初中英语中考复习 万能模板09 日记-备战2020年中考英语书面表达万能模板（解析版）

这是一份初中英语中考复习 万能模板09 日记-备战2020年中考英语书面表达万能模板（解析版），共13页。试卷主要包含了 体裁解读， 写作攻略等内容，欢迎下载使用。
1. 体裁解读日记常用来记述一天中所发生的重要的或有趣的事情，也可以用来叙述自己当天触景而发的感受等。日记的主要体裁通常是记叙文或简单的议论文。2. 写作攻略英文日记通常由书端和正文两部分组成。书端是专门记载写日记的日期及天气状况的。正文的格式与其他文章相近，一般缩进4个字母，也可以顶格写。由于日记所写的事件都是发生过的事情，所以日记通常用一般过去时。因为日记多为记叙自己的亲身经历或抒发自己的感想，所以一般用第一人称。写日记的时候一般遵循以下步骤：第一步：介绍事件：第二步：具体阐述事情经过，补充细节；第三步：表达感想或总结该事件的意义。写日记要注意以下几点：  1. 日记的第一行要写清日期、星期和天气状况。日期和星期写在正文的左上角，月份与星期可以缩写。天气状况写在正文的右上角。如果是游记，还可以写明地点。  2. 日记通常使用过去时记录所发生的事件。若为议论、抒情或描述景物和人，为了生动，也可以使用一般现在时。  3. 日记的正文可以是叙事、描写、说明或议论等形式，且通常用第一人称。  4. 日记虽然是记录事件，但应该适当加一些个人感悟，写出亮点。我们以【2018年四川成都市】为例： 假如你是图中女孩，你与家人于4月29日共度周日。请根据图中所示写一篇英文日记，讲述你当天所见和所做之事。注意：1.日记应包含图中所有信息2.日记中须写出当天的一些感受3.日记应格式正确,语句通顺,句式多样4词数:100左右。参考词汇:城堡 castle螃蟹crab【答案】Sunny Sunday,April 29(th)Today I had a good time with my parents on the beach It was so fine that I could see the rising sun and flying sea birds. a boat sailed itself in the distance. What a beautiful scene! Dressed in swimming suit, I swam in the blue and clear sea. Then, I played volleyball with my parents. Finally, I managed to make a sand castle with tools. It looked so true to life that a crab even wanted to live in it.What a pleasant day! I not only got close to nature but also shared happiness with my family.Day of the week   Date                                       WeatherToday is ___________. I did some meaningful things ___________.In the morning, I ___________（事件一）. In the afternoon, I ___________（事件二）. After that, I ___________（事件三）.What a warm and meaningful day! I will never forget the memorable day! / Although I was very tired, I felt very happy because ___________.【模板范文】Sunday   May 10th                                                                      FineToday is Mother's Day. I did some meaningful things to show my love to my mother. In the morning, I bought my mother some flowers with my pocket money. In the afternoon, I went shopping and then cooked a delicious dinner for my family. After that, I gave mother the card made by myself and said "Happy Mother's Day" to her. I told her I would study hard and never let her down. Hearing this, my mother was moved to tears.What a warm and meaningful day! I will never forget the memorable day!亮点词汇搭配1. 表示天气fine adj. 晴朗的         cloudy adj. 多云的snowy adj.下雪的         rainy adj. 下雨的windy adj. 有风的         hail n. 冰雹2. 抒发感想moved adj. 感动的         enjoy oneself 玩得高兴memorable adj. 值得纪念的       meaningful adj. 有意义的worry about 担忧         delicious adj. 美味的3. 其他finish v. 完成          classmate n. 同学voluntary adj. 志愿的，义务的      although conj. 虽然经典句子背诵： 开头句  1. It was a fine/nice day. 天气晴朗。2. Today is... 今天是……3. I went to the park to... 我去公园……4. We decided to go out for a picnic today.  我们决定今天出去野餐。5. My classmates and I went to the park to do some voluntary work.  我和我们班的同学去公园做义务劳动。 中间句  1. First we were divided into three groups and then began working.  我们首先分成了三个组，然后开始工作。2. The task for Group Two was collecting the litter and cleaning benches.  第二组的同学收集垃圾和清理长凳。3. Group Three wiped all the equipment in the park.  第三组的同学擦洗公园里所有的设施。结尾句  1. I had a good time today. / I enjoyed myself today.   我今天玩得很高兴。2. I will never forget it. 我永远不会忘记这件事。3. What a warm and meaningful day!  这是多么温馨而又富有意义的一天！4. I will never forget the memorable day!  我永远不会忘记这难忘的一天！