2023届高考英语二轮复习读后续写543法则课件

这是一份2023届高考英语二轮复习读后续写543法则课件，共26页。PPT课件主要包含了读后续写技巧，五四三法则 ，高考真题训练，优秀范文示例等内容，欢迎下载使用。
1.读后续写技巧2.高考真题训练3.优秀范文实例
读后续写技巧
5R解读故事 4句确定框架3大续写原则
5R解读故事1. Read fr characters2. Read fr cnflict/prblems3. Read fr plt4. Read fr emtinal changes5. Read fr theme
4句确定框架Step 1：先写最后一句（主题句）Step 2：再写衔接句（第一段的最后一句）Step 3：根据所给段首语句写角色的情感Step 4：补全续写每段的中间内容
三大续写原则 1. Actin — Respnse原则2. Cnflict — Slutin原则3. Negative — Psitive原则
三大续写原则 1. Actin — Respnse原则：一个角色的所言、所行、所感和所想会引起其他角色的一系列反应。每段对话1-2句，不一定两个人都要说话，无声的动作也是一种respnse。
三大续写原则2. Cnflict — Slutin原则：一般而言第二段会有问题的slutin。（同时思考：能否在第一段出现一个问题，然后把它解决了或者没有解决。一方面是增加看点，另一方面也是给第二段作铺垫。）
三大续写原则3. Negative — Psitive原则：写作中一定要有情感的变化，无论前面是怎样的情感，最终都应该是积极的。
高考真题训练
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。(2022·唐山模拟)Ajay was sitting quietly in his last annual functin (典礼) f middle schl. The Prize Ceremny was abut t start and he was cnfident this time that he wuld get a prize. He didn't really knw why he desperately wanted a prize — t hld the precius small cup, t get the applause frm the audiences, r t understand the feeling f thers wh get the prizes.　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
In previus years he tried very hard and participated in all the activities — academics, literature, sprts and etc. — t stand n this big stage. Unfrtunately he culd never make it t any f 1st, 2nd r 3rd psitins in any events. At last, in the final year he tried the tughest but safest bet — Target “The Student with Mst Attendance”.
He had t nt miss any day in schl t receive the precius cup in this categry. He came every single day when the schl was pened — be it freezing winter when peple dn't even want t cme ut f quilt r be it ht summer when burning rf f their classrm is nt less than live ven. He came t class even when he fell sick.
The prize “The Student with Mst Attendance” was abut t be annunced. He was restless with anxiety and expectatin thugh he was quite sure t win it. But fate did nt favr him. It was nt his name. He checked the recrds later t find himself absent fr tw days t take care f his sick mther. He tried hard t frget his failure but deep in his heart the dream was still alive withut getting even slightly faded.　　　　　　　　
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2．请按如下格式作答。Eight years later, he became an fficer in army.　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 。 。 。 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　One day he was invited by the headmaster f his ld middle schl.　　　　　　　　　　
第一步：5R解读故事1. Read fr characters: Ajay, headmaster, Ajay’s mther
2. Read fr cnflict/ prblems : Ajay had a desire fr the little cup , but he failed.
3. Read fr plt:Sit quietly in his last annual functinTried hard and participated in all activities withut winningTried the safest bet---the student with mst attendanceFate did nt favr him---he was absent fr tw days t take care f his mther
4. Read fr emtinal changesCnfidentDesperately wanted a prizeRestless with anxiety and expectatinQuite sure t winTried hard t frget but his dream was alive
5. Read fr themeHw t deal with failures and setbacks ？
第二步：4句确定框架 读后续写不同于其他作文，有时候可能需要先倒着写。 Step 1：先写最后一句（主题句）. Step 2：再写衔接句（第一段的最后一句）Step 3: 根据所给段首语句写角色的情感根据第一段 提示写：根据第二段提示写Step 4：补全续写每段的中间内容
第三步：3大续写原则 1. Actin—Respnse原则2. Cnflict—Slutin原则3. Negative—Psitive原则
优秀范文示例
Eight years later, he became an fficer in army. It was very hard fr him t train, but he never gave up. He always had the dream that he wanted t be an excellent fficer, hlding the precius cup, getting the applause frm the audiences. It was bvius that he came acrss many failures, hwever, he knew that experience is imprtant and failure breeds success. Step by step, he gt the high praise and attentin f his clleagues and superirs. He became ne f the famus fficers in his army, and his clleagues and superirs were prud f him.