2023届高考英语二轮复习上海高考英语图表作文训练作业含答案

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图表作文1．假设你是李华，最近收到新西兰笔友Peter的电子邮件，说他对北京冬奥会的吉祥物冰墩墩和冬残奥会的吉祥物雪容融非常感兴趣，但对其具体寓意不太清楚，请你参照下面表格的内容，给他回一封电子邮件。注意：1.词数：100左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：1、吉祥物 mascot2、冬残奥会the Winter Paralympic Games_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．最近，你们班就“是否应该帮助陌生人”展开了讨论，同学们就这一话题意见不一，你的看法如何？根据所提供的信息，以“Should We Help Strangers?”为题，写一篇短文。 原因赞成帮助他人是美德；帮助他人就是帮助自己；反对怕陷入麻烦；怕被误解；你的观点？（至少两点）  注意：1.表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；2.必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，并适当发挥；3.词数：100左右（正文的开头已给出，不计入总词数）；4.不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。参考词汇：美德virtueShould We Help Strangers?Recently our class had a discussion about whether we should help strangers. Different students have different opinions._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 当今社会，短视频已成为高中生获取信息的渠道之一，日前，某网站对某地高中生使用短视频的现状作了调查，结果如下:获取短视频内容的类型受访者平均使用时间占比（该内容浏览时间/总浏览时间）辅助学习类48%娱乐休闲类31%生活技能类12%其他9% 请简单描述该图表，并结合自身或他人情况，谈谈你的看法。（文中不得出现考生姓名，学校等真实信息）4．学校英文报正在开展以Learning English Beyond the Classroom为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：1. 学习活动状况描述；2. 简单评论；3. 你的建议。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 短文的题目和首句已为你写好。5．班级英语角正在征集以“Sharing”为主题的文章。请你根据下列图示内容，结合自身的一次经历，写一篇短文，并阐述分享的意义。要求：1．词数80左右；2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Sharing__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6．假设你是高三（1）班李华，最近你们年级的英语老师针对高三学生进行了一次睡眠时间调查，结果如下图。请你给你校英文电子报社编辑写一封信，内容包括：1. 说明调查结果；2. 分析危害；3. 提出建议。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 开头结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；3. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear editor,I’m Li Hua, a student from Class One, Senior Three. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.Thank you.Yours,Li Hua7．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.国际经合组织（OECD）对 600,000 名青少年就生活中最令他们担忧的事情进行了调查，结果如下图。请联系自身实际，谈谈最让令你担忧的事情及原因。8．你校高三英文社团就“What is the most effective way to ease stress?”话题进行了一次调查，请根据下面调查结果写一篇调查报告，内容包括：1. 简述调查结果；2. 分析原因。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。THE MOST EFFECTIVE WAY TO EASE STRESS___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________9．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given in Chinese.假设你是李华，你的英语老师把你班同学分成几个小组来调查班里患近视(short-sightedness)的同学的人数和原因。你们小组调查后做了如下图所示的统计，请分析下面的饼状图，并谈谈你的看法及建议。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________10．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given in Chinese.下列图表反映的是某高中2010年与2013年学生健康状况调查的部分数据，请你用英语为某报写一份报告，反映你校三年间学生健康状况的变化情况，分析其中原因，并提出一些改进措施。注意事项：1.报告必须包括图表中所有内容，但不要逐条罗列；2.词数100左右。开头语已为你写好。A recent survey shows that the health of the students in our school has been going from bad to worse in the past three years.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________                参考答案1．Dear Peter,Thank you for your email from which I can feel your great interest in the mascots for the 2022 Winter Olympic and Paralympic Games — Bing Dwen Dwen and Shuey Rhon Rhon. As for the messages that they convey, please allow me to pick a few lines to give a brief introduction.Bing Dwen Dwen looks like a giant panda wearing an ice coat. Ice represents purity and perseverance while the panda symbolizes honesty, health, and loveliness. Bing Dwen Dwen also resembles an astronaut, which is a nod to our astronauts' selfless devotion and their exploration of the future.The image of Shuey Rhon Rhon is a combination of snow and a lantern in the color of Chinese red. Not only does it imply tolerance integration, harvest, warmth and light, but it also represents friendship, courage and strength, reflecting the fighting spirit of the Winter Paralympic athletes.Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于图表作文。假设你是李华，最近收到新西兰笔友Peter的电子邮件，说他对北京冬奥会的吉祥物冰墩墩和冬残奥会的吉祥物雪容融非常感兴趣，但对其具体寓意不太清楚，请你参照下面表格的内容，给他回一封电子邮件。【详解】1.词汇积累代表：stand for→represent和.相似：be similar to→resemble结合：unite→combination简洁的：concise→brief2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Bing Dwen Dwen looks like a giant panda wearing an ice coat.拓展句：Bing Dwen Dwen looks like a giant panda which wears an ice coat.【点睛】[高分句型1]Bing Dwen Dwen also resembles an astronaut, which is a nod to our astronauts' selfless devotion and their exploration of the future.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）[高分句型2]Not only does it imply tolerance, integration, harvest, warmth and light, but it also represents friendship, courage and strength.