5. Although everyone was very tired, we felt very happy because we had done a meaningful job.  虽然大家都很累，但我们很开心，因为我们做了一件有意义的工作。（一）【2018年浙江宁波市中考】今年5月11日，你校组织了一次社会实践活动，部分学生选择去了红星农场（见导图一），其余学生选择去了科技博物馆（见导图二）。请根据你所选择的实践活动写一篇英语日记，记录当天的经历和感受。       导图一                                            导图二注意：(1)日记必须包括你所选择导图的所有要点，并适当发挥；(2)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；(3)词数：80 -100。日记格式及首句己给出，不计入总词数。Friday, May 11thToday I had a school trip.                                                                              _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分作文一】Friday. May 11thToday I had a school trip. The weather was fine. My classmates and I set off to Hongxing Farm by bus early in the morning.The minute we arrived, we took a walk around the farm. Then we fed the chickens. When I threw some food to them, they ran over to me with excitement and some of them even walked into their friends. The most exciting thing was that we picked strawberries after lunch. While we were picking, we ate a lot. How sweet they were!I had a wonderful time today! I do hope to go there again in the near future!(98 words)【满分作文二】Friday, May 11thToday I had a school trip. The weather was fine. My classmates and I set off to the Science Museum by subway at 7 :00.As soon as we reached the museum, we were amazed to see lots of pictures about science. Then we watched a video about different inventions and their inventors. It's unbelievable that technology has progressed in such a rapid way. In the afternoon, we played chess with some special robots. It was surprising to find that nobody could beat them. Before leaving, we bought some gifts for our friends.I had a wonderful time today! I do hope to go there again!（99 words）体即可。（二）【2018年湖北省孝感】本周一是端午节，你校外教Tony对中国文化很感兴趣，你陪他去槐荫公园观看了龙舟比赛。请根据以下提示写一篇日记。写作要点：1.现场情况。人多拥挤，16支龙舟队竞争激烈，人们欢呼，队员们闭队合作，最终“勇气队”获胜。2.赛后活动：我给Tony介绍端午节，下午带他参加有关端午节的其它活动，如……3.感想：Tony……，我……写作要求：1.短文内容必须包括所有要点、语句通顺，条理清晰；2.省略号处须作适当发挥(1-2句即可)；3.100词左右，短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。June 18thToday is the Dragon Boat Festival.                                                     ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分作文】Today is the Dragon Boat Festival For the reason that Tony has a strong interest in Chinese traditional culture. I invited him to come to watch the dragon boat races which was held in Huaiyin Park this morning When we arrived, it was crowded. There were 16 colorful dragon boats floating in the river. During the race, the dragon boat teams competed with each other, while people on each bank cheered up. Both Tony and I felt the exciting atmosphere. At last, the Courage Team won.After the competition, I introduced the Dragon Boat Festival to Tony and welcomed him to many other activities about the festival. We went to learn how to make zongzi and admire a picture exhibition.At the end of the day, tired as we were, we felt excited. Tony though our traditional Chinese culture was so amazing and I am proud of my great motherland.写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练、要点齐全。文中invite sb.to do, during the race, compete with, cheere up, at last, both…and…; at the end of the day, be proud of等词汇的恰当使用，使上下文意连接紧密；本文还采用了丰富的句型，比如：运用了there be句型；定语从句、宾语从句、时间状语从句等复合句，大大增加了信息的容量，使文章增色不少，这是一篇不错的范文。Writing 1根据下列提示信息，用英语写一篇不少于80词的日记。  提示：1.著名教授Mr. Robert今天（6月5日，星期五，晴）上午来你校作了一场报告；            2. 