(Continuation Writing)感到苦恼和不安这一情况，给英语老师Mr.Jim发一封电子邮件寻求建议和帮助。
【详解】1.词汇积累
请某人帮忙：ask sb. for a favor→ ask sb. for help
到来：approach→draw near
应对，处理：cope with→ deal with
提供：offer→ give
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Recently, Continuation Writing, a new test type, has been upsetting me.
拓展句：Recently, Continuation Writing, which is a new test type, has been upsetting me.
【点睛】【高分句型1】With the big exam approaching, so limited is the time that I feel at a loss about how to cope well with the new test type.（运用了with的复合结构以及so…that…引导的结果状语从句。）
【高分句型2】I would appreciate it if you could offer me some suggestions.（运用了if引导的条件状语从句。）
20．Dear Mr. Wang,
I chose the music corner as my first choice for relieving the stress from studies. It’s an honor to share my opinion about music with you.
Music makes great difference to our life. Music can not only make us relaxed and refreshed whenever we are tired, but it can stimulate us when we are confronted with difficulties. Besides, music enables us to gain insight into other cultures.
As for me, I prefer pop music and classical music. I am always in good mood as long as I play pop music. When I have a hard time dealing with stress, I choose peaceful and beautiful classical music, which calms me down and improves my mood. In conclusion, music plays an important role in my life.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假设你是明启中学的高三学生李华。学校为了帮助学生减压， 拟从以下三种形式中选择其一： 午睡三十分钟，设立“音乐角”和开设瑜伽 (Yoga) 课程。现听取全校学生的意见。
【详解】1.词汇积累
疲劳的：be tired →be worn out
面对：be confronted with→ be faced with
此外：besides → what’s more
总之：in conclusion →all in all
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：It’s an honor to be here to share my opinion about music with you.
拓展句：It’s an honor that I can share my opinion about music with you here.
【点睛】【高分句型1】When I have a hard time dealing with stress, I choose peaceful and beautiful classical music, which calms me down and improves me mood.（运用了when引导的时间状语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】I am always in good mood as long as I play pop music.（运用了as long as 引导的条件状语从句）