(运用了部分倒装）2．                                                                                                                   Should We Help Strangers?Recently our class had a discussion about whether we should help strangers. Different students have different opinions.Some think we should try to help strangers. Helping others is a virtue, and helping others is helping ourselves. We may come across some trouble and need others’ help some day. If everyone isn’t willing to help us just because we are strangers to them, it’s hard to imagine what our world will be like.However, some are afraid that helping others can sometimes bring us trouble. Sometimes we are just misunderstood and even have to pay the cost of kindness.In my opinion, we should try our best to help others when they are in need of help, but we should also protect ourselves from getting into trouble. If everyone tries a little kindness, our world will be full of love.【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于夹叙夹议文。要求考生描述表格中的相关信息，并谈谈自己对“是否应该帮助陌生人”的看法。【详解】1.词汇积累遇到（问题、困难等）：come across→run into误解：misunderstand→misread在我看来：in my opinion→in my view保护某人免受……：protect sb. from doing sth.→defend sb. from doing sth.2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Sometimes we are just misunderstood and even have to pay the cost of kindness.拓展句：Sometimes we are just misunderstood and even have to pay the cost of kindness, which makes us afraid.【点睛】【高分句型1】In my opinion, we should try our best to help others when they are in need of help, but we should also protect ourselves from getting into trouble.（运用了when引导的时间状语从句）【高分句型2】If everyone tries a little kindness, our world will be full of love.（运用了if引导的条件状语从句）3．A survey conducted by a website is aimed at figuring out the situation about high school students’ use of short videos as a channel for gaining information. As is clearly shown in the table, about 48% of their total screen time has been spent on contents that are of benefit to their study while time distributed to videos related to entertainment and leisure accounts for 31%.In addition, 12% of their time is taken up by watching videos concerning some important life skills. And 9% is spent on random contents.As far as I am concerned, it is the advances of the Internet that make it accessible for students to help with their study, relieve themselves of stress and improve their knowledge of life skills through short videos. Thus, it is no wonder that a large proportion of their time is spent on short videos. I am sure that this trend will continue and last forever.【解析】【导语】本文是一篇图表类型作文。要求考生表格展示的内容去描述某地高中使用短视频的现状。【详解】1.词汇积累旨在：be aimed at→ be intended to do与……相关：related to→ with regard to除此以外：in addition→ additionally提高：improve→enhance2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：In addition, 12% of their time is taken up by watching videos concerning some important life skills.拓展句：In addition, 12% of their time is taken up by watching videos that are relevant to some important life skills.【点睛】【高分句型1】As is clearly shown in the table, about 48% of their total screen time has been spent on contents that are of benefit to their study while time distributed to videos related to entertainment and leisure accounts for 31%.（运用了as引导的非限制定语从句以及that引导的限制性定语从句）【高分句型2】As far as I am concerned, it is the advances of the Internet that make it accessible for students to help with their study, relieve themselves of stress and improve their knowledge of life skills through short videos.（运用了强调句型以及make it+形容词+for sb. to do sth.的结构）4．Learning English Beyond the ClassroomNowadays, with the growing popularity of smartphones and computers, an increasing number of students are choosing to learn English beyond the classroom in various ways.It can easily be seen that the percentage of students who choose listening to English songs and watching English movies is respectively 65% and 50%. However, those choosing reading English books and visiting English learning websites only account for 18% and 12%.As far as I’m concerned, it is a disturbing trend. For students, what benefits most to their study is reading English books. Because of their lack of self-discipline, they’re more easily addicted to chatting online or playing games. It’s urgent for students themselves to improve their self-discipline, and it’s also urgent for parents and teachers to strengthen the guidance.【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于议论文，要求考生使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿，对学生的英语学习活动状况进行描述并作简单的评论，提出建议。【详解】1.