其报告内容包括：1) 如何与同学友好相处；                              2) 如何与家长、老师有效沟通；                              3) 如何控制不良情绪。                                 4) 这场报告对你今后的学习和生活都很重要。  要求：1. 日记中必须包括提示中的所有要点；        2.不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥；        3.必须用第一人称写作；        4.条理清晰，书写规范；        5.文中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息；        6.日记的开头已经写好，不计入总次数。  参考词汇：effectively有效地 professor教授  ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【思路分析】1. 审题：本文属于一篇日记，根据英文日记书写要求，通篇要用第一人称；为对经历的纪录，时态为一般过去去时。再根据提示，写清要点。首先写教授来做报告，包括：how to get along with classmates, how to communicate with parents and teachers efficiently和how to control ourselves；然后阐明自己的感受（an important lesson; help us study better, live a happier life）。 2. 写作思维：(1)开篇点题：This morning, Mr. Robert, a famous professor, came to our school...                 (2)报告内容：He told us... He also asked us... At last, he...               (3)阐明感受：I learned... I think his report...【参考范文】 Friday, June 5th                                                                   SundayThis morning, Mr. Robert, a famous professor, came to our school to give us a useful report.  He asked us how we can get along well with our classmates. He told us that honesty is the best policy. He also taught us how to communicate with our parents and teachers. When he talked about how we can control ourselves, he said, “Count to ten when you get angry.”  I learned an important lesson from Mr. Robert. I’m sure his report will help us study better and live a happier life in future.  【写作亮点】 1. 重点短语  a) give a report作报告                           b) get along well with...和……相处融洽                           c) communicate with...与……沟通/交流                           d) learn... from...从……学到……  2. 高级句型  a) He also taught us how to communicate with our parents and teachers.  他还教我们如何跟父母和老师沟通。              b) I’m sure his report will help us study better and live a happier life in future. 我相信他的报告对我们的未来更好地学习和生活有一定帮助。Writing 2请以下述内容为题，写一篇日记。 3 月 15 日，星期一。词数： 60 — 80 词。提示：①今晚，你去参加李江的生日宴会，大家又唱又跳，玩得很开心。②离开李江家时，天开始下雨，由于已很晚了，你步行回家；③一辆摩托车急驰而过，在十字路口撞倒了一个男孩。④摩托车没停，逃跑了。⑤你十分气愤，记下了车号（ FD — 2819 ）后马上打电话报警，并把孩子送往医院。  　　March 15th，Monday  　　____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】 This evening I went to Li Jiang's birthday party. We sang and danced. We had a good time at the party.  　　When I left Li Jiang's house, it began to rain. It was late. I had to walk home. A motorbike ran by me very fast. It hit a boy at the crossing. But the motorbike didn't stop. It ran away. I felt very angry. I wrote down its number: FD — 2819. I telephoned the police at once. Then I sent the boy to the hospital.Writing 3假设今天是XX年3月12日，星期天，天晴。请根据下面通知内容，用英语写一篇80词左右的日记。参考词汇：ride，arrive，dig a hole，put，carry water，leave，tired____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________March 12， XX， Sunday                                                                                FineToday is fine. All our teachers and we students went to plant trees. At 8 in the morning we met outside the school gate. Then we rode our bikes to West Hill. About half past eight, we arrived there. As soon as we got there, some of us dug holes, some put the young trees in the holes, and others carried water and watered the trees. We all worked hard. About 11：30, we left there. Though we were very tired, we felt very happy.Writing 4假如你叫王若琪，今天上午你带着宠物狗Coco散步时遇到一位外国人，他看上去很着急，你上前询问后，得知他找不到去火车站的路，于是你帮助了他……请你根据以上内容用英语写一篇日记，记叙所发生的事情并描述你的心理感受。