词汇积累缺乏：lack→shortage加强：strengthen→enhance各种各样的：various→all kinds of就我而言：as far as I’m concerned→from my perspective2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：However, those choosing reading English books and visiting English learning websites only account for 18% and 12%.拓展句：However, those who choose reading English books and visiting English learning websites only account for 18% and 12%.【点睛】【高分句型1】It can easily be seen that the percentage of students who choose listening to English songs and watching English movies is respectively 65% and 50%. (运用了it作形式主语，that引导主语从句以及who引导的定语从句)【高分句型2】For students, what benefits most to their study is reading English books.(运用了what引导的主语从句)5．SharingIt’s very important to learn to share with each other. Many things can be shared in different ways. I’d like to share some beautiful pictures, favorite music and different ideas with others face to face or by QQ, which are all widely used. Once I had a friend named Emily, who was lonely and unhappy. I hoped to cheer her up by sharing my favorite books and chatting with her. As time went by, she became used to sharing her feelings with me.Sharing is a virtue. It is interesting and helpful for our growth. In addition, we can learn a lot from sharing.【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生根据图示提纲，结合自身经历，以“sharing”为主题写一篇文章。【详解】1.词汇积累重要的：important→critical主意：ideas→opinions习惯：become used to→become accustomed to有趣的：interesting→fun2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：It’s very important to learn to share with each other. 拓展句：It’s very important that we learn to share with each other. 【点睛】【高分句型1】I’d like to share some beautiful pictures, favorite music and different ideas with others face to face or by QQ, which are all widely used.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）【高分句型2】As time went by, she became used to sharing her feelings with me.（运用了As引导的状语从句）6．Recently, our Grade English teacher conducted a sleep time survey for senior three students, and the results are as follows.Twenty percent of the students slept seven hours; Thirty-five percent of the students slept six hours; Twenty-five percent of the students slept five hours; only five percent of the students sleep eight hours. Among them, boys sleep slightly more than girls. Fifteen percent of the students even sleep less than five hours. What a horrible statistic!Although we students are under great pressure from study, the lack of sleep does great harm to our bodies. It's a huge burden not only physically but also psychologically. This is a problem that must be solved immediately.Dear students, we have a long future. On our way to life, we must make sure that we get enough sleep and spend our time wisely. Only in this way can we study and live better.【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于图表类作文。要求考生针对最近年级的英语老师针对高三学生进行了一次睡眠时间调查的结果，给你校英文电子报社编辑写一封信。【详解】1.词汇积累明智地，合理地：wisely→ sensibly可怕的：horrible → terrible/awful压力：pressure→ stress确保：make sure→ guarantee2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Only in this way can we study and live better.拓展句：As long as we stick to this way, we can live and study better.【点睛】【高分句型1】Although we students are under great pressure from study, the lack of sleep does great harm to our bodies.（运用了Although引导的让步状语从句。）【高分句型2】This is a problem that must be solved immediately.（运用了连词that引导的限制性定语从句。）7．The ORGANISATION for Economic Co-operation and Development (OECD) asked 600,000 teenagers what worried them most about their lives.It turns out that forty percent of the students in their academic assignments feel pressure; thirty percent of the students on their relationship with their parents feel a little nervous; twenty-five percent of the students in their own image more care about, giving them some confusion.The remaining five percent of the students feel anxious and concerned about other things. As far as I am concerned, sometimes the problems that make me worry are mainly in study. It makes me feel anxious and confused and sometimes helpless. Maybe because of a failure in an exam, I will be in a bad mood. To improve their psychological quality, I think we students should be better improved. I think we should get more help from parents and teachers.【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于图表类作文。要求考生针对国际经合组织（OECD）对 600,000 名青少年就生活中最令他们担忧的事情进行调查的结果，联系自身实际，谈谈最让令你担忧的事情及原因。【详解】1.词汇积累压力：pressure→ stress担心：be concerned about→ be worried about就我而言：as far as I am concerned → personally speaking无助的：helpless→ unassisted2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句： Maybe because of a failure in an exam, I will be in a bad mood .拓展句： It is maybe because of a failure in an exam thatI will be in a bad mood.【点睛】【高分句型1】twenty-five percent of the students in their own image more care about, giving them some confusion.（运用了非谓语动词中的现在分词作伴随状语。）【高分句型2】As far as I am concerned, sometimes the problems that make me worry are mainly in study.（运用了连词that引导的限制性定语从句。）8．According to the pie chart, students have a variety of ways to ease their stress. As is shown in the chart, about 40% of students choose to listen to music, while 25% of them prefer to do physical exercise to make them relaxed. Meanwhile, 18% of the students tend to surf the Internet as their recreation way when facing the hardship in the study. By comparison, there are nearly 12% , who are fond of talking to friends and 5% choose other activities to help relieve stress.From my point of view, the reason why the majority of students accounting for almost 65% in the diagram choose more positive ways is that they focus much on their health.Students clearly concentrate on building a well-developed body so that they will make progress in their study.【解析】【导语】这是一篇应用文。要求考生依据提供的饼图，对调查报告做以说明并解释形成原因。【详解】1.词汇积累许多：a variety of|→a number of 同时：meanwhile→ at the same time喜欢：be fond of→be keen on压力：pressure→stress2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：According to the pie chart, students have a variety of ways to ease their stress.转换句：According to the pie chart, students have a variety of ways that can help ease their stress.【点睛】[高分句型1]As is shown in the chart, about 40% of students choose to listen to music, while 25% of them prefer to do physical exercise to make them relaxed. Meanwhile,（运用了as引导的非限定性定语从句）[高分句型2]By comparison, there are nearly 12% , who are fond of talking to friends and 5% choose other activities to help relieve stress.（运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句）9．Recently, we conducted a survey on short-sightedness among the fifty students in our class. According to the survey, twenty students have good eyesight, while thirty students are short-sighted. We found that eighteen students became short-sighted due to watching TV or sitting in front of a computer for a long time. Nine students said their poor posture led to their short-sightedness. Three other students had other reasons for their poor eyesight. Thus, the main reason for short-sightedness is that some students don’t use their eyes properly.Our eyes are very important to us. We should protect them all the time. We should not watch TV or surf the Internet for hours without breaks. We should also read in a correct way. Furthermore, doing eye exercises is good for our eyes.【解析】【分析】这是一篇图表类作文。要求考生对饼状图所统计的关于班里近视情况的数据进行分，并谈谈自己的看法及建议。【详解】1.词汇积累开展：conduct→carry out由于：due to→because of导致：lead to→contribute to休息：break→rest2.句式拓展合并简单句原句：Our eyes are very important to us. We should protect them all the time.拓展句：We should protect our eyes all the time, which are very important to us.【点睛】[高分句型1] Thus, the main reason for short-sightedness is that some students don’t use their eyes properly. (运用了that引导的表语从句) [高分句型2] Furthermore, doing eye exercises is good for our eyes. (运用了动名词作主语)10．One possible version:A recent survey shows that the health of the students in our school has been going from bad to worse in the past three years. The number of short－sighted students has increased from 77% in 2010 to 93.5% in 2013, while that of overweight students from 38% to 57.2%.Nearly 15% more students don’t have enough sleep because of more homework. Besides, over 21% more students become mentally unhealthy.It seems to me that the reasons for this lie in heavier burden of study and more homework, thus making students unable to spare any time to take exercise or have enough sleep. To improve students’ health, we call for less homework. Only in this way can students get plenty of sleep and be healthier. Proper diets and exercise should also be paid attention to so that they won’t easily put on weight. With their heavy burden removed, students can then keep in normal mental health.【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于图表作文，要求考生根据图表写一份你校三年间学生健康状况的变化情况的报告。【详解】1.词汇积累大约：nearly →about此外：Besides →Moreover充足的：plenty of →enough增加体重：put on weight →gain weight2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：To improve students’ health, we call for less homework.拓展句：In order that students’ health can be improved, we call for less homework.【点睛】[高分句型1] To improve students’ health, we call for less homework. (运用了不定式作目的状语)[高分句型2] Only in this way can students get plenty of sleep and be healthier.   (运用了部分倒装结构)