词数90左右，日记的格式和开头已给出，不计入总词数。Thursday   October 1stToday was the first day of the National Day holiday. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【思路分析】这篇作文要求我们写一篇日记，记叙自己帮助了一个外国人的事情。日记记叙的都是已经发生的事情，所以这篇短文应使用一般过去时态，注意谓语动词形式的变化，尤其是不规则动词的过去式形式。题目中只给出了事情的大概，而具体的内容需要学生们自己来补充，因此写作时，应注意组织语言，完整地叙述事情的经过，并描述自己的心理感受。还应注意的是英语的表达习惯和语法规范，英语的句式与汉语是不同的，所以写作时不应逐词翻译，而应从句子的整体考虑，使用恰当的单词和句型，写符合英语表达习惯的句子，以简单句为主，辅以并列句和复合句，增强文章的节奏，并注意上下文意的连贯和流畅。【范文赏析】Thursday   October 1stToday was the first day of the National Day holiday. In the morning when I was taking a walk with my pet dog Coco along the street, I met a foreigner. He was looking around and looked worried. I went over to him and asked him what I could do for him. He told me he couldn’t find the way to the train station. I showed him the right way. He thanked me and went away happily.I was very proud of myself because I could speak English and I could help a foreigner in trouble. This made me feel very happy!【写作亮点】这是一篇优秀的作文，首先短文内容完整，作者在文章中完整地叙述了自己帮助这个外国人找到火车站的经过，叙述清楚、有条理，语言明确，简洁明了。其次短文使用了正确的时态和人称，文章以过去时态为主，谓语动词都用了过去式形式，尤其注意了不规则动词过去式形式的改变，如met, told, could等。最后整篇短文表达流畅，意思连贯，使用了比较丰富的句型和短语，如In the morning when I was taking a walk with my pet dog Coco along the street, I met a foreigner...、He told me he couldn’t find the way to the train station.、I was very proud of myself because I could speak English and I could help a foreigner in trouble.等。Writing 5在初中三年的学习过程中，不同的学生获得的英语课堂知识或多或少各不相同。请你写一篇英语日记，记叙你所上的一堂英语课的过程和感受。要求如下：1. 语句完整，意思连贯，语法正确。2. 词数60—80词，日记的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。要点词汇：sing a song; come into; say hello to; ask sb. questions; praise sb. for sth.; teach sb. sth.; discuss in groups; help each other; play games; do exercises; with the help of; learn a lot【思路分析】本篇作文要求我们记叙自己上过的一堂英语课，讲述这节课的过程和自己的感受。题目中给出了我们这一话题和文章中需要用到的一些要点词汇，但具体的内容需要学生们自己来完成，因此这个题目的开放性程度比较大，并没有给学生规定要写什么内容，学生们自己发挥的范围就很大，学生们可以联想自己的实际生活，印象比较深刻的一堂课，将它的过程记录下来。写作时，应注意英语表达和汉语习惯上的不同，应从句子的整体考虑，使用适当的句型、短语和词汇。注意语法要规范，时态、人称要符合题目要求，这篇短文应主要使用一般过去时态，注意动词过去式形式的变化。句子之间使用一些连词或者副词，增强文章的连贯性。【范文赏析】Monday   June 6th This morning we had an English class. Before class, we sang a beautiful song happily. We said hello to Mrs. Li, our English teacher when she came into the classroom. Mrs. Li asked me a question and I answered it correctly. She was very happy and praised me for it. Then she taught us the new lesson and let us discuss a problem in groups. She said we should learn to help each other. In the class, we also played games and did some exercises. In the class, we were all very happy.  With the help of Mrs. Li, I did well in English and I learned a lot. I like English. I like my English teacher. Let's say "Thank you very much" to our English teachers!【写作亮点】这是一篇优秀的作文。首先，短文内容完整，作者根据题目要求记叙了自己的一堂英语课，叙述清楚、充实，条理清晰，结构清楚。最后还讲述了自己的感受。题目中要求的重点词汇在文章中都有体现。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，以一般过去时态为主，动词的过去式形式变化准确，尤其是不规则动词的过去式形式，如sang, said, came, taught等。另外，文章中有一些比较好的句型，如We said hello to Mrs. Li, our English teacher when she came into the classroom、Then she taught us the new lesson and let us discuss a problem in groups、With the help of Mrs. Li, I did well in English and I learned